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* ArtisticLicenseLaw: Hoo-boy, '' yes''. As cathartic as it is, most of the things that go down during the trial would never be allowed to happen in a courtroom.
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* CentralTheme: Karma will eventually reach anyone, even if they got away with many wrongdoings.
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* CentralTheme: CentralTheme:
** Karma will eventually reach anyone, even if they got away with manywrongdoings.wrongdoings.
** Family can be born from blood or bonds. Lincoln faces the dilemma of his blood family and his found family, learning that family can come from anywhere, but to not dismiss his blood family too.
** Karma will eventually reach anyone, even if they got away with many
** Family can be born from blood or bonds. Lincoln faces the dilemma of his blood family and his found family, learning that family can come from anywhere, but to not dismiss his blood family too.
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* AdaptationalSeriousness: Constrasting the show's nature of playing the abuse Lincoln suffers for laughs, the fanfic plays it for drama and shows how Lincoln was really affected by it.
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* DownOnTheFarm: The 16th episode takes place at Liam's family farm, where Lincoln and his friends arrive to help Liam with the farm chores. HilarityEnsues.
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* DownOnTheFarm: The 16th episode takes place at Liam's family farm, where Lincoln and his friends arrive to help Liam with the farm chores. HilarityEnsues.Hilarity ensues.
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* PuppyDogEyes: In the 20th chapter, when Lincoln has to visit Dr. Lopez for his problems, but refuses to do so because he's shy, Dana tries this on him, coupled with BabyTalk, to convince him to go. He still refuses, leading all of the girls to do it. And when Lincoln refuses again, Haiku cranks it UpToEleven by playing Moonlight Sonata. This combination finally makes Lincoln give up to the gals and accept to go, much to their joy.
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* PuppyDogEyes: In the 20th chapter, when Lincoln has to visit Dr. Lopez for his problems, but refuses to do so because he's shy, Dana tries this on him, coupled with BabyTalk, to convince him to go. He still refuses, leading all of the girls to do it. And when Lincoln refuses again, Haiku cranks it UpToEleven by playing plays Moonlight Sonata. This combination finally makes Lincoln give up to the gals and accept to go, much to their joy.
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* DownOnTheFarm: The 16th episode takes place at Liam's family farm, where Lincoln and his friends arrive to help Liam with the farm chores. HilarityEnsues.
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* BigDamnHeroes: During the huge park brawl against Lori and Lynn, Ronnie Anne and Carlota arrive in the nick of time to save Lincoln from Lori and Lynn's clutches.
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* PuppyDogEyes: In the 20th chapter, when Lincoln has to visit Dr. Lopez for his problems, but refuses to do so because he's shy, Dana tries this on him, coupled with ''BabyTalk'', to convince him to go. He still refuses, leading all of the girls to do it. And when Lincoln refuses again, Haiku cranks it ''UpToEleven'' by playing Moonlight Sonata. This combination finally makes Lincoln give up to the gals and accept to go, much to their joy.
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* PuppyDogEyes: In the 20th chapter, when Lincoln has to visit Dr. Lopez for his problems, but refuses to do so because he's shy, Dana tries this on him, coupled with ''BabyTalk'', BabyTalk, to convince him to go. He still refuses, leading all of the girls to do it. And when Lincoln refuses again, Haiku cranks it ''UpToEleven'' UpToEleven by playing Moonlight Sonata. This combination finally makes Lincoln give up to the gals and accept to go, much to their joy.
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* PuppyDogEyes: In the 20th chapter, when Lincoln has to visit Dr. Lopez for his problems, but refuses to do so because he's shy, Dana tries this on him, coupled with [[BabyTalk]], to convince him to go. He still refuses, leading all of the girls to do it. And when Lincoln refuses again, Haiku cranks it [[UpToEleven]] by playing Moonlight Sonata. This combination finally makes Lincoln give up to the gals and accept to go, much to their joy.
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* PuppyDogEyes: In the 20th chapter, when Lincoln has to visit Dr. Lopez for his problems, but refuses to do so because he's shy, Dana tries this on him, coupled with [[BabyTalk]], ''BabyTalk'', to convince him to go. He still refuses, leading all of the girls to do it. And when Lincoln refuses again, Haiku cranks it [[UpToEleven]] ''UpToEleven'' by playing Moonlight Sonata. This combination finally makes Lincoln give up to the gals and accept to go, much to their joy.
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* PuppyDogEyes: In the 20th chapter, when Lincoln has to visit Dr. Lopez for his problems, but refuses to do so because he's shy, Dana tries this on him, coupled with [[BabyTalk]], to convince him to go. He still refuses, leading all of the girls to do it. And when Lincoln refuses again, Haiku cranks it [[UpToEleven]] by playing Moonlight Sonata. This combination finally makes Lincoln give up to the gals and accept to go, much to their joy.
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* ContinuityNod: Many episodes of the show up to the point the fanfic was written are mentioned, sometimes multiple times, and this trope is especially in use during the trial towards the end.
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*BerserkButton: The Squirrel Suit become this for Lincoln, to the point that seeing it throws him into a blind rage that he tears it apart in the middle of court.
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* AccusationFic: The fanfic serves to make sure that the Loud Sisters reveive commeupance for their past behavior towards Lincoln, with everyone calling them out.
* CentralTheme: Karma will eventually reach anyone, evem if they got away with many wrongdoings.
* CentralTheme: Karma will eventually reach anyone, evem if they got away with many wrongdoings.
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* AccusationFic: The fanfic serves to make sure that the Loud Sisters reveive commeupance receive comeuppance for their past behavior towards Lincoln, with everyone calling them out.
* CentralTheme: Karma will eventually reach anyone,evem even if they got away with many wrongdoings.
* CentralTheme: Karma will eventually reach anyone,
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* CentralTheme: Karma will eventually reach anyone, evem if they got away with many wrongdoings.
* CentralTheme: Karma will eventually reach anyone, evem if they got away with many wrongdoings.
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* DeconstructionFic: The fic shows how Lincoln's ButtMonkey status and tumultuous family have turned him into a depressed and meek wreck of a person. Once others gain insight into Lincoln's unenviable situation, they immediately intervene and try and pull him away from his dysfunctional family.
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* StayingWithFriends: Starting with Chapter 3, Lincoln stays at some of the Gal Pals' homes (Girl Jordan, Stella and Carol especially), switching between each girl at some chapters.
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* SocialServicesDoesNotExist: Averted hard. Once other people become aware of the trauma Lincoln has endured at the hands of his sisters, they immediately contact child services.
* StayingWithFriends: Starting with Chapter 3, Lincoln stays at some of the Gal Pals' homes (Girl Jordan, Stella and Carol especially), switching between each girlat in some chapters.
* StayingWithFriends: Starting with Chapter 3, Lincoln stays at some of the Gal Pals' homes (Girl Jordan, Stella and Carol especially), switching between each girl
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* StayingWithFriends: Starting with Chapter 3, Lincoln stays at some of the Gal Pals' homes (Girl Jordan, Stella and Carol especially), switching between each girl at some chapters.chapters.
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Gal Pals is a [[WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse Loud House]]-based fanfic created by Alex Veres on fanfiction.net, where he goes by [[https://m.fanfiction.net/u/10278909/]].
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Gal Pals is a [[WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse Loud House]]-based fanfic created by Alex Veres on fanfiction.net, where he goes by [[https://m.fanfiction.net/u/10278909/]].net/u/10278909/ Alexpv22]].
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Gal Pals is a [[WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse Loud House]]-based fanfic created by Alex Veres on fanfiction.net, where he goes by Alexpv22.
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Gal Pals is a [[WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse Loud House]]-based fanfic created by Alex Veres on fanfiction.net, where he goes by Alexpv22.[[https://m.fanfiction.net/u/10278909/]].
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It focuses on Lincoln Loud, where after a bad evening at the house, due to a golf game lost by Lori, plus the infamous Sister Fight Protocol from "[[Recap/TheLoudHouseS2E3BabyStepsBrawlInTheFamily Brawl in the Family]]", Lincoln has to flee outside in the streets to escape the chaos and the mistreatment given by the Protocol. When his luck rans out, he gets spotted, not by the police, but by three high schoolers: Carol Pingrey, Becky and Whitney, who all gently take him to Gus' Games 'n' Grub so that Lincoln can relieve himself. From that event, many girls rejoin him, being Lincoln's Gal Pals, hence the fanfic's name. And from there, things turn into real chaos soon for the Loud family, minus Lincoln, once the words are spat...
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It focuses on Lincoln Loud, where after a bad evening at the house, due to a golf game lost by Lori, plus the return of the infamous Sister Fight Protocol from "[[Recap/TheLoudHouseS2E3BabyStepsBrawlInTheFamily Brawl in the Family]]", Lincoln has to flee outside in the streets to escape the chaos and the mistreatment given by the Protocol. When his luck rans out, he gets spotted, not by the police, but by three high schoolers: Carol Pingrey, Becky and Whitney, who all gently take him to Gus' Games 'n' Grub so that Lincoln can relieve himself. From that event, many girls rejoin him, being Lincoln's Gal Pals, hence the fanfic's name. And from there, things turn into real chaos soon for the Loud family, minus Lincoln, once the words are spat...
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It can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13239909/1/Gal-Pals here]]:
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* IntergenerationalFriendship: Half of the Gal Pals (Carol, Becky, Whitney, and Dana), are teenagers, but become great friends with Lincoln.
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* IntergenerationalFriendship: Half of the Gal Pals (Carol, Becky, Whitney, and Dana), are teenagers, but become great friends with Lincoln.Lincoln.
* StayingWithFriends: Starting with Chapter 3, Lincoln stays at some of the Gal Pals' homes (Girl Jordan, Stella and Carol especially), switching between each girl at some chapters.
* StayingWithFriends: Starting with Chapter 3, Lincoln stays at some of the Gal Pals' homes (Girl Jordan, Stella and Carol especially), switching between each girl at some chapters.
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* IntergenerationalFriendship: Half of the Gal Pals (Carol, Becky, Whitney, and Dana), are teenagers, but become great friends with Lincoln.
* IntergenerationalFriendship: Half of the Gal Pals (Carol, Becky, Whitney, and Dana), are teenagers, but become great friends with Lincoln.
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Gal Pals is a WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse-based fanfic created by Alex Veres on fanfiction.net, where he goes by Alexpv22.
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Gal Pals is a WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse-based [[WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse Loud House]]-based fanfic created by Alex Veres on fanfiction.net, where he goes by Alexpv22.
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Gal Pals is a ''WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse''-based fanfic created by Alex Veres on fanfiction.net, where he goes by Alexpv22.
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Gal Pals is a ''WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse''-based WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse-based fanfic created by Alex Veres on fanfiction.net, where he goes by Alexpv22.
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Gal Pals is a Loud House-based fanfic created by Alex Veres on fanfiction.net, where he goes by Alexpv22.
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Gal Pals is a Loud House-based ''WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse''-based fanfic created by Alex Veres on fanfiction.net, where he goes by Alexpv22.
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A sequel came out, titled [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13387315/1/A-Day-in-the-Life-of-the-Gal-Pals A Day in the Life of the Gal Pals]], where it shows Lincoln's new life with his new caretakers after the trial.
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A sequel came out, titled [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13387315/1/A-Day-in-the-Life-of-the-Gal-Pals A Day in the Life of the Gal Pals]], where it shows Lincoln's new life with his new caretakers after the trial.trial.
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!!''Gal Pals'' provides examples of:
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It can be read here [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13239909/1/Gal-Pals]]:
A sequel came out, titled [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13387315/1/A-Day-in-the-Life-of-the-Gal-Pals]], where it shows Lincoln's new life with his new caretakers after the trial.
A sequel came out, titled [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13387315/1/A-Day-in-the-Life-of-the-Gal-Pals]], where it shows Lincoln's new life with his new caretakers after the trial.
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It can be read here [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13239909/1/Gal-Pals]]:
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A sequel came out, titled [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13387315/1/A-Day-in-the-Life-of-the-Gal-Pals]], net/s/13387315/1/A-Day-in-the-Life-of-the-Gal-Pals A Day in the Life of the Gal Pals]], where it shows Lincoln's new life with his new caretakers after the trial.
A sequel came out, titled [[https://www.fanfiction.
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Gal Pals is a Loud House-based fanfic created by Alex Veres on fanfiction.net, where he goes by Alexpv22.
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Gal Pals is a Loud House-based fanfic created by Alex Veres on fanfiction.net, where he goes by Alexpv22.
It focuses on Lincoln Loud, where after a bad evening at the house, due to a golf game lost by Lori, plus the infamous Sister Fight Protocol from "[[Recap/TheLoudHouseS2E3BabyStepsBrawlInTheFamily Brawl in the Family]]", Lincoln has to flee outside in the streets to escape the chaos and the mistreatment given by the Protocol. When his luck rans out, he gets spotted, not by the police, but by three high schoolers: Carol Pingrey, Becky and Whitney, who all gently take him to Gus' Games 'n' Grub so that Lincoln can relieve himself. From that event, many girls rejoin him, being Lincoln's Gal Pals, hence the fanfic's name. And from there, things turn into real chaos soon for the Loud family, minus Lincoln, once the words are spat...
It can be read here [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13239909/1/Gal-Pals]]:
A sequel came out, titled [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13387315/1/A-Day-in-the-Life-of-the-Gal-Pals]], where it shows Lincoln's new life with his new caretakers after the trial.
It focuses on Lincoln Loud, where after a bad evening at the house, due to a golf game lost by Lori, plus the infamous Sister Fight Protocol from "[[Recap/TheLoudHouseS2E3BabyStepsBrawlInTheFamily Brawl in the Family]]", Lincoln has to flee outside in the streets to escape the chaos and the mistreatment given by the Protocol. When his luck rans out, he gets spotted, not by the police, but by three high schoolers: Carol Pingrey, Becky and Whitney, who all gently take him to Gus' Games 'n' Grub so that Lincoln can relieve himself. From that event, many girls rejoin him, being Lincoln's Gal Pals, hence the fanfic's name. And from there, things turn into real chaos soon for the Loud family, minus Lincoln, once the words are spat...
It can be read here [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13239909/1/Gal-Pals]]:
A sequel came out, titled [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13387315/1/A-Day-in-the-Life-of-the-Gal-Pals]], where it shows Lincoln's new life with his new caretakers after the trial.
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