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* BadassNormal: Jacob takes strides towards this after [[spoiler:a near-death experience with Arfoire's "[[BladeOnAStick spear-lance]] [[BuffySpeak thing]]"]]. He gets the help of a jetpack and weaponized gauntlets, [[spoiler:and gets martial arts training from Nisa]].
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* BadassNormal: Jacob takes strides towards this after [[spoiler:a near-death experience with Arfoire's "[[BladeOnAStick spear-lance]] "spear-lance [[BuffySpeak thing]]"]]. He gets the help of a jetpack and weaponized gauntlets, [[spoiler:and gets martial arts training from Nisa]].
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One chapter later, Jacob finds himself whisked off to the realm of Gamindustri. [[RealityEnsues And he wants to go back home.]]
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One chapter later, Jacob finds himself whisked off to the realm of Gamindustri. [[RealityEnsues And he wants to go back home.]]
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** [[spoiler:Nep uses her Purple Heart form to get Jakob some weapons. Unfortunately, the clerk who is won over to help them? [[RealityEnsues She gets fired offscreen for giving expensive stuff--like the jetpack--to non-paying customers]].]]
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** [[spoiler:Nep uses her Purple Heart form to get Jakob some weapons. Unfortunately, the clerk who is won over to help them? [[RealityEnsues She gets fired offscreen for giving expensive stuff--like the jetpack--to non-paying customers]].customers.]]
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7369599/1/ Hyperdimension Neptunia is Real!]]'' is a ''Franchise/{{Neptunia}}'' FanFic by author Some Random Tosser. It is a SelfInsertFic of ''VideoGame/HyperdimensionNeptunia''--one that does its damndest to [[AvertedTrope avert and even]] [[DefiedTrope defy the usual tropes]].
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7369599/1/ Hyperdimension Neptunia is Real!]]'' is a ''Franchise/{{Neptunia}}'' ''VideoGame/{{Neptunia}}'' FanFic by author Some Random Tosser. It is a SelfInsertFic of ''VideoGame/HyperdimensionNeptunia''--one that does its damndest to [[AvertedTrope avert and even]] [[DefiedTrope defy the usual tropes]].
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** [[spoiler:Jacob has a [[DownplayedTrope Down]]-[[PlayedForLaughs played For Laughs]] one when his PS3 first explodes. All he can say is a lot of FlatWhat.]]
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** [[spoiler:Jacob has a [[DownplayedTrope Down]]-[[PlayedForLaughs played For Laughs]] one when his PS3 [=PS3=] first explodes. All he can say is a lot of FlatWhat.]]
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Sadly set to end at Chapter 40 (the end of the Leanbox Arc), due to the author's fatigue with it.
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** [[spoiler:Nep uses her Purple Heart form to get Jakob some weapons. Unfortunately, the clerk who is won over to help them, is later fired for giving expensive stuff--like the jetpack--to non-paying customers.]]
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** [[spoiler:Nep uses her Purple Heart form to get Jakob some weapons. Unfortunately, the clerk who is won over to help them, is later them? [[RealityEnsues She gets fired offscreen for giving expensive stuff--like the jetpack--to non-paying customers.customers]].]]
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* BuffySpeak: Neptune describes Arfoire's weapon as a "spear-lance thing".
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** [[spoiler:Red. She's able to discern Vert's nature as a "good" character, with the combination of details such as "big breasts" and "no lipstick"—the latter trait being something that BigBad Arfoire ''does'' possess.]]
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** [[spoiler:Red. She's able to discern Vert's nature as a "good" character, with the combination of details such as [[SensibleHeroesSkimpyVillains "big breasts" and "no lipstick"—the lipstick"]]—the latter trait being something that BigBad Arfoire ''does'' possess.]]
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* SensibleHeroesSkimpyVillains: How Red discerns Vert being "good".
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* AuthorAvatar: Jacob, naturally.
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* AuthorAvatar: Jacob, Jacob for SRT, naturally.
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* PunctuatedForEmphasis: Jacob. Doesn't. Know. Why the goddesses pushed Neptune off. So stop asking.
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* EveryoneHasStandards: When Compa suggests that Jacob would be better off sharing the guest bed with Neptune, Jacob immediately shoots it down.
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'''''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7369599/1/ Hyperdimension Neptunia is Real!]]''''' is a ''Franchise/{{Neptunia}}'' FanFic by author Some Random Tosser. It is a SelfInsertFic of ''VideoGame/HyperdimensionNeptunia''--one that does its damndest to [[AvertedTrope avert and even]] [[DefiedTrope defy the usual tropes]].
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