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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8096183/1/Harry-Potter-and-the-Natural-20 Harry Potter and the Natural 20]]'' by Sir Poley is an incomplete CrossOver fanfic that combines ''Literature/HarryPotter'' and ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons''.
The premise is Milo Amastacia-Liadon, {{munchkin}} and Wizard with capital W, hailing from Myra -- ''[[VideoGame/TheElderScrollsIIIMorrowind City of Light! City of]]'' ''[[InsistentTerminology Magic!]]'' -- turns up in the world of Harry Potter through a SummoningRitual by Lucius Malfoy. After teaming up with the three protagonists of the Potterverse, he takes on the many dangers living at Hogwarts School for Witchcraft and Wizardry can bring -- in his distinct and hilarious way.
The premise is Milo Amastacia-Liadon, {{munchkin}} and Wizard with capital W, hailing from Myra -- ''[[VideoGame/TheElderScrollsIIIMorrowind City of Light! City of]]'' ''[[InsistentTerminology Magic!]]'' -- turns up in the world of Harry Potter through a SummoningRitual by Lucius Malfoy. After teaming up with the three protagonists of the Potterverse, he takes on the many dangers living at Hogwarts School for Witchcraft and Wizardry can bring -- in his distinct and hilarious way.
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The premise is Milo Amastacia-Liadon, {{munchkin}} and Wizard with capital W,
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* NoSell: Summoned undead are immune to all three Unforgivable Curses; they can't be controlled by anyone except the caster, [[FeelsNoPain don't feel pain]], and instant death doesn't affect what's already dead.
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* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkillThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: The test for Milo being a wizard is perfectly safe, and the Ministry has no hostile intentions.
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* YouHaveToBurnTheWeb: While magical webs do indeed burn, Milo discovers to his chagrin that real webs are not flammable.
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* YouHaveToBurnTheWeb: While magical webs do indeed burn, Milo discovers to his chagrin that real webs are not flammable.flammable.
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The premise is Milo Amastacia-Liadon, {{munchkin}} and Wizard with capital W, hailing from Myra - ''[[VideoGame/TheElderScrollsIIIMorrowind City of Light! City of]]'' ''[[InsistentTerminology Magic!]]'' - turns up in the world of Harry Potter through a SummoningRitual by Lucius Malfoy. After teaming up with the three protagonists of the Potterverse, he takes on the many dangers living at Hogwarts School for Witchcraft and Wizardry can bring - in his distinct and hilarious way.
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The premise is Milo Amastacia-Liadon, {{munchkin}} and Wizard with capital W, hailing from Myra - -- ''[[VideoGame/TheElderScrollsIIIMorrowind City of Light! City of]]'' ''[[InsistentTerminology Magic!]]'' - -- turns up in the world of Harry Potter through a SummoningRitual by Lucius Malfoy. After teaming up with the three protagonists of the Potterverse, he takes on the many dangers living at Hogwarts School for Witchcraft and Wizardry can bring - -- in his distinct and hilarious way.
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* MedievalStasis: Milo is horrified to realize that magic is keeping his world stuck in this. The rules of magical item crafting are not scalable to mass production, since each item demands a heavy price from an individual crafter, so it isn't possible for a magical society to really industrialise.
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* MedievalStasis: Milo is horrified to realize that magic is keeping preventing his world stuck in this.from progressing past StandardFantasySetting-level technology. The rules of magical item crafting are not scalable to mass production, since each item demands a heavy price from an individual crafter, so it isn't possible for a magical society to really industrialise.
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* MedievalStasis: Milo is horrified to realize that magic is keeping his world stuck in this.
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* MedievalStasis: Milo is horrified to realize that magic is keeping his world stuck in this. The rules of magical item crafting are not scalable to mass production, since each item demands a heavy price from an individual crafter, so it isn't possible for a magical society to really industrialise.
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* BadassFamily: Milo comes from one, much to his surprise (since none of them technically existed until he pointed out his backstory). His mother is a loving woman and a baker... and a retired adventurer secretly running the rebellion. [[spoiler:His sister, Relkin,]] is an even more capable munchkin than him.
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* BrickJoke: Milo observes at one point that the local wizards and witches seem to require spending several hours each day sitting around in big chairs, playing chess and talking about the weather, which he assumes it's how they replenish their spells. Later on, it turns out he's equipped each of his many hideouts with a chair and a chess set so his allies can do exactly that.
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** Absolutely everything Milo makes is covered with holy symbols, to protect against vampires. [[spoiler:No vampires ever appear in the story.]]
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** Milo relies on ''Protection From Evil'' to prevent mind control, such as Imperius. After losing his spellbook and stealing a replacement from an evil necromancer, he's forced to use ''Protection From Good'' instead. It still grants mental protection, but he's painfully aware that it's an awkward fit.
