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** Parvati Patil is elevated thanks to several pov chapters, and is an important stepping stone for Harry's emotional development due to [[spoiler: dating for a month]].

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** Thanks to involvement at the trial of [[spoiler: Peter Pettigrew]], Barty Crouch appears a whole book early.


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*** Barty Crouch appears a whole book early presiding over the proceedings.
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* ForWantOfANail: When you start at the top of Harry's story and change such a big thing, the changes big and small will only begin to pile up.
** Harry is much more emotionally prepared for Hogwarts, thanks to a much more loving environment growing up.
** Since he's not treated like a shame, Harry took up football (soccer) as a child, showing that he always was inclined towards sports.
** With Harry visiting Godric's Hollow on Halloween, when he returns, he defeats the troll only with Hermione. This means that it takes much longer for Ron and Hermione to become actual friends rather than acquaintances through Harry.
** With Harry being escorted around in Year 2, Dobby's big plan to stop Harry from reaching Hogwarts isn't sealing off Platform 9 3/4, but decoupling the train car he's in.
** As Sirius was actually a citizen in good standing, Peter Pettigrew is captured [[spoiler: during the Weasleys' vacation]], leading to his trial taking up the opening focus for "book 3".
** As the rightful caretaker for all of James's possessions, Lily doesn't give Harry his trademark invisibility cloak until 3rd year.
** Since Lily discouraged Harry from taking Divination, it's [[spoiler: Parvati]] who hears Trelawney's new prophecy.
** Due to different positioning at the Quidditch World Cup, [[spoiler: Barty Crouch Jr.]] doesn't cast the dark mark during the initial riots. Though it's implied that as a result he does something even worse instead.
** Since [[spoiler: Winky died rather got fired]], Hermione becomes concerned about house elf treatment at Hogwarts, but doesn't found SPEW because it was a concern rather than an outrage.

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* ForWantOfANail: When you start at the top of Harry's story and change such a big thing, the changes big and small will only begin to pile up.
** Harry is much more emotionally prepared for Hogwarts, thanks to a much more loving environment growing up.
** Since he's not treated like a shame, Harry took up football (soccer) as a child, showing that he always was inclined towards sports.
** With Harry visiting Godric's Hollow on Halloween, when he returns, he defeats the troll only with Hermione. This means that it takes much longer for Ron and Hermione to become actual friends rather than acquaintances through Harry.
** With Harry being escorted around in Year 2, Dobby's big plan to stop Harry from reaching Hogwarts isn't sealing off Platform 9 3/4, but decoupling the train car he's in.
** As Sirius was actually a citizen in good standing, Peter Pettigrew is captured [[spoiler: during the Weasleys' vacation]], leading to his trial taking up the opening focus for "book 3".
** As the rightful caretaker for all of James's possessions, Lily doesn't give Harry his trademark invisibility cloak until 3rd year.
** Since Lily discouraged Harry from taking Divination, it's [[spoiler: Parvati]] who hears Trelawney's new prophecy.
** Due to different positioning at the Quidditch World Cup, [[spoiler: Barty Crouch Jr.]] doesn't cast the dark mark during the initial riots. Though it's implied that as a result he does something even worse instead.
** Since [[spoiler: Winky died rather got fired]], Hermione becomes concerned about house elf treatment at Hogwarts, but doesn't found SPEW because it was a concern rather than an outrage.
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* AdaptationalBadass: As Harry is more onto Quirrell chasing to the stone, Quirrell not only captures Harry on entering the final chamber, but ends up fighting a duel with Lily and winning.


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** Since [[spoiler: Winky died rather got fired]], Hermione becomes concerned about house elf treatment at Hogwarts, but doesn't found SPEW because it was a concern rather than an outrage.


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** [[VideoGame/AssassinsCreedOdyssey Cassandra]] is a consultant for information at the Ministry.


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* WhamEpisode: Ron V through Lily XVI. The summer of year 3 begins not with some ordinary time, but with Sirius as a private citizen, Peter Pettigrew is recognized, captured, and put on trial for his crimes, drastically changing his trajectory and bringing Harry into contact with the ministry more seriously. This also connects him to Susan Bones in a more serious way due to their shared pain due to the Death Eaters, changing her character arc too.

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* PerspectiveFlip: There are many points of view in this fic, from Lily to the golden trio to Hufflepuffs to Cho.



* RotatingPOV: There are many points of view in this fic, from Lily to the golden trio to Hufflepuffs to Cho.
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* MaliciousSlander: Rita Skeeter is at it again. Though with the material on hand, she ends up misrepresenting Harry's view of his father vs the tight bond he has with his mother.


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* RotatingPOV: There are many points of view in this fic, from Lily to the golden trio to Hufflepuffs to Cho.
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Halloween, 1981. Lord Voldemort goes to Godric's Hollow to kill the only one who could defeat him. Like before, he dispatched James Potter. However, as a "favor" to Severus Snape, he only incapacitates and tortures Lily Potter. Then he turns his wand on Harry Potter. You know the story from there: curse rebounds, found in the rubble, Harry rescued. But now with Lily still very alive despite everything, Harry Potter grows up for 11 years among Muggles with a single mom. A chance at a normal life before going off to Hogwarts. Then after 11 years, it was finally time. And while Harry is just excited to learn magic, the presence of Ms. Evans will slowly change this world into one with unexpected changes.

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Halloween, 1981. Lord Voldemort goes to Godric's Hollow to kill the only one who could defeat him. Like before, he dispatched James Potter. However, as a "favor" to Severus Snape, he only incapacitates and tortures Lily Potter. Then he turns his wand on Harry Potter. You know the story from there: curse rebounds, found in the rubble, Harry rescued. But rescued, but now with Lily still very alive despite everything, Harry Potter grows up for 11 years among Muggles with a single widowed mom. A chance at a normal life before going off to Hogwarts. Then after 11 years, it was finally time. And time, and while Harry is just excited to learn magic, the presence of Ms. Evans will slowly change this world into one with unexpected changes.



* ActionGirl: Lily decides that for her post boarding school life, she'll become an Auror, and so begins training to become just as good a witch as she was before, if not even better.

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* ActionGirl: Lily decides that for her post boarding school life, she'll she will become an Auror, and so begins training to become just as good a witch as she was before, if not even better.
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** As the rightful caretaker for all of James's possessions, Lily doesn't give Harry his trademark invisibility cloak until 3rd year.
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* TheStationsOfCanon: As this is a retelling of the Harry Potter series, not everything is going to change just because there's one extra person present. That being said, because there's some twisting of the fine details, some things are gradually changing because Lily's influence is moving pieces around.

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* TheStationsOfCanon: TheStationsOfTheCanon: As this is a retelling of the Harry Potter series, not everything is going to change just because there's one extra person present. That being said, because there's some twisting of the fine details, some things are gradually changing because Lily's influence is moving pieces around.
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* TheStationsOfCanon: As this is a retelling of the Harry Potter series, not everything is going to change just because there's one extra person present. That being said, because there's some twisting of the fine details, some things are gradually changing because Lily's influence is moving pieces around.
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* RevealingCoverUp: When [[spoiler: Winky was killed, Barty Crouch]] called for a minor investigation from the care of magical creatures department. This immediately set off suspicions from the Auror office, as a man like [[spoiler: Barty Crouch]], so obsessed with reputation, would never let his prized [[spoiler: house elf]] die without a greater investigation. And thus, Lily was put on the trail of connecting her current case with this obvious cover up.

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** Dolores Umbridge gets a mention in book 3, and briefly greets Lily in book 4.



** Cedric Diggory, being a POV character gets several sympathetic chapters long before his prominence in book 4.



* DemotedToExtra: As Lily is Harry's stable connection to family, the Dursleys are reduced to the odd mention, though Petunia does appear for a guest appearance in Lily IV.

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* DemotedToExtra: As Lily is Harry's stable connection to family, the Dursleys are reduced to the odd mention, though Petunia does appear for a guest appearance in Lily IV.V.


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** Due to different positioning at the Quidditch World Cup, [[spoiler: Barty Crouch Jr.]] doesn't cast the dark mark during the initial riots. Though it's implied that as a result he does something even worse instead.


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* WhamLine: For Hannah Abbot, Susan reveals why she knows Neville's discomfort with the Cruciatus curse.
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* AscendedExtra: Thanks to the different writing format, several characters from the Harry Potter Universe have greater prominence compared to the books.
** Susan Bones, despite not having a POV chapter yet, is much more prominent at school. As not only a Hufflepuff for Hannah and Cedric to bounce off of, but connected to the ministry and their inner working trying to get things done around Hogwarts. She even has a noticeable character arc playing out alongside everyone else's.
** Hannah Abbot. She does get POV chapters, and she has a ComingOfAgeStory spread out among many chapters. In fact, she's the one responsible for revealing [[spoiler: Lupin is a Werewolf]].
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* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: Peter Pettigrew gets [[spoiler: Avadakadavrad by Snape in the 3rd year, trying to get Harry's blood]].

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* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: Peter Pettigrew gets [[spoiler: Avadakadavrad Avada Kedavra'd by Snape in the 3rd year, trying to get Harry's blood]].
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Harry Potter and The Mother Who Lived is a ForWantOfANail fic in the ''Literature/HarryPotter'' universe by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Gracques/pseuds/Gracques Gracques]] on Fanfiction.net and Archive of our Own.

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Harry Potter and The Mother Who Lived is a ForWantOfANail fic in the ''Literature/HarryPotter'' universe by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Gracques/pseuds/Gracques Gracques]] on Fanfiction.net Website/FanFictionDotNet and Archive of our Own.Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn.
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->'''Harry''': ''Well, I made a strange dream. I was living with Aunt Petunia and Uncle Vernon, and they forced me to sleep in their cupboard under the stairs.''
->'''Lily''': ''You call this a dream? I'd say it was a nightmare.''

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->'''Harry''': ''Well, Well, I made a strange dream. I was living with Aunt Petunia and Uncle Vernon, and they forced me to sleep in their cupboard under the stairs.''
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->'''Lily''': ''You You call this a dream? I'd say it was a nightmare.''
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** [[spoiler: Winkie]] is murdered at the Quidditch World Cup.
* DemotedToExtra: As Lily is Harry's stable connection to family, The Dursleys are reduced to the odd mention, though Petunia does appear for a guest appearance in Lily IV.

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** [[spoiler: Winkie]] Winky]] is murdered at the Quidditch World Cup.
* DemotedToExtra: As Lily is Harry's stable connection to family, The the Dursleys are reduced to the odd mention, though Petunia does appear for a guest appearance in Lily IV.



** As Sirius was actually a citizen in good standing, Peter Pettigrew is captured [[spoiler: during the Weasley's vacation]], leading to his trial taking up the opening focus for "book 3".

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** As Sirius was actually a citizen in good standing, Peter Pettigrew is captured [[spoiler: during the Weasley's Weasleys' vacation]], leading to his trial taking up the opening focus for "book 3".



* PolitenessJudo: Lily brings up the Malfoy's estranged niece as another relative who also made auror as a way to force them to grit and smile during the Quiddich World Cup. Cutting their ego to acknowledge the part of the black family they tried to disown.

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* PolitenessJudo: Lily brings up the Malfoy's Malfoys' estranged niece as another relative who also made auror Auror, as a way to force them to grit and smile during the Quiddich Quidditch World Cup. Cutting their ego to acknowledge the part of the black family they tried to disown.
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->'''Harry''': ''Well, I had a strange dream. I was living with Aunt Petunia and Uncle Vernon, and they forced me to sleep in their cupboard under the stairs.''

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->'''Harry''': ''Well, I had made a strange dream. I was living with Aunt Petunia and Uncle Vernon, and they forced me to sleep in their cupboard under the stairs.''



** With Lily going to the ministry in Harry's first year, Rufus Scrimgimour, Kingsley Shacklebolt and Cornelius Fudge all appear early.

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** With Lily going to the ministry Ministry in Harry's first year, Rufus Scrimgimour, Scrimgeour, Kingsley Shacklebolt and Cornelius Fudge all appear early.



* BigDamnHeroes: Lily has a dramatic one near the end of Sorcerer's Stone when she comes in to duel Quirrel and save Harry.

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* BigDamnHeroes: Lily has a dramatic one near the end of Sorcerer's Stone when she comes in to duel Quirrel Quirrell and save Harry.



** [[spoiler: Winkie]] is murdered at the Quiddich World Cup.

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** [[spoiler: Winkie]] is murdered at the Quiddich Quidditch World Cup.



** Harry is much more emotionally prepared for Hogwarts thanks to a much more loving environment growing up.
** Since he's not treated like a shame, Harry took up Football (Soccer) as a child, showing that he always was inclined towards sports.
** With Harry visiting Godric's hollow on Halloween, when he returns he defeats the troll only with Hermione. This means that it takes much longer for Ron and Hermione to become actual friends rather than acquaintances through Harry.

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** Harry is much more emotionally prepared for Hogwarts Hogwarts, thanks to a much more loving environment growing up.
** Since he's not treated like a shame, Harry took up Football (Soccer) football (soccer) as a child, showing that he always was inclined towards sports.
** With Harry visiting Godric's hollow Hollow on Halloween, when he returns returns, he defeats the troll only with Hermione. This means that it takes much longer for Ron and Hermione to become actual friends rather than acquaintances through Harry.



* LoveDodecahedron: Rather than Harry's more limited perspective, seeing inside several students heads creates all kinds of webs of attraction, friendship, crushing and desire. So much so that there's a joke from Parvati and Hannah going into book 3 of trying to match up people in their year to poke fun at how things will only get more complicated.

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* LoveDodecahedron: Rather than Harry's more limited perspective, seeing inside several students students' heads creates all kinds of webs of attraction, friendship, crushing and desire. So much so that there's a joke from Parvati and Hannah going into book 3 of trying to match up people in their year to poke fun at how things will only get more complicated.
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Halloween, 1981. Lord Voldemort goes to Godric's Hollow to kill the only one who could defeat him. Like before, he dispatched James Potter. However, as a "favor" to Severus Snape, he only incapacitates and lightly tortures Lily Potter. Then he turns his wand on Harry Potter. You know the story from there: curse rebounds, found in the rubble, Harry rescued. But now with Lily still very alive despite everything, Harry Potter grows up for 11 years among Muggles with a single mom. A chance at a normal life before going off to Hogwarts. Then after 11 years, it was finally time. And while Harry is just excited to learn magic, the presence of Ms. Evans will slowly change this world into one with unexpected changes.

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Halloween, 1981. Lord Voldemort goes to Godric's Hollow to kill the only one who could defeat him. Like before, he dispatched James Potter. However, as a "favor" to Severus Snape, he only incapacitates and lightly tortures Lily Potter. Then he turns his wand on Harry Potter. You know the story from there: curse rebounds, found in the rubble, Harry rescued. But now with Lily still very alive despite everything, Harry Potter grows up for 11 years among Muggles with a single mom. A chance at a normal life before going off to Hogwarts. Then after 11 years, it was finally time. And while Harry is just excited to learn magic, the presence of Ms. Evans will slowly change this world into one with unexpected changes.
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!! With the series ongoing spoilers will be off through "book 2" and will be at least 1 book behind as things update.

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!! With the series ongoing ongoing, spoilers will be off through "book 2" and will be at least 1 book behind as things update.



* AdaptationExpansion: With the Rotating POV employed in the story structure, people from other houses get much more attention then before.

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* AdaptationExpansion: With the Rotating rotating POV employed in the story structure, people from other houses Houses get much more attention then than before.
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Halloween, 1981. Lord Voldemort goes to Godric's Hollow to kill the only one who could defeat him. Like before, he dispatched James Potter. However, as a "favor" to Severus Snape, he only incapacitates and lightly tortures Lily Potter. Then he turns his wand on Harry Potter. You know the story from there: curse rebounds, found in the rubble, Harry rescued. But now with Lily still very alive despite everything, Harry Potter grows up for 11 years among muggles with a single mom. A chance at a normal life before going off to Hogwarts. Then after 11 years, it was finally time. And while Harry is just excited to learn magic, the presence of Ms. Evans will slowly change this world into one with unexpected changes.

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Halloween, 1981. Lord Voldemort goes to Godric's Hollow to kill the only one who could defeat him. Like before, he dispatched James Potter. However, as a "favor" to Severus Snape, he only incapacitates and lightly tortures Lily Potter. Then he turns his wand on Harry Potter. You know the story from there: curse rebounds, found in the rubble, Harry rescued. But now with Lily still very alive despite everything, Harry Potter grows up for 11 years among muggles Muggles with a single mom. A chance at a normal life before going off to Hogwarts. Then after 11 years, it was finally time. And while Harry is just excited to learn magic, the presence of Ms. Evans will slowly change this world into one with unexpected changes.
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->'''Hary''' ''Well, I made a strange dream. I was living with Aunt Petunia and Uncle Vernon, and they forced me to sleep in their cupboard under the stairs.''

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->'''Hary''' ->'''Harry''': ''Well, I made had a strange dream. I was living with Aunt Petunia and Uncle Vernon, and they forced me to sleep in their cupboard under the stairs.''
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* PolitenessJudo: Lily brings up the Malfoy's estranged niece as another relative who also made auror as a way to force them to grit and smile during the Quiddich World Cup. Cutting their ego to acknowledge the part of the black family they tried to disown.
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* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: Peter Pettigrew gets [[spoiler: Avadakadavrad by Snape in the 3rd year, trying to get Harry's blood]].


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**[[spoiler: Winkie]] is murdered at the Quiddich World Cup.

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** Thanks to the old familial connections, Remus and Sirius are mentioned right in the first chapter.
** With Lily going to the ministry so early, Rufus Scrimgimour, Kingsley Shacklebolt and Cornelius Fudge all appear early.

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** Thanks to the old familial connections, Remus and Sirius are mentioned right in the first real chapter.
** With Lily going to the ministry so early, in Harry's first year, Rufus Scrimgimour, Kingsley Shacklebolt and Cornelius Fudge all appear early.



* AmbiguouslyEvil: Snape. While still held as a spy who came to Dumbledore for help, the facts of Lily's survival actually makes his alignment even more murky on how he feels about changing himself.

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* AmbiguouslyEvil: Snape. While still held as a spy who came to Dumbledore for help, the facts of Lily's survival actually makes his alignment even more murky on how he feels about changing himself. Plus, he still has his prejudice against Harry.


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* DemotedToExtra: As Lily is Harry's stable connection to family, The Dursleys are reduced to the odd mention, though Petunia does appear for a guest appearance in Lily IV.


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* KarmaHoudini: Gilderoy Lockheart flees from Hogwarts rather getting obliviated, thus having no comeuppance for being a terrible teacher and a coward.


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* OutOfFocus: As Sirius Black is no longer The Prisoner of Azkaban, he actually has much less to do in the overall story so far, even if he technically appears on page more often.
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* ActionGirl:
** Lily decides that for her post boarding school life, she'll become and Auror, and so begins training to become just as good a witch as she was before, if not even better.
* AdaptationExpansion:
** With the Rotating POV employed in the story structure, people from other houses get much more attention then before.

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* ActionGirl:
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ActionGirl: Lily decides that for her post boarding school life, she'll become and an Auror, and so begins training to become just as good a witch as she was before, if not even better.
* AdaptationExpansion:
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AdaptationExpansion: With the Rotating POV employed in the story structure, people from other houses get much more attention then before.



** Thanks to involvement at [[spoiler: Peter Pettigrew]]'s trial, Barty Crouch appears a whole book early.
** Cho Chang gets a POV in book 1 for that game harry missed against Ravenclaw.

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** Thanks to involvement at the trial of [[spoiler: Peter Pettigrew]]'s trial, Pettigrew]], Barty Crouch appears a whole book early.
** Cho Chang gets a POV in book 1 for that during the Quiddich game harry Harry missed against Ravenclaw.



* AdaptationalKarma:
** Since Lily was able to vouch for him, Sirius Black only spent a month in Azkaban. A great step up, and allowing him to be an actual godfather for Harry for most of his life.

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* AdaptationalKarma:
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AdaptationalKarma: Since Lily was able to vouch for him, Sirius Black only spent a month in Azkaban. A great step up, and Azkaban as opposed to twelve years, allowing him to be an actual godfather for Harry for most of his life.



* DeathByAdaptation: Since they weren't allowed to cheat with the Time Turner in this version of events, [[spoiler: Buckbeak is actually executed]]

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* DeathByAdaptation: Since they weren't allowed to cheat with the Time Turner in this version of events, [[spoiler: Buckbeak is actually executed]]executed]].



** Harry is much more emotionally ready for Hogwarts thanks to a much more loving environment growing up.
** Since he's not treated like a shame, Harry took up Football (Soccer) as a child, showing that he always was sport inclined.

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** Harry is much more emotionally ready prepared for Hogwarts thanks to a much more loving environment growing up.
** Since he's not treated like a shame, Harry took up Football (Soccer) as a child, showing that he always was sport inclined.inclined towards sports.



** With Harry being escorted around in Year 2, Dobby's big plan to stop Harry from reaching Hogwarts isn't stopping the barrier, but decoupling the train car.

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** With Harry being escorted around in Year 2, Dobby's big plan to stop Harry from reaching Hogwarts isn't stopping the barrier, sealing off Platform 9 3/4, but decoupling the train car.car he's in.



* ShoutOut: The author is actually a big fan of the Franchise/AssassinsCreed games, and so in examining wizarding history, they'll occasionally throw in references to the games.

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* ShoutOut: The author is actually a big fan of the Franchise/AssassinsCreed ''Franchise/AssassinsCreed'' games, and so in examining wizarding history, they'll occasionally throw in references to the games.



** And the [[VideoGame/AssassinsCreedSyndicate Frye Twins]] were also a wizard pair.

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** And the [[VideoGame/AssassinsCreedSyndicate Frye Twins]] were also a wizard pair.pair.
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** Thanks to the old familial connections, Remus and Sirius are mentioned right in the first chapter.



** Nymphodora Tonks ends up doing Auror training alongside Lily, showing up 4 books early.
* AdaptationalKarma:
** Since Lily was able to vouch for him, Sirius Black only spent a month in Azkaban. A great step up, and allowing him to be an actual godfather for Harry for most of his life.



* LoveDodecahedron: Rather than Harry's more limited perspective, seeing inside several students heads creates all kinds of webs of attraction, friendship, crushing and desire. So much so that there's a joke from Parvati and Hannah going into book 3 of trying to match up people in their year to poke fun at how things will only get more complicated.

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* DeathByAdaptation: Since they weren't allowed to cheat with the Time Turner in this version of events, [[spoiler: Buckbeak is actually executed]]
* ForWantOfANail: When you start at the top of Harry's story and change such a big thing, the changes big and small will only begin to pile up.
** Harry is much more emotionally ready for Hogwarts thanks to a much more loving environment growing up.
** Since he's not treated like a shame, Harry took up Football (Soccer) as a child, showing that he always was sport inclined.
** With Harry visiting Godric's hollow on Halloween, when he returns he defeats the troll only with Hermione. This means that it takes much longer for Ron and Hermione to become actual friends rather than acquaintances through Harry.
** With Harry being escorted around in Year 2, Dobby's big plan to stop Harry from reaching Hogwarts isn't stopping the barrier, but decoupling the train car.
** Since Lily discouraged Harry from taking Divination, it's [[spoiler: Parvati]] who hears Trelawney's new prophecy.
* LoveDodecahedron: Rather than Harry's more limited perspective, seeing inside several students heads creates all kinds of webs of attraction, friendship, crushing and desire. So much so that there's a joke from Parvati and Hannah going into book 3 of trying to match up people in their year to poke fun at how things will only get more complicated.complicated.
* ShoutOut: The author is actually a big fan of the Franchise/AssassinsCreed games, and so in examining wizarding history, they'll occasionally throw in references to the games.
** For example, Savanrola was a rogue wizard, who was killed as a mercy.
** And the [[VideoGame/AssassinsCreedSyndicate Frye Twins]] were also a wizard pair.
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->'''Hary''' ''Well, I made a strange dream. I was living with Aunt Petunia and Uncle Vernon, and they forced me to sleep in their cupboard under the stairs.''
->'''Lily''': ''You call this a dream? I'd say it was a nightmare.''

Harry Potter and The Mother Who Lived is a ForWantOfANail fic in the ''Literature/HarryPotter'' universe by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Gracques/pseuds/Gracques Gracques]] on Fanfiction.net and Archive of our Own.

Halloween, 1981. Lord Voldemort goes to Godric's Hollow to kill the only one who could defeat him. Like before, he dispatched James Potter. However, as a "favor" to Severus Snape, he only incapacitates and lightly tortures Lily Potter. Then he turns his wand on Harry Potter. You know the story from there: curse rebounds, found in the rubble, Harry rescued. But now with Lily still very alive despite everything, Harry Potter grows up for 11 years among muggles with a single mom. A chance at a normal life before going off to Hogwarts. Then after 11 years, it was finally time. And while Harry is just excited to learn magic, the presence of Ms. Evans will slowly change this world into one with unexpected changes.

Read it [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13954101 here]] [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/33810715/chapters/84053710 or here]].

!! With the series ongoing spoilers will be off through "book 2" and will be at least 1 book behind as things update.

* ActionGirl:
** Lily decides that for her post boarding school life, she'll become and Auror, and so begins training to become just as good a witch as she was before, if not even better.
* AdaptationExpansion:
** With the Rotating POV employed in the story structure, people from other houses get much more attention then before.
* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: With Lily as a POV along with no fixed perspective, we actually begin meeting many people for the first time much earlier than in the novels.
** With Lily going to the ministry so early, Rufus Scrimgimour, Kingsley Shacklebolt and Cornelius Fudge all appear early.
** Thanks to involvement at [[spoiler: Peter Pettigrew]]'s trial, Barty Crouch appears a whole book early.
** Cho Chang gets a POV in book 1 for that game harry missed against Ravenclaw.
* AmbiguouslyEvil: Snape. While still held as a spy who came to Dumbledore for help, the facts of Lily's survival actually makes his alignment even more murky on how he feels about changing himself.
* BigDamnHeroes: Lily has a dramatic one near the end of Sorcerer's Stone when she comes in to duel Quirrel and save Harry.
* LoveDodecahedron: Rather than Harry's more limited perspective, seeing inside several students heads creates all kinds of webs of attraction, friendship, crushing and desire. So much so that there's a joke from Parvati and Hannah going into book 3 of trying to match up people in their year to poke fun at how things will only get more complicated.

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