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** Ariadne suggests the name Apollo for Ron's wolf form sans-Wolfsbane, for the fact that he is pack with Hermione's, Artemis - Apollo being the twin brother of Artemis. Hermione isn't a fan, since she has a crush on Ron and sees it as an inappropriate name since she doesn't see him as a sibling.
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** Chapter 25, ''On a Hot Summer Night,'' is named for the Meatloaf song ''You Took the Words Right Outta My Mouth (Hot Summer Night).''
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* ThemeNaming: Hermione's name for her wolf form, Artemis, follows a similar theme of greek mythology to her own name and [[MeaningfulRename Ariadne's name]]. Her name for her Wolfsbane-affected persona, Hecate, also follows this theme.
theme. Ron's wolf form is suggested the name Apollo by Ariadne, as Apollo is Artemis' twin brother.
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** In Chapter 24, ''Matters of Perspective,'' a number of these are made. Hermione compares Chiara's appearance to that of the late '80s ''Doctor Who'' companion Ace, and Chiara's leather jacket has patches referencing the Sex Pistols and Siouxsie and the Banshees, and she wears a Buzzcocks t-shirt. Additionally, Chiara's jacket has a [=BSA=] patch in the same place as on Ace's.
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** In Chapter 24, ''Matters of Perspective,'' a number of these are made. Hermione compares Chiara's appearance to that of the late '80s ''Doctor Who'' companion Ace, and Chiara's leather jacket has patches referencing the Sex Pistols and Siouxsie and the Banshees, and she wears a Buzzcocks t-shirt. Additionally, Chiara's jacket has a [=BSA=] patch in the same place as on Ace's.
Ace's. As well as this, Chiara's TheReasonYouSuckSpeech includes a ShoutOut to ''Star Trek: Deep Space Nine,'' quoting Benny Russell from the episode ''Far Beyond the Stars;'' "Calm never got me a damn thing."
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Because of the full moon, Hermione has a shorter temper here, which alters things like the Charms lesson where she more angrily corrects Ron which therefore gets discussed differently by Ron himself.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Because AdaptationalJerkass:
**Because of the full moon, Hermione has a shorter temper here, which alters things like the Charms lesson where she more angrily corrects Ron which therefore gets discussed differently by Ron himself.
** Remus comes off a bit as this in Chapter 24, ''Matters of Perspective,'' showing more how his perspectives on being a werewolf are affected by his personal trauma and experience during the war; he's actually ''opposed'' to any unified "werewolf culture" and views it as being what Fenrir Greyback sought, taking a more moderate stance.
**Because of the full moon, Hermione has a shorter temper here, which alters things like the Charms lesson where she more angrily corrects Ron which therefore gets discussed differently by Ron himself.
** Remus comes off a bit as this in Chapter 24, ''Matters of Perspective,'' showing more how his perspectives on being a werewolf are affected by his personal trauma and experience during the war; he's actually ''opposed'' to any unified "werewolf culture" and views it as being what Fenrir Greyback sought, taking a more moderate stance.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: True to form for Valerie Granger, Valerie gives one to ''the entire Wizarding [=UK=]'' when it comes to acceptance of werewolves in Chapter 21, ''Mould the Clay.''
* ScarsAreForever: Hermione gains a scar on her right wrist where Greyback bit her.
* ScarsAreForever: Hermione gains a scar on her right wrist where Greyback bit her.
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** True to form for Valerie Granger, Valerie gives one to ''the entire Wizarding [=UK=]'' when it comes to acceptance of werewolves in Chapter 21, ''Mould the Clay.''
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** Chiara Lobosca gives one of these to Remus Lupin in regards to his - in her opinion - patronizing and overly pacifist moderate stance about cultural unity among werewolves and whether or not it should even happen in Chapter 24, ''Matters of Perspective.'' Though, she does ramble a bit.
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** Hermione gains a scar on her right wrist where Greyback bit her.
** ''The Forest of Dean'' also establishes that Chiara has four cuts running down one of her cheeks - Chapter 24, ''Matters of Perspective,'' reveals that [[{{SelfHarm}} she gave them to herself]] to remind everyone else of the pain she goes through and what she is.
** True to form for Valerie Granger, Valerie gives one to ''the entire Wizarding [=UK=]'' when it comes to acceptance of werewolves in Chapter 21, ''Mould the Clay.
** Chiara Lobosca gives one of these to Remus Lupin in regards to his - in her opinion - patronizing and overly pacifist moderate stance about cultural unity among werewolves and whether or not it should even happen in Chapter 24, ''Matters of Perspective.'' Though, she does ramble a bit.
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** Hermione gains a scar on her right wrist where Greyback bit her.
** ''The Forest of Dean'' also establishes that Chiara has four cuts running down one of her cheeks - Chapter 24, ''Matters of Perspective,'' reveals that [[{{SelfHarm}} she gave them to herself]] to remind everyone else of the pain she goes through and what she is.
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* MentorArchetype: Specifically, TheObiWannabe in the case of Remus Lupin - he ''is'' trying to be helpful to Hermione, but his advice and general attitude toward being a werewolf are very much based on his own self-loathing.
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* MentorArchetype: Specifically, MentorArchetype:
** TheObiWannabe in the case of Remus Lupin - he ''is'' trying to be helpful to Hermione, but his advice and general attitude toward being a werewolf are very much based on his own self-loathing.
** Hermione finds herself appointed as one when Ron becomes a werewolf.
** TheObiWannabe in the case of Remus Lupin - he ''is'' trying to be helpful to Hermione, but his advice and general attitude toward being a werewolf are very much based on his own self-loathing.
** Hermione finds herself appointed as one when Ron becomes a werewolf.
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** The name of Chapter 23, ''So Small a Thing,'' is a reference to ''The Lord of the Rings: The Fellowship of the Ring'' and Boromir's line "it is a strange fate that we should suffer so much fear and doubt over so small a thing."
* TheStationsOfTheCanon: In a ''Kaleidoscopic Grangers''-specific example, similarly to how he becomes a werewolf in the main story, Ron also becomes a werewolf during the same full moon in ''The Forest of Dean.'' However, it is shown to be Hecate who is the likely progenitor of his infection, by playing tug of war with him. Lampshaded in the notes.
* TheStationsOfTheCanon: In a ''Kaleidoscopic Grangers''-specific example, similarly to how he becomes a werewolf in the main story, Ron also becomes a werewolf during the same full moon in ''The Forest of Dean.'' However, it is shown to be Hecate who is the likely progenitor of his infection, by playing tug of war with him. Lampshaded in the notes.
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* FantasticSlurs: As a joking example, in Chapter 20, ''Open Season,'' Hermione mocks Draco Malfoy for saying "mudblood mutt" instead of the portmanteau ''muttblood.''
* MentorArchetype: Specifically, TheObiWannabe in the case of Remus Lupin - he ''is'' trying to be helpful to Hermione, but his advice and general attitude toward being a werewolf are very much based on his own self-loathing.
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: True to form for Valerie Granger, Valerie gives one to ''the entire Wizarding [=UK=]'' when it comes to acceptance of werewolves in Chapter 21, ''Mould the Clay.''
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* TheyHaveTheScent: Averted. Hermione says in Chapter 20, ''Open Season,'' when asked if she can just sniff out Remus that tracking is actually very difficult for her because of her sensory issues, and she can't even do it as Hecate.
* WhamEpisode: Chapter 19, ''Calling the Bluff,'' features Hermione coming out as a werewolf publicly on the radio.
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** In much the same vein, in Chapter 203, ''He's A Keeper,'' [[spoiler:Hermione asks whose the book was. Where in the movie, Harry is secretive, Ariadne tells her willingly, describing the Half-Blood Prince as "Some edgy twerp’s idea of a cool nickname."]]
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** In much the same vein, in Chapter 203, ''He's A Keeper,'' [[spoiler:Hermione asks whose the book was. Where in the movie, Harry is secretive, Ariadne tells her willingly, describing the Half-Blood Prince as "Some edgy twerp’s twerp’s idea of a cool nickname."]]
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** In Chapter 19, ''Calling the Bluff,'' Hermione echoes Obi-Wan Kenobi's line "Well of course I know him; he's me."
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* MeaningfulName:
** [[{{AnimalThemeNaming}} Tegyd's name]] means "the beauty of a doe." Tegyd is part-caprid centaur, and so could be described as a doe.
** Blodwen's name is an ''accidental'' example of one - the author only picked it because it sounded nice, but it means "white or blessed flower." Blodwen, as a PlantPerson of the tree variety and specifically a crab apple tree would have pinkish-white blossoms in spring, and she's imbued with magic.
** [[{{AnimalThemeNaming}} Tegyd's name]] means "the beauty of a doe." Tegyd is part-caprid centaur, and so could be described as a doe.
** Blodwen's name is an ''accidental'' example of one - the author only picked it because it sounded nice, but it means "white or blessed flower." Blodwen, as a PlantPerson of the tree variety and specifically a crab apple tree would have pinkish-white blossoms in spring, and she's imbued with magic.
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* NamedAfterSomebodyFamous: The main characters' yearmate Ariana Evans is believed to be named after Ariadne.
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* NamedAfterSomebodyFamous: The main characters' yearmate Ariana Evans is believed to be named after Ariadne.
Ariadne. She basically confirms as such by looking a little awkward when [[spoiler:Ariadne herself states she doesn't like people being named after her when there are people among the fallen more worthy of that honour such as Remus and Fred.]]
* NextSundayAD: The series begins in 2025, while the first chapter was published in August of 2022.
* NobodyPoops: Averted. The series occasionally has the characters going to the toilet even if it's not described much - it's how they meet Myrtle in the second episode, and in the same scene the question of ''what'' [[{{OurVampiresAreDifferent}} vampires]] poop is answered (it's plasma).
* NextSundayAD: The series begins in 2025, while the first chapter was published in August of 2022.
* NobodyPoops: Averted. The series occasionally has the characters going to the toilet even if it's not described much - it's how they meet Myrtle in the second episode, and in the same scene the question of ''what'' [[{{OurVampiresAreDifferent}} vampires]] poop is answered (it's plasma).
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* PlotTriggeringDeath: Episode 3, ''The Artifacts of Hogwarts,'' is opened with the sudden seeming destruction of Professor Binns, the ghostly History teacher. Much is made of the fact that that should be a near-impossible feat, but in fact the episode itself swerves to focus on Binns' replacement, Professor Arkwright [[spoiler:being impersonated by a man trying to steal the Deathly Hallows from Ariadne.]] The author has indicated in [[{{WordOfGod}} messages]] that Binns' disappearance is in fact [[{{ChekhovsGun}} "a surprise tool that will help us later."]]
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* AnimalThemeNaming: Tegyd's name is a unisex[[labelnote:?]]Sources vary - ''A Book of Welsh Names'' by Trefor Randall Davies (2016) lists it as a masculine name alongside TEGID, but more common modern usage often ascribes it to women, as does an archived BBC Wales webpage on pronouncing Welsh names.[[/labelnote]] Welsh name (a variant of Tegid) meaning "doe-like beauty" or "beautiful doe." Female goats are called does, befitting the fact that the species of centaur making up half her lineage are derived from goats, not horses.
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* TheRez: The example present in ''Birds of a Feather'' is a combination [[{{InherentInTheSystem}} Political]] and phlebotonium-hiding Rez - because of the Statute of Secrecy, the Brecon Beacons Wizarding Sanctuary[[note]]Which isn't actually directly named in ''Birds of a Feather'' yet, only that Tegyd is Welsh and lives on a reservation, however it can be traced down due to the location being mentioned in ''Kaleidoscopic Grangers'' as being the location of the Caerphilly Catapults' stadium, which Tegyd also mentions[[/note]] is a general dumping ground for a few things, and indeed people, the wizarding world can't allow to be public. Notably the aforementioned stadium, as well as a Welsh dragon sanctuary, and the village of Pen ôl y Ddraig, where Tegyd lives with her father's caprid centaur herd, and which she describes as being the [[{{BilingualBonus}} "ass end of nowhere."]][[note]]The name of the town translates to "The arse end of a ''dragon"'' in Welsh.[[/note]] Quidditch fans are noted to thoroughly disrespect the residents of the reservation, who tend to be nonhumans because they're not allowed in public. No detail has been given yet of the standards of living there, but given Tegyd says that it "bloody sucks" and she is unfamiliar with basic modern staples such as pizza despite contact with her human mother, it can't be good.
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* AGlassInTheHand: In Chapter 17, ''A Page Out of My Book,'' Hermione breaks a pen this way because of her anger at Professor Snape.
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** [[{{NamedByTheAdaptation}} Chiara is given a middle name]] in ''The Forest of Dean,'' Bethany. The name Bethany derives from a Biblical place name meaning "house of affliction" or "house of the poor," alluding to Chiara's lycanthropy, career as a Healer, as well as her impoverished state after being fired.
fired. However, she probably isn't as impoverished in ''The Forest of Dean,'' as in this timeline she is indicated to be hired as a dental nurse by the Grangers rather than being forced to take low-paying odd jobs to scrounge a living.
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* ContinuityCameo and/or AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: In Chapter 5, ''A Strange Experience,'' Hermione is passed on a letter from a fellow werewolf who attends Hogwarts and will be leaving before Hermione starts there. From known context, this is clearly Chiara Lobosca - in ''Kaleidoscopic Grangers,'' Chiara was introduced late as a Healer with the Brown Foundation, who serves as Persephone's main Healer. Here, what appears to be a [[PenPals pen pal]] relationship is set up in 2000, nearly fifteen years before Hermione and Chiara meet in the main story.
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* ContinuityCameo and/or AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: In Chapter 5, ''A Strange Experience,'' Hermione is passed on a letter from a fellow werewolf who attends Hogwarts and will be leaving before Hermione starts there. From known context, this is clearly Chiara Lobosca - in ''Kaleidoscopic Grangers,'' Chiara was introduced late as a Healer with the Brown Foundation, who serves as Persephone's main Healer. Here, what appears to be a [[PenPals pen pal]] relationship is set up in 2000, nearly fifteen years before Hermione and Chiara meet in the main story.
story. Subsequently, Chiara becomes a recurring character and after her outing and sacking she is taken in by the Grangers and hired as a dental nurse in the end of Chapter 18, ''Don't You Let Go.'' Her 1969 [=BSA=] Lightning also makes an early appearance.
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** In Chapter 18, ''Don't You Let Go,'' Hermione is reading to Ariadne from Chapter 5, ''The Steward and the King,'' of book six of ''The Lord of the Rings,'' which as well as book five falls under ''The Return of the King.'' She is doing so because they recently saw the movie adaptation, whose soundtrack they sing, and the title of the chapter is spoken by Samwise Gamgee in the movie.
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* AdaptationalContextChange: Professor Snape's lesson on werewolves in Chapter 17, ''A Page Out of My Book,'' becomes particularly sinister when ''Hermione'' is a werewolf and not just Professor Lupin.
* CareerRevealingTrait: If you pay close attention to Chiara Lobosca's letter in Chapter 14, ''Difficult Discussions,'' she notes the sort of things a Healer might about Ginny's concussion.
* ContinuityNod: As per the exposition in ''Kaleidoscopic Grangers'' Chapter 358, ''A Father's Fear,'' and Chapter 366, ''Mother,'' Chapter 17, ''A Page Out of My Book,'' ends with Hermione reading that [[{{ContinuityCameo}} Chiara Lobosca]] got exposed as a werewolf and fired from her job at Saint Mungo's Hospital for Magical Maladies and Injuries.
* EarlyInstallmentWeirdness: Mostly averted. Because ''The Forest of Dean'' was written after the end of ''Kaleidoscopic Grangers,'' it averts most instances of EarlyInstallmentWeirdness present in the original story and is consistent with all [[{{Retcon}} Retcons]], including Ariadne using a braille slate and stylus, the partitioning of the Granger girls' respective neurodivergences, and Hermione and Valerie being black. Early installment ''mistakes'' are also lampshaded and fixed, with Chapter 16, ''Commonalities and Differences,'' featuring in its notes a plea for the earlier version of the author to develop a sense of time because the original timeline doesn't make any sense.
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: ''The Forest of Dean'' gives a middle name for Chiara Lobosca, Bethany.
* NamedByTheAdaptation: ''The Forest of Dean'' gives a middle name for Chiara Lobosca, Bethany.
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* AdaptationExpansion: In Chapter 11, ''I Want to Break Free,'' Hermione's experience of being petrified is expanded upon; her eyes are improperly focused leading to intense discomfort and she literally can't fall asleep.
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** In Chapter 11, ''I Want to Break Free,'' Hermione's experience of being petrified is expanded upon; her eyes are improperly focused leading to intense discomfort and she literally can't fall asleep.
** In Chapter 16, ''Commonalities and Differences,'' Remus gives more background to Fenrir Greyback, and explains how the predatory werewolf had to be "clever" to target people before Wolfsbane Potion existed, as it generally goes against how werewolves work in ''Kaleidoscopic Grangers.''
** In Chapter 11, ''I Want to Break Free,'' Hermione's experience of being petrified is expanded upon; her eyes are improperly focused leading to intense discomfort and she literally can't fall asleep.
** In Chapter 16, ''Commonalities and Differences,'' Remus gives more background to Fenrir Greyback, and explains how the predatory werewolf had to be "clever" to target people before Wolfsbane Potion existed, as it generally goes against how werewolves work in ''Kaleidoscopic Grangers.''
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** In Chapter 16, ''Commonalities and Differences,'' the description of a hobbit-hole from J.R.R. Tolkien's ''The Hobbit'' is quoted in reverse in regards to the tunnel under the Whomping Willow.
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** In Chapter 34, ''Bonfire Night,'' Ariadne stammers a line heavily and then mutters "Merry Christmas Denis Norden." This is a reference to the ITV television show ''It'll Be Alright On The Night,'' which until 2006 was hosted by Denis Norden and showed a number of bloopers from film sets - actor Rik Mayall occasionally said, in said bloopers, some permutation of "Merry Christmas Denis Norden." Though the show still airs in 2023 when the chapter went up, its viewership is nowhere near what it was when Ariadne would have been a child in the Granger household nearly thirty years prior, and Persephone has no idea who Denis Norden was.
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* WholePlotReference: Episode 5, ''Field Trip,'' is explicitly called out in its notes as being inspired by an episode of ''Wolfblood;'' season 1 episode 5 ''Occam's Razor,'' where the class also goes on a field trip to an ancient structure on an island on the day of the full moon.
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* WholePlotReference: Episode 5, ''Field Trip,'' is explicitly called out in its notes as being inspired by an episode of ''Wolfblood;'' season 1 episode 5 ''Occam's Razor,'' where the class also goes on a field trip to an ancient structure on an island on the day of the full moon.
moon and a fair-haired nonhuman falls off of something - however where in the ''Wolfblood'' episode Rhydian fakes his injury to be able to stay on Holy Island for the full moon, Dominique actually breaks her wing.
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** In Episode 5, ''Field Trip,'' Chapter 31, ''The Isle of Arran,'' Persephone compares taking a Portkey to the description of Hyperspace in ''The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy'' as being "unpleasantly like being drunk" - What's so unpleasant about being drunk? You ask a glass of water. Additionally, the subject of the field trip, Teàrlach the Unsightly, is a blink-and-you'll-miss-it copy of Beldin from ''The Belgariad.''
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And here I thought my additions I was copying over from notepad were too basic to need previewing, that'll teach me
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** In ''Flock Together,'' Episode 5, ''Field Trip,'' Chapter 30, ''An Opportunity,'' it's revealed that Trueborn Werewolves also have thicker nails than humans with more of a true quick, as well as slightly webbed fingers and toes.
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** Similarly, the first chapter of Episode 5, ''Field Trip, An Opportunity,'' includes mention of Ariadne having met Dudley in Chapter 375, as that weekend is between the two episodes.
** Similarly, the first chapter of Episode 5, ''Field Trip, An Opportunity,'' includes mention of Ariadne having met Dudley in Chapter 375, as that weekend is between the two episodes.
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* AdaptationExpansion: In Chapter 11, ''I Want to Break Free,'' Hermione's experience of being petrified is expanded upon; her eyes are improperly focused leading to intense discomfort and she literally can't fall asleep.
* ImADoctorNotAPlaceholder: In Chapter 11, ''I Want to Break Free,'' Madam Pomfrey has to supervise Artemis after Hermione partially transforms, [[spoiler:breaking her petrification,]] in the Hospital Wing. After Artemis appears confused by her conjuring a dog bed, Madam Pomfrey exclaims "Oh I don't know, I'm a Healer not a magizoologist!"
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** Chapter 11, ''I Want to Break Free,'' is named after the Queen song of the same name.
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* PowerfulPeopleAreSubs: In Chapter 284, ''We Could Be Heroes (part 3)'' [[spoiler:Ariadne quite enjoys Ginny telling her what to do - she is used to people looking to her for the answers, and so likes "letting Ginny boss her around."]]
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* RaceLift: Despite being based on the movies, ''Kaleidoscopic Grangers'' depicts Hermione as a mixed race Black girl - however, this is also a {{Retcon}} within ''Kaleidoscopic Grangers,'' as until later this wasn't made explicit because the main character was blind and the author wanted to leave it up to interpretation. In the afterword, the author says that not making that decision at the beginning was a bad idea because it would have affected early events, and subsequent spinoff fics depict Hermione and her mother as Black from the getgo.
* TeamMemberInTheAdaptation: After Ariadne's second year, because [[spoiler:Ariadne is asked to help diagnose the issues imprinted into Ginny's magic by the Diary of Tom Riddle]], Ginny becomes a core member of the cast. This causes a few characterization issues where Ron becomes a bit irrelevant in third year as Ginny takes on his role in a lot of ways, but once Ron becomes a werewolf they get more differentiated and have their own roles.
* AdaptationalJerkass: Because of the full moon, Hermione has a shorter temper here, which alters things like the Charms lesson where she more angrily corrects Ron which therefore gets discussed differently by Ron himself.
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** Chapter 7, ''Castle of Wizardry,'' is named after the third book of ''The Belgariad.''
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** At the end of Chapter 29, ''The Decision,'' [[spoiler:Hermione announces over the radio that she will indeed be running for the office of the Minister for Magic in 2026 - this section matches word for word the ending to ''Kaleidoscopic Grangers''' Chapter 373, ''Ronald and Hermione,'' but its ending includes Hermione's answer to the reporter's question.]]
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* MundaneUtility: In their adulthoods, Ariadne and Ginny - some of the most powerful characters in the story, if not the most powerful witches in Britain - find more mundane uses for their powerful magic. Ginny's ability to use wandless magic, which she teaches to Ariadne, is used to fetch cutlery and plates from their kitchen without leaving their sitting room, to apply Pride makeup, boil water when there's a power cut, for Ariadne to open doors without getting up, and they both allegedly use Parseltongue in later years to communicate from upstairs and downstairs without having to shout.\\
Ariadne also does this with her Dimensional Transfiguration; in one chapter, she demonstrates an ability to compress space in such a way that she says could destroy London if she did it more severely and wasn't careful dispelling it, and in dispelling it allegedly causes nuclear fusion to take place. She states she's finding ways to use relative reference points. Ten years later, she is shown using the same principles and possibly even a derivative of the same spell to casually store things like a Hogwarts pamphlet in a [[ShoutOut wristpocket]] spell.
** In smaller examples, Ariadne's second wand - which summons storms when she is angry or startled - can also be used to check for faulty wiring, because it prickles in the presence of live wires. Ariadne also wonders if it can be used as a miniature generator, but she hasn't tried it because she doesn't know what voltage or amperage it'd produce.
** Hermione creates an incredibly complex enchanted pocket watch capable of storing up to 720 [[{{Teleportation}} Portkey]] destinations, among other things, during the pandemic lockdowns. The only time it's used in the story is as a torch.
Ariadne also does this with her Dimensional Transfiguration; in one chapter, she demonstrates an ability to compress space in such a way that she says could destroy London if she did it more severely and wasn't careful dispelling it, and in dispelling it allegedly causes nuclear fusion to take place. She states she's finding ways to use relative reference points. Ten years later, she is shown using the same principles and possibly even a derivative of the same spell to casually store things like a Hogwarts pamphlet in a [[ShoutOut wristpocket]] spell.
** In smaller examples, Ariadne's second wand - which summons storms when she is angry or startled - can also be used to check for faulty wiring, because it prickles in the presence of live wires. Ariadne also wonders if it can be used as a miniature generator, but she hasn't tried it because she doesn't know what voltage or amperage it'd produce.
** Hermione creates an incredibly complex enchanted pocket watch capable of storing up to 720 [[{{Teleportation}} Portkey]] destinations, among other things, during the pandemic lockdowns. The only time it's used in the story is as a torch.
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** In the final chapter, Ariadne uses a complex Dimensional Transfiguration spell [[MundaneUtility for casual storage of items]] that resembles the ''wristpocket'' spell from ''Critical Role.''
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* ContinuityCameo and/or AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: In Chapter 5, ''A Strange Experience,'' Hermione is passed on a letter from a fellow werewolf who attends Hogwarts and will be leaving before Hermione starts there. From known context, this is clearly Chiara Lobosca - in ''Kaleidoscopic Grangers,'' Chiara was introduced late as a Healer with the Brown Foundation, who serves as Persephone's main Healer. Here, what appears to be a [[PenPals pen pal]] relationship is set up in 2000, nearly fifteen years before Hermione and Chiara meet in the main story.
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* PenPals: In Chapter 5, ''A Strange Experience,'' a fellow werewolf attending Hogwarts at the time (implied to be [[ContinuityCameo Chiara Lobosca]]) expresses an interest in establishing a pen-pal relationship with Hermione, though neither knows the other's name.
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* MeaningfulName: Hermione names her wolf self Artemis, after the Greek goddess of wild animals.
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** Hermione names her wolf self Artemis, after the Greek goddess of wild animals.
** Hermione also names herself when she is transformed but under the effects of Wolfsbane Potion Hecate; Hecate was the Greek goddess of magic and associated with the moon, depicted as triple-bodied - befitting this being Hermione's third persona - and Hecate was frequently shaped as or associated with, often friendly, female dogs. She is also characterized as representing liminal spaces, which aligns with how Hermione thinks of her own Hecate.
** Hermione names her wolf self Artemis, after the Greek goddess of wild animals.
** Hermione also names herself when she is transformed but under the effects of Wolfsbane Potion Hecate; Hecate was the Greek goddess of magic and associated with the moon, depicted as triple-bodied - befitting this being Hermione's third persona - and Hecate was frequently shaped as or associated with, often friendly, female dogs. She is also characterized as representing liminal spaces, which aligns with how Hermione thinks of her own Hecate.
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* ThemeNaming: Hermione's name for her wolf form, Artemis, follows a similar theme of greek mythology to her own name and [[MeaningfulRename Ariadne's name]]. Her name for her Wolfsbane-affected persona, Hecate, also follows this theme.
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* BigEater: Persephone is a never-ending pit when it comes to food and constantly talks with her mouth full.
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full. She even carries snacks, getting out a half-eaten bag of cheese Wotsits in ''Flock Together'' Episode 4, ''Petty Politics,'' Chapter 27, ''The Attack.''
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** In Episode 4, ''Petty Politics,'' Chapter 27, ''The Attack,'' Persephone puts her inhaler into her bag instead of into her pocket at the end of a Potions lesson, and this is reiterated again in the middle of the chapter when she is reminded of some English homework left in the bottom of her bag. [[spoiler:This comes up later in the same chapter because Theodore Chambers steals Persephone's bag right before Persephone's asthma is triggered by how cold the air by the courtyard is, resulting in her having an asthma attack and lacking her inhaler to medicate it.]]
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** In Chapter 27, ''The Attack,'' when Persephone is threatening Cameron Vexmoor, she tries to judge if she can strangle him with one hand or if she'll need both. Being muggleborn, Bonnie Wood asks if she's trying to Force choke Vexmoor like Darth Vader, and then if they can do that.
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* PowerfulPeopleAreSubs: In Chapter 284, ''We Could Be Heroes (part 3)'' [[spoiler:Ariadne quite enjoys Ginny telling her what to do - she is used to people looking to her for the answers, and so likes "letting Ginny boss her around."]]
