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* EveryoneLives: [[spoiler:Due to the game being set in a VirtualReality. Even Tsumugi lives, albeit she [[IChooseToStay chooses to remain in the VR]] and start killing games with [[VisualNovel/DanganronpaV3KillingHarmony NPCs based off the cast]] over and over again.]]
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* EveryoneLives: [[spoiler:Due to the game being set in a VirtualReality.InsideAComputerSystem. Even Tsumugi lives, albeit she [[IChooseToStay chooses to remain in the VR]] and start killing games with [[VisualNovel/DanganronpaV3KillingHarmony NPCs based off the cast]] over and over again.]]
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** [[spoiler:Kaede [[BagOfHolding being able to fit an actual person inside her bag]] is a clue that they're inside a VirtualReality.]]
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** [[spoiler:Kaede [[BagOfHolding being able to fit an actual person inside her bag]] is a clue that they're inside a VirtualReality.InsideAComputerSystem.]]
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* ActionizedSequel
* AngerBornOfWorry: Kaede is frequently on the end of Kokichi's.
* AngerBornOfWorry: Kaede is frequently on the end of Kokichi's.
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* BadassCrew: The V3 kids.
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* ForegoneConclusion: It's a VirtualReality. None of the killing game's victims are KilledOffForReal.
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* ForegoneConclusion: It's a VirtualReality.set InsideAComputerSystem. None of the killing game's victims are KilledOffForReal.
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* ArmorPiercingSlap: Kaede has given several, either in a GetAHoldOfYourselfMan moment or when she hit her RageBreakingPoint. The only victim of the latter so far is [[spoiler: Munakata]].
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* DrivesLikeCrazy: Most of the group, since, as Himiko points out, the world ended while they were in high school, [[JustifiedTrope so none of them had time to learn to drive]]. Rantaro is somehow still [[UpToEleven even worse than the others]], to the point that [[TheDreaded everyone agreed not to let him drive ever again]].
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* DrivesLikeCrazy: Most of the group, since, as Himiko points out, the world ended while they were in high school, [[JustifiedTrope so none of them had time to learn to drive]]. Rantaro is somehow still [[UpToEleven even worse than the others]], others, to the point that [[TheDreaded everyone agreed not to let him drive ever again]].
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* LockedOutOfTheLoop: [[spoiler:Korekiyo gets caught by Kokichi, Angie, Maki, Shuichi, and Kaito in the act of attempting to murder Kaede. After they knock him out, they secretly pass inform the rest of the group in order to arrange a guard schedule while all promising not to let Kaede know.]]
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* LockedOutOfTheLoop: [[spoiler:Korekiyo gets caught by Kokichi, Angie, Maki, Shuichi, and Kaito in the act of attempting to murder Kaede. After they knock him out, they secretly pass inform the rest of the group in order to arrange a guard schedule while all promising not to let Kaede know.know. This becomes a point of contention in the second trial when she has to uncover why Korekiyo was under guard and no one wants to spill the beans.]]
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* {{Yandere}}: PlayedForLaughs in one of the bonus stories. Kokichi gets amnesia, wakes up, sees Kaede, blurts out a "marry me", sees the ring on her finger, and starts plotting to murder her husband. Kaede drily tells him that ''he's'' her husband.
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* {{Yandere}}: PlayedForLaughs in one of the bonus stories. Kokichi gets amnesia, wakes up, sees Kaede, blurts out a "marry me", sees the ring on her finger, and starts plotting to murder her husband. MurderTheHypotenuse. Kaede drily tells him that ''he's'' her husband.''they're already married''.
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* OneDegreeOfSeparation: [[spoiler:Almost the entire cast is revealed to have been harmed by [[VisualNovel/Danganronpa2GoodbyeDespair the Remnants of Despair]] in some way. The exceptions are Kaede (who was targeted by Tsumugi) and technically Miu (she blames Izuru, but [[WalkingWasteland he didn't personally do anything to her]]).]]
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* WalkingWasteland: [[spoiler:Miu laments that when Izuru Kamukura showed up in her city, all her inventions just ''stopped working''.]]
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: [[spoiler:Kaede [[BagOfHolding being able to fit an actual person inside her bag]] is a clue that they're inside a VirtualReality.]]
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: {{Foreshadowing}}:
** [[spoiler:Kaede [[BagOfHolding being able to fit an actual person inside her bag]] is a clue that they're inside a VirtualReality.]]
** Upon learning that Korekiyo is a SerialKiller with almost a hundred victims, Kaede protests that can't be true, because how would something like that have not made the news? [[spoiler:Because [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt The Tragedy]] was going on at the time, that's why.]]
** [[spoiler:Kaede [[BagOfHolding being able to fit an actual person inside her bag]] is a clue that they're inside a VirtualReality.]]
** Upon learning that Korekiyo is a SerialKiller with almost a hundred victims, Kaede protests that can't be true, because how would something like that have not made the news? [[spoiler:Because [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt The Tragedy]] was going on at the time, that's why.]]
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* {{Yandere}}: PlayedForLaughs in one of the bonus stories. Kokichi gets amnesia, wakes up, sees Kaede, blurts out a "marry me", sees the ring on her finger, and starts plotting to murder her husband. Kaede drily tells him that ''he's'' her husband.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: [[spoiler:Kokichi ''breaks down'' sobbing and begging Kaede not to even ''discuss' a ThanatosGambit when she first raises the topic with him.]]
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: [[spoiler:Kokichi ''breaks down'' sobbing and begging Kaede not to even ''discuss' ''discuss'' a ThanatosGambit when she first raises the topic with him.]]
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* IneffectualSympatheticVillainn: Well no one has much sympathy for the villain in question, but [[spoiler:Tsumugi is ''utterly incompetent'' as a mastermind. None of her motives work, she has to fake her own death to start the killing game, and there's only one real murder before Kaede and Kokichi outgambit her. The cast aren't afraid of her and outright ''mock'' her.]]
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* IneffectualSympatheticVillainn: IneffectualSympatheticVillain: Well no one has much sympathy for the villain in question, but [[spoiler:Tsumugi is ''utterly incompetent'' as a mastermind. None of her motives work, she has to fake her own death to start the killing game, and there's only one real murder before Kaede and Kokichi outgambit her. The cast aren't afraid of her and outright ''mock'' her.]]
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* LockedOutOfTheLoop: [[spoiler:Korekiyo gets caught by Kokichi, Angie, Maki, Shuichi, and Kaito in the act of attempting to murder Kaede. After they knock him out, they secretly pass inform the rest of the group in order to arrange a guard schedule while all promising not to let Kaede know.]]
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* SpannerInTheWorks:
** Kaede and Kokichi for Monokuma, so much. He even loudly gripes that he will let anyone who murders them get off without a trial. No one takes him up on it.
** [[spoiler:Korekiyo's attempted murder goes awry thanks to encountering these one after the other. First, Angie spots and overhears him muttering to himself as he tries to pick Kaede's lock. Then, he finds Kokichi in the room with the sleeping Kaede. He backs out, realizes a frozen Angie is there, and charges at her. She runs outside and he chases her, right to where Kaito, Shuichi, and Maki are training. [[OffscreenMomentOfAwesome The trio knock him out and tie him up]].]]
** Kaede and Kokichi for Monokuma, so much. He even loudly gripes that he will let anyone who murders them get off without a trial. No one takes him up on it.
** [[spoiler:Korekiyo's attempted murder goes awry thanks to encountering these one after the other. First, Angie spots and overhears him muttering to himself as he tries to pick Kaede's lock. Then, he finds Kokichi in the room with the sleeping Kaede. He backs out, realizes a frozen Angie is there, and charges at her. She runs outside and he chases her, right to where Kaito, Shuichi, and Maki are training. [[OffscreenMomentOfAwesome The trio knock him out and tie him up]].]]
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* AssholeVictim: [[spoiler:Korekiyo. His death is pretty gruesome, with Kokichi even noting someone must have ''really'' hated him to do so...then continuing that [[SerialKiller everyone there had reason to]].]]
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* AssholeVictim: [[spoiler:Korekiyo. His death is pretty gruesome, with but absolutely nobody feels sorry for him. Lampshaded when Kokichi even noting notes someone must have ''really'' hated him to do so...kill him so horribly, then continuing blithely continues that [[SerialKiller everyone there had reason to]].to, especially the girls]].]]
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* ButThouMust: Every time Kaede tries to spend Free Time with Korekiyo, Kokichi forcefully drags her away. [[PaintingTheMedium It's even written as a yes/no choice with the "yes" forcefully slashed through]].
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* ButThouMust: Every time Kaede tries to spend Free Time with Korekiyo, Kokichi forcefully drags her away. [[PaintingTheMedium It's even written as a yes/no choice with the "yes" forcefully slashed through]].
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* AssholeVictim: [[spoiler:Korekiyo. His death is pretty gruesome, with Kokichi even noting someone must have ''really'' hated him to do so...then continuing that [[SerialKiller everyone there had reason to]].]]
* ButThouMust: Every time Kaede tries to spend Free Time with Korekiyo, Kokichi forcefully drags her away. [[PaintingTheMedium It's even written as a yes/no choice with the "yes" forcefully slashed through]].
* FlatWhat: Kokichi's response to learning Korekiyo's a SerialKiller.
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* IneffectualSympathyVillain: IneffectualSympatheticVillainn: Well no one has much sympathy for the villain in question, but [[spoiler:Tsumugi is ''utterly incompetent'' as a mastermind. None of her motives work, she has to fake her own death to start the killing game, and there's only one real murder before Kaede and Kokichi outgambit her. The cast aren't afraid of her and outright ''mock'' her.]]
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* ProperlyParanoid: Kokichi [[ButThouMust grows increasingly forceful in refusing to let Kaede spend Free Time with Korekiyo]] and eventually says he's going to sleep in her room. [[spoiler:He is completely right to do so, as that very night Korekiyo tries to break in and murder Kaede.]]
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* [[spoiler:BackFromTheDead]]: [[spoiler:The main story ends with Kaede waking up from the simulation, with Angie and Korekiyo having already woken up.]]
* BagOfHolding: Kaede's backpack is noted to be capable of holding a punching bag, a chair (as-is the case in canon), and ''Kokichi.'' [[spoiler:Though, the fact that it's a virtual reality might have something to do with it.]]
* BagOfHolding: Kaede's backpack is noted to be capable of holding a punching bag, a chair (as-is the case in canon), and ''Kokichi.'' [[spoiler:Though, the fact that it's a virtual reality might have something to do with it.]]
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* [[spoiler:BackFromTheDead]]: BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler:The main story ends with Kaede waking up from the simulation, with Angie and Korekiyo having already woken up.]]
* BagOfHolding: Kaede's backpack is noted to be capable of holding a punching bag, a chair (as-is the case in canon), and ''Kokichi.''[[spoiler:Though, [[spoiler:This turns out to be subtle {{Foreshadowing}}.]]
* BoomHeadshot: The first victim is killed via a shot to the head. The fact thatit's their skull is still intact clues Maki into there being quite a virtual reality might have something to do with it.]]bit of distance between them and the weapon.
* BagOfHolding: Kaede's backpack is noted to be capable of holding a punching bag, a chair (as-is the case in canon), and ''Kokichi.''
* BoomHeadshot: The first victim is killed via a shot to the head. The fact that
* CruelAndUnusualDeath: As per the series' norm.
** [[spoiler:The second victim, Korekiyo, is simultaneously strangled and garroted with a clay wire cutter, then ''has his head shoved into hot wax''.]]
** [[spoiler:The second killer, Angie, is chased by a masked man through a corridor of dead girls and onto a bridge over a lava pit. While she's crossing the bridge, the man cuts the ropes, which sends her swinging through the air and slamming against the side of a cliff. She desperately tries to climb up, her arms and legs getting cut by the splintered wood, but [[HopeSpot as soon as she reaches the top is thrown down...then grabbed by flying Monokumas...who bury her up to her head in a pile of clay]]. Monokuma proceeds to beat at and cut the clay, and once the sculpture is finished, throws it in the lava to cool]].
** [[spoiler:The third "[[ThanatosGambit killer]]", Kaede, is sent through rooms where she is faced with multiple-choice questions about her friends. She answers them correctly, but doing so harms her in some way related to the friend, such as being shot with a crossbow (Maki) or burned with a spell (Himiko). The last room is Kokichi's; refusing to choose either "a liar" or "a corpse" as her answer, she picks "a friend", which Monokuma deems incorrect. The floor drops out beneath her and the landing breaks one or more bones. She is faced with a final monitor, which asks her whether she is a traitor, a murderer, or dead. She refuses to pick, and slowly all options change to "dead'. A group of Monokumas fall through the door and land on top of her, an unending rain of blunt force trauma that reduces her body to almost pulp.]]
* DeathGlare: Kokichi aims an ''absolutely hateful'' one at [[spoiler:Monokuma after the later executes Kaede [[ThanatosGambit under false pretenses]].]]
** [[spoiler:The second victim, Korekiyo, is simultaneously strangled and garroted with a clay wire cutter, then ''has his head shoved into hot wax''.]]
** [[spoiler:The second killer, Angie, is chased by a masked man through a corridor of dead girls and onto a bridge over a lava pit. While she's crossing the bridge, the man cuts the ropes, which sends her swinging through the air and slamming against the side of a cliff. She desperately tries to climb up, her arms and legs getting cut by the splintered wood, but [[HopeSpot as soon as she reaches the top is thrown down...then grabbed by flying Monokumas...who bury her up to her head in a pile of clay]]. Monokuma proceeds to beat at and cut the clay, and once the sculpture is finished, throws it in the lava to cool]].
** [[spoiler:The third "[[ThanatosGambit killer]]", Kaede, is sent through rooms where she is faced with multiple-choice questions about her friends. She answers them correctly, but doing so harms her in some way related to the friend, such as being shot with a crossbow (Maki) or burned with a spell (Himiko). The last room is Kokichi's; refusing to choose either "a liar" or "a corpse" as her answer, she picks "a friend", which Monokuma deems incorrect. The floor drops out beneath her and the landing breaks one or more bones. She is faced with a final monitor, which asks her whether she is a traitor, a murderer, or dead. She refuses to pick, and slowly all options change to "dead'. A group of Monokumas fall through the door and land on top of her, an unending rain of blunt force trauma that reduces her body to almost pulp.]]
* DeathGlare: Kokichi aims an ''absolutely hateful'' one at [[spoiler:Monokuma after the later executes Kaede [[ThanatosGambit under false pretenses]].]]
* EveryoneLives: [[spoiler:Due to the game being set in a VirtualReality. Even Tsumugi lives, albeit she [[IChooseToStay chooses to remain in the VR]] and start killing games with [[VisualNovel/DanganronpaV3KillingHarmony NPCs based off the cast]] over and over again.]]
* EvilIsPetty: PlayedForLaughs. [[spoiler:Tsumugi's form of revenge on Kaede and Kokichi has apparently been [[VisualNovel/DanganronpaV3KillingHarmony getting the former killed early and turning the latter into a]] {{Jerkass}} in her subsequent, NPC-only killing games.]]
* {{Flanderization}}:
** Discussed and PlayedForLaughs in one of the [[spoiler:post-game]] bonus stories. [[spoiler:Apparently, Tsumugi has been making Kokichi worse in each installment of her killing games as a petty form of revenge.]]
** [[spoiler:Also applies InUniverse. When Tsumugi forced everyone into the virtual reality, she programmed exaggerations of their real-life traits into their avatars, ie ramping up Kokichi and Maki's distrust of others, Himiko's sleepiness, Angie's preaching, etc.]]
* {{Foreshadowing}}: [[spoiler:Kaede [[BagOfHolding being able to fit an actual person inside her bag]] is a clue that they're inside a VirtualReality.]]
* EvilIsPetty: PlayedForLaughs. [[spoiler:Tsumugi's form of revenge on Kaede and Kokichi has apparently been [[VisualNovel/DanganronpaV3KillingHarmony getting the former killed early and turning the latter into a]] {{Jerkass}} in her subsequent, NPC-only killing games.]]
* {{Flanderization}}:
** Discussed and PlayedForLaughs in one of the [[spoiler:post-game]] bonus stories. [[spoiler:Apparently, Tsumugi has been making Kokichi worse in each installment of her killing games as a petty form of revenge.]]
** [[spoiler:Also applies InUniverse. When Tsumugi forced everyone into the virtual reality, she programmed exaggerations of their real-life traits into their avatars, ie ramping up Kokichi and Maki's distrust of others, Himiko's sleepiness, Angie's preaching, etc.]]
* {{Foreshadowing}}: [[spoiler:Kaede [[BagOfHolding being able to fit an actual person inside her bag]] is a clue that they're inside a VirtualReality.]]
* IneffectualSympathyVillain: Well no one has much sympathy for the villain in question, but [[spoiler:Tsumugi is ''utterly incompetent'' as a mastermind. None of her motives work, she has to fake her own death to start the killing game, and there's only one real murder before Kaede and Kokichi outgambit her.]]
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: [[spoiler:Kokichi ''breaks down'' sobbing and begging Kaede not to even ''discuss' a ThanatosGambit when she first raises the topic with him.]]
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* [[spoiler: [[StealthSequel Stealth Interquel:]] StealthSequel: [[spoiler:Stealth ''Interquel'', rather. The fic turns canon V3 into an entry is set just after the first game and game, before the second game, second, the spin-off, and the anime.anime, while canon V3 is one of Tsumugi's fictional virtual reality killing games.]]
* ThanatosGambit: [[spoiler:Kaede and Kokichi pull one off to end the killing game--Kaede pretends to have been brainwashed by a Flashback Light into strangling him and hanging his corpse. In actuality, he stuffs excess fabric inside the noose to give himself enough room to breath, while she keeps people away from his "body" under the pretense of grief. After the group reluctantly votes her as the killer and her execution, Kokichi strolls into the courtroom, directs a DeathGlare to Monokuma, and declares that Monokuma is now guilty of murder.]]
* ThanatosGambit: [[spoiler:Kaede and Kokichi pull one off to end the killing game--Kaede pretends to have been brainwashed by a Flashback Light into strangling him and hanging his corpse. In actuality, he stuffs excess fabric inside the noose to give himself enough room to breath, while she keeps people away from his "body" under the pretense of grief. After the group reluctantly votes her as the killer and her execution, Kokichi strolls into the courtroom, directs a DeathGlare to Monokuma, and declares that Monokuma is now guilty of murder.]]
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* WhamShot: In chapter 8, [[spoiler: the first victim is revealed to be ''Tsumugi Shirogane herself.'']]
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** In chapter 8, [[spoiler: the first victim is revealed to be ''Tsumugi Shirogane herself.'']]
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: All of the Future Foundation heads, along with Yuta remain alive here due to the V3's group presence.
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* IfItsYouItsOkay: Non romantic version. In spite of the word gentle still serving as as Kotoko's TraumaButton, she is totally fine when Gonta uses it when calls himself a gentleman because she realizes that he really is one when compared to the men who hurt her in the past.
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* IOweYouMyLife: [[spoiler: Miu says this verbatim to Kaede (twice) after the Pianist keeps her an Kiibo from getting executed.]]
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* IOweYouMyLife: [[spoiler: Miu says this verbatim to Kaede (twice) after the Pianist keeps her an and Kiibo from getting executed.]]
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* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: [[spoiler: Tsumugi starts helping her former enemies after Kaede treats her nicely and remembers her name.]]
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* HappilyAdopted: The Warriors of Hope utterly adore the V3 kids and are happy with all of them.
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* TheKindnapper: After he proves himself to them, The Warriors of Hope become much nicer to Kokichi.
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: [[spoiler: Chiaki's reason for the killing game? She wants to [[LoopholeAbuse use Izuru's]] MortonsFork to loop the simulation forever, [[{{Protectorate}} keeping the students from leaving and possibly getting hurt]].]]
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It spawned two sequels, ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/19865929/chapters/47046964 forgeries, forgetfulness, and forgiveness]]'', a story picking up after [[spoiler: all of the victim's of Tsumugi's killing game join the Future Foundation]] (complete) and ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/20183179/chapters/47822260 (because) i'm a machine (after all)]]'' (still in-progress), about [[spoiler: the members of SHSL Despair going through their own virtual killing game]].
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It spawned two sequels, ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/19865929/chapters/47046964 forgeries, forgetfulness, and forgiveness]]'', a story picking up after [[spoiler: all of the victim's of Tsumugi's killing game join the Future Foundation]] (complete) and ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/20183179/chapters/47822260 (because) i'm a machine (after all)]]'' (still in-progress), (complete), about [[spoiler: the members of SHSL Despair going through their own virtual killing game]].
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-> How in the world was anyone supposed to think that he could possibly be threatening after not only witnessing Kaede carry him like a football on the daily, not only witnessing him scream at a girl climbing a crane, not only witnessing him drag Kaede away from just throwing gifts at people, but also him having his hair done up in little bunny hair clips that Kaede just ''had?''
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--> [[BlatantLies this is an oumasai fic now. they killed me. im sorry.]]
--> [[BlatantLies this is an oumasai fic now. they killed me. im sorry.]]
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* DrivesLikeCrazy: Most of the group, since, as Himiko points out, the world ended while they were in high school, so none of them had time to learn to drive. Rantaro is somehow still [[UpToEleven even worse than the others]], to the point that [[TheDreaded everyone agreed not to let him drive ever again]].
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* DrivesLikeCrazy: Most of the group, since, as Himiko points out, the world ended while they were in high school, [[JustifiedTrope so none of them had time to learn to drive.drive]]. Rantaro is somehow still [[UpToEleven even worse than the others]], to the point that [[TheDreaded everyone agreed not to let him drive ever again]].
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* ForegoneConclusion: It's a VirtualReality. None of the killing game's victims are KilledOffForReal.
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* AllThereInTheManual: [[https://rainbow-unicorn-banzai-party.tumblr.com/tagged/fic-stuff The author's blog]] includes post-CostumeEvolution designs for the cast, relationship charts, and some drawings.
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* CuttingOffTheBranches: In the first story, the relationship between Kaede and Kokichi is supposed to be open to interpretation for the main story, with only the bonus chapters being explicitly romantic, in order to appeal to both people who wanted to see Kaede and Kokichi as PlatonicLifePartners and people who wanted to see them as an OfficialCouple. Come the second fic, the author doesn't even bother with pretending they're not a couple.
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* NecktieLeash: Kokichi gains a habit of doing this to Kaede. It helps that she's one of the few to wear her uniform correctly.
* NonUniformUniform: In the author's design sketches, the amount of people who wear their Future Foundation uniform correctly can be counted on one hand. (Not counting Tsumugi.)
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* AccidentalMurder: [[spoiler: Mahiru and Kazuichi become killers unintentionally. In Mahiru's case, [[TamperingWithFoodAndDrink she didn't know Nagito had poisoned an ingredient she was using in baking]]. In Kazuichi's case, he hit Nagito too hard in the process of restraining him]].
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* MistakenForMurderer: [[spoiler: The students vote for Mikan as the killer of the first case, meaning they all would have died had Chiaki not hit the ResetButton.]]
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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: [[spoiler: Mahiru becomes the first killer by helping [[LethalChef Sonia and Chiaki]] in making their apple pie taste better.]]
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* GogglesDoSomethingUnusual: Miu's help her achieve ImprobableAimingSkills, since she uses her [[MultiArmedAndDangerous robot arms]] to [[GunsAkimbo quadruple wield]].
