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** MarvelComics and DCComics are both favorites of Harry's thanks to growing up in the muggle world.

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** MarvelComics Creator/MarvelComics and DCComics Creator/DCComics are both favorites of Harry's thanks to growing up in the muggle world.
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* AdaptationalUpbringingChange: [[Literature/HarryPotter Harry]]'s mother Lily does not die as in canon, and he is raised in a loving single-parent household instead of an abusive home. Harry grows up more well-adjusted, trusting of adults and immersed in the magic world from the start.
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Harry Potter and The Mother Who Lived is a ForWantOfANail fic in the ''Literature/HarryPotter'' universe by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Gracques/pseuds/Gracques Gracques]] on Website/FanFictionDotNet and Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn.

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Harry Potter and The Mother Who Lived is a ForWantOfANail fic AlternateUniverseFic in the ''Literature/HarryPotter'' universe by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Gracques/pseuds/Gracques Gracques]] on Website/FanFictionDotNet and Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn.

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* ResignedInDisgrace: Barty Crouch had no illusions that [[spoiler: the wizarding world finding out his son is alive and revived Lord Voldemort]] would be the end of his career, but still spent the last few hours of his career trying to persuade Fudge to stand up and fight this return. Even crashing the head of departments meeting to insist that [[spoiler: Voldemort had returned.]] Fudge in return [[spoiler: sacks him, and forces him to resign so as not to make the optics look as bad]].



* TheStationsOfTheCanon: As this is a retelling of the Harry Potter series, not everything is going to change just because there's one extra person present. That being said, because there's some twisting of the fine details, some things are gradually changing because Lily's influence is moving pieces around.

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** Barty Crouch, having lost track of his son and not being [[spoiler: imprisoned due to having no other death eaters on hand]], makes it all the way through book 4 without dying.
* TheStationsOfTheCanon: As this is a retelling of the Harry Potter series, not everything is going to change just because there's one extra person present. That being said, because there's some twisting of the fine details, some things are gradually changing because Lily's influence is moving pieces around.



* WhamEpisode: Ron V through Lily XVI. The summer of year 3 begins not with some ordinary time, but with Sirius as a private citizen, Peter Pettigrew is recognized, captured, and put on trial for his crimes, drastically changing his trajectory and bringing Harry into contact with the ministry more seriously. This also connects him to Susan Bones in a more serious way due to their shared pain due to the Death Eaters, changing her character arc too.

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* WhamEpisode: Ron V through Lily XVI. The summer of year 3 begins not with some ordinary time, but with something more dramatic. With Sirius as a private citizen, Peter Pettigrew is recognized, captured, and put on trial for his crimes, drastically changing his trajectory and bringing Harry into contact with the ministry more seriously. This also connects him to Susan Bones in a more serious way due to their shared pain due to the Death Eaters, changing her character arc too.
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** The author also likes to throw some pop songs into the mix of events. Like [[WesternAnimation/{{Frozen}} Let it Go]].

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** The author also likes to throw some pop songs into the mix of events. Like [[WesternAnimation/{{Frozen}} [[WesternAnimation/Frozen2013 Let it Go]].
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** MarvelComics and DCComics are both favorites of Harry's thanks to growing up in the muggle world.
** All the muggles have a familiarity with [[Franchise/StarWars Darth Vader]].


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** The author also likes to throw some pop songs into the mix of events. Like [[WesternAnimation/{{Frozen}} Let it Go]].
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** Parvati Patil is elevated thanks to several pov chapters, and is an important stepping stone for Harry's emotional development due to [[spoiler: dating for a month]].

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** Parvati Patil is elevated thanks to several pov POV chapters, and is an important stepping stone for Harry's emotional development due to [[spoiler: dating [[spoiler:dating for a month]].



* BigDamnHeroes: Lily has a dramatic one near the end of Sorcerer's Stone when she comes in to duel Quirrell and save Harry.

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* BigDamnHeroes: Lily has a dramatic one near the end of Sorcerer's Stone Harry's 1st Year when she comes in to duel Quirrell and save Harry.



** Lily being around doesn't stop Voldemort teaming up with Quirrell to go after the philosopher's stone.

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** Lily being around doesn't stop Voldemort teaming up with Quirrell to go after the philosopher's stone.Philosopher's Stone.



** Hermione still overcommits herself to classes, and uses a time turner to make up for it.
** There's still a death eater attack after the Quidditch World Cup.

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** Hermione still overcommits herself to classes, classes in 3rd year, and uses a time turner to make up for it.
** There's still a death eater Death Eater attack after the Quidditch World Cup.Cup. And the Dark Mark is still cast.



* {{Infodump}}: While done to explain his own survival, Voldemort giving this to his loyal death eaters [[spoiler: upon his resurrection]] is a bit much in recapping everything from [[spoiler: his death to his resurrection]] from his perspective.

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* {{Infodump}}: While done to explain his own survival, Voldemort giving this to his loyal death eaters [[spoiler: upon [[spoiler:upon his resurrection]] is a bit much in recapping everything from [[spoiler: his [[spoiler:his death to his resurrection]] from his perspective.



* PolitenessJudo: Lily brings up the Malfoys' estranged niece as another relative who also made Auror, as a way to force them to grit and smile during the Quidditch World Cup. Cutting their ego to acknowledge the part of the black family they tried to disown.
* RevealingCoverUp: When [[spoiler: Winky was killed, Barty Crouch]] called for a minor investigation from the care of magical creatures department. This immediately set off suspicions from the Auror office, as a man like [[spoiler: Barty Crouch]], so obsessed with reputation, would never let his prized [[spoiler: house elf]] die without a greater investigation. And thus, Lily was put on the trail of connecting her current case with this obvious cover up.

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* PolitenessJudo: Lily brings up the Malfoys' estranged niece as another relative who also made Auror, as a way to force them to grit and smile during the Quidditch World Cup. Cutting their ego to acknowledge the part of the black Black family they tried to disown.
* RevealingCoverUp: When [[spoiler: Winky was killed, Barty Crouch]] Crouch Sr.]] called for a minor investigation from the care Department for the Regulation and Control of magical creatures department. Magical Creatures, with hints that he encouraged the investigation to conclude it as an accident, as well as brushing off a request from Amelia Bones for the Department of Magical Law Enforcement to investigate. This immediately set off suspicions from the Auror office, her suspicions, as a man like [[spoiler: Barty [[spoiler:Barty Crouch]], so obsessed with reputation, would never let his prized [[spoiler: house elf]] die without a greater investigation. And thus, Lily was put on the trail of connecting her current case with this obvious cover up.

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Not really a what shot if you had been following the story. Also, changed Hannah's last name to the correct one, Abbott instead of Abbot.


** Hannah Abbot. She does get POV chapters, and she has a ComingOfAgeStory spread out among many chapters. In fact, she's the one responsible for revealing [[spoiler: Lupin is a Werewolf]].

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** Hannah Abbot.Abbott. She does get POV chapters, and she has a ComingOfAgeStory spread out among many chapters. In fact, she's the one responsible for revealing [[spoiler: Lupin is a Werewolf]].



* WhamLine: For Hannah Abbot VIII, Susan reveals why she knows Neville's discomfort with the Cruciatus curse.

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* WhamLine: For Hannah Abbot Abbott VIII, Susan reveals why she knows Neville's discomfort with the Cruciatus curse.



*** And then, later that evening, someone reveals who Ron's date was: [[spoiler: "Hannah Abbot!"]]
* WhamShot: From Lily XXX. Lily returns to the ministry, and Barty Crouch Sr. is still there. Meaning he's not dead, and seems to not be under the imperius curse.

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*** And then, later that evening, someone reveals who Ron's date was: [[spoiler: "Hannah Abbot!"]]
* WhamShot: From Lily XXX. Lily returns to the ministry, and Barty Crouch Sr. is still there. Meaning he's not dead, and seems to not be under the imperius curse.
Abbott!"]]
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** With all Lily's work now coming underneath her direction, Amelia Bones gets more focus as a professional but highly moral Ministry leader.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: Bertha Jorkins isn't tortured to death for information by Voldemort in this timeline. In fact, Bertha doesn't make an appearance in person.

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** Despite the methods around the mystery changing, the Chamber of Secrets is still opened in harry's 2nd year.

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** Despite the methods around the mystery changing, the Chamber of Secrets is still opened in harry's Harry's 2nd year.


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** Fudge still goes into denial with Voldemort's return.
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* {{Infodump}}: While done to explain his own survival, Voldemort giving this to his loyal death eaters [[spoiler: upon his resurrection]] is a bit much in recapping everything from [[spoiler: his death to his resurrection]] from his perspective.
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* AdaptationExplanation: How Fred and George come to have the marauder's map and use it gets a little more exploration in this story. Turns out that originally the marauders were going to destroy it after they graduated, but James ended up just sneaking it into lost and found as the ultimate prank. And thus how Fred and George got their hands on it.

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* AdaptationExplanation: AdaptationalExplanation: How Fred and George come to have the marauder's map and use it gets a little more exploration in this story. Turns out that originally the marauders were going to destroy it after they graduated, but James ended up just sneaking it into lost and found as the ultimate prank. And thus how Fred and George got their hands on it.
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** [[spoiler: Cedric]] is murdered by Barty Crouch Jr. in this timeline.
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* AdaptationExplanation: How Fred and George come to have the marauder's map and use it gets a little more exploration in this story. Turns out that originally the marauders were going to destroy it after they graduated, but James ended up just sneaking it into lost and found as the ultimate prank. And thus how Fred and George got their hands on it.

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* InSpiteOfANail: The author talked about this in the comments. That despite building on an adjusted foundation, there's something they call "canon inertia" where the bigger picture isn't going to change as much despite Lily's presence. For example...

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* InSpiteOfANail: The author talked about this in the comments. That despite building on an adjusted foundation, there's something they call "canon inertia" entropy" where the bigger picture isn't going to change as much despite Lily's presence. For example...


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** Hermione still overcommits herself to classes, and uses a time turner to make up for it.
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* ADeathInTheLimelight: Though he'd been given a little extra prominence earlier in this story, [[spoiler: Cedric Diggory]] still gets this in his 7th POV chapter. As it gets into his annoyances, hopes, desires and honor right before [[spoiler: Barty Crouch Jr. kills him in the graveyard]].
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* InSpiteOfANail: The author talked about this in the comments. That despite building on an adjusted foundation, there's something they call "canon inertia" where the bigger picture isn't going to change as much despite Lily's presence. For example...
** Lily being around doesn't stop Voldemort teaming up with Quirrell to go after the philosopher's stone.
** Despite the methods around the mystery changing, the Chamber of Secrets is still opened in harry's 2nd year.
** There's still a death eater attack after the Quidditch World Cup.
** [[spoiler: Barty Crouch Jr.]] still is posing as [[spoiler: Mad Eye Moody]] in order to revive Voldemort in body.
** [[spoiler: Cedric Diggory]] is still the first heroic character to die.
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* CallBack: Seeing Cedric's POV in the 3rd task, we find out that he ran into a few of the philosopher's stone guardians in the maze. He fights off The Devil's Snare with a Lumos Maxima, and has to resist thinking he's already won when he find The Mirror of Erised.
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* WhamShot: From Lily XXX. Lily returns to the ministry, and Barty Crouch Sr. is still there. Meaning he's not dead, and seems to not be under the imperius curse.
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** A single line in Susan I changes harry's romantic dynamics post yule ball. When asking for a favor, Susan asks, "Would you kiss me?"

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** A single line in Susan I changes harry's Harry's romantic dynamics post yule ball. When asking for a favor, Susan asks, "Would you kiss me?"
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* OriginalCharacter: Miranda Savage is Lily's first Auror partner. While not directly named in the books, the author based it on an auror kingsley was talking to at one point.

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* OriginalCharacter: Miranda Savage is Lily's first Auror partner. While not directly named in the books, the author based it on an auror kingsley Kingsley was talking to at one point.

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Halloween, 1981. Lord Voldemort goes to Godric's Hollow to kill the only one who could defeat him. Like before, he dispatched James Potter. However, as a "favor" to Severus Snape, he only incapacitates and tortures Lily Potter. Then he turns his wand on Harry Potter. You know the story from there: curse rebounds, found in the rubble, Harry rescued, but now with Lily still very alive despite everything, Harry Potter grows up for 11 years among Muggles with a widowed mom. A chance at a normal life before going off to Hogwarts. Then after 11 years, it was finally time, and while Harry is just excited to learn magic, the presence of Ms. Evans will slowly change this world into one with unexpected changes.

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Halloween, 1981. Lord Voldemort goes to Godric's Hollow to kill the only one who could defeat him. Like before, he dispatched James Potter. However, as a "favor" to Severus Snape, he only incapacitates and tortures Lily Potter. Then he turns his wand on Harry Potter. You know the story from there: curse rebounds, found in the rubble, Harry rescued, but rescued. But now with Lily still very alive despite everything, Harry Potter grows up for 11 years among Muggles with a widowed mom. A chance at a normal life before going off to Hogwarts. Then after 11 years, it was finally time, and while Harry is just excited to learn magic, the presence of Ms. Evans will slowly change this world into one with unexpected changes.



!! With the series ongoing, spoilers will be off through "book 2" and will be at least 1 book behind as things update.

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!! With the series ongoing, spoilers will be off through "book 2" 3" and will be at least 1 book behind as things update.



* OutOfFocus: As Sirius Black is no longer The Prisoner of Azkaban, he actually has much less to do in the overall story so far, even if he technically appears on page more often.

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* OutOfFocus: As Sirius Black is no longer The Prisoner of Azkaban, he actually has much less to do in the overall story so far, even if he technically appears on page more often.far aside from the odd bits of advice to Harry during his years when Lily isn't available.


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** Hermione XIII: When Ron and Harry finish up their detention with Snape, this comes up from Ron when discussing his afternoon plans. "You're not the only one who can get a date in Hogsmeade."
*** And then, later that evening, someone reveals who Ron's date was: [[spoiler: "Hannah Abbot!"]]

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* AdaptedOut: Since Sirius wasn't feeling particularly generous to Ron after capturing Peter, Pidwigeon hasn't appeared in the story.



** Susan Bones, despite not having a POV chapter yet, is much more prominent at school. As not only a Hufflepuff for Hannah and Cedric to bounce off of, but connected to the ministry and their inner working trying to get things done around Hogwarts. She even has a noticeable character arc playing out alongside everyone else's.

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** Susan Bones, despite not having getting a POV chapter yet, until year 4, is much more prominent at school. As not only a Hufflepuff for Hannah and Cedric to bounce off of, but connected to the ministry and their inner working trying to get things done around Hogwarts. She even has a noticeable character arc playing out alongside everyone else's.

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** Dolores Umbridge gets a mention in book 3, and briefly greets Lily in book 4.



** The Trial of [[spoiler: Peter Pettigrew]] gets 2 of these.

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** The Trial of [[spoiler: Peter Pettigrew]] gets 2 3 of these.


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*** Dolores Umbridge gets a mention in the trial, and briefly greets Lily in book 4.

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* ShoutOut: The author is actually a big fan of the ''Franchise/AssassinsCreed'' games, and so in examining wizarding history, they'll occasionally throw in references to the games.
** For example, Savanrola was a rogue wizard, who was killed as a mercy.
** And the [[VideoGame/AssassinsCreedSyndicate Frye Twins]] were also a wizard pair.
** [[VideoGame/AssassinsCreedOdyssey Cassandra]] is a consultant for information at the Ministry.

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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** Harry calls the bruised twins [[Franchise/TheSmurfs smurfs]]. Something which brings great amusement to all the muggle wizards and witches.
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The author is actually a big fan of the ''Franchise/AssassinsCreed'' games, and so in examining wizarding history, they'll occasionally throw in references to the games.
** *** For example, Savanrola was a rogue wizard, who was killed as a mercy.
** *** And the [[VideoGame/AssassinsCreedSyndicate Frye Twins]] were also a wizard pair.
** *** [[VideoGame/AssassinsCreedOdyssey Cassandra]] is a consultant for information at the Ministry.


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** Ron XVI: The last spoken line of the chapter confirms everything that had been building for the previous 5 chapters: [[spoiler: Susan and I are together]].
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* OriginalCharacter: Miranda Savage is Lily's first Auror partner. While not directly named in the books, the author based it on an auror kingsley was talking to at one point.

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* WhamLine: For Hannah Abbot, Susan reveals why she knows Neville's discomfort with the Cruciatus curse.

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* WhamLine: For Hannah Abbot, Abbot VIII, Susan reveals why she knows Neville's discomfort with the Cruciatus curse.curse.
** A single line in Susan I changes harry's romantic dynamics post yule ball. When asking for a favor, Susan asks, "Would you kiss me?"
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* TheLostLenore: James becomes this to Lily. Even after 13 years of him being dead, with no true resolution against Voldemort, Lily still grieves for his death.
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* UnknownRival: Ginny is essentially the unknown romantic rival for all the people around Harry romantically. Always a bit jealous and angry at being left out of consideration, even if she doesn't act overtly on her jealousy usually.

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