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* SharedDream: Musharna spend most of their lives sleeping, and their society exists within a giant, interconnected dream.
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* SharedDream: Musharna SharedDream:
** Dr. Bashir and Cynthia enter one facilitated by a Mismagius to communicate with Regigigas.
**Musharna spend most of their lives sleeping, and their society exists within a giant, interconnected dream.
** Dr. Bashir and Cynthia enter one facilitated by a Mismagius to communicate with Regigigas.
**Musharna spend most of their lives sleeping, and their society exists within a giant, interconnected dream.
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* BrainCriticalMass: Many of the intelligent Pokémon species are Psychic-types.
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* PsychicPowers: Many of the intelligent Pokémon species are Psychic-types. The Grimmsnarl and Hatterene chapter says that the Ghost, Dark, and Fairy types are derived from a psionic field as well, with the latter two derived from emotions.
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* PsychicPowers: Many of the intelligent Pokémon species are Psychic-types. The Grimmsnarl and Hatterene chapter says explains that the Ghost, Dark, and Fairy types are derived from a similar psionic field as well, to the Psychic-type, with the latter two derived from emotions.
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''Intelligence Factor: A Survey of Pokérin's Sapient Species'' is a ''Franchise/{{Pokemon}}'' and ''Series/StarTrekDeepSpaceNine'' crossover by [=GMBlackjack=], author of ''Fanfic/SongsOfTheSpheres''. It is written as a scientific journal by Dr. Julian Bashir recounting his travels around the world of Pokérin to study the intelligence of Pokémon. It can be found on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/30823067/chapters/76090625 Archive of Our Own]] and [[https://offprint.net/prose/D27Ee2UaP/intelligence-factor-a-survey-of-pokerin-s-sapient-species Offprint]].
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''Intelligence Factor: A Survey of Pokérin's Sapient Species'' is a ''Franchise/{{Pokemon}}'' and ''Series/StarTrekDeepSpaceNine'' crossover by [=GMBlackjack=], author of ''Fanfic/SongsOfTheSpheres''. It is written as a scientific journal by Dr. Julian Bashir recounting his travels around the world of Pokérin to study the intelligence of Pokémon. It can be found on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/30823067/chapters/76090625 Archive of Our Own]] and [[https://offprint.net/prose/D27Ee2UaP/intelligence-factor-a-survey-of-pokerin-s-sapient-species Offprint]].
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* LegacyVesselNaming: Tapu Lele is on a ship called the ''U.S.S. Thiver'' in the epilogue, named after her Inteleon.
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* DistantEpilogue: The epilogue takes place 30 years after Tapu Lele leaves Pokérin, by which point most of the mortal characters are either old or dead.
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* WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: Chapter 68, The State of Pokérinian Civilization, gives summaries of Pokérin making its first steps to joining the Federation, and what various supporting characters got up to after the crew finished their survey.
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* WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: Chapter 68, The State of Pokérinian Civilization, gives summaries of Pokérin making its summarises Pokérin's first steps to joining the Federation, and what various supporting characters got up to after the crew finished their survey.
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* WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: Chapter 68, The State of Pokérinian Civilization, gives summaries of Pokérin making its first steps to joining the Federation, and what various supporting characters got up to after the crew finished their survey.
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* TheReveal: [[spoiler:The "E" character who occasionally comments on the articles turns out to be a Gothitelle named Eulogy.]]
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* TheReveal: TheReveal:
** [[spoiler:The "E" character who occasionally comments on the articles turns out to be a Gothitelle named Eulogy.]]
** [[spoiler:Zygarde, Giratina, Palkia, and Dialga tell the crew that Pokérin is the base template for all humanoids' cultures, which Infinity Energy (which is the essence of Arceus) then copied throughout the universe.]]
** [[spoiler:The "E" character who occasionally comments on the articles turns out to be a Gothitelle named Eulogy.]]
** [[spoiler:Zygarde, Giratina, Palkia, and Dialga tell the crew that Pokérin is the base template for all humanoids' cultures, which Infinity Energy (which is the essence of Arceus) then copied throughout the universe.]]
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* SealedGoodInACan: [[spoiler:Audrey trapped Zygarde in a Pokéball so he wouldn't interfere with the war in Unova.]]
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* BadassNormal: Ezri Dax has fought ''alongside'' Pokémon a few times, even though she's a HumanAlien with no combat superpowers.
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* FantasticLegalWeirdness: Audino are sometimes put on trial for assisting Zoroark in Unova, even though they can't legally be persecuted because they're not treated as people.
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* OneGenderRace: Defied with Throh and Sawk; they were believed to be all male until the Federation started analysing their DNA.
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* TalkingWithSigns: Since Siren is a Roserade, a species who can't talk, she communicates by writing. She holds up several signs during her battle against Leon's team.
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* YouNoTakeCandle: Siren the Roserade's writings contains poor grammar and syntax, such as “you think he be gooder by now.” Julian wonders if she's doing this on purpose to mess with him.
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* YouNoTakeCandle: Siren the Roserade's writings Siren's writing contains poor grammar and syntax, syntax at first, such as “you think he be gooder by now.” Julian wonders if she's doing this on purpose to mess with him.
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* SingleSpecimenSpecies: Unusually for a ''Pokémon'' fanfic, this is averted with most legendaries — it's explicitly stated that there are multiple Latis, Darkrais, Cresselias, and Tapus. It's played straight with Regigigas, though; only one has ever existed, because it was created by Zygarde for the sole purpose of shaping the world.
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* SingleSpecimenSpecies: Unusually for a ''Pokémon'' fanfic, this is averted with most legendaries — it's explicitly stated that there are multiple Latis, Darkrais, Cresselias, and Tapus. It's played straight with Regigigas, though; only one has ever existed, because it was created by Zygarde for the sole purpose of shaping the world. Diancie is also a one-of-a-kind mutation.
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* FightingFromTheInside: During Lele's battle against Leon, Dominus the Orbeetle can't mind-control Dragapult because it's using Outrage.
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* FightingFromTheInside: During Tapu Lele's battle against Leon, she gigantamaxes Dominus the Orbeetle can't Orbeetle, giving him the power to control minds. However, Dominus is unable to mind-control Dragapult because it's using the incredibly powerful attack Outrage.
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* FightingFromTheInside: During Lele's battle against Leon, Dominus the Orbeetle can't mind-control Dragapult because it's using Outrage.
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* CreepyTwins: The team encounter Indeedee twins on a Beeheeyem ship who serve a Malamar. They finish each others' sentences, physically torture people, and give death threats in a gentle, customer service-like tone.
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* ProudWarriorRace: Urshifu society revolves around them training until they're strong enough to fight in wars and survive.
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* DrunkOnMilk: Amped Toxtricity like to drink stagnant water because they're resilient to toxins, and it has an effect on them that's similar to getting drunk.
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* BizarreSexualDimorphism: Male Kangaskhan joeys never reach adult size, and become Marowak when their mothers die.
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* BizarreSexualDimorphism: BizarreSexualDimorphism:
** Male Kangaskhan joeys never reach adult size, and become Marowak when their mothersdie.die. However, there are just as many stunted female Kangaskhan as well.
** Grimmsnarl and Hatterene are different sexes of the same species; the former looks like a goblin, and the latter looks like a witch, but they both have jelly-like hair.
** Male Kangaskhan joeys never reach adult size, and become Marowak when their mothers
** Grimmsnarl and Hatterene are different sexes of the same species; the former looks like a goblin, and the latter looks like a witch, but they both have jelly-like hair.
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* PsychicPowers: Many of the intelligent Pokémon species are Psychic-types.
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* DreamLand: Musharna spend most of their lives sleeping, and all of them are linked to the same shared dream.
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* EmotionsVsStoicism: [=Porygon2=] are entirely emotionless and focus on tasks like a computer would, yet they still have desires to do things. Meanwhile, Porygon-Z has chaotic emotions that seem to change every few seconds, and its behaviours don't follow the Vulcan idea of logic.
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* DreamLand: Musharna spend most of their lives sleeping, and all of them are linked to the same shared dream.
* EmotionsVsStoicism: [=Porygon2=] are entirely emotionless and focus on tasks like a computer would, yet they still have desires to do things. Meanwhile, Porygon-Z has chaotic emotions that seem to change every few seconds, and its behaviours don't follow logic — or at least, not theVulcan idea Vulcans' definition of logic.
* EmotionsVsStoicism: [=Porygon2=] are entirely emotionless and focus on tasks like a computer would, yet they still have desires to do things. Meanwhile, Porygon-Z has chaotic emotions that seem to change every few seconds, and its behaviours don't follow logic — or at least, not the
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* MoreThanMindControl: Obstagoon hate the world by their very nature, making them easy for Malamar to recruit without resorting to mind control.
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** Scrafty's hat is rebellion. They rebel against the idea of being categorised as sapient due to the misunderstanding that the Federation are imposing it on them.
** Malamar have a tendency to be megalomaniacs, or at least a desire for power. Julian wonders if the non-megalomaniacal ones never leave their cities... or if they purge ones who have different ideals.
** Malamar have a tendency to be megalomaniacs, or at least a desire for power. Julian wonders if the non-megalomaniacal ones never leave their cities... or if they purge ones who have different ideals.
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** Scrafty's hat is rebellion.All Scrafty are rebellious. They rebel against the idea of being categorised as sapient due to the misunderstanding that the Federation are imposing it on them.
** Malamar have a tendency to be megalomaniacs, or at leasta desire for power.chaos. Julian wonders if the non-megalomaniacal ones never leave their cities... or if they purge ones who have different ideals.
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* ClapYourHandsIfYouBelieve: [[spoiler:It turns out that Infinity Energy improves itself by mimicking everything around it. There were no sapient Pokémon until Pokérinians evolved and Infinity Energy could "borrow" it from them. In turn, the way Pokérinians think things such as ghosts "should" be influences the way Infinity Energy manifests.]]
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* ClapYourHandsIfYouBelieve: [[spoiler:It turns out that Infinity Energy improves itself by mimicking everything around it. There were no sapient Pokémon until Pokérinians evolved and Infinity Energy could "borrow" it from them. In turn, the way Pokérinians think things such as ghosts "should" be influences the way causes Infinity Energy manifests.to make those conceptions into reality.]]
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''Intelligence Factor: A Survey of Pokérin's Sapient Species'' is a ''Franchise/{{Pokemon}}'' and ''Series/StarTrekDeepSpaceNine'' crossover by [=GMBlackjack=], author of ''Fanfic/SongsOfTheSpheres''. It is written as a scientific journal by Dr. Julian Bashir that recounts his travels around the world of Pokérin to study the intelligence of Pokémon. It can be found on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/30823067/chapters/76090625 Archive of Our Own]] and [[https://offprint.net/prose/D27Ee2UaP/intelligence-factor-a-survey-of-pokerin-s-sapient-species Offprint]].
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''Intelligence Factor: A Survey of Pokérin's Sapient Species'' is a ''Franchise/{{Pokemon}}'' and ''Series/StarTrekDeepSpaceNine'' crossover by [=GMBlackjack=], author of ''Fanfic/SongsOfTheSpheres''. It is written as a scientific journal by Dr. Julian Bashir that recounts recounting his travels around the world of Pokérin to study the intelligence of Pokémon. It can be found on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/30823067/chapters/76090625 Archive of Our Own]] and [[https://offprint.net/prose/D27Ee2UaP/intelligence-factor-a-survey-of-pokerin-s-sapient-species Offprint]].
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* MindRape: During Allister's battle with Tapu Lele, his Runegrigus gives everyone in the vicinity flashes of something being torn apart by a Zoroark. It's enough to make his opponent Valyez go down.
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** Cinderace treat everything in life like a competition.
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* YouNoTakeCandle: Siren the Roserade's writings contain poor grammar and syntax, such as “you think he be gooder by now.” Julian wonders if she's doing this on purpose to mess with him.
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* YouFightLikeACow: Unlike most Inteleon, Thiver won't stop coming out with jokes and one-liners. Julian wonders if he does this to distract his opponents.
* YouNoTakeCandle: Siren the Roserade's writingscontain contains poor grammar and syntax, such as “you think he be gooder by now.” Julian wonders if she's doing this on purpose to mess with him.
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* PlanetOfHats: Malamar have a tendency to be megalomaniacs, or at least a desire for power. Julian wonders if the non-megalomaniacal ones never leave their cities... or if they purge ones who have different ideals.
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** Scrafty's hat is rebellion. They rebel against the idea of being categorised as sapient due to the misunderstanding that the Federation are imposing it on them.
** Malamar have a tendency to be megalomaniacs, or at least a desire for power. Julian wonders if the non-megalomaniacal ones never leave their cities... or if they purge ones who have different ideals.
** Scrafty's hat is rebellion. They rebel against the idea of being categorised as sapient due to the misunderstanding that the Federation are imposing it on them.
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* PsychicLink: Ezri asks Miranda to psychically link her to Rayquaza so she can tell it that they come in peace.
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* TheseAreThingsManWasNotMeantToKnow: Even ''pictures'' of Mimikyu's true body will kill anyone who looks at them. For good reason, Dr. Bashir doesn't want this to become public knowledge.
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* TheseAreThingsManWasNotMeantToKnow: Even ''pictures'' The sight of Mimikyu's true body will kill anyone who looks at them. For good reason, Dr. Bashir doesn't want this appearance is so deadly that Julian thinks it would be best to become public knowledge.be kept a secret, lest it be used as a weapon of mass destruction.
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* {{Masquerade}}: Bashir recommends enforcing one regarding information about Mimikyu when he discovers that viewing ones true body (even a recording of one) kills the viewer. As he points out if someone with hostile intent gets access to a picture of a Mimikyu it could be used as a weapon of mass destruction against any planet with an internet.
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* SkepticNoLonger: At first Bashir dismisses the belief that Dusknoir are {{Psychopomp}}s to be nothing more than superstition. Then he witnesses two of them rip out Ezri Dax's soul and open a portal to the ghost world. After that he's less willing to dismiss the beliefs that Pokérinians have about certain Pokémon.