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Actually I might do my Simpsons SBIG fic.
* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: Invoked. At one point in chapter 10, [[spoiler:Alucard's tank starts talking]]. The narrator quickly says that it's not really happening, however.
* BiggerBad: [[spoiler:Hitler.]]
* BiggerBad: [[spoiler:Hitler.]]
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: [[spoiler:Alucard saying that there is no such thing as immortallity. Also, from the same chapter, Alucard questioning Seras as to what would she do if Alucard wasn't there.]]
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: {{Foreshadowing}}:
** [[spoiler:Alucard saying that there is no such thing as immortallity.Also, from From the same chapter, Alucard questioning Seras as to what would she do if Alucard wasn't there.]]
** [[spoiler:Carl betting Seras in chapter 3 that he will see her naked in a week. Cue chapter 7....]]
** [[spoiler:Alucard saying that there is no such thing as immortallity.
** [[spoiler:Carl betting Seras in chapter 3 that he will see her naked in a week. Cue chapter 7....]]
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* UnexpectedGenreChange: Each "season"[[hottip:*:Which are grouped by chapters 1-4, 5-7, 8 and 9, and 10-13]] has a vastly different tone to it. It doesn't help that previously major character in both canon and early in this fic Alucard [[spoiler:dies at the end of season 1.]]
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* UnexpectedGenreChange: Each "season"[[hottip:*:Which are grouped by chapters 1-4, 5-7, 8 and 9, and 10-13]] has a vastly different tone to it. Season 1 is more of a VillainOfTheWeek, kill-all-the-badguys type of adventure. Season 2 is focused mainly on a single battle and has more of a war series feel to it. Season 3 is similar to an action movie, and finally introduces a few more characters like Quimby. Season 4 is somewhat like a disaster movie parody, reverting back to its villain of the week ways. It doesn't help that previously major character in both canon and early in this fic Alucard [[spoiler:dies at the end of season 1.]]
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I screwed up on labelnotes, but it\'s getting changed anyway because I HAVE published that chapter two days ago.
* TheCapitalOfBrazilIsBuenosAires: Chapter 3. Brazil itself isn't mentioned much, but when it is.... Although for some reason, it's ''snowy''.
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* SelfDeprecation: The last chapter pokes fun at the author's own slow update rates; one of his fan fics, which in the [=HUCverse=] appears to be a show, is nominated, but the clip consists of "clip not ready yet" on a black screen.[[labelnote]]For reffrence, that mentioned chapter in question is ''still'' not published yet on fanfiction.net[[/labelnote]]
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* SelfDeprecation: The last chapter pokes fun at the author's own slow update rates; one of his fan fics, which in the [=HUCverse=] appears to be a show, is nominated, but the clip consists of "clip not ready yet" on a black screen.[[labelnote]]For [[labelnote:Note]]For reffrence, that mentioned chapter in question is ''still'' not ''was'' published yet on fanfiction.net[[/labelnote]]net, but it there was a whopping space of over seven months, three of which were after this chapter of HUC being published.[[/labelnote]]
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* NightmareRetardant: Invoked. This is a ''Hellsing'' fan fic meant to look like it was done by an over-energetic thirteen year old with little writting skills, so this is a given. It gets especially bad in chapters 6 and 7.
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Whoops wrong trope Surprise Incest is if they don\'t know at first not that it suddenly comes out of nowhere. (I was misinformed by how that trope was linked from Sweet Bro And Hella Jeff.) Also, it seems that latly, my SBIG fics have been having some series-within-a-series that\'s even worse than the original. (Those Wacky Nazis for this, the planned EENE: TME: Abridged Series for SJAHJ, and that Mario game for the Big Bang Theory comics.)
* BrotherSisterIncest: For side characters. "[[spoiler:John and [=JAde=] made a sucessful TV series based on ther pasrt intrests Nick Cage Squidels and Ed Edd and Eddy the Mis-Edcventures. '''Also the 2 got maried and have kids''', but they also have genderbend clones after a lab expiriment wqent wrong. John's clon is Jean and Jade's is Jude.]]"
* HighAltitudeBattle: The second half of the fight against Major alone.
* TheReveal: Master Cheif's identity is revealed in the tenth chapter... he's Kamina.
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* SurpriseIncest: [[spoiler:"John and [=JAde=] made a sucessful TV series based on ther pasrt intrests Nick Cage Squidels and Ed Edd and Eddy the Mis-Edcventures. '''Also the 2 got maried and have kids''', but they also have genderbend clones after a lab expiriment wqent wrong. John's clon is Jean and Jade's is Jude."]]
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* YouCantThwartStageOne: Averted during chapter 8: Carl prevents the Millennium from traveling back in time and taking over the world, so they have to move to a last miniute backup plan.
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* YouCantThwartStageOne: Averted during chapter 8: Carl prevents the Millennium from traveling back in time and taking over the world, so they have to move to a last miniute backup plan.plan.
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* SurprizeIncest: [[spoiler:"John and [=JAde=] made a sucessful TV series based on ther pasrt intrests Nick Cage Squidels and Ed Edd and Eddy the Mis-Edcventures. '''Also the 2 got maried and have kids''', but they also have genderbend clones after a lab expiriment wqent wrong. John's clon is Jean and Jade's is Jude."]]
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* SurprizeIncest: SurpriseIncest: [[spoiler:"John and [=JAde=] made a sucessful TV series based on ther pasrt intrests Nick Cage Squidels and Ed Edd and Eddy the Mis-Edcventures. '''Also the 2 got maried and have kids''', but they also have genderbend clones after a lab expiriment wqent wrong. John's clon is Jean and Jade's is Jude."]]
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* VerbalTic: Quimby begins every sentence with "er a um," and Hitler talks like [[Webcomic/{{Homestuck}} Eridan]].
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* VerbalTic: Quimby begins every sentence with "er a um," Alucard talks like a stereotypical pirate and a "wise mentor," and Hitler talks like [[Webcomic/{{Homestuck}} Eridan]].
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* AuthorTract: Parodied. At the end of chapter 9, Carl, ''for no reason'', gives a short rant against aboriton. Despite the fact that abortion was never mentioned before.
* BloodKnight: Keeping with canon, Major.
-->I like war. It makes my penis nice and hard.
-->I like war. It makes my penis nice and hard.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: [[spoiler:Alucard saying that there is no such thing as immortallity. Also, from the same chapter, Alucard questioning Seras as to what would she do if Alucard wasn't there.]]
* SailorEarth: Parodied twice. The first example is Carl. The second is with the Orange Pikmin, which parody a fandom trend of making fan Pikmin each with an immunity to an element.
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* SelfDeprecation: The last chapter pokes fun at the author's own slow update rates; one of his fan fics, which in the [=HUCverse=] appears to be a show, is nominated, but the clip consists of "clip not ready yet" on a black screen.
* SequelHook: [[spoiler:The very end of the fan fic, even after the closing AN, has a short scene of who appears to be Girlfriend from ''the Eds' [=EDventure=]'' building a device capable of reviving Ed and Edd]].
* SequelHook: [[spoiler:The very end of the fan fic, even after the closing AN, has a short scene of who appears to be Girlfriend from ''the Eds' [=EDventure=]'' building a device capable of reviving Ed and Edd]].
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* SelfDeprecation: The last chapter pokes fun at the author's own slow update rates; one of his fan fics, which in the [=HUCverse=] appears to be a show, is nominated, but the clip consists of "clip not ready yet" on a black screen.
screen.[[labelnote]]For reffrence, that mentioned chapter in question is ''still'' not published yet on fanfiction.net[[/labelnote]]
* SequelHook: Not one to HUC, though. [[spoiler:The very end of the fan fic, even after the closing AN, has a short scene of who appears to be Girlfriend from ''the Eds' [=EDventure=]'' building a device capable of reviving Ed and Edd]].
* SequelHook: Not one to HUC, though. [[spoiler:The very end of the fan fic, even after the closing AN, has a short scene of who appears to be Girlfriend from ''the Eds' [=EDventure=]'' building a device capable of reviving Ed and Edd]].
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** Major's death to [[spoiler:Mobster Kingpin's death in ''Webcomic/ProblemSleuth''.]]
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** Major's death to [[spoiler:Mobster Kingpin's death death]] in ''Webcomic/ProblemSleuth''.]]
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* SpotlightStealingSquad: Carl. Arguably Rip.
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* SpotlightStealingSquad: Carl. And Arguably Rip.Rip.
* SurprizeIncest: [[spoiler:"John and [=JAde=] made a sucessful TV series based on ther pasrt intrests Nick Cage Squidels and Ed Edd and Eddy the Mis-Edcventures. '''Also the 2 got maried and have kids''', but they also have genderbend clones after a lab expiriment wqent wrong. John's clon is Jean and Jade's is Jude."]]
* SurprizeIncest: [[spoiler:"John and [=JAde=] made a sucessful TV series based on ther pasrt intrests Nick Cage Squidels and Ed Edd and Eddy the Mis-Edcventures. '''Also the 2 got maried and have kids''', but they also have genderbend clones after a lab expiriment wqent wrong. John's clon is Jean and Jade's is Jude."]]
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Also changing pot hole to a real link so that it would be a little easier for others to tell excactly what the heck this is a fan fic of.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7380145/1/Hecksing_Ulumate_Crconikals Hecksing Ulumate Crconikals]]'' (Which is supposed to be ''Hecksing Ultimate Chronicles'') is the third installment to the ''SBIG'' series by Tropers/GreatPikminFan and the first one longer than a one-shot to be completed.[[hottip:*:Also of note, ''Zombie Attack!'', the work before HUC, ended on a CliffHanger]] Unlike its other installments, this one actually follows the story of [[Manga/{{Hellsing}} the original canon]] ''at first'' before slowly turning into an unusual adventure.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7380145/1/Hecksing_Ulumate_Crconikals Hecksing Ulumate Crconikals]]'' (Which is supposed to be ''Hecksing Ultimate Chronicles'') is the third installment to the ''SBIG'' series by Tropers/GreatPikminFan and the first one longer than a one-shot to be completed.[[hottip:*:Also of note, ''Zombie Attack!'', the work before HUC, ended on a CliffHanger]] Unlike its other installments, this one actually follows the story of [[Manga/{{Hellsing}} the original canon]] ''at canon of ''Manga/{{Hellsing}} at first'' before slowly turning into an unusual adventure.
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* TeenyWeenie: Carl, albeit through a "mistake" in the writting. His penis can be "censored" by a ''small'' laptop.
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* OlderThanTheyLook: As of chapter thirteen, Rip is no younger than ''one hundred''.
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* ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: As of chapter thirteen, Rip is no younger than ''one hundred''.
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I re-read the final season yesterday.
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* {{Acrofatic}}: Major can appearantly run up walls, as he does in chapter 11.
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* {{Acrofatic}}: Major can appearantly run up walls, do improbable backflips, and dodge ''exploding bullets'', as he does in chapter 11.
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* AnyoneCanDie: Unless either your name is Carl or you have "nice boos."
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* AnyoneCanDie: Unless either your name is Carl or you have "nice boos."" Though if you count becoming a vampire/familiar as a death, then ''every major character'' has died at one point in the story.
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* HalfHumanHybrid: [[spoiler:Hitler is part snake ala [[Manga/{{Naruto}} Orochimaru]]. This is never explained]].
* HaveIMentionedIAmHetrosexualToday Pulled off by the ''narrator'' in saying he doesn't find Carl's naked butt attractive.
* HaveIMentionedIAmHetrosexualToday Pulled off by the ''narrator'' in saying he doesn't find Carl's naked butt attractive.
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* HalfHumanHybrid: [[spoiler:Hitler is part snake ala [[Manga/{{Naruto}} Orochimaru]]. This He mentions that he was turned into this, but the reason how is never explained]].
*HaveIMentionedIAmHetrosexualToday HaveIMentionedIAmHeterosexualToday Pulled off by the ''narrator'' in saying he doesn't find Carl's naked butt attractive.
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: The first four chapters only have the absolute central characters, but then side-characters such as Dracula, Homer Simpson, David Hasselhoff, and the jury in chapter 9 are introduced. Ed, Eddy, and Sonic of the jury even play a role in the aformentioned chapter (providing Hecksing with some rides), and all of them get a mention in the epilogue. (Except Dracula.)
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: The first four chapters only have the absolute central characters, but then side-characters such as Dracula, Homer Simpson, David Hasselhoff, and the jury in chapter 9 are introduced. Ed, Eddy, and Sonic of the jury even play a role in the aformentioned chapter (providing Hecksing with some rides), and all of them get a mention in the epilogue. (Except Except Dracula.)
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* PaperThinDisguise: In chapter two, Jan and Luke get past Hecksing Manor's gate guards by putting on [[SuperMarioBros Mario and Luigi]] masks. ''It works''.
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* PaperThinDisguise: In chapter two, Jan and Luke get past Hecksing Manor's gate guards by putting on [[SuperMarioBros [[Franchise/SuperMarioBros Mario and Luigi]] masks. ''It works''.
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* PeekABoo: Carl's junk is "obscured" (this is a fan fic written entirley in text, so this isn't really necessary) by a cell phone. A cell phone which is explicitley stated as being "small." This doesn't really make any sense -- even aside from the aformentioned fact that this is text only -- by how "cansor bars" are used later on in the same chapter.
* RougeAngelsOfSatin: ''Just look at the title''.
* RougeAngelsOfSatin: ''Just look at the title''.
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* PeekABoo: Carl's junk is "obscured" (this is a fan fic written entirley in text, so this isn't really necessary) by a cell phone. A cell phone which is explicitley stated as being "small." This doesn't really make any sense -- even aside from the aformentioned fact that this is text only -- by how "cansor bars" are used later on in the same chapter.
* RougeAngelsOfSatin:RougeAnglesOfSatin: ''Just look at the title''.
* RougeAngelsOfSatin:
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* SceneryCensor: Carl's junk is "obscured" (this is a fan fic written entirley in text, so this isn't really necessary) by a laptop. A laptop which is explicitley stated as being "small." This doesn't really make any sense -- even aside from the aformentioned fact that this is text only -- by how "cansor bars" are used later on in the same chapter.
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* WeHardlyKnewYe: '''''Pip'''''. And to some extent, Sonic.
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* {{Acrofatic}}: Major can appearantly run up walls, as he does in chapter 11.
* AnyoneCanDie: Unless either your name is Carl or you have "nice boos."
* [[CensorBox Canser Bars]]: In the finale. Also probably what obscures Rip when her clothing becomes see-through.
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* EarlyBirdCameo: [[Webcomic/SweetJadeAndHellaJohn It is mentioned in the epilogue's intermission that John Egbert gets a female counterpart of himself in a lab accident named Jean.]]
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* EarlyBirdCameo: [[Webcomic/SweetJadeAndHellaJohn It is mentioned in the epilogue's intermission that John Egbert gets a female counterpart of himself in a lab accident named Jean. Jade also has a counterpart named Jude.]]
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* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: Tubalcain Alhambra is only reffered to as "Card Guy" throughout the entire fan fic. This is presumably because of his name being difficult to spell. Also, Schrodinger is reffered to as "Catboy" from the ending to chapter seven onwards. Oddly, "Major" is just called "Leader" until he is properly revealed, but this sudden "name reveal" means absolutley nothing, especially since in canon he's seen as early as the second OVA.
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* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: Tubalcain Alhambra is only reffered to as "Card Guy" throughout the entire fan fic. This is presumably because of his name being difficult to spell. Also, Schrodinger is reffered to as "Catboy" from the ending to chapter seven onwards. Then there's Lawyer Guy, who is an OriginalCharacter who's name is never revealed. ([[spoiler:He might not even have a name, due to being a robot.]]) Oddly, "Major" is just called "Leader" until he is properly revealed, but this sudden "name reveal" means absolutley nothing, especially since in canon he's seen as early as the second OVA.
* HaveIMentionedIAmHetrosexualToday Pulled off by the ''narrator'' in saying he doesn't find Carl's naked butt attractive.
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* ITakeOffenseToTheLastOne[=/=]DisproportionateRetribution: In the first chapter, Alucard takes special offense to Anderson's "STUPID INTEGRA" line. Enough to eat him over it.
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* ITakeOffenseToTheLastOne[=/=]DisproportionateRetribution: ITakeOffenseToThatLastOne[=/=]DisproportionateRetribution: In the first chapter, Alucard takes special offense to Anderson's "STUPID INTEGRA" line. Enough to eat him over it.
* OnceASeason: Rip's outfit becomes see-through.
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* RogueAngelsOfSatin: ''Just look at the title''.
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* RogueAngelsOfSatin: PeekABoo: Carl's junk is "obscured" (this is a fan fic written entirley in text, so this isn't really necessary) by a cell phone. A cell phone which is explicitley stated as being "small." This doesn't really make any sense -- even aside from the aformentioned fact that this is text only -- by how "cansor bars" are used later on in the same chapter.
* RougeAngelsOfSatin: ''Just look at the title''.
* RougeAngelsOfSatin: ''Just look at the title''.
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* StylisticSuck: The spelling, grammar, and organization actually gets ''better'' as the fic goes on, an inversion of a common TrollFic trend, but it's still pretty bad.
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* StylisticSuck: StylisticSuck:
** The spelling, grammar, and organization actually gets ''better'' as the fic goes on, an inversion of a common TrollFic trend, but it's still prettybad.bad.
** Arguably worse than HUC is the ShowWithinAShow by the Millennium. From what was shown, the humor consists entirley of "Hahaha Nazis are racist" and "''WesternAnimation/FamilyGuy'' sucks."
** The spelling, grammar, and organization actually gets ''better'' as the fic goes on, an inversion of a common TrollFic trend, but it's still pretty
** Arguably worse than HUC is the ShowWithinAShow by the Millennium. From what was shown, the humor consists entirley of "Hahaha Nazis are racist" and "''WesternAnimation/FamilyGuy'' sucks."
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I should make it a theme that every SBIG fic has \"X and Y have gotten married and had kids\" or something along those lines in it. But I didn\'t do that for Zombie Attack... sequel chapter, perhaps?
* AffectionateParody: It starts out as a parody of badly written ''Total Drama'' fan fics. Later chapters still carry (unintentional) elements of this, though not nearly as much.
* AllMenArePerverts: Carl, Quimby, and side character John Egbert (and/or his character in a ShowWithinAShow) show this. Carl is constantly hitting on every woman we sees, Quimby is an outright womanizer, and John's character peeks up the skirt of Jade's character during said show.
* AntiClimax: It would be easier to list which battles ''aren't'': Zorin and Rip vs Seras and Carl; Seras, Zorin, and Rip vs Walter; and Hecksing vs Lawyer Guy. Perhaps the worst by far is [[spoiler:Hecksing vs Hitler]].
* AllMenArePerverts: Carl, Quimby, and side character John Egbert (and/or his character in a ShowWithinAShow) show this. Carl is constantly hitting on every woman we sees, Quimby is an outright womanizer, and John's character peeks up the skirt of Jade's character during said show.
* AntiClimax: It would be easier to list which battles ''aren't'': Zorin and Rip vs Seras and Carl; Seras, Zorin, and Rip vs Walter; and Hecksing vs Lawyer Guy. Perhaps the worst by far is [[spoiler:Hecksing vs Hitler]].
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* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: Tubalcain Alhambra is only reffered to as "Card Guy" throughout the entire fan fic. This is presumably because of his name being difficult to spell. Also, Schrodinger is reffered to as "Catboy" from the ending to chapter seven onwards.
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* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: Tubalcain Alhambra is only reffered to as "Card Guy" throughout the entire fan fic. This is presumably because of his name being difficult to spell. Also, Schrodinger is reffered to as "Catboy" from the ending to chapter seven onwards. Oddly, "Major" is just called "Leader" until he is properly revealed, but this sudden "name reveal" means absolutley nothing, especially since in canon he's seen as early as the second OVA.
* HalfHumanHybrid: [[spoiler:Hitler is part snake ala [[Manga/{{Naruto}} Orochimaru]]. This is never explained]].
* NiceJobFixingItVillain: It's implied that Jan's Hostile Mission Takeover prevented the Millennium from controling Alucard. [[spoiler:Although Alucard dies instead]].
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** There's jabs at Literature/{{Twilight}}, although that's really more of a take that towards people who mock ''Twilight'' and other popular culture just to look cool. So, in essense, it's a take that at take thats.
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** There's jabs at Literature/{{Twilight}}, ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'', although that's really more of a take that towards people who mock ''Twilight'' and other popular culture just to look cool. So, in essense, it's a take that at take thats.
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* WeAllLiveInAmerica: "United Kingdoms of London," as well as it having a President (who is also a Mayor) instead of a Prime Minister. Also, to a lesser extent, it was assumed that the Grand Canyon was in Germany.
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* WeAllLiveInAmerica: Parodied. "United Kingdoms of London," as well as it having a President (who is also a Mayor) instead of a Prime Minister. Also, to a lesser extent, it was assumed that the Grand Canyon was in Germany.''Germany''.
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* WhatDoYouMeanItsForKids: In-universe. The first chapter was supposedly rated K+[[hottip:*:The fan fic was always rated "T."]], which explains why Hellsing is called "Hecksing" and why Alucard cuts off Anderson from swearing. Eight chapters full of unfriendly deaths and (offscreen) sex, and we have the Captain's "actor" ''telling kids not to pick up random mushrooms''.
* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: What happened to Dracula?
* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: What happened to Dracula?
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* WhatDoYouMeanItsForKids: In-universe.Parodied. The first chapter was supposedly rated K+[[hottip:*:The fan fic was always rated "T."]], which explains why Hellsing is called "Hecksing" and why Alucard cuts off Anderson from swearing. Eight chapters full of unfriendly deaths and (offscreen) sex, and we have the Captain's "actor" ''telling kids not to pick up random mushrooms''.
mushrooms'', something which should be obvious to anyone reading the fan fic.
*WhatHappenedToTheMouse: WhatHappenedToTheMouse What happened to Dracula?
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Well, if I\'m suddenly counting \'\'Zombie Attack!\'\' as an intallment...
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7380145/1/Hecksing_Ulumate_Crconikals Hecksing Ulumate Crconikals]]'' (Which is supposed to be ''Hecksing Ultimate Chronicles'') is the third installment to the ''SBIG'' series by Tropers/GreatPikminFan and the first one longer than a one-shot to be completed. completed.[[hottip:*:Also of note, ''Zombie Attack!'', the work before HUC, ended on a CliffHanger]] Unlike its other installments, this one actually follows the story of [[Manga/{{Hellsing}} the original canon]] ''at first'' before slowly turning into an unusual adventure.
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Jude has made an appearance for realz this time.
* CurbStompBattle: Almost every fight. A notable pair of example would be both of the fights between Alucard and Anderson. The first consisted entirley of Anderson rushing up to Alucard and decapitiating him. The second starts once Alucard fully regenerates, wherein he eats Anderson for calling Integra stupid.
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** [[spoiler:Also the Captain, who will later be summoned by Rip in the final chapter]].
* EarlyBirdCameo: [[Webcomic/SweetJadeAndHellaJohn It is mentioned in the epilogue's intermission that John Egbert gets a female counterpart of himself in a lab accident named Jean.]] Presumably, this also applies to Jade's counterpart, Jude, but he has yet to appear on SJAHJ. But [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=588&p=477 this]] page basically confirms that he will.
* EarlyBirdCameo: [[Webcomic/SweetJadeAndHellaJohn It is mentioned in the epilogue's intermission that John Egbert gets a female counterpart of himself in a lab accident named Jean.]] Presumably, this also applies to Jade's counterpart, Jude, but he has yet to appear on SJAHJ. But [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=588&p=477 this]] page basically confirms that he will.
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** [[spoiler:Also the Captain, who will later be summoned revived through familiar by Rip in the final chapter]].
* EarlyBirdCameo: [[Webcomic/SweetJadeAndHellaJohn It is mentioned in the epilogue's intermission that John Egbert gets a female counterpart of himself in a lab accident named Jean.]] Presumably, this also applies to Jade's counterpart, Jude, but he has yet to appear on SJAHJ. But [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=588&p=477 this]] page basically confirms that he will.]]
* EarlyBirdCameo: [[Webcomic/SweetJadeAndHellaJohn It is mentioned in the epilogue's intermission that John Egbert gets a female counterpart of himself in a lab accident named Jean.
* FourIsDeath: Guess what chapter contained [[spoiler:Alucard dying, Walter revealing himself as a traitor, Jan showing how powerful his roboarm is, and is rather aptly titled "A Shocking Twist!"]] It's also arguably the chapter where the fan fic truley starts to diverge from canon's plotline.
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* IAmNotShazam: Invoked. Ichigo is reffered to as "Bleech."
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* IAmNotShazam: Invoked. Ichigo [[Manga/{{Bleach}} Ichigo]] is reffered to as "Bleech.""
* ITakeOffenseToTheLastOne[=/=]DisproportionateRetribution: In the first chapter, Alucard takes special offense to Anderson's "STUPID INTEGRA" line. Enough to eat him over it.
* ITakeOffenseToTheLastOne[=/=]DisproportionateRetribution: In the first chapter, Alucard takes special offense to Anderson's "STUPID INTEGRA" line. Enough to eat him over it.
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** [[SnakesOnAPlane "ENOF IS ENOF! I HAVE HAD IT WITH THESE MEDDLING HECKSINGS, AND THAT STUPID INTEGRA!"]]
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* VerbalTic: Quimby begins every sentence with "er a um," and Hitler talks like [[Webcomic/{{Homestuck}} Eridan]].
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* ChekhovsGunman: Ed, Eddy, and Sonic appear as part of the jury in chapter 9, and within the same chapter they provide rides for Hecksing while they're running away/chasing Lawyer Guy. Sadly, the other seven[[labelnote:Who are]][[Webcomic/{{Homestuck}} John, Jade,]] [[Manga/{{Bleach}} Ichigo,]] Manga/{{Naruto}}, [[Manga/OnePiece Luffy,]] [[WesternAnimation/SouthPark Eric Cartman,]] and [[VideoGame/MegaMan Mega Man]]. And yes, there's ten of them total, not twelve.[[/labelnote]] don't do anything noteworthy for the fan fic and only have a small mention in the epilogue. (Except John and Jade, a clip of their show was seen during Rip's award hosting.)
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* ChekhovsGunman: Ed, Eddy, and Sonic appear as part of the jury in chapter 9, and within the same chapter they provide rides for Hecksing while they're running away/chasing Lawyer Guy. Sadly, the other seven[[labelnote:Who are]][[Webcomic/{{Homestuck}} John, Jade,]] [[Manga/{{Bleach}} Ichigo,]] Manga/{{Naruto}}, [[Manga/OnePiece Luffy,]] [[WesternAnimation/SouthPark Eric Cartman,]] and [[VideoGame/MegaMan Mega Man]].VideoGame/MegaMan. And yes, there's ten of them total, not twelve.[[/labelnote]] don't do anything noteworthy for the fan fic and only have a small mention in the epilogue. (Except John and Jade, a clip of their show was seen during Rip's award hosting.)
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* {{Crossover}}: With ''TheSimpsons'', ''VideoGame/{{Halo}}'', ''Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann'', ''{{Pikmin}}'', and briefly with ''EdEddNEddy'', ''SonicTheHedgehog'', ''Manga/{{Bleach}}'', ''Manga/OnePiece'', ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'', ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}'', ''WesternAnimation/SouthPark'', and ''Franchise/{{Megaman}}''. But not ''[[WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland Total Drama]]''. That's a different anime.
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* {{Crossover}}: With ''TheSimpsons'', ''VideoGame/{{Halo}}'', ''Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann'', ''{{Pikmin}}'', and briefly with ''EdEddNEddy'', ''SonicTheHedgehog'', ''Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog'', ''Manga/{{Bleach}}'', ''Manga/OnePiece'', ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'', ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}'', ''WesternAnimation/SouthPark'', and ''Franchise/{{Megaman}}''.''VideoGame/MegaMan''. But not ''[[WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland Total Drama]]''. That's a different anime.
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** Megaman continues to battle evil robots, and has been accepted as a fighter in ''Super Smash Bros 4'', ignoring how after thirty years there's only one installment released.
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** Megaman Mega Man continues to battle evil robots, and has been accepted as a fighter in ''Super Smash Bros 4'', ignoring how after thirty years there's only one installment released.
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5/25/2012. BOB Day. Never forget.
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* {{Crossover}}: With ''TheSimpsons'', ''VideoGame/{{Halo}}'', ''Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann'', ''{{Pikmin}}'', and briefly with ''EdEddNEddy'', ''SonicTheHedgehog'', ''Manga/{{Bleach}}'', ''Manga/OnePiece'', ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'', ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}'', ''WesternAnimation/SouthPark'', and ''VideoGame/Megaman''. But not ''[[WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland Total Drama]]''. That's a different anime.
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* {{Crossover}}: With ''TheSimpsons'', ''VideoGame/{{Halo}}'', ''Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann'', ''{{Pikmin}}'', and briefly with ''EdEddNEddy'', ''SonicTheHedgehog'', ''Manga/{{Bleach}}'', ''Manga/OnePiece'', ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'', ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}'', ''WesternAnimation/SouthPark'', and ''VideoGame/Megaman''.''Franchise/{{Megaman}}''. But not ''[[WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland Total Drama]]''. That's a different anime.
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* BusCrash: What happened to Sonic. And Cartman, but at least he got an explanation.
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* WebcomicTime: Chapters 1-12 take place within the span of ''one week''.
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* WeAllLiveInAmerica: "United Kingdoms of London," as well as it having a President (who is also a Mayor) instead of a Prime Minister. Also, to a lesser extent, it was assumed that the Grand Canyon was in Germany.
* WebcomicTime: Chapters 1-12 take place within the span of ''one week''.[[note]]Chapters 1 and 2 take place in Day 1 (1 takes place in the night, 2 the following day); 3 takes place in Day 2; 4-7 take place in Day 3; 8 and 9 take in place Day 4; and 10-12 take place in Day 5.[[/note]]
* WebcomicTime: Chapters 1-12 take place within the span of ''one week''.[[note]]Chapters 1 and 2 take place in Day 1 (1 takes place in the night, 2 the following day); 3 takes place in Day 2; 4-7 take place in Day 3; 8 and 9 take in place Day 4; and 10-12 take place in Day 5.[[/note]]
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In hindsight I guess Jude\'s kind of like the \"Jade\'s penpal\" of SJAHJ. Fun fact that I will point on again on the MSPA forum once Jude is introduced: His name was based on one person\'s speculation name for Jake. (It was in the \"fun, but disproven theories\" thread.)
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* EarlyBirdCameo: [[Webcomic/SweetJadeAndHellaJohn It is mentioned in the epilogue's intermission that John Egbert gets a female counterpart of himself in a lab accident named Jean.]] Presumably, this also applies to Jade's counterpart, Jude, but he has yet to appear on SJAHJ.
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* EarlyBirdCameo: [[Webcomic/SweetJadeAndHellaJohn It is mentioned in the epilogue's intermission that John Egbert gets a female counterpart of himself in a lab accident named Jean.]] Presumably, this also applies to Jade's counterpart, Jude, but he has yet to appear on SJAHJ. But [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=588&p=477 this]] page basically confirms that he will.
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I\'m kind of surprized that Spotlight Stealing Squad isn\'t a subjective trope.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7380145/1/Hecksing_Ulumate_Crconikals Hecksing Ulumate Crconikals]]'' (Which is supposed to be ''Hecksing Ultimate Chronicles'') is the second installment to the ''SBIG'' series (third, including the short story ''Zombie Attack!'') by Tropers/GreatPikminFan and the first to be completed. Unlike its other installments, this one actually follows the story of [[Manga/{{Hellsing}} the original canon]] ''at first'' before slowly turning into an unusual adventure.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7380145/1/Hecksing_Ulumate_Crconikals Hecksing Ulumate Crconikals]]'' (Which is supposed to be ''Hecksing Ultimate Chronicles'') is the second third installment to the ''SBIG'' series (third, including the short story ''Zombie Attack!'') by Tropers/GreatPikminFan and the first to be completed. Unlike its other installments, this one actually follows the story of [[Manga/{{Hellsing}} the original canon]] ''at first'' before slowly turning into an unusual adventure.
* AuthorAppeal: Great Pikmin Fan likes ''Total Drama'', ''Homestuck'' (starting after he published chapter 4), and as his username implies ''Pikmin''. Let's just leave it at that. The sexual variant of this trope is parodied with Rip.
* BabiesEverAfter: [[spoiler:Averted for Hecksing. Played strait with background characters John and Jade, although that's due to the shock value of [[BrotherSisterIncest the implications]].]]
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* ChekhovsGunman: Ed, Eddy, and Sonic appear as part of the jury in chapter 9, and within the same chapter they provide rides for Hecksing. Sadly, the other seven[[hottip:*:[[Webcomic/{{Homestuck}} John, Jade,]] [[Manga/{{Bleach}} Ichigo,]] Manga/{{Naruto}}, [[Manga/OnePiece Luffy,]] [[WesternAnimation/SouthPark Eric Cartman,]] and [[VideoGame/MegaMan Mega Man]]. And yes, there's ten of them total, not twelve.]] don't do anything noteworthy for the fan fic and only have a small mention in the epilogue. (Except John and Jade, a clip of their show was seen during Rip's award hosting.)
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* ChekhovsGunman: Ed, Eddy, and Sonic appear as part of the jury in chapter 9, and within the same chapter they provide rides for Hecksing. Hecksing while they're running away/chasing Lawyer Guy. Sadly, the other seven[[hottip:*:[[Webcomic/{{Homestuck}} seven[[labelnote:Who are]][[Webcomic/{{Homestuck}} John, Jade,]] [[Manga/{{Bleach}} Ichigo,]] Manga/{{Naruto}}, [[Manga/OnePiece Luffy,]] [[WesternAnimation/SouthPark Eric Cartman,]] and [[VideoGame/MegaMan Mega Man]]. And yes, there's ten of them total, not twelve.]] [[/labelnote]] don't do anything noteworthy for the fan fic and only have a small mention in the epilogue. (Except John and Jade, a clip of their show was seen during Rip's award hosting.))
* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: Tubalcain Alhambra is only reffered to as "Card Guy" throughout the entire fan fic. This is presumably because of his name being difficult to spell. Also, Schrodinger is reffered to as "Catboy" from the ending to chapter seven onwards.
* RogueAngelsOfSatin: ''Just look at the title''.
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* ShoutOut:ShoutOut: Several.
** The second half of chapter 8 is a copy of ''Naruto Shippuden'''s first arc, complete with the Millennium hideout being in a cave and the team of heroes splitting up as one of the two villains flies out of the cave with the captured person and the other, which uses attacks themed on string, stays and fights the women of the group.
** There are a few reffrences to ''UndercoverBrother'', such as Rip taking the role of White She Devil during the end of chapter 7.
** There are a few reffrences to ''UndercoverBrother'', such as Rip taking the role of White She Devil during the end of chapter 7.
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* StylisticSuck: The spelling, grammar, and organization actually gets ''better'' as the fic goes on, an aversion to a common TrollFic trend, but it's still pretty bad.
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* StylisticSuck: The spelling, grammar, and organization actually gets ''better'' as the fic goes on, an aversion to inversion of a common TrollFic trend, but it's still pretty bad.
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* ThirteenIsUnlucky: There's thirteen chapters, and the fan fic both begun and ended on a 13th.
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* ThirteenIsUnlucky: There's thirteen chapters, and the fan fic both begun and ended on a 13th.[[hottip:*:The "beginning" publish date is more of a happy coincidence. It begun on 9/13 so that chapter 3, the introduction of Carl, will be on the same day that ''Two and a Half Men'''s season priemere showing Charlie's replacement airs. It ending on 4/13 was because the author had gotten an intrest in ''Homestuck'' sometime between the making of chapters 4 and 5 and wanted the fan fic to conclude on HS's third anaversary. The ending date is not a coincidence, since 413 is an ArcNumber for said comic.]]
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Several details have changed, ranging from small scenes to entire character deaths/sparings. And yet, the base of the plot basically stayed the same from before the fic started to after it ended.
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* EarlyBirdCameo: [[Webcomic/SweetJadeAndHellaJohn It is mentioned in the epilogue's intermission that John Egbert gets a female counterpart of himself in a lab accident named Jean.]] Presumably, this also applies to Jade's counterpart, Jude, but he has yet to appear on SJAHJ.
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* HypocriticalHumor: The end of chapter 7. Zorin and Rip are basically allowed to have a foursome with Carl and Seras, but when one of the Millennium's soldiers asks to join, Zorin slices him in half.
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* HypocriticalHumor: The end of chapter 7. Zorin and Rip are basically allowed to have a foursome with Carl and Seras, but when one of the Millennium's soldiers asks to join, join ''right after'', Zorin slices him in half.
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: The first four chapters only have the absolute central characters, but then side-characters such as Dracula, Homer Simpson, David Hasselhoff, and the jury in chapter 9 are introduced. Ed, Eddy, and Sonic of the jury even play a role in aformention chapter (providing Hecksing with some rides), and all of them get a mention in the epilogue. (Except Dracula.)
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: The first four chapters only have the absolute central characters, but then side-characters such as Dracula, Homer Simpson, David Hasselhoff, and the jury in chapter 9 are introduced. Ed, Eddy, and Sonic of the jury even play a role in aformention the aformentioned chapter (providing Hecksing with some rides), and all of them get a mention in the epilogue. (Except Dracula.)
* RunningGag: In the opening AN, "'''Disclaimer:''' The following fan fiction depicts stunts performed by several expert vampires and one badass [person who is relevant to the chapter, usually the VillainOfTheWeek]. Do not attempt any of these at home. [[WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland Seriously, it could mess you up!]]"
* ShowWithinAShow: A few, three of them have been seen within the series. The first is ''WesternAnimation/RenAndStimpy''. The second is a StylisticSuck (yes, even compared to HUC) series made by the Millennium. The third is one by [[Webcomic/{{Homestuck}} John Egbert and Jade Harley]][[hottip:*:No, Rose and Dave do not appear or even get mention at all in this fan fic.]] and is losley based off of their respective interests. (And ''EdEddNEddyTheMisEdventures''.) Also, one of Pikmin Fan's other fan fics is also a series, but it was not seen as the clip of it wasn't ready yet.
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** The very beginning says that "Fakebook" is "not unlike a joke from ''TheSimpsons''," a comment on said show's debatable overuse of WereStillRelevantDammit.
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** The very beginning says that "Fakebook" is "not unlike a joke from ''TheSimpsons''," a comment on said show's debatable overuse of WereStillRelevantDammit. A later chapter mocks ''Simpsons'' again -- only this time in general -- by portraying Homer as a powerful, brain eating giant who was once a normal man.
** There's jabs at Literature/{{Twilight}}, although that's really more of a take that towards people who mock ''Twilight'' and other popular culture just to look cool. So, in essense, it's a take that at take thats.
** There's jabs at Literature/{{Twilight}}, although that's really more of a take that towards people who mock ''Twilight'' and other popular culture just to look cool. So, in essense, it's a take that at take thats.
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** Noah's still from a different anime. That hasn't changed.
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** Noah's still from a different anime. That hasn't changed.changed.
* YouCantThwartStageOne: Averted during chapter 8: Carl prevents the Millennium from traveling back in time and taking over the world, so they have to move to a last miniute backup plan.
* YouCantThwartStageOne: Averted during chapter 8: Carl prevents the Millennium from traveling back in time and taking over the world, so they have to move to a last miniute backup plan.
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* DisneyDeath: [[spoiler:Jan Valentine]].
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* DisneyDeath: [[spoiler:Jan Valentine]].Valentine. Only once, though, the second time he's KilledOffForReal]].
* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:Everyone who died. Except Jan and technically the Captain]].
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: The first four chapter chapters only have the absolute central characters, but then side-characters such as Dracula, Homer Simpson, David Hasselhoff, and the jury in chapter 9 are introduced. Ed, Eddy, and Sonic of the jury even play a role in aformention chapter (providing Hecksing with some rides), and all of them get a mention in the epilogue. (Except Dracula.)
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* SparedByTheAdaption: Rip, in a rather glaring example. [[spoiler:Detonation chips were ret-conned out of this fan fic, as stated by WordOfGod. So, instead of being blown up, Jan leaps out of the mansion and survives a three story fall. He then proceeds to trick Rip off of her original mission through Rip having an IdiotBall. Eventually, through a chain of events, Rip gets hired as part of Hecksing and avoids death several times.]]
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* SparedByTheAdaption: SparedByTheAdaptation: Rip, in a rather glaring example. [[spoiler:Detonation chips were ret-conned out of this fan fic, as stated by WordOfGod. So, instead of being blown up, Jan leaps out of the mansion and survives a three story fall. He then proceeds to trick Rip off of her original mission through Rip having an IdiotBall. Eventually, through a chain of events, Rip gets hired as part of Hecksing and avoids death several times.]]
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* WhamEpisode: Parodied with chapter 4. It's even titled "A Shocking Twist!"
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: What happened to Dracula?
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For some reason, the typo\'d redlink has a custom title.
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** The very beginning says that "Fakebook" is "not unlike a joke from ''TheSimpsons''," a comment on said show's debatable overuse of WereStillReleventDammit.
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* BackForTheDead: [[spoiler:Walter in chapter 8, as well as everyone whom Alucard ate in chapter 4]].
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* ChekhovsGun: [[spoiler:Alucard's tank after it fell into the ocean unharmed in chapter 4.]]
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* ChekhovsGun: [[spoiler:Alucard's tank after it fell into the ocean unharmed in chapter 4.]] To be fair, it ''did'' mention the tank as "waiting"]].
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* {{Crossover}}: With ''TheSimpsons'', ''VideoGame/{{Halo}}'', ''TengenToppaGurrenLagann'', ''{{Pikmin}}'', and briefly with ''EdEddNEddy'', ''SonicTheHedgehog'', ''Manga/{{Bleach}}'', ''Manga/OnePiece'', ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'', ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}'', ''WesternAnimation/SouthPark'', and ''VideoGame/Megaman''. But not ''[[WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland Total Drama]]''. That's a different anime.
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* {{Crossdresser}}: During the ShowWithinAShow starting the Millennium, the Major plays as the "mother" of the family by wearing a pink dress.
* {{Crossover}}: With ''TheSimpsons'', ''VideoGame/{{Halo}}'',''TengenToppaGurrenLagann'', ''Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann'', ''{{Pikmin}}'', and briefly with ''EdEddNEddy'', ''SonicTheHedgehog'', ''Manga/{{Bleach}}'', ''Manga/OnePiece'', ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'', ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}'', ''WesternAnimation/SouthPark'', and ''VideoGame/Megaman''. But not ''[[WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland Total Drama]]''. That's a different anime.
* {{Crossover}}: With ''TheSimpsons'', ''VideoGame/{{Halo}}'',
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* {{Expy}}: Alucard (and later, Carl) of [[FanFic/HalfLifeFullLifeConsequences John Freeman]]. Complete with a vehicle where it shouldn't (in Al's case, a tank).
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* {{Expy}}: Alucard (and later, Carl) of [[FanFic/HalfLifeFullLifeConsequences John Freeman]]. Complete with having a vehicle where it shouldn't be (in Al's case, a tank).
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: The fates of [[spoiler:Major and Heinkel]].
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: The first four chapter only have the absolute central characters, but then side-characters such as Dracula, Homer Simpson, David Hasselhoff, and the jury in chapter 9 are introduced. Ed, Eddy, and Sonic of the jury even play a role in aformention chapter (providing Hecksing with some rides), and all of them get a mention in the epilogue. (Except Dracula)
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: The first four chapter only have the absolute central characters, but then side-characters such as Dracula, Homer Simpson, David Hasselhoff, and the jury in chapter 9 are introduced. Ed, Eddy, and Sonic of the jury even play a role in aformention chapter (providing Hecksing with some rides), and all of them get a mention in the epilogue. (Except Dracula)Dracula.)
* OhCrap: Walter has one such moment when [[spoiler:Rip guides several bullets at him at once]].
* RecapEpisode: The beginning of chapter ten.
* SexyDiscretionShot: "Foursome censored this is vilent enoff i don't want it to go to M rating from T i men this was supposed to be K PLUS for kids for [[HypocriticalHumor fucks]] sake!"
** Hitler acts like a combination of [[Webcomic/{{Homestuck}} Eridan]] and [[spoiler:[[EdEddNEddy Eddy's brother]]]], to the point where Rip's conversation with him resembles a talk with the latter.
* TheStationsOfTheCanon: Played annoyingly strait for the first three chapters, with little variations such as [[spoiler:Anderson dying in chapter one and Jan getting spared the next chapter]], but during chapter four, [[spoiler:Jan goes on the ''Eagle'' invasion instead of Rip, which leads to Alucard's death]].
* {{Stripperiffic}}: Rip as well the the Brazilian "chiks" [sic].
* {{Stripperiffic}}: Rip as well the the Brazilian "chiks" [sic].
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* TakeThat: At one point, the fan fic compares Seras/Carl to [[WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland Courtney/Duncan]], and is implied to be compared to other pairings that go [[SlapSlapKiss in a]] [[AbuseIsOkayWhenItsFemaleOnMale related way]], a jab at those kinds of couples.
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** At one point, the fan fic compares Seras/Carl to [[WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland Courtney/Duncan]], and is implied to be compared to other pairings that go [[SlapSlapKiss in a]] [[AbuseIsOkayWhenItsFemaleOnMale related way]], a jab at those kinds ofcouples.couples.
** The very beginning says that "Fakebook" is "not unlike a joke from ''TheSimpsons''," a comment on said show's debatable overuse of WereStillReleventDammit.
** At one point, the fan fic compares Seras/Carl to [[WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland Courtney/Duncan]], and is implied to be compared to other pairings that go [[SlapSlapKiss in a]] [[AbuseIsOkayWhenItsFemaleOnMale related way]], a jab at those kinds of
** The very beginning says that "Fakebook" is "not unlike a joke from ''TheSimpsons''," a comment on said show's debatable overuse of WereStillReleventDammit.
* ThirteenIsUnlucky: There's thirteen chapters, and the fan fic both begun and ended on a 13th.
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* UnexpectedGenreChange: Each "season"[[hottip:*:Which are grouped by chapters 1-4, 5-7, 8 and 9, and 10-13]] has a vastly different tone to it. It doesn't help that previously major character in both canon and early in this fic Alucard dies at the end of season 1.
* ViewerGenderConfusion: Lampshaded in chapter 9: %% In-universe - Tag added so that this won't show up as a YMMV item
-->'''Sonic:''' Hop on dud!\\
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* UnexpectedGenreChange: Each "season"[[hottip:*:Which are grouped by chapters 1-4, 5-7, 8 and 9, and 10-13]] has a vastly different tone to it. It doesn't help that previously major character in both canon and early in this fic Alucard dies [[spoiler:dies at the end of season 1.
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** David Hasselhoff continues his job. He is one of the few characters to ''not'' die off, in an attempt to defy HarsherInHindsight. %% In-universe - Tag added so that this won't appear as a YMMV item.
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* ChekhovsGunman: Ed, Eddy, and Sonic appear as part of the jury in chapter 9, and within the same chapter they provide rides for Hecksing. Sadly, the other seven[[hottip:*:[[Webcomic/{{Homestuck}} John, Jade,]] [[Manga/{{Bleach}} Ichigo,]] Manga/{{Naruto}}, [[Manga/OnePiece Luffy,]] [[WesternAnimation/SouthPark Eric Cartman,]] and [[VideoGame/MegaMan Mega Man]]. And yes, there's ten of them total, not twelve.]] don't do anything noteworthy for the fan fic and only have a small mention in the epilogue. (Except John and Jade, a clip of their show was seen during Rip's award hosting.)
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* {{Crossover}}: With ''TheSimpsons'', ''VideoGame/{{Halo}}'', ''TenganToppaGurrenLagann'', ''{{Pikmin}}'', and briefly with ''EdEddNEddy'', ''SonicTheHedgehog'', ''Manga/{{Bleach}}'', ''Manga/OnePiece'', ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'', ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}'', ''WesternAnimation/SouthPark'', and ''VideoGame/Megaman''. But not ''[[WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland Total Drama]]''. That's a different anime.
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* {{Crossover}}: With ''TheSimpsons'', ''VideoGame/{{Halo}}'', ''TenganToppaGurrenLagann'', ''TengenToppaGurrenLagann'', ''{{Pikmin}}'', and briefly with ''EdEddNEddy'', ''SonicTheHedgehog'', ''Manga/{{Bleach}}'', ''Manga/OnePiece'', ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'', ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}'', ''WesternAnimation/SouthPark'', and ''VideoGame/Megaman''. But not ''[[WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland Total Drama]]''. That's a different anime.
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* DisneyDeath: [[spoiler:Jan]].
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* DisneyDeath: [[spoiler:Jan]].[[spoiler:Jan Valentine]].
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* IAmNotShazam: Ichigo is reffered to as "Bleech."
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* IAmNotShazam: Invoked. Ichigo is reffered to as "Bleech."
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: The first four chapter only have the absolute central characters, but then side-characters such as Dracula, Homer Simpson, David Hasselhoff, and the jury in chapter 9 are introduced. Ed, Eddy, and Sonic of the jury even play a role in aformention chapter (providing Hecksing with some rides), and all of them get a mention in the epilogue.
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: The first four chapter only have the absolute central characters, but then side-characters such as Dracula, Homer Simpson, David Hasselhoff, and the jury in chapter 9 are introduced. Ed, Eddy, and Sonic of the jury even play a role in aformention chapter (providing Hecksing with some rides), and all of them get a mention in the epilogue. (Except Dracula)
* MsFanservice: Parodied with Rip.
* MsFanservice: Parodied with Rip.
* PaperThinDisguise: In chapter two, Jan and Luke get past Hecksing Manor's gate guards by putting on [[SuperMarioBros Mario and Luigi]] masks. ''It works''.
* TimeSkip: Chapter 13 takes place 30 years in the future.
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* ViewerGenderConfusion: Lampshaded in chapter 9: %% in-universe In-universe - Tag added so that this won't show up as a YMMV item
* WebcomicTime: Chapters 1-12 take place within the span of ''one week''.
* WhatDoYouMeanItsForKids: In-universe. The first chapter was supposedly rated K+[[hottip:*:The fan fic was always rated "T."]], which explains why Hellsing is called "Hecksing" and why Alucard cuts off Anderson from swearing. Eight chapters full of unfriendly deaths and (offscreen) sex, and we have the Captain's "actor" ''telling kids not to pick up random mushrooms''.
* WhatDoYouMeanItsForKids: In-universe. The first chapter was supposedly rated K+[[hottip:*:The fan fic was always rated "T."]], which explains why Hellsing is called "Hecksing" and why Alucard cuts off Anderson from swearing. Eight chapters full of unfriendly deaths and (offscreen) sex, and we have the Captain's "actor" ''telling kids not to pick up random mushrooms''.
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** Hecksing is appearantly also a band.
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** Hecksing is appearantly also a band. And their Pikmin have replaced the Wild Geese/Hecksing Guards.
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** David Hasselhoff continues his job. He is one of the few characters to ''not'' die off, in an attempt to defy HarsherInHindsight. %% in-universe - Tag added so that this won't appear as a YMMV item.
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** David Hasselhoff continues his job. He is one of the few characters to ''not'' die off, in an attempt to defy HarsherInHindsight. %% in-universe In-universe - Tag added so that this won't appear as a YMMV item.
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If I ever make HUC into a webcomic, the epilogue\'s intermission will be a little more elaborated for everyone (except Sonic; that\'s the joke) and be sort of done in the style of Problem Sleuth\'s epilogue.
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* {{Crossover}}: With ''TheSimpsons'', ''VideoGame/{{Halo}}'', ''Manga/TengenToppaGurrenLagann'', and briefly with ''EdEddNEddy'', ''SonicTheHedgehog'', ''Manga/{{Bleach}}'', ''Manga/OnePiece'', ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'', ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}'', ''WesternAnimation/SouthPark'', and ''VideoGame/Megaman''. But not ''[[WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland Total Drama]]''. That's a different anime.
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* {{Crossover}}: With ''TheSimpsons'', ''VideoGame/{{Halo}}'', ''Manga/TengenToppaGurrenLagann'', ''TenganToppaGurrenLagann'', ''{{Pikmin}}'', and briefly with ''EdEddNEddy'', ''SonicTheHedgehog'', ''Manga/{{Bleach}}'', ''Manga/OnePiece'', ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'', ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}'', ''WesternAnimation/SouthPark'', and ''VideoGame/Megaman''. But not ''[[WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland Total Drama]]''. That's a different anime.
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* {{Expy}}: Alucard (and later, Carl) of [[FanFic/HalfLifeFullLifeConcequences John Freeman]]. Complete with a vehicle where it shouldn't (in Al's case, a tank).
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* DisneyDeath: [[spoiler:Jan]].
** [[spoiler:Also the Captain, who will later be summoned by Rip in the final chapter]].
* {{Expy}}: Alucard (and later, Carl) of[[FanFic/HalfLifeFullLifeConcequences [[FanFic/HalfLifeFullLifeConsequences John Freeman]]. Complete with a vehicle where it shouldn't (in Al's case, a tank).
** [[spoiler:Also the Captain, who will later be summoned by Rip in the final chapter]].
* {{Expy}}: Alucard (and later, Carl) of
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* HesJustHiding: [[spoiler:Jan]].
* IAmNotShazam: Ichigo is reffered to as "Bleech."
* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: The first four chapter only have the absolute central characters, but then side-characters such as Dracula, Homer Simpson, David Hasselhoff, and the jury in chapter 9 are introduced. Ed, Eddy, and Sonic of the jury even play a role in aformention chapter (providing Hecksing with some rides), and all of them get a mention in the epilogue.
* ParodyStu: Carl was ''supposed'' to be a parody of JerkStu, but Seras ends up filling that role if anything. An exception is Carl's introduction in chapter 3; he acts like a total jackass, but every chapter after he's wise and planning.
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** "I WILL VENGE YOU BRO!" Al shooted to [[Webcomic/{{Homestuck}} skaia.]] Among many, many others (to the point where Rip avoids making a mention and actually says the author can "suck it").
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** "I WILL VENGE YOU BRO!" Al shooted to [[Webcomic/{{Homestuck}} skaia.]] Among many, many others (to the point where Rip avoids making a mention and actually says the author can "suck it").it..." only to make a reffrence in the last chapter when she calls Captain "good dog, best friend").
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** Ichigo and Luffy continued whatever they were doing, but the author isn't sure since he hasn't watched the show. (A small case of TruthInTelevision)
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** David Hasselhoff continues his job. He is one of the few characters to ''not'' die off, in an attempt to defy HarsherInHindsight.
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* {{Crossover}}: With ''EdEddNEddy'', ''TheSimpsons'', ''VideoGame/{{Halo}}'', ''Manga/TengenToppaGurrenLagann'', and briefly with ''SonicTheHedgehog'', ''Manga/{{Bleach}}'', ''Manga/OnePiece'', ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'', ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}'', ''WesternAnimation/SouthPark'', and ''VideoGame/Megaman''. But not ''[[WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland Total Drama]]''. That's a different anime.
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* {{Crossover}}: With ''EdEddNEddy'', ''TheSimpsons'', ''VideoGame/{{Halo}}'', ''Manga/TengenToppaGurrenLagann'', and briefly with ''EdEddNEddy'', ''SonicTheHedgehog'', ''Manga/{{Bleach}}'', ''Manga/OnePiece'', ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'', ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}'', ''WesternAnimation/SouthPark'', and ''VideoGame/Megaman''. But not ''[[WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland Total Drama]]''. That's a different anime.
* HesJustHiding: [[spoiler:Jan]].
* HypocriticalHumor: The end of chapter 7. Zorin and Rip are basically allowed to have a foursome with Carl and Seras, but when one of the Millennium's soldiers asks to join, Zorin slices him in half.
* HypocriticalHumor: The end of chapter 7. Zorin and Rip are basically allowed to have a foursome with Carl and Seras, but when one of the Millennium's soldiers asks to join, Zorin slices him in half.
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* NotReallyDead: [[spoiler:Jan]].
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* NotReallyDead: [[spoiler:Jan]].NukeEm: [[spoiler:What happens to Alucard. Sort of]].
* OnlySaneWoman: Rip Van Winkle speaks clearly throughout the entirety of the fan fic. She also seems to be the only character aware of the author. No explanation is given on this.
* OlderThanTheyLook: As of chapter thirteen, Rip is no younger than ''one hundred''.
* OnlySaneWoman: Rip Van Winkle speaks clearly throughout the entirety of the fan fic. She also seems to be the only character aware of the author. No explanation is given on this.
* OlderThanTheyLook: As of chapter thirteen, Rip is no younger than ''one hundred''.
* SelfDeprecation: The last chapter pokes fun at the author's own slow update rates; one of his fan fics, which in the [=HUCverse=] appears to be a show, is nominated, but the clip consists of "clip not ready yet" on a black screen.
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** "I WILL VENGE YOU BRO!" Al shooted to [[Webcomic/{{Homestuck}} skaia.]]
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** "I WILL VENGE YOU BRO!" Al shooted to [[Webcomic/{{Homestuck}} skaia.]]]] Among many, many others (to the point where Rip avoids making a mention and actually says the author can "suck it").
** ''TheSimpsons''[='=] fourth season mentioned ''TheRenAndStimpyShow'' twice; once was a clip that Bart and his new "brother" were watching, the other was during a reward show where it was competing against ''Itchy and Scratchy''. Both of these contexts were used in this fan fic to provide two clips of ''Ren and Stimpy''.
** Jan and Luke, in their first appearance, are reffered to as "[[GrandTheftAutoEscanaba Jean-Luc LeMans]]."
** Jan and Luke, in their first appearance, are reffered to as "[[GrandTheftAutoEscanaba Jean-Luc LeMans]]."
* StylisticSuck: The spelling, grammar, and organization actually gets ''better'' as the fic goes on, an aversion to a common TrollFic trend, but it's still pretty bad.
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* UnexpectedGenreChange: Each "season"[[hottip:*:Which are grouped by chapters 1-4, 5-7, 8 and 9, and 10-13]] has a vastly different tone to it. It doesn't help that previously major character in both canon and early in this fic Alucard dies at the end of season 1
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* UnexpectedGenreChange: Each "season"[[hottip:*:Which are grouped by chapters 1-4, 5-7, 8 and 9, and 10-13]] has a vastly different tone to it. It doesn't help that previously major character in both canon and early in this fic Alucard dies at the end of season 11.
* ViewerGenderConfusion: Lampshaded in chapter 9:
-->'''Sonic:''' Hop on dud!\\
'''Rip:''' I'm a woman.\\
'''Sonic:''' O SHIT!
* VillainOfTheWeek: Roughly. In order, we have:
## Anderson and Heavensing.
## Luke.
## Card Guy.
## Jan.
## Zorin and Rip.
## Mutaint Homer Simpson.
## Zorin and Rip again.
## A combination of Walter, Captain, and Jan.
## Lawyer Guy.
## Doctor and the Titan Mecha.
## Major.
## Hitler.
## Section DCLXVI.
* ViewerGenderConfusion: Lampshaded in chapter 9:
-->'''Sonic:''' Hop on dud!\\
'''Rip:''' I'm a woman.\\
'''Sonic:''' O SHIT!
* VillainOfTheWeek: Roughly. In order, we have:
## Anderson and Heavensing.
## Luke.
## Card Guy.
## Jan.
## Zorin and Rip.
## Mutaint Homer Simpson.
## Zorin and Rip again.
## A combination of Walter, Captain, and Jan.
## Lawyer Guy.
## Doctor and the Titan Mecha.
## Major.
## Hitler.
## Section DCLXVI.
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** David Hasselhoff continues his job. He is one of the few characters to ''not'' die off, in an attempt to defy HarsherInHindsight.
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I\'m pretty sure that sooner or later someone (who might not even be interested in this fan fic) will question the validity of all these Word Of God things. But I\'ll say in the discussion page that I was the one who made the edits and the claims, so I think it would count.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7380145/1/Hecksing_Ulumate_Crconikals Hecksing Ulumate Crconikals]]'' is the second installment to the ''SBIG'' series (third, including the short story ''Zombie Attack!'') by Tropers/GreatPikminFan and the first to be completed. Unlike its other installments, this one actually follows the story of [[Manga/{{Hellsing}} the original canon]] ''at first'' before slowly turning into an unusual adventure.
Alucard [[CardCarryingVillain Badguy]] is a powerful vampire who kills other, evil vampires by the word of Integra [[UnfortunateNames Heck]]. Then, one fatefull night, he ends up needing to do an EmergencyTransformation to Seras Victoria. Finding out that the vampire who caused this was a part of a former co-organization [[PunnyName Heavensing]], Integra then sends Alucard and the newly vamperized Seras to "SERCH AND DESTROY TOES TRADERS." After a short battle, a spell that was keeping out all non-Hecksing or Heavensing vampires is broken with the death of Heavensing's leader... [[TheSimpsons Ned Flanders]] (yes, you read that right), who [[DrivenToSuicide commited suicide]] after Alucard killed his lover Father Alexander Anderson (yes, you read ''that'' right too). With this spell broken, the mysterious Millennium are now free to wreek havok (or, rather, UNLEESH HECK [sic]) on the [[CriticalResearchFailure United Kingdoms of London]]. For most of the following chapters, Hecksing has to foil the various plans of the Millennium.
Alucard [[CardCarryingVillain Badguy]] is a powerful vampire who kills other, evil vampires by the word of Integra [[UnfortunateNames Heck]]. Then, one fatefull night, he ends up needing to do an EmergencyTransformation to Seras Victoria. Finding out that the vampire who caused this was a part of a former co-organization [[PunnyName Heavensing]], Integra then sends Alucard and the newly vamperized Seras to "SERCH AND DESTROY TOES TRADERS." After a short battle, a spell that was keeping out all non-Hecksing or Heavensing vampires is broken with the death of Heavensing's leader... [[TheSimpsons Ned Flanders]] (yes, you read that right), who [[DrivenToSuicide commited suicide]] after Alucard killed his lover Father Alexander Anderson (yes, you read ''that'' right too). With this spell broken, the mysterious Millennium are now free to wreek havok (or, rather, UNLEESH HECK [sic]) on the [[CriticalResearchFailure United Kingdoms of London]]. For most of the following chapters, Hecksing has to foil the various plans of the Millennium.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7380145/1/Hecksing_Ulumate_Crconikals Hecksing Ulumate Crconikals]]'' (Which is supposed to be ''Hecksing Ultimate Chronicles'') is the second installment to the ''SBIG'' series (third, including the short story ''Zombie Attack!'') by Tropers/GreatPikminFan and the first to be completed. Unlike its other installments, this one actually follows the story of [[Manga/{{Hellsing}} the original canon]] ''at first'' before slowly turning into an unusual adventure.
Alucard [[CardCarryingVillain Badguy]] is a powerful vampire who kills other, evil vampires by the word of Integra [[UnfortunateNames Heck]]. Then, one fatefullnight, night during an attack of a forest, he ends up needing to do an EmergencyTransformation to Seras Victoria. Finding out that the vampire who caused this was a part of a former co-organization [[PunnyName Heavensing]], Integra then sends Alucard and the newly vamperized Seras to "SERCH AND DESTROY TOES TRADERS." After a short battle, a spell that was keeping out all non-Hecksing or Heavensing vampires is broken with the death of Heavensing's leader... [[TheSimpsons Ned Flanders]] (yes, you read that right), who [[DrivenToSuicide commited suicide]] after Alucard killed his lover Father Alexander Anderson (yes, you read ''that'' right too). With this spell broken, the mysterious Millennium are now free to wreek havok (or, rather, UNLEESH HECK [sic]) on the [[CriticalResearchFailure United Kingdoms of London]]. For most of the following chapters, Hecksing has to foil the various plans of the Millennium.
Alucard [[CardCarryingVillain Badguy]] is a powerful vampire who kills other, evil vampires by the word of Integra [[UnfortunateNames Heck]]. Then, one fatefull
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* BrickJoke: Within the first set of chapters, [[WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland Noah]] is reffered to as being "from a different anime" twice. This gag seems to be abandoned until the very last line before the closing AN.
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* BrickJoke: Within the first set of chapters, [[WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland Noah]] is reffered to as being "from a different anime" twice. This gag seems to be have been abandoned until the very last line before the closing AN.AN.
* ChekhovsGun: [[spoiler:Alucard's tank after it fell into the ocean unharmed in chapter 4.]]
* ChekhovsGun: [[spoiler:Alucard's tank after it fell into the ocean unharmed in chapter 4.]]
* {{Crossover}}: With ''EdEddNEddy'', ''TheSimpsons'', ''VideoGame/{{Halo}}'', ''Manga/TengenToppaGurrenLagann'', and briefly with ''SonicTheHedgehog'', ''Manga/{{Bleach}}'', ''Manga/OnePiece'', ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'', ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}'', ''WesternAnimation/SouthPark'', and ''VideoGame/Megaman''. But not ''[[WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland Total Drama]]''. That's a different anime.
* DeaderThanDead: So Anderson, Luke, "Card Guy" (Tubalcain Alhambra) and "First Boss" are all eaten by Alucard. But that doesn't mean that he can't summon them as familiars, right? [[spoiler:Not if Alucard's dead]].
* DemotedToExtra: Anyone who isn't Seras or Rip. Pip is by far the worst offender, getting only ''two lines'' before Carl's spaceship falls on him.
* {{Expy}}: Alucard (and later, Carl) of [[FanFic/HalfLifeFullLifeConcequences John Freeman]]. Complete with a vehicle where it shouldn't (in Al's case, a tank).
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* MusicalAssasin: Carl, with his Sonic Wave Guitar.
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* MusicalAssasin: MusicalAssassin: Carl, with his [[TheSpongebobSquarepantsMovie Sonic Wave Guitar.Guitar]].
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* NotReallyDead: [[spoiler:Jan]].
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** Alucard and Seras are, at one point, reffered to as [[WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland "Sierra and Alejandro."]] Alucard later on sings a ripoff of ''This is How we Will end it'' in his battle with Jan.
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* SparedByTheAdaption: Rip, in a rather glaring example. [[spoiler:Detonation chips were ret-conned out of this fan fic, as stated by WordOfGod. So, instead of being blown up, Jan leaps out of the mansion and survives a three story fall. He then proceeds to trick Rip off of her original mission through Rip having an IdiotBall. Eventually, through a chain of events, Rip gets hired as part of Hecksing and avoids death several times.]]
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* UnexpectedGenreChange: Each "season"[[hottip:*:Which are grouped by chapters 1-4, 5-7, 8 and 9, and 10-13]] has a vastly different tone to it. It doesn't help that previously major character in both canon and early in this fic Alucard dies at the end of season 1
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** John and Jade had OppositeSexClones of themselves created after a lab accident. They also run a show (a clip of which is seen briefly in Rip's award show), and [[BrotherSisterIncest have gotten married and had kids.]]
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** John and Jade had OppositeSexClones OppositeSexClone[=s=] of themselves created after a lab accident. They also run a show (a clip of which is seen briefly in Rip's award show), and [[BrotherSisterIncest have gotten married and had kids.]]
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!! Tropes:
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!! Tropes:
This fan fic provides examples of:
* BackForTheFinale: [[spoiler:The Captain]].
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* KillEmAll: The number of important characters left alive can be counted on one hand. Barley, though.
* LargeHam: '''''Everyone''''' (except Rip, notably) has a point where they shout in all caps. Even unnamed characters.
* LargeHam: '''''Everyone''''' (except Rip, notably) has a point where they shout in all caps. Even unnamed characters.
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* KillEmAll: The number of important characters left alive can be counted on one hand. Barley, though.
though.[[hottip:*:Carl, Seras, Rip, Quimby, and technically the Captain]]
* LargeHam: '''''Everyone'''''(except Rip, notably) has a point where they shout in all caps. Even unnamed characters. Rip avoids this until near the end of chapter 13.
* MusicalAssasin: Carl, with his Sonic Wave Guitar.
* LargeHam: '''''Everyone'''''
* MusicalAssasin: Carl, with his Sonic Wave Guitar.
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* RuleOfThree: The fan fic mentions that Noah is "from a different anime" exactly three times: Once in chapter 1, once in chapter 3, and the last time at the very end of chapter 13.
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* RuleOfThree: The fan fic mentions that Noah is "from a different anime" exactly three times: Once in chapter 1, once in chapter 3, and the last time at the very end of chapter 13.
*** Also, Carl's Sonic Wave Guitar.
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* WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: Mid-chapter, too. Although it mostly focuses on the side characters.
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* WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: Mid-chapter, too. Although it mostly focuses on the side characters.characters.
** Hecksing is appearantly also a band.
** Homer Simpson has been reincarnated to Hank Hill, who later on started this universe's version of ''KingOfTheHill''.
** Naruto became Hokage.
** The Eds have started up a buisness.
** Megaman continues to battle evil robots, and has been accepted as a fighter in ''Super Smash Bros 4'', ignoring how after thirty years there's only one installment released.
** Sonic died. There's no given reason why; that sentence was, in fact, all his section said.
** Cartman had joined one of the Hitler Revival Groups, but was killed by Hecksing some time after.
** John and Jade had OppositeSexClones of themselves created after a lab accident. They also run a show (a clip of which is seen briefly in Rip's award show), and [[BrotherSisterIncest have gotten married and had kids.]]
** Noah's still from a different anime. That hasn't changed.
** Hecksing is appearantly also a band.
** Homer Simpson has been reincarnated to Hank Hill, who later on started this universe's version of ''KingOfTheHill''.
** Naruto became Hokage.
** The Eds have started up a buisness.
** Megaman continues to battle evil robots, and has been accepted as a fighter in ''Super Smash Bros 4'', ignoring how after thirty years there's only one installment released.
** Sonic died. There's no given reason why; that sentence was, in fact, all his section said.
** Cartman had joined one of the Hitler Revival Groups, but was killed by Hecksing some time after.
** John and Jade had OppositeSexClones of themselves created after a lab accident. They also run a show (a clip of which is seen briefly in Rip's award show), and [[BrotherSisterIncest have gotten married and had kids.]]
** Noah's still from a different anime. That hasn't changed.
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YMMV moving.
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* BadassDecay: With the possible exceptions of Jan and Schrodinger, the Millennium are all a bunch of incompitant idiots in this fan fic. Luke backs out of a mission like a coward; Tubalcain/Card Guy tells Hecksing that he is part of the Millennium after being asked; Rip Van Winkle leaves a mission just because someone impersonated a superior and told her to leave; Zorin obsesses with {{Pikmin}} and directly attacks any opponents (like what Seras does); the Captain ''tells Hecksing his weakness'', spends most of a fight trying to play cat-and-mouse, and goes down in one hit; Walter is absolutley terrible at being TheMole (and yet, everybody falls for it); Doctor reffuses to fire people if he finds them attractive; and the Major can't even get his plans strait.
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* CrackPairing: Quite a few. Carl/Seras/Rip/Zorin, Ned Flanders/Anderson, and teased Rip/Mayor Quimby.
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->''Hm interesting i can use this broken hitrent as a boost for my tank witch Wil then make me abel to fly using rocket boosters so i can go to forrest and figt the vampers and live up to my organizaton name and UNLEESH HECK on the badguys of corse witch is why my last name is badguy aktualy it is not the reeson why but i do not rilly follow my family name i am aktualy a goodguy but for why im caled badguy is my family name; and i have bad past with my family who iis real badguy and gav me a badtime and showd he was badguy on me during the time i had in the past way back dering the past when i was kid but that aanother story taht I DONT WANT TO TALK ABOUT RIT NOW.''\\
-Alucard, chapter 1
''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7380145/1/Hecksing_Ulumate_Crconikals Hecksing Ulumate Crconikals]]'' is the second installment to the ''SBIG'' series (third, including the short story ''Zombie Attack!'') by Tropers/GreatPikminFan and the first to be completed. Unlike its other installments, this one actually follows the story of [[Manga/{{Hellsing}} the original canon]] ''at first'' before slowly turning into an unusual adventure.
Alucard [[CardCarryingVillain Badguy]] is a powerful vampire who kills other, evil vampires by the word of Integra [[UnfortunateNames Heck]]. Then, one fatefull night, he ends up needing to do an EmergencyTransformation to Seras Victoria. Finding out that the vampire who caused this was a part of a former co-organization [[PunnyName Heavensing]], Integra then sends Alucard and the newly vamperized Seras to "SERCH AND DESTROY TOES TRADERS." After a short battle, a spell that was keeping out all non-Hecksing or Heavensing vampires is broken with the death of Heavensing's leader... [[TheSimpsons Ned Flanders]] (yes, you read that right), who [[DrivenToSuicide commited suicide]] after Alucard killed his lover Father Alexander Anderson (yes, you read ''that'' right too). With this spell broken, the mysterious Millennium are now free to wreek havok (or, rather, UNLEESH HECK [sic]) on the [[CriticalResearchFailure United Kingdoms of London]]. For most of the following chapters, Hecksing has to foil the various plans of the Millennium.
Also involved is a martian rockster ParodyStu, Carl, who's [[NoCelebritiesWereHarmed a blatant parody of]] CharlieSheen, the Major crossdressing as a part of a ShowWithinAShow, a giant, mutaint Homer Simpson, a giant, non-mutaint DavidHasselhoff, and Rip Van Winkle becoming an overly sexualized MsFanservice.
!! Tropes:
* AerithAndBob: Hecksing consists of, at one point or another, Integra, Seras, Alucard, Rip, Zorin, Kamina, and... ''Carl''.
* ArtisticLicenseGeography: Invoked. England is reffered to as the "United Kingdoms of London," and in early chapter 8 (it changes and gets ret-conned mid-chapter, oddly) the author belives that the Grand Canyon was a part of Germany.
* AssPull: Invoked with the Pikmin in chapter 10. ''Just where did they come from?''
* BadassDecay: With the possible exceptions of Jan and Schrodinger, the Millennium are all a bunch of incompitant idiots in this fan fic. Luke backs out of a mission like a coward; Tubalcain/Card Guy tells Hecksing that he is part of the Millennium after being asked; Rip Van Winkle leaves a mission just because someone impersonated a superior and told her to leave; Zorin obsesses with {{Pikmin}} and directly attacks any opponents (like what Seras does); the Captain ''tells Hecksing his weakness'', spends most of a fight trying to play cat-and-mouse, and goes down in one hit; Walter is absolutley terrible at being TheMole (and yet, everybody falls for it); Doctor reffuses to fire people if he finds them attractive; and the Major can't even get his plans strait.
* BrickJoke: Within the first set of chapters, [[WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland Noah]] is reffered to as being "from a different anime" twice. This gag seems to be abandoned until the very last line before the closing AN.
* CoitusEnsues: The ending to chapter 7.
* CrackPairing: Quite a few. Carl/Seras/Rip/Zorin, Ned Flanders/Anderson, and teased Rip/Mayor Quimby.
* CruelAndUnusualDeath: Used often. [[spoiler:Tubalcain and Jan both get holes blown in them from Carl's sonic waves. Similarly, Zorin gets a hole punched in her face from Mayor Quimby's blood extracted by Walter. Walter himself gets blown up by over a hundred bullets striking him at the same time. Lawyer Guy is melted/evaporated by lava in a volcaino. (Though he ''is'' a liquid metal robot.) Major gets a spike shoved up his ass. Finally, Hitler and Schrodinger both blow up in a massive explosion of Wierd Quantum Shit.]]
* DecoyProtagonist: [[spoiler:Alucard, in an odd way. The first "season" (chapters 1-4) appear to focus mainly on him as he tries to kill the Millennium, but come chapter four at the end of the season where he's suddenly KilledOffForReal by Jan. The focus then shifts to Carl.]]
* DevelopmentGag: (Giant Mutaint) Homer's rampage of New York is based on a SBIG fic idea where Homer Simpson gets taken over by nuclear waste and becomes an evil giant. WordOfGod says he's not sure whether or not to go with the idea, especially since this pseudo crossover occured.
* DiskOneFinalBoss: [[spoiler:Alexander Anderson. He's reffered to as the "final boss of the fan fic," even though there's the entire Millennium before reaching there.]]
* FullFrontalAssault: [[spoiler:Carl, Rip, and Seras end up doing this ''accidentally'' in the final chapter. Quimby points out that they basically went into battle while forgetting to put clothes on first.]]
* {{Hell}}: There's four of them, actually. [[LethalLavaLand Red Hell]], [[TheLostWoods Purple Hell]], [[SpaceZone Gray Hell]], and [[EldritchLocation Black Hell]].
* KillEmAll: The number of important characters left alive can be counted on one hand. Barley, though.
* LargeHam: '''''Everyone''''' (except Rip, notably) has a point where they shout in all caps. Even unnamed characters.
* NewPowersAsThePlotDemands: Rip and Seras's "secondary abilities" as well as... most of what the Major does in chapter 11.
* RuleOfThree: The fan fic mentions that Noah is "from a different anime" exactly three times: Once in chapter 1, once in chapter 3, and the last time at the very end of chapter 13.
* SequelHook: [[spoiler:The very end of the fan fic, even after the closing AN, has a short scene of who appears to be Girlfriend from ''the Eds' [=EDventure=]'' building a device capable of reviving Ed and Edd]].
* ShoutOut:
** Major's death to [[spoiler:Mobster Kingpin's death in ''Webcomic/ProblemSleuth''.]]
*** Also, when he dies, he says two quotes from ''TheSimpsonsHitAndRun'' before dieing.
** "I WILL VENGE YOU BRO!" Al shooted to [[Webcomic/{{Homestuck}} skaia.]]
** [[MyImmortal "WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOIN IN MY BER MOTHERFUCKERS?" It was... Integra!]]
** [[FanFic/TheSimpsonsDinner "ho home rip."]]
** The David Hasselhoff ride is a blatant refference to the ''TheSpongebobSquarepantsMovie''.
** Alucard vs Luke is a refference to ''KungFuHustle''.
* SlippySlideyIceWorld: Brazil.
-->The Brazil is COLD and was snow lik chater 7 of [[VideoGame/PaperMario Papar Mario]]. But there wax still lots of haff nakee chiks wat made Carl go "AOOGAQ!" but Ceres splapped him. god, ca npot a man hav fun? Ther also others preforming, like majishons.
* SpotlightStealingSquad: Carl. Arguably Rip.
* TakeThat: At one point, the fan fic compares Seras/Carl to [[WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland Courtney/Duncan]], and is implied to be compared to other pairings that go [[SlapSlapKiss in a]] [[AbuseIsOkayWhenItsFemaleOnMale related way]], a jab at those kinds of couples.
* TankGoodness: Alucard's tank. It can also fly, but only if you can get a liftoff.
* TooDumbToLive: Captain, who tells Carl and the Chief his one weakness.
* WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: Mid-chapter, too. Although it mostly focuses on the side characters.
-Alucard, chapter 1
''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7380145/1/Hecksing_Ulumate_Crconikals Hecksing Ulumate Crconikals]]'' is the second installment to the ''SBIG'' series (third, including the short story ''Zombie Attack!'') by Tropers/GreatPikminFan and the first to be completed. Unlike its other installments, this one actually follows the story of [[Manga/{{Hellsing}} the original canon]] ''at first'' before slowly turning into an unusual adventure.
Alucard [[CardCarryingVillain Badguy]] is a powerful vampire who kills other, evil vampires by the word of Integra [[UnfortunateNames Heck]]. Then, one fatefull night, he ends up needing to do an EmergencyTransformation to Seras Victoria. Finding out that the vampire who caused this was a part of a former co-organization [[PunnyName Heavensing]], Integra then sends Alucard and the newly vamperized Seras to "SERCH AND DESTROY TOES TRADERS." After a short battle, a spell that was keeping out all non-Hecksing or Heavensing vampires is broken with the death of Heavensing's leader... [[TheSimpsons Ned Flanders]] (yes, you read that right), who [[DrivenToSuicide commited suicide]] after Alucard killed his lover Father Alexander Anderson (yes, you read ''that'' right too). With this spell broken, the mysterious Millennium are now free to wreek havok (or, rather, UNLEESH HECK [sic]) on the [[CriticalResearchFailure United Kingdoms of London]]. For most of the following chapters, Hecksing has to foil the various plans of the Millennium.
Also involved is a martian rockster ParodyStu, Carl, who's [[NoCelebritiesWereHarmed a blatant parody of]] CharlieSheen, the Major crossdressing as a part of a ShowWithinAShow, a giant, mutaint Homer Simpson, a giant, non-mutaint DavidHasselhoff, and Rip Van Winkle becoming an overly sexualized MsFanservice.
!! Tropes:
* AerithAndBob: Hecksing consists of, at one point or another, Integra, Seras, Alucard, Rip, Zorin, Kamina, and... ''Carl''.
* ArtisticLicenseGeography: Invoked. England is reffered to as the "United Kingdoms of London," and in early chapter 8 (it changes and gets ret-conned mid-chapter, oddly) the author belives that the Grand Canyon was a part of Germany.
* AssPull: Invoked with the Pikmin in chapter 10. ''Just where did they come from?''
* BadassDecay: With the possible exceptions of Jan and Schrodinger, the Millennium are all a bunch of incompitant idiots in this fan fic. Luke backs out of a mission like a coward; Tubalcain/Card Guy tells Hecksing that he is part of the Millennium after being asked; Rip Van Winkle leaves a mission just because someone impersonated a superior and told her to leave; Zorin obsesses with {{Pikmin}} and directly attacks any opponents (like what Seras does); the Captain ''tells Hecksing his weakness'', spends most of a fight trying to play cat-and-mouse, and goes down in one hit; Walter is absolutley terrible at being TheMole (and yet, everybody falls for it); Doctor reffuses to fire people if he finds them attractive; and the Major can't even get his plans strait.
* BrickJoke: Within the first set of chapters, [[WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland Noah]] is reffered to as being "from a different anime" twice. This gag seems to be abandoned until the very last line before the closing AN.
* CoitusEnsues: The ending to chapter 7.
* CrackPairing: Quite a few. Carl/Seras/Rip/Zorin, Ned Flanders/Anderson, and teased Rip/Mayor Quimby.
* CruelAndUnusualDeath: Used often. [[spoiler:Tubalcain and Jan both get holes blown in them from Carl's sonic waves. Similarly, Zorin gets a hole punched in her face from Mayor Quimby's blood extracted by Walter. Walter himself gets blown up by over a hundred bullets striking him at the same time. Lawyer Guy is melted/evaporated by lava in a volcaino. (Though he ''is'' a liquid metal robot.) Major gets a spike shoved up his ass. Finally, Hitler and Schrodinger both blow up in a massive explosion of Wierd Quantum Shit.]]
* DecoyProtagonist: [[spoiler:Alucard, in an odd way. The first "season" (chapters 1-4) appear to focus mainly on him as he tries to kill the Millennium, but come chapter four at the end of the season where he's suddenly KilledOffForReal by Jan. The focus then shifts to Carl.]]
* DevelopmentGag: (Giant Mutaint) Homer's rampage of New York is based on a SBIG fic idea where Homer Simpson gets taken over by nuclear waste and becomes an evil giant. WordOfGod says he's not sure whether or not to go with the idea, especially since this pseudo crossover occured.
* DiskOneFinalBoss: [[spoiler:Alexander Anderson. He's reffered to as the "final boss of the fan fic," even though there's the entire Millennium before reaching there.]]
* FullFrontalAssault: [[spoiler:Carl, Rip, and Seras end up doing this ''accidentally'' in the final chapter. Quimby points out that they basically went into battle while forgetting to put clothes on first.]]
* {{Hell}}: There's four of them, actually. [[LethalLavaLand Red Hell]], [[TheLostWoods Purple Hell]], [[SpaceZone Gray Hell]], and [[EldritchLocation Black Hell]].
* KillEmAll: The number of important characters left alive can be counted on one hand. Barley, though.
* LargeHam: '''''Everyone''''' (except Rip, notably) has a point where they shout in all caps. Even unnamed characters.
* NewPowersAsThePlotDemands: Rip and Seras's "secondary abilities" as well as... most of what the Major does in chapter 11.
* RuleOfThree: The fan fic mentions that Noah is "from a different anime" exactly three times: Once in chapter 1, once in chapter 3, and the last time at the very end of chapter 13.
* SequelHook: [[spoiler:The very end of the fan fic, even after the closing AN, has a short scene of who appears to be Girlfriend from ''the Eds' [=EDventure=]'' building a device capable of reviving Ed and Edd]].
* ShoutOut:
** Major's death to [[spoiler:Mobster Kingpin's death in ''Webcomic/ProblemSleuth''.]]
*** Also, when he dies, he says two quotes from ''TheSimpsonsHitAndRun'' before dieing.
** "I WILL VENGE YOU BRO!" Al shooted to [[Webcomic/{{Homestuck}} skaia.]]
** [[MyImmortal "WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOIN IN MY BER MOTHERFUCKERS?" It was... Integra!]]
** [[FanFic/TheSimpsonsDinner "ho home rip."]]
** The David Hasselhoff ride is a blatant refference to the ''TheSpongebobSquarepantsMovie''.
** Alucard vs Luke is a refference to ''KungFuHustle''.
* SlippySlideyIceWorld: Brazil.
-->The Brazil is COLD and was snow lik chater 7 of [[VideoGame/PaperMario Papar Mario]]. But there wax still lots of haff nakee chiks wat made Carl go "AOOGAQ!" but Ceres splapped him. god, ca npot a man hav fun? Ther also others preforming, like majishons.
* SpotlightStealingSquad: Carl. Arguably Rip.
* TakeThat: At one point, the fan fic compares Seras/Carl to [[WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland Courtney/Duncan]], and is implied to be compared to other pairings that go [[SlapSlapKiss in a]] [[AbuseIsOkayWhenItsFemaleOnMale related way]], a jab at those kinds of couples.
* TankGoodness: Alucard's tank. It can also fly, but only if you can get a liftoff.
* TooDumbToLive: Captain, who tells Carl and the Chief his one weakness.
* WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: Mid-chapter, too. Although it mostly focuses on the side characters.
