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* BackFromTheDead [[spoiler:Takehito is alive in this fic but Karasuba didn't wake up]]
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* BackFromTheDead [[spoiler:Takehito is alive in this fic fic, but Karasuba didn't wake up]]up. Subverted however, The IS Girls' twisted feelings for Ichika disturb Karasuba's slumber.]]
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* CatchPhrase: When Minato gets asked why he goes so far for Ichika, he tells them they got history. Which some of the Sekirei don't get.
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* CatchPhrase: CharacterCatchphrase: When Minato gets asked why he goes so far for Ichika, he tells them they got history. Which some of the Sekirei don't get.
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Lots of insanity, HilarityEnsues and some history is coming for both of the boys.
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* {{Foil}}: While both Ichika and Minato got a bunch of girls in their respective lives, there is a world of difference. The IS girls are rude, violence and crude towards Ichika while the Sekirei and Chiho are kind girls who showers Minato with love, respect and affection.
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* {{Foil}}: While both Ichika and Minato got a bunch of girls in their respective lives, there is a world of difference. The IS girls are rude, violence violent and crude towards Ichika while the Sekirei and Chiho are kind girls who showers Minato with love, respect and affection.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Despite the above, Ichika can also be seen like this as he has little patience for his sister and/or the girls who are after him. The abuse both Chifuyu, and the Infinite Stratos girls put him through has made him this way. Also in this adaption, the Infinite Stratos girls has fallen into this category as well.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Despite the above, Ichika can also be seen like this as he has little patience for his sister and/or the girls who are after him. The abuse both Chifuyu, and the Infinite Stratos girls put him through has made him this way. Also in this adaption, the Infinite Stratos girls has fallen into this category as well. Charlotte Dunois is no exception.
