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* AdaptationalBadass: This version of Gilderoy Lockhart isn't a fraud, and has actually done all the things he's written about in his books.

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* AdaptationalBadass: This version of Gilderoy Lockhart isn't a fraud, and has actually done all the things he's written about in his books. [[spoiler:He is also the one who kills Fenrir Greyback and his pack in revenge for turning and later killing his mother.]] Consequently, he is ''much'' more competent as a teacher and, judging by the chapter on his backstory, has genuinely good motivations for becoming a teacher and writing those books.

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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Vernon, Petunia and Marge Dursley all die within a few days of each other. Vernon gets killed by Grace Weitts out of revenge for his mistreatment of Harry. Petunia gets strangled by Marge Dursley, who was put under the Imperius Curse by Peter Pettigrew. Marge kills herself after murdering Petunia under the instructions of Pettigrew.]]

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[[spoiler:Vernon, Petunia and Marge Dursley all die within a few days of each other. Vernon gets killed by Grace Weitts out of revenge for his mistreatment of Harry. Petunia gets strangled by Marge Dursley, who was put under the Imperius Curse by Peter Pettigrew. Marge kills herself after murdering Petunia under the instructions of Pettigrew.]]
** [[spoiler:Fenrir Greyback, along with his entire werewolf pack are killed by Gilderoy Lockhart via fiendfyre in revenge for first turning, and then killing his mother. This takes place years before he's even introduced in canon.
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** [[spoiler:Taken UpToEleven with Bellatrix Black. She gave birth to Ares just so she could be used as a tool to resurrect Voldemort. She sent her own daughter off to Hogwarts with the horcrux diary and told her to write in it knowing full well that it would result in her death.]]


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** Book 2 - Chapter 31 [[spoiler:reveals that Ares Black was the one being possessed by Emily Riddle this whole time. She then manages to quickly overpower Harry, and takes him down to the Chamber of Secrets with the plan to use him as part of a ritual to create a body for herself.]]
** Book 2 - Chapter 33 [[spoiler:ends with the horcrux diary Emily Riddle partially succeeding in her plan to revive herself, and ends up with a new body of her own. There are now two versions of Emily Riddle out in the world.]]
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** The Dursley family where both mentally and physically abusive to Harry, treating him as little more then a slave, and even beating him to the point of him needing to be hospitilised. [[spoiler:Sort of subverted since both Vernon and Petunia had a compulsion spell cast on them by Peter Pettigrew to hate Harry back when he was first sent to them as a baby.]]

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** The Dursley family where both mentally and physically abusive to their nephew, Harry, treating him as little more then a slave, and even beating him to the point of him needing to be hospitilised. [[spoiler:Sort of subverted since both Vernon and Petunia had a compulsion spell cast on them by Peter Pettigrew to hate Harry back when he was first sent to them as a baby.]]
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** Gender-flipped in this case with Grace Weitts. Through her stoic exterior, she really does care about her little sister, Charlotte. Since there is an unwritten rule amongst the Slytherins for older students not to interfere with the drama of the younger students, Grace gives Harry private lessons in both active occlumency and combat magic in exchange for looking out for Charlotte. She also acts this way towards Daphne Greengrass too, who she sees as a second little sister, by keeping an eye on her from a distance, and giving her political advice.

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** Gender-flipped in this case with Grace Weitts. Through her stoic exterior, she really does care about her little sister, Charlotte. Since there is an unwritten rule amongst the Slytherins for older students not to interfere with the drama of the younger students, Grace gives Harry private lessons in both active occlumency and combat magic in exchange for looking out for Charlotte. She also Weitts, who acts this way towards for her actual little sister: Charlotte, family friend: Daphne Greengrass too, Greengrass, and Harry Potter, who she sees later comes to see as a second little sister, by keeping an eye on her from a distance, and giving her political advice.brother figure.
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* AdaptationalBadass: This version of Gilderoy Lockhart isn't a fraud, and has actually done all the things he's written about in his books.

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* BigBrotherInstinct: Gender-flipped in this case with Grace Weitts. Through her stoic exterior, she really does care about her little sister, Charlotte. Since there is an unwritten rule amongst the Slytherins for older students not to interfere with the drama of the younger students, Grace gives Harry private lessons in both active occlumency and combat magic in exchange for looking out for Charlotte. She also acts this way towards Daphne Greengrass too, who she sees as a second little sister, by keeping an eye on her from a distance, and giving her political advice.
* After Ginny gets sorted into Slytherin, Percy makes sure to meet up with her privately on a regular basis to make sure she is okay, and also to offer advice on how to fit in with the other Slytherins.

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Gender-flipped in this case with Grace Weitts. Through her stoic exterior, she really does care about her little sister, Charlotte. Since there is an unwritten rule amongst the Slytherins for older students not to interfere with the drama of the younger students, Grace gives Harry private lessons in both active occlumency and combat magic in exchange for looking out for Charlotte. She also acts this way towards Daphne Greengrass too, who she sees as a second little sister, by keeping an eye on her from a distance, and giving her political advice.
* ** After Ginny gets sorted into Slytherin, Percy makes sure to meet up with her privately on a regular basis to make sure she is okay, and also to offer advice on how to fit in with the other Slytherins.
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* After Ginny gets sorted into Slytherin, Percy makes sure to meet up with her privately on a regular basis to make sure she is okay, and also to offer advice on how to fit in with the other Slytherins.
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* ADeathInTheLimelight: [[spoiler:In Book 2 Chapter 13 we get a POV from the minor character, John Doe: an up and coming reporter for the Daily Prophet. This POV goes over his entire backstory, from how his parents died shortly after his birth, to him being send to live at an orphanage, to him attending Hogwarts, and finally him getting a job at the Daily Prophet. The chapter then ends with him being murdered on his way back to his apartment.]]

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* ADeathInTheLimelight: [[spoiler:In Book 2 Chapter 13 we get a POV from the minor character, John Doe: an up and coming reporter for the Daily Prophet. This POV goes over his entire backstory, from how his parents died shortly after his birth, to him being send sent to live at an orphanage, to him attending Hogwarts, and finally him getting a job at the Daily Prophet. The chapter then ends with him being murdered on his way back to his apartment.]]
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* AnimalEspionage: Harry buys a large number of snakes at Knockturn Alley, then releases them all over Hogwarts castle to act as his spies.

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* AnimalEspionage: Harry buys a large number of snakes at Knockturn Alley, then releases them all over Hogwarts castle to act as his spies.
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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Vernon and Petunia Dursley die in the span of a few days from each other. The former gets killed by Grace Weitts out of revenge for his mistreatment of Harry, and the latter gets strangled by Marge Dursley (who is under the Imperius Curse by Peter Pettigrew).]]

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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Vernon and [[spoiler:Vernon, Petunia and Marge Dursley all die in the span of within a few days from of each other. The former Vernon gets killed by Grace Weitts out of revenge for his mistreatment of Harry, and the latter Harry. Petunia gets strangled by Marge Dursley (who is Dursley, who was put under the Imperius Curse by Peter Pettigrew).Pettigrew. Marge kills herself after murdering Petunia under the instructions of Pettigrew.]]
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* AnimalEspionage: Harry buys a large number of snakes at Knockturn Alley, then releases them all over Hogwarts castle to act as his spies.



* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:In the last chapter of Book 1: ''"The Forsaken’s Ascension"'', Harry and Charlus work together to stop Voldemort from getting the Philosopher's Stone, and manage to vanquish her once more. Harry also manages to get straight Os in all his classes, and even got three O+s, which has only ever been done once before by someone in their 1st year at Hogwarts . . . . but due to Harry hesitating when Voldemort asks him to join her, him and Charlus are once more at odds with each other. Not to mention Harry is also forced to go back to the Dursleys instead of going to live with his father and brother like what was originally planned. This, according to Dumbledore, is because if Harry stops living with the Dursleys then the protection wards around their house will deactivate, which Dumbledore doesn't want to happen in case Voldemort ever truly returns in the future and Charlus needs somewhere to safely hide away.]]

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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:In the last chapter of Book 1: ''"The Forsaken’s Ascension"'', Harry and Charlus work together to stop Voldemort from getting the Philosopher's Stone, and manage to vanquish her once more. Harry also manages to get straight Os in all his classes, and even got three O+s, which has only ever been done once before by someone in their 1st year at Hogwarts . . . .Hogwarts.... but due to Harry hesitating when Voldemort asks him to join her, him and Charlus are once more at odds with each other. Not to mention Harry is also forced to go back to the Dursleys instead of going to live with his father and brother like what was originally planned. This, according to Dumbledore, is because if Harry stops living with the Dursleys then the protection wards around their house will deactivate, which Dumbledore doesn't want to happen in case Voldemort ever truly returns in the future and Charlus needs somewhere to safely hide away.]]
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* PutOnABus: [[spoiler:Draco Malfoy gets pulled out of Hogwarts by his parents during the middle of his second year and gets sent to Beauxbatons. This is due to all the bad publicity he accumulated for the Malfoy family during his time there.]]
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: James Potter: Lord of The Ancient and Most Noble House of Potter, and the father of Harry and Charlus. When attacking Godric's Hollow, Voldemort knocks James out rather then killing him like in canon.

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* SparedByTheAdaptation: James Potter: Lord of The Ancient and Most Noble House of Potter, and the father of Harry and Charlus.Potter. When attacking Godric's Hollow, Voldemort knocks James out rather then killing him like in canon.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: Charlus, Ron, and Hermione in regards to their polyjuice scheme. The plan was to infiltrate the Slytherin common room in order to question Harry about the Heir of Slytherin incidents. The problem is that they planned to go as Crabbe, Goyle, and Bulstrode: three people they know absolutely nothing about. So not only did they not know that Harry wasn't on speaking terms with any of those three, they also didn't know how to act like them at all. Hermione didn't even make it to the common room, since she added Bulstrode's cat's hair to her potion, rather then the hair of the girl herself. To add insult to injury they had no chance of getting away with it anyway, due to Harry being warned about their plan weeks in advance by Pansy, who found out their whole plan by speaking to Moaning Myrtle.
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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Vernon and Petunia Dursley die in the span of a few days from each other. The former gets killed by Grace Weitts out of revenge for his mistreatment of Harry, and the latter gets strangled by Marge Dursley (who is under the Imperius Curse by Peter Pettigrew).]]
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** Not only did Harry get treated as little more than a slave by the Dursleys, but they where also both mentally and physically abusive to him. He even ended up in the hospital once after one of his uncle Vernon's beatings.

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** Not only did Harry get treated as little more than a slave by the Dursleys, but they The Dursley family where also both mentally and physically abusive to him. He Harry, treating him as little more then a slave, and even ended up in beating him to the hospital once after one point of his uncle Vernon's beatings. him needing to be hospitilised. [[spoiler:Sort of subverted since both Vernon and Petunia had a compulsion spell cast on them by Peter Pettigrew to hate Harry back when he was first sent to them as a baby.]]
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* Blackmail: Lucius Malfoy sets Rita Skeeter up for [[spoiler:murdering John Doe: her rival reporter at the Daily Prophet]], along with showing her proof of both her affair with [[spoiler:Barnabas Cuffe]], which resulted in a child, and also [[spoiler:the murder of Barnabas' wife.]] He then uses this information to blackmail her into writing articles of his choosing.
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* Blackmail: Lucius Malfoy sets Rita Skeeter up for [[spoiler:murdering John Doe: her rival reporter at the Daily Prophet]], along with showing her proof of both her affair with [[spoiler:Barnabas Cuffe]], which resulted in a child, and also [[spoiler:the murder of Barnabas' wife.]] He then uses this information to blackmail her into writing articles of his choosing.
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* FakeMemories: [[spoiler:Evan Rosier]] plants false memories in Charlus' head to make him think it was Harry that taught him dark magic, rather then himself. This is done with the intention to both get Harry expelled from Hogwarts, and to cause further rift between the Potter twins, [[spoiler:the latter of which succeeds.]]
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* EntropyAndChaosMagic: There is a branch of magic called Chaos Magic. It is considered to be so taboo that all knowledge of it has been buried, to the point where only a select few people know it even exists, and even those that do rarely speak of it. Those who do try to speak of it publically tend to be silenced. Magic that fall under this catagory include [[spoiler:Priori Incantatem]] and [[spoiler:Fiendfyre.]]
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** Mr. Bellona, Charlus' magic tutor, [[spoiler:is actually Evan Rosier: a Death Eater, and member of Lady Voldemort's inner circle.]]

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** Mr. Bellona, Charlus' magic tutor, [[spoiler:is is actually Evan [[spoiler:Evan Rosier: a Death Eater, and member of Lady Voldemort's inner circle.]]

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* SecretIdentity: Amelia Hurst, the Defense Against The Dark Arts professor during Harry's first year at Hogwarts, is actually [[spoiler:an unnamed American witch being possessed by Voldemort.]]

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Amelia Hurst, the Defense Against The Dark Arts professor during Harry's first year at Hogwarts, is actually [[spoiler:an unnamed American witch being possessed by Voldemort.]]]]
** Mr. Bellona, Charlus' magic tutor, [[spoiler:is actually Evan Rosier: a Death Eater, and member of Lady Voldemort's inner circle.]]
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* Book 1 - ''"The Forsaken’s Ascension"''
* Book 2 - ''"The Sacrificial Slytherin"''

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* Book 1 - ''"The ''The Forsaken’s Ascension"''
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* Book 2 - ''"The ''The Sacrificial Slytherin"''Slytherin''
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* SpeaksFluentAnimal: Emily Riddle (Voldemort), and Harry Potter are parselmouths.

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* SpeaksFluentAnimal: Emily Riddle (Voldemort), and Harry Potter, and Charlus Potter are parselmouths.can speak parseltongue.

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* OriginalCharacter: Charlus Potter: Harry's younger twin brother, and ''The-Boy-Who-Lived''.

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Charlus Potter: Harry's younger twin brother, and ''The-Boy-Who-Lived''.''The-Boy-Who-Lived''.
** The Weitts family, consisting of Giaus, Adriana, Sigmund, Grace, and Charlotte.
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* OriginalCharacter: Charlus Potter: Harry's younger twin brother, and ''The-Boy-Who-Lived''.
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