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**Medical gore and violation, with extreme detail
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**Makomo misses the 21st century's internet because of porn access.
**Makomo misses the 21st century's internet because of porn access.
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*Art Attacker:
**Synesthetic imagery and other literary devices are used to supplement Makomo's enhanced vision and predictive ability.
**Synesthetic imagery and other literary devices are used to supplement Makomo's enhanced vision and predictive ability.
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*Face on the Cover:
**Makomo's face is drawn a lot.
***Makomo's late teenage/early adult looks are inspired by K-pop idol Minji of NewJeans, as proclaimed by the author.
**Makomo's face is drawn a lot.
***Makomo's late teenage/early adult looks are inspired by K-pop idol Minji of NewJeans, as proclaimed by the author.
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** Shinobu proves to be a great friend when she fights off [[spoiler:Douma]] despite everything looking bleak
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Shinobu, Makomo, and Kyojuro.
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** Lightning metaphors and electricity related vocabulary make an appearance despite common sense dictating that she should only be seeing water waves with the Breath of Water. Ergo, [[spoiler:she learns Breath of Thunder]].
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** Lightning metaphors and electricity related vocabulary make an appearance despite common sense dictating that she should only be seeing water waves with the Breath of Water.appearance. Ergo, [[spoiler:she learns Breath of Thunder]].
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*Chekhov's Gun:
**Makomo complains about overextending her limbs a lot in the first third of the story. Ergo, [[spoiler:a demon rips her limb off]]
**Lightning metaphors and electricity related vocabulary make an appearance despite common sense dictating that she should only be seeing water waves with the Breath of Water. Ergo, [[spoiler:she learns Breath of Thunder]].
**Sabito lives. Ergo, [[spoiler:Sabito and Giyuu angst over which one of them gets to have the Water Tsuguko position]].
**Makomo complains about overextending her limbs a lot in the first third of the story. Ergo, [[spoiler:a demon rips her limb off]]
**Lightning metaphors and electricity related vocabulary make an appearance despite common sense dictating that she should only be seeing water waves with the Breath of Water. Ergo, [[spoiler:she learns Breath of Thunder]].
**Sabito lives. Ergo, [[spoiler:Sabito and Giyuu angst over which one of them gets to have the Water Tsuguko position]].
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*Ridiculously Photogenic:
**Douma is described to have "ethereal beauty" and "a fascinating face."
**Makomo often thinks about Kyojuro's jawline.
**Douma is described to have "ethereal beauty" and "a fascinating face."
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*True Companions:
**Shinobu proves to be a great friend when she [[spoilers:fights off Douma despite everything looking bleak]]
**Shinobu proves to be a great friend when she [[spoilers:fights off Douma despite everything looking bleak]]
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* What Beautiful Eyes!
** The title of the fanfiction gives it away. Makomo's eyes are described to look like the ocean, and various artworks depict her eyes in stunning shades of blue, with hints of green and gold.
** The title of the fanfiction gives it away. Makomo's eyes are described to look like the ocean, and various artworks depict her eyes in stunning shades of blue, with hints of green and gold.
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* What Beautiful Eyes!
Eyes!:
**The title of the fanfiction gives it away. Makomo's eyes are described to look like the ocean, and various artworks depict her eyes in stunning shades of blue, with hints of green and gold.
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''I See the Ocean'' by lulu_lisbon is an ongoing self-insert fanfiction for Demon Slayer/Kimetsu no Yaiba involving a woman from our world reborn into the body of the character Makomo. The story starts when the self-insert as Makomo is nine years old, when she apprentices under the former Water Pillar Urokodaki.
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''I See the Ocean'' by lulu_lisbon is an ongoing self-insert fanfiction for Demon Slayer/Kimetsu no Yaiba involving a woman from our world reborn into the body of the character Makomo. The story starts when the self-insert as Makomo is nine years old, when she apprentices under the former Water Pillar Urokodaki.
Urokodaki Sakonji.
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** In the series' source material, several demon slayers have enhanced senses. In ''I See the Ocean,'' [[spoiler:Makomo has enhanced eyesight.]] In chapter 10, it is mentioned that she can [[spoiler:see people's lips moving clearly enough to read their words from eight kilometres away.]] Chapter 6 heavily implies that she uses her synesthesia to her advantage.
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** In the series' source material, several demon slayers have enhanced senses. In ''I See the Ocean,'' [[spoiler:Makomo Makomo has enhanced eyesight.]] In eyesight.
***In chapter 10, it is mentioned that she can [[spoiler:see people's lips moving clearly enough to read their words from eight kilometres away.]] Chapter 6 heavily implies that she uses her synesthesia to her advantage.
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***Makomo can see through thin materials like shoji doors and eye masks.
***In chapter 10, it is mentioned that she can [[spoiler:see people's lips moving clearly enough to read their words from eight kilometres away.
***Makomo can see through thin materials like shoji doors and eye masks.
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** The surgeons do not attempt to listen to Makomo's concerns and they shove a rope back into her mouth during the surgery.surgery.
*True Beauty Is on the Inside:
**Kyojuro falls for Makomo even though he can't see her face.
*What Beautiful Eyes!
**The title of the fanfiction gives it away. Makomo's eyes are described to look like the ocean, and various artworks depict her eyes in stunning shades of blue, with hints of green and gold.
*True Beauty Is on the Inside:
**Kyojuro falls for Makomo even though he can't see her face.
*What Beautiful Eyes!
**The title of the fanfiction gives it away. Makomo's eyes are described to look like the ocean, and various artworks depict her eyes in stunning shades of blue, with hints of green and gold.
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** A demon eats Makomo's parents, and it is described vividly, with various metaphors and disgusting eating sounds added to the writing for literary dramatic effect.
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** A demon eats Makomo's parents, parents and it is described vividly, with various metaphors and disgusting eating chewing sounds added to the writing for literary dramatic effect.
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* Nausea Fuel:
** A demon eats Makomo's parents, and it is described vividly, with various metaphors and disgusting eating sounds added to the writing for literary dramatic effect.
** Various subtle implications of arousal or perversion.
*** Notably in chapter 10, when Makomo describes Senjuro as [[spoiler:the kind of beautiful cherubic child that some people dream of violating]].
*** [[spoiler:Douma]] is implied to enjoy hunting women in more than one way.
** A demon eats Makomo's parents, and it is described vividly, with various metaphors and disgusting eating sounds added to the writing for literary dramatic effect.
** Various subtle implications of arousal or perversion.
*** Notably in chapter 10, when Makomo describes Senjuro as [[spoiler:the kind of beautiful cherubic child that some people dream of violating]].
*** [[spoiler:Douma]] is implied to enjoy hunting women in more than one way.
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* Squick:
** A demon eats Makomo's parents, and it is described vividly, with various metaphors and disgusting eating sounds added to the writing for literary dramatic effect.
** Various subtle implications of arousal or perversion.
*** Notably in chapter 10, when Makomo describes Senjuro as [[spoiler:the kind of beautiful cherubic child that some people dream of violating]].
*** [[spoiler:Douma]] is implied to enjoy hunting women in more than one way.
** A demon eats Makomo's parents, and it is described vividly, with various metaphors and disgusting eating sounds added to the writing for literary dramatic effect.
** Various subtle implications of arousal or perversion.
*** Notably in chapter 10, when Makomo describes Senjuro as [[spoiler:the kind of beautiful cherubic child that some people dream of violating]].
*** [[spoiler:Douma]] is implied to enjoy hunting women in more than one way.
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*** Notably in chapter 10, when Makomo describes Senjuro as [[spoiler:the kind of child that people dream of violating]].
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*** Notably in chapter 10, when Makomo describes Senjuro as [[spoiler:the kind of beautiful cherubic child that some people dream of violating]].
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**A demon eats Makomo's parents, and it is described vividly, with various metaphors and disgusting eating sounds added to the writing for literary dramatic effect.
**Various subtle implications of arousal or perversion.
***Notably in chapter 10, when Makomo describes Senjuro as [[spoiler:the kind of child that people dream of violating]].
***[[spoiler:Douma]] is implied to enjoy hunting women in more than one way.
**A demon eats Makomo's parents, and it is described vividly, with various metaphors and disgusting eating sounds added to the writing for literary dramatic effect.
**Various subtle implications of arousal or perversion.
***Notably in chapter 10, when Makomo describes Senjuro as [[spoiler:the kind of child that people dream of violating]].
***[[spoiler:Douma]] is implied to enjoy hunting women in more than one way.
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The fanfiction starts off strong with intensely intricate gore scenes, author-verified "gratuitous use of colour theory" and "art metaphors," theory," and a first-person perspective from the self-insert, who has synesthesia and describes her world in a way that is rare to see in written works. The author foreshadows and adds red herrings starting from the first chapter to build up to huge events of shock value, and is not afraid to drastically change the typical self-insert formula to create a story.
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** Taisho Era (1912-1926) Medicine.Medicine.
*Strapped to an Operating Table:
**The surgeons do not attempt to listen to Makomo's concerns and they shove a rope back into her mouth during the surgery.
*Strapped to an Operating Table:
**The surgeons do not attempt to listen to Makomo's concerns and they shove a rope back into her mouth during the surgery.
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** Kyojuro protects and soothes Senjuro when he's scared of ghosts, instead of finding their dad.
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** Kyojuro protects and soothes Senjuro when he's scared of ghosts, scared, taking on a parental role instead of finding their dad.
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*Skip the Anesthetic:
**Shinobu and the Butterfly House medical team only give Makomo hallucinogens instead of anesthetic because they need to find out how much pain she can still feel to test her nerve damage on [[spoiler:the place her arm was, for reattachment surgery]].
**Taisho Era (1912-1926) Medicine.
*Skip the Anesthetic:
**Shinobu and the Butterfly House medical team only give Makomo hallucinogens instead of anesthetic because they need to find out how much pain she can still feel to test her nerve damage on [[spoiler:the place her arm was, for reattachment surgery]].
**Taisho Era (1912-1926) Medicine.
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''I See the Ocean'' by lulu_lisbon is a self-insert fanfiction for Demon Slayer/Kimetsu no Yaiba involving a woman from our world reborn into the body of the character Makomo. The story starts when the self-insert as Makomo is nine years old, when she apprentices under the former Water Pillar Urokodaki.
Published in December 2021, ongoing status.
Published in December 2021, ongoing status.
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''I See the Ocean'' by lulu_lisbon is a an ongoing self-insert fanfiction for Demon Slayer/Kimetsu no Yaiba involving a woman from our world reborn into the body of the character Makomo. The story starts when the self-insert as Makomo is nine years old, when she apprentices under the former Water Pillar Urokodaki.
Published The fanfiction starts off strong with intensely intricate gore scenes, author-verified "gratuitous use of colour theory" and "art metaphors," and a first-person perspective from the self-insert, who has synesthesia and describes her world in December 2021, ongoing status.a way that is rare to see in written works. The author foreshadows and adds red herrings starting from the first chapter to build up to huge events of shock value, and is not afraid to drastically change the typical self-insert formula to create a story.
There are several other works that involve spin-offs or artworks of ''I See the Ocean.''
*Link to the author's tumblr page, which contains Makomo art.
*Link to the author's "rambling" page, which contains Makomo short stories.
There are several other works that involve spin-offs or artworks of ''I See the Ocean.''
*Link to the author's tumblr page, which contains Makomo art.
*Link to the author's "rambling" page, which contains Makomo short stories.
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** Makomo [[spoiler:loses an arm]] and thus loses the ability [[spoiler:to fight with the arm, despite it being reattached]]. This deviates from common self-insert tropes, as most of them do not mess with a standard self-insert formula.
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** Makomo [[spoiler:loses an arm]] and thus loses the ability [[spoiler:to fight with raise her arm above the arm, shoulder or move it fast, despite it being reattached]]. This deviates from common self-insert tropes, as most of them do not mess with a standard self-insert formula.formula.
*It's Personal:
**Shinobu becomes outwardly emotional and aggressive in chapter 11 due to [[spoiler:Douma scarring her sister's face and almost killing her]] and [[spoiler:when he dismembers her best friend]]
*Living Weapon:
**The demons are not to be messed around with.
*Not So Stoic:
**Makomo tells cringey jokes to Sabito.
**Giyuu brings pastries to share with his family.
**Sabito and Giyuu are protective older brothers who try to break into the [[spoiler:Rengoku Estate]] to protect Makomo's purity.
*Promoted to Parent:
**Urokodaki legally adopts Makomo.
**Kyojuro protects and soothes Senjuro when he's scared of ghosts, instead of finding their dad.
*It's Personal:
**Shinobu becomes outwardly emotional and aggressive in chapter 11 due to [[spoiler:Douma scarring her sister's face and almost killing her]] and [[spoiler:when he dismembers her best friend]]
*Living Weapon:
**The demons are not to be messed around with.
*Not So Stoic:
**Makomo tells cringey jokes to Sabito.
**Giyuu brings pastries to share with his family.
**Sabito and Giyuu are protective older brothers who try to break into the [[spoiler:Rengoku Estate]] to protect Makomo's purity.
*Promoted to Parent:
**Urokodaki legally adopts Makomo.
**Kyojuro protects and soothes Senjuro when he's scared of ghosts, instead of finding their dad.
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* Adaptational Badass:
** In the series' source material, several demon slayers have enhanced senses. In ''I See the Ocean,'' [[spoiler:Makomo has enhanced eyesight.]] In chapter 10, it is mentioned that she can [[spoiler:see people's lips moving clearly enough to read their words from eight kilometres away.]]
** In the series' source material, several demon slayers have enhanced senses. In ''I See the Ocean,'' [[spoiler:Makomo has enhanced eyesight.]] In chapter 10, it is mentioned that she can [[spoiler:see people's lips moving clearly enough to read their words from eight kilometres away.]]
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** In the series' source material, several demon slayers have enhanced senses. In ''I See the Ocean,'' [[spoiler:Makomo has enhanced eyesight.]] In chapter 10, it is mentioned that she can [[spoiler:see people's lips moving clearly enough to read their words from eight kilometres away.
*An Arm and a Leg:
**[[spoiler:Douma rips off Makomo's right arm.]]
*Badass Family:
**The Urokodaki family currently consists of Makomo, Sabito, and Giyuu, who are all noted to be very strong within the demon slayer community.
*Comically Missing the Point:
**Despite Makomo's battle IQ and general intelligence, she is dense when it comes to romance. She doesn't understand why Sabito and Giyuu get upset when she keeps talking about Kyojuro's testicles, and explicitly asks why two teenagers would want to sneak away to be together.
*Fatal Flaw:
**Makomo is consistently overconfident and a paranoid coward at the same time. This results in her keeping her foreknowledge a secret from mission planning, which then directly results in [[spoiler:her losing an arm]].
*First-Name Basis:
**Sabito and Giyuu panic over the fact that Makomo and Kyojuro are on a first-name basis. Hijinks ensue.
*Gone Horribly Wrong:
**Tengen and Kanae lead a mission with Makomo and Shinobu as their support to verify rumours of Upper Moon activity. However, [[spoiler:Douma]] takes an unexpected deviation in the route and confronts the two girls instead of the two Hashiras.
*Gut Punch:
**Makomo [[spoiler:loses an arm]] and thus loses the ability [[spoiler:to fight with the arm, despite it being reattached]]. This deviates from common self-insert tropes, as most of them do not mess with a standard self-insert formula.
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*Adaptational Badass:
**In the series' source material, several demon slayers have enhanced senses. In ''I See the Ocean,'' [[spoiler:Makomo has enhanced eyesight.]] In chapter 10, it is mentioned that she can [[spoiler:see people's lips moving clearly enough to read their words from eight kilometres away.]]
*Adaptational Badass:
**In the series' source material, several demon slayers have enhanced senses. In ''I See the Ocean,'' [[spoiler:Makomo has enhanced eyesight.]] In chapter 10, it is mentioned that she can [[spoiler:see people's lips moving clearly enough to read their words from eight kilometres away.]]
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''I See the Ocean'' by lulu_lisbon on AO3 is a self-insert fanfiction for Demon Slayer/Kimetsu no Yaiba involving a woman from our world reborn into the body of the character Makomo. The story starts when the self-insert as Makomo is nine years old, when she apprentices under the former Water Pillar Urokodaki.
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''I See the Ocean'' by lulu_lisbon on AO3 is a self-insert fanfiction for Demon Slayer/Kimetsu no Yaiba involving a woman from our world reborn into the body of the character Makomo. The story starts when the self-insert as Makomo is nine years old, when she apprentices under the former Water Pillar Urokodaki.
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''I See the Ocean'' by lulu_lisbon on AO3 is a self-insert fanfiction for Demon Slayer/Kimetsu no Yaiba involving a woman from our world reborn into the body of the character Makomo. The story starts when the self-insert as Makomo is nine years old, when she apprentices under the former Water Pillar Urokodaki.
Published in December 2021, ongoing status.
!!''I See the Ocean'' contains examples of:"
Published in December 2021, ongoing status.
!!''I See the Ocean'' contains examples of:"