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* MightyWhitey / WhiteMansBurden: Lampshaded by Norm in Chapter 20, and the way he says it, it's not put in a good light.
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* MightyWhitey / WhiteMansBurden: Lampshaded by Norm in Chapter 20, and the way he says it, it's not put in a good light.20.
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-->'''Neytiri''': Tsu’tey killed the last person who insulted Jake-Sully.
-->'''Tsu'tey''': No, but I did leave him whimpering on the ground like a scared child.
-->'''Tsu'tey''': No, but I did leave him whimpering on the ground like a scared child.
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* WartsAndAll: Of a sort. Tsu'tey tells Jake that the scars of war does not make him any less beautiful.
--> '''Tsu'tey''': I loved you human and healthy, and I loved you human and broken. I love this skin, unblemished and new. I love this skin, damaged and scarred. I have loved you since before I knew what love was—since the first night I closed my eyes and found you.
--> '''Tsu'tey''': I loved you human and healthy, and I loved you human and broken. I love this skin, unblemished and new. I love this skin, damaged and scarred. I have loved you since before I knew what love was—since the first night I closed my eyes and found you.
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* WartsAndAll: Of a sorts. Tsu'tey tells Jake that the scars of war does not make him any less beautiful.
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* WartsAndAll: Of a sorts.sort. Tsu'tey tells Jake that the scars of war does not make him any less beautiful.
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* WartsAndAll: Of a sorts. Tsu'tey tells Jake that the scars of war does not make him any less beautiful.
--> '''Tsu'tey''': I loved you human and healthy, and I loved you human and broken. I love this skin, unblemished and new. I love this skin, damaged and scarred. I have loved you since before I knew what love was—since the first night I closed my eyes and found you.
--> '''Tsu'tey''': I loved you human and healthy, and I loved you human and broken. I love this skin, unblemished and new. I love this skin, damaged and scarred. I have loved you since before I knew what love was—since the first night I closed my eyes and found you.
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* AmbiguousSituation: Eytukan calls Jake "my son" several times. It is unclear whether if Jake has become a [[LikeASonToMe surrogate son]] to the Omaticaya Olo'eyktan, or Eytukan actually adopted Jake as his son. WordOfGod says it's the former.
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* AmbiguousSituation: Eytukan calls Jake "my son" several times.times as he warms up to him. It is unclear whether if Jake has become a [[LikeASonToMe surrogate son]] to the Omaticaya Olo'eyktan, or Eytukan actually adopted Jake as his son. WordOfGod says it's the former.
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* AmbiguousSituation: Eytukan calls Jake "my son" several times. It is unclear whether if Jake has become a [[LikeASonToMe surrogate son]] to the Omaticaya Olo'eyktan, or Eytukan actually adopted Jake as his son. WordOfGod says it's the latter.
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* AmbiguousSituation: Eytukan calls Jake "my son" several times. It is unclear whether if Jake has become a [[LikeASonToMe surrogate son]] to the Omaticaya Olo'eyktan, or Eytukan actually adopted Jake as his son. WordOfGod says it's the latter.former.
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* AmbiguousSituation: Eytukan calls Jake "my son" several times. It is unclear whether if Jake has become a [[LikeASonToMe surrogate son]] to the Omaticaya Olo'eyktan, or Eytukan actually adopted Jake as his son.
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* AmbiguousSituation: Eytukan calls Jake "my son" several times. It is unclear whether if Jake has become a [[LikeASonToMe surrogate son]] to the Omaticaya Olo'eyktan, or Eytukan actually adopted Jake as his son. WordOfGod says it's the latter.
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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: [[spoiler:Yharu gives Jake a profound speech to tell him this and snap him out of his HeroicBSOD (see LoveMakesYouEvil above).]]
