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** The Unluckies are killed by Luffy in the middle of their extermination attempt on Mr. Nine and Ms. Wednesday.
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* ShoutOut: Mad Treasure during his battle with Luffy, grabs him with chains from the Jara Jara no Mi and pulls Luffy towards him while yelling [[Franchise/MortalKombat "Get Over Here!"]]
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* TookALevelInBadass:
** Nami eats a mythical zoan devil fruit, seemingly the Hito Hito no Mi, Model: Pele.
** Carina eats Mad Treasure's Jara Jara no Mi after Luffy kills him.
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Journey to Raftel is a ''Anime/OnePiece'' story written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/431968/Kairomaru Kairomaru]], who also wrote ''Fanfic/MagmaDragonKing'', ''Fanfic/TheLogiaBrothers'', ''Fanfic/CollectorHeroSynthesis'', and ''Fanfic/AgeOfTitans'', to name a few. While being trained to be strong enough to be a Marine by Garp, Luffy finds a fruit that gives him the powers of [[Literature/JourneyToTheWest Sun Wukong.]] Now Luffy sets out to find Raftel, as the freest man alive.

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Journey to Raftel is a ''Anime/OnePiece'' story written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/431968/Kairomaru Kairomaru]], who also wrote ''Fanfic/MagmaDragonKing'', ''Fanfic/TheLogiaBrothers'', ''Fanfic/CollectorHeroSynthesis'', and ''Fanfic/AgeOfTitans'', to name a few.Creator/{{Kairomaru}}. While being trained to be strong enough to be a Marine by Garp, Luffy finds a fruit that gives him the powers of [[Literature/JourneyToTheWest Sun Wukong.]] Now Luffy sets out to find Raftel, as the freest man alive.
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* AdaptationalJobChange: Luffy's crew are pirates in canon. Here, they act as bounty hunters to earn money for their journey.

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* AdaptationalJobChange: Luffy's crew are pirates in canon. Here, they act as bounty hunters to earn money for their journey.journey, though they call themselves "[[InsistentTerminology adventurers]]".
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** Carina debuts shortly before Loguetown rather over two years later just before ''Anime/One PieceFilmGold''.

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** Carina debuts shortly before Loguetown rather over two years later just before ''Anime/One PieceFilmGold''.''Anime/OnePieceFilmGold''.
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** Carina debuts shortly before Loguetown rather over two years later just before ''One Piece: Gold''.

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** Carina debuts shortly before Loguetown rather over two years later just before ''One Piece: Gold''.''Anime/One PieceFilmGold''.

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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: In canon, Vinsmoke Reiju didn't appear until Whole Cake Island. Here, she appears working at the Baratie with her brother, far earlier than in canon.

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In canon, Vinsmoke Reiju didn't appear until Whole Cake Island. Here, she appears working at the Baratie with her brother, far earlier than in canon.
** Carina debuts shortly before Loguetown rather over two years later just before ''One Piece: Gold''.


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* PowerPerversionPotential: When they finally have sex for the first time, Luffy uses his MesACrowd powers to pleasure Nami.
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* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: Nami gets to vent eight years of anger when killing the Arlong Pirates.
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* GiveMeAReason: Sanji dares Nezumi to fight back at Arlong Park. To his credit the corrupt Marine avoids poking the angry man.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: Commodore Purinpurin and his crew don't die to Arlong's officers due to Luffy and Co dealing with them before they arrive.
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* WildCard: Luffy wants to live as freely as possible on his adventure. Even if it means crossing pirates or making an enemy of the World Government.

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* WildCard: Luffy wants to live as freely as possible on his adventure. Even adventure, even if it means crossing pirates or making an enemy of the World Government.

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* DeathByAdaptation: Arlong and his entire crew, minus Hachi, are killed by Nami.

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** Pearl [[OffWithHisHead gets decapitated by Zoro]], while Krieg [[TorsoWithAView gets a hole through his chest from Nami.]]
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Arlong and his entire crew, minus Hachi, are killed by Nami.
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* IntimateHealing: In order to save Nami from Don Krieg's {=MH5=} poison gas, Reiju has to kiss her.

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* IntimateHealing: In order to save Nami from Don Krieg's {=MH5=} [=MH5=] poison gas, Reiju has to kiss her.
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* IntimateHealing: In order to save Nami from Don Krieg's MH5 poison gas, Reiju has to kiss her.

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* IntimateHealing: In order to save Nami from Don Krieg's MH5 {=MH5=} poison gas, Reiju has to kiss her.
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* FamilyOfChoice: Reiju calls Zeff "father" as she and Sanji leave the Baratie, showing that she and Sanji view the whole restaurant as their true family.


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* IntimateHealing: In order to save Nami from Don Krieg's MH5 poison gas, Reiju has to kiss her.


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* TorsoWithAView: Nami has a habit of finishing off her enemies in this manner. Just ask Don Krieg, Chew, and Kuroobi.

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* {{Animorphism}}: Luffy's shown the ability to turn into animals, such as turning into a tiger to spar with his grandfather.



* ComboPlatterPowers: Due to having the powers of [[Literature/JourneyToTheWest Sun Wukong]], Luffy has a wide variety of powers, many of which are completely unrelated. Shown examples include {{flight}}, LivingLieDetector eyes, and [[MesACrowd clones]].

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* ComboPlatterPowers: Due to having the powers of [[Literature/JourneyToTheWest Sun Wukong]], Luffy has a wide variety of powers, many of which are completely unrelated. Shown examples include {{flight}}, LivingLieDetector eyes, {{animorphism}}, and [[MesACrowd clones]].

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* AbledInTheAdaptation: As Luffy was more than capable of beating Higuma himself, Shanks doesn't lose his arm to the Sea King.

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* AbledInTheAdaptation: As Luffy was more than capable of beating Higuma himself, Shanks doesn't lose his arm to the Sea King.Lord of the Coast.



* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: In canon, Vinsmoke Reiju didn't appear until Whole Cake Island, here, she appears working at the Baratie with her brother, far earlier than in canon.

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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: In canon, Vinsmoke Reiju didn't appear until Whole Cake Island, here, Island. Here, she appears working at the Baratie with her brother, far earlier than in canon.



* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: As Luffy and his crew are "adventurers" rather than pirates, they have a largely neutral relationship with the marines rather than antagonistic.



** In canon, Nami had no powers, instead using her Clima-Tact. Here, she eats a currently unknown Devil Fruit, speculated to be the [[PlayingWithFire Hito Hito no Mi, Model: Pele.]]

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** In canon, Nami had no powers, instead using her Clima-Tact. Here, she eats a currently unknown Devil Fruit, speculated to be the [[PlayingWithFire [[MagmaMan Hito Hito no Mi, Model: Pele.]]



* ComboPlatterPowers: Due to having the powers of [[Literature/JourneyToTheWest Sun Wukong]], Luffy has a wide variety of powers, many of which are completely unrelated. Shown examples include {{flight}}, LivingLieDetector eyes, and [[MesACrowd clones]].
* DeathByAdaptation: Arlong and his entire crew, minus Hachi, are killed by Nami.



* InSpiteOfANail: Luffy's still after the One Piece, despite not being a pirate, but that's simply due to being interested in the treasure itself rather than being pirate king.



* MagmaMan: Nami's devil fruit makes her a volcano goddess.



* TokenHeroicOrc: Nami spares Hachi's life, because he did try to help the people of Cocoyashi, as best he could.

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* NotAfraidOfYouAnymore: Nami fights Arlong and his crew herself specifically to prove to both him and herself that she's strong and no longer afraid of him.
* MundaneUtility: Luffy uses his clone powers to man a ship and his LivingLieDetector powers to tell real treasure from fake.
* TokenHeroicOrc: Nami spares Hachi's life, because he did try to help the people of Cocoyashi, Cocoyashi as best he could.
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A single incident can change the world. When Monkey D. Luffy eats a different Devil Fruit, how will the world change in response? What are the powers of this mysterious Fruit? Will it take him to the top of the Pirates? Or will this Luffy make different choices because he has different desires? How much can one change truly make? How many changes will follow from it? Luffy/Harem

Journey to Raftel is a ''Anime/OnePiece'' story written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/431968/Kairomaru Kairomaru]], who also wrote ''Fanfic/MagmaDragonKing'', ''Fanfic/TheLogiaBrothers'', ''Fanfic/CollectorHeroSynthesis'', and ''Fanfic/AgeOfTitans'', to name a few. While being trained to be strong enough to be a Marine by Garp, Luffy finds a fruit that gives him the powers of [[Literature/JourneyToTheWest Sun Wukong.]] Now Luffy sets out to find Raftel, as the freest man alive.

Can be found on Website/FanFictionDotNet [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14048308/1/Journey-To-Raftel here]] and Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/37523278/chapters/93654259 here]].

!!Journey to Raftel provides examples of:
* AbledInTheAdaptation: As Luffy was more than capable of beating Higuma himself, Shanks doesn't lose his arm to the Sea King.
* AdaptationalBadass: Nami. She manages to kill Arlong and his crew singlehandedly thanks to her abilities.
* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: In canon, Vinsmoke Reiju didn't appear until Whole Cake Island, here, she appears working at the Baratie with her brother, far earlier than in canon.
* AdaptationalJobChange: Luffy's crew are pirates in canon. Here, they act as bounty hunters to earn money for their journey.
* AdaptationalSuperpowerChange: As per Kairomaru standard, certain characters have different powers.
** In canon, Luffy ate the [[RubberMan Gomu Gomu no Mi]]. Here he ate the Saru Saru no Mi, Model: Sun Wukong.
** In canon, Nami had no powers, instead using her Clima-Tact. Here, she eats a currently unknown Devil Fruit, speculated to be the [[PlayingWithFire Hito Hito no Mi, Model: Pele.]]
* AdaptationNameChange: In canon, Luffy's crew were known as the Straw Hat Pirates. Here, they don't have a name.
* AdaptationPersonalityChange: In canon, Luffy wants to be King of the Pirates. Here, he wants to be free to live as he wants.
* AscendedExtra: In canon, Vinsmoke Reiju was only featured in Whole Cake Island. Here, she's a member of Luffy's crew.
* DemotedToExtra: When Luffy's crew leave Syrup Village, Usopp stays behind, as he wants to join a crew of pirates.
* GoodParents: ToughLove aside, Garp is extremely supportive of Luffy, helping him figure out his Devil Fruit.
* LivingLieDetector: Luffy's Fiery Eyes Golden Gaze, which lets him detect lying, forgery, and evil. Nami quickly decides to avoid trying to con him when she learns about this.
* MartialArtsStaff: Luffy's Ruyi Jingu Bang. Mihawk says that, were other weapons ranked the same way as bladed weapons, Luffy's staff would be ranked as Supreme Grade, the same as Mihawk's Yoru.
* MesACrowd: As per Wukong's myth, Luffy can pluck hairs from his body and turn them into clones of himself. Useful for getting a numerical advantage...[[MundaneUtility or to help crew a ship.]]
* TokenHeroicOrc: Nami spares Hachi's life, because he did try to help the people of Cocoyashi, as best he could.
* WildCard: Luffy wants to live as freely as possible on his adventure. Even if it means crossing pirates or making an enemy of the World Government.

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