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There's another version of this fanfic [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9196876/1/Jo-Bells-story-abote-hogwarts here.]]
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There's another a shorter version of this fanfic [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9196876/1/Jo-Bells-story-abote-hogwarts here.]]
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''jo Bekke At Hugwrts'' is a Literature/HarryPotter fanfic "written" by Jo belle/Jo bekke/Jo bel. (The author is having problems spelling her own name.) The fanfiction is about Harry's twin sister, Jo Belle Susie Lilly Potter, who learns she's a witch after she murders her uncle and then revives him by "wavd mi hnd" (waving her hand, for those who can't understand her [[RougeAnglesOfSatin horrid grammar and spelling]]). Also it's claimed that people have been commiting suicide after reading the story (probably not, but you get the idea).
Even the writer of ''Fanfic/ThePrayerWarriors'' stated that this must be the worst fanfic of all time. Well, [[EvenEvilHasStandards even trolling has its standards.]]
The fanfiction is reposted [[http://moonlightforum.webs.com/trollfics-galore here]], along with her lesser known, but just as racist and bigoted, other fics.
Even the writer of ''Fanfic/ThePrayerWarriors'' stated that this must be the worst fanfic of all time. Well, [[EvenEvilHasStandards even trolling has its standards.]]
The fanfiction is reposted [[http://moonlightforum.webs.com/trollfics-galore here]], along with her lesser known, but just as racist and bigoted, other fics.
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''jo Bekke At Hugwrts'' is a Literature/HarryPotter fanfic "written" by Jo belle/Jo bekke/Jo bel. (The author is having problems spelling her own name.) The fanfiction is about Harry's twin sister, Jo Belle Susie Lilly Potter, who learns she's a witch after she murders her uncle and then revives him by "wavd mi hnd" (waving her hand, for those who can't understand her [[RougeAnglesOfSatin horrid grammar and spelling]]). Also it's claimed that people have been commiting suicide after reading the story (probably not, but you get the idea).
spelling]]).
Even the writer of ''Fanfic/ThePrayerWarriors'' stated that this must be the worst fanfic of all time. Well,[[EvenEvilHasStandards [[EveryoneHasStandards even trolling has its standards.]]
The fanfiction isreposted [[http://moonlightforum.webs.com/trollfics-galore here]], along with her lesser known, but just as racist and bigoted, other fics.
viewable in [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10223549/1/jo-bekke-at-hugwrts-Commentary this]] [[MSTing MST]].
Even the writer of ''Fanfic/ThePrayerWarriors'' stated that this must be the worst fanfic of all time. Well,
The fanfiction is
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An MST version of the fanfiction is recommend if you don't want to lose your brain cells, and a good MST would be [[http://anarchywriter.deviantart.com/gallery/?q=jo+bekke#/d4x5etn here]]
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* TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior: The protagonist is eleven years old. She is a serial killer and has sex with Darryl. Also, she poledances on top of a tractor while smoking weed,
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* TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior: The protagonist is eleven years old. She is a serial killer and has sex with Darryl. Also, she poledances pole dances on top of a tractor while smoking weed,weed.
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* RougeAnglesOfSatin: Holy. God. Yes. More words are spelled wrong than right.
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* RapunzelHair: Jo Bel's 'durty' blond hair hangs down to her feet.
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Toby, not Tara
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Even the writer of ''Fanfic/MyImmortal'' stated that this must be the worst fanfic of all time. Well, [[EvenEvilHasStandards even trolling has its standards.]]
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Even the writer of ''Fanfic/MyImmortal'' ''Fanfic/ThePrayerWarriors'' stated that this must be the worst fanfic of all time. Well, [[EvenEvilHasStandards even trolling has its standards.]]
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Apparently the You Fail X Forevers are still custom titled...
* ArtisticLicenseBiology: Darryl apparently has a talking penis.
* ArtisticLicenseEconomics: Apparently, Gringotts is a store where you can get free money. And you drive sports cars to vaults. [[Literature/TheLordOfTheRings And has a gremlin named 'Golum'.]]
* ArtisticLicenseEconomics: Apparently, Gringotts is a store where you can get free money. And you drive sports cars to vaults. [[Literature/TheLordOfTheRings And has a gremlin named 'Golum'.]]
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* YouFailBiologyForever: Darryl apparently has a talking penis.
* YouFailEconomicsForever: Apparently, Gringotts is a store where you can get free money. And you drive sports cars to vaults. [[Literature/TheLordOfTheRings And has a gremlin named 'Golum'.]]
* YouFailEconomicsForever: Apparently, Gringotts is a store where you can get free money. And you drive sports cars to vaults. [[Literature/TheLordOfTheRings And has a gremlin named 'Golum'.]]
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* YouFailEconomicsForever: Apparently, Gringotts is a store where you can get free money. And you drive sports cars to vaults. [[Literature/TheLordOfTheRings And has a gremlin named 'Golum'.]]
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Compare and contrast ''FanFic/MyImmortal''.
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* RealPersonFic: [[Main/TheOprahWinfreyShow OPRA WHIMPFREE]], [[Creator/EllenDeGeneres ELEN DEGENERIS]], and [[Main/NineteenKidsAndCounting MICHel DUGAr]] all appear in the fic.
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* RealPersonFic: [[Main/TheOprahWinfreyShow [[Series/TheOprahWinfreyShow OPRA WHIMPFREE]], [[Creator/EllenDeGeneres ELEN DEGENERIS]], and [[Main/NineteenKidsAndCounting [[Series/NineteenKidsAndCounting MICHel DUGAr]] all appear in the fic.
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* TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior: The protagonist is eleven years old. She is a seral killer and has sex with Darryl. Also, she pole dances on top of a tractor while smoking weed,
* WholePlotReference / RandomEventsPlot: The plot follows ''Literature/HarryPotterAndThePhilosophersStone'' to an extent, but it soon deflects from it and turns mainly into RandomEventsPlot.
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* TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior: The protagonist is eleven years old. She is a seral serial killer and has sex with Darryl. Also, she pole dances on top of a tractor while smoking weed,
*WholePlotReference / RandomEventsPlot: The With the exception of a few TheStationsOfTheCanon-moments from ''Literature/HarryPotterAndThePhilosophersStone'', the plot follows ''Literature/HarryPotterAndThePhilosophersStone'' to an extent, but it soon deflects from it and turns mainly into RandomEventsPlot.is clearly non-existent.
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[[caption-width-right:330:Jo Bekke, fan art[[hottip:*:used with permission from [[http://trollseyeview.blogspot.com/ Monica Gilbey-Bieber]]]]
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''jo Bekke At Hugwrts'' is a HarryPotter fanfic "written" by Jo belle/Jo bekke/Jo bel. (The author is having problems spelling her own name.) The fanfiction is about Harry's twin sister, Jo Belle Susie Lilly Potter, who learns she's a witch after she murders her uncle and then revives him by "wavd mi hnd" (waving her hand, for those who can't understand her [[RougeAnglesOfSatin horrid grammar and spelling]]). Also it's claimed that people have been commiting suicide after reading the story (probably not, but you get the idea).
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''jo Bekke At Hugwrts'' is a HarryPotter Literature/HarryPotter fanfic "written" by Jo belle/Jo bekke/Jo bel. (The author is having problems spelling her own name.) The fanfiction is about Harry's twin sister, Jo Belle Susie Lilly Potter, who learns she's a witch after she murders her uncle and then revives him by "wavd mi hnd" (waving her hand, for those who can't understand her [[RougeAnglesOfSatin horrid grammar and spelling]]). Also it's claimed that people have been commiting suicide after reading the story (probably not, but you get the idea).
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* WholePlotReference / RandomEventsPlot: The plot follows HarryPotterAndThePhilosophersStone to an extent, but it soon deflects from it and turns mainly into RandomEventsPlot.
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* WholePlotReference / RandomEventsPlot: The plot follows HarryPotterAndThePhilosophersStone ''Literature/HarryPotterAndThePhilosophersStone'' to an extent, but it soon deflects from it and turns mainly into RandomEventsPlot.
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There's another version of this fanfic [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9196876/1/Jo-Bells-story-abote-hogwarts here.]]
* GroinAttack: A lot of times.
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* TrollFic: Yet to be confirmed.
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* TrollFic: Yet to be confirmed.
confirmed. Also, she has a better fanfic [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9230567/1/The-Night-Draws-Ever-Nearer here]], which is possibly an indication that the fanfic this article is about is an example of StylisticSuck.
* TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior: The protagonist is eleven years old. She is a seral killer and has sex with Darryl. Also, she pole dances on top of a tractor while smoking weed,
* TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior: The protagonist is eleven years old. She is a seral killer and has sex with Darryl. Also, she pole dances on top of a tractor while smoking weed,
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was friends).
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* AxCrazy: Jo Bekke
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* PoliticallyIncorrectHero
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* YouFailEconomicsForever: Apparently, Gringotts is a store where you can get free money. And you drive sports cars to vaults. [[Literature/TheLordoftheRings And has a gremlin named 'Golum'.]]
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* YouFailEconomicsForever: Apparently, Gringotts is a store where you can get free money. And you drive sports cars to vaults. [[Literature/TheLordoftheRings [[Literature/TheLordOfTheRings And has a gremlin named 'Golum'.]]]]
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* KaleidoscopeEyes: Jo Bel's eyes are sometimes blue, green, or yellow. The art in the page depicts her with all three colors simultaneously.
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* RapunzelHair: Jo Bel's 'durty' blond hair hangs down to her feet.
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* Fangirl: Hermione/Harmony is an extreme fangirl of Jo Bekke/Jo Bel
-->''"She had a jo bekke t shirt on. She wore jo BElKe earings, and JO bekle stamped pantz. She Also had a ho belle arm bracelet. She also had a JO belle ring on. And her finger nales had J-O-B-E-L on each hamd. "IM UR BIGGEST fan," HARMONY SAID."''
-->''"She had a jo bekke t shirt on. She wore jo BElKe earings, and JO bekle stamped pantz. She Also had a ho belle arm bracelet. She also had a JO belle ring on. And her finger nales had J-O-B-E-L on each hamd. "IM UR BIGGEST fan," HARMONY SAID."''
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* Fangirl: FanGirl: Hermione/Harmony is an extreme fangirl of Jo Bekke/Jo Bel
-->''"She had a jo bekke t shirt on. She wore joBElKe belkee earings, and JO bekle stamped pantz. She Also had a ho belle arm bracelet. She also had a JO belle ring on. And her finger nales had J-O-B-E-L on each hamd. "IM UR BIGGEST fan," HARMONY SAID."''
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-->''"She had a jo bekke t shirt on. She wore jo BElKe earings, and JO bekle stamped pantz. She Also had a ho belle arm bracelet. She also had a JO belle ring on. And her finger nales had J-O-B-E-L on each hamd. "IM UR BIGGEST fan," HARMONY SAID."''
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* ICallHimMisterHappy: Darryl has a talking penis nicknamed 'Little Darryl.'
