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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/2367680/chapters/5228345 Future Earth, Future Sky]]'' by ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Inky/pseuds/Inky Inky]]'' is a [[SlashFic Sousuke/Makoto]] ''Anime/Free'' ''Anime/Free!'' FanFic in which Sousuke and Makoto meet and fall in love upon meeting each other in college.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/2367680/chapters/5228345 Future Earth, Future Sky]]'' by ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Inky/pseuds/Inky Inky]]'' is a [[SlashFic Sousuke/Makoto]] ''Anime/Free'' FanFic in which Sousuke and Makoto meet and fall in love upon meeting each other in college.
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!! ''Future Earth, Future Sky'' provides examples of:
* AlmostKiss: Sousuke almost kisses Makoto… until thunder scares Makoto off balance
* BewareTheNiceOnes: Makoto upon Sousuke [[WhatTheHell,Hero? dumping him over text.]]
* BigBrotherInstinct: Haruka to Makoto and Rin to Haru.
* BreakTheHaughty: Sousuke starts the story as this, as best exemplified during his practice match with Makoto.
* ClosetKey: Makoto is this for Sousuke
* ComingofAgeStory
* DumpedViaTextMessage: Sousuke, overwhelmed by his own internal issues, breaks up with Makoto. Makoto, justifiably angry at being dumped over text, rushes over to Sousuke’s house. See above.
* EroticDream: Makoto often finds himself having these about Sousuke when they meet in college. Sousuke later confesses that the same thing happened for him too.
* EveryoneIsBi: Makoto is gay, Sousuke is attracted to men (although he isn’t sure of his exact sexuality), Haru is ace, most original characters are queer of some sort, etc.
* ExtremeDoormat: Makoto openly acknowledges this to be one of his biggest faults, which becomes a major plot point when he finds that he can’t bring it in himself to tell Sousuke that he needs sex.
* FirstLove: Sousuke is this for Makoto
* FriendVersusLover: One of the bigger conflicts in Makoto’s and Sousuke’s relationship is that Sousuke can’t find it in himself to get along with Haruka
* GayMentor: Sato is very well-versed with issues regarding different sexualities and is usually who the characters struggling with elements of their sexuality go to for help
* It’sNotYou,It’s Me: Sousuke finds his own internal struggles with his medication and recovering from his broken shoulder too overwhelming combined with his relationship with Makoto. He lists these as the reasons why he’s breaking up with him through text.
* JustTheWayYouAre: Makoto essentially says this to Sousuke, leading to them getting back together.
* Inorgasmia: Due to the medication pills Sousuke is taking, he finds himself unable to properly function sexually. Much to Makoto’s chagrin.
* NiceGuy: Makoto. Both Sousuke and Haru say he’s one to a fault.
* NoAntagonist: Almost every character is portrayed very sympathetically, and most of the story’s central conflict comes from the internalized battles of the characters as well as relationship conflicts.
* OfficialCouple: Sousuke and Makoto
* PapaWolf: Sousuke’s father to the point where it borders on being an Overprotective Dad.
* ParentsAsPeople: While Sousuke’s father clearly loves his son, he’s also very overprotective and has some of the same faults as his son
* Pride: Sousuke openly admits this to be one of his biggest flaws
* Pseudo-RomanticFriendship: Haruka describes his queerplatonic feelings for Makoto as ‘platonic soulmates’
* ShipperOnDeck: Sato is a very avid supporter of Makoto’s and Sousuke’s blossoming relationship
* SingleWomanSeeksGoodMan: Makoto falls in love with Sousuke in large part due to the kindness he displays even in Sousuke’s darkest times.
* StrongFamilyResemblance: Makoto notes that Sousuke looks exactly like his father
* TheirFirstTime: Makoto and Sousuke, eventually
* WhatTheHell,Hero: Rin calls out Sousuke and Makoto for their relationship neglecting Makoto and Haruka’s friendship
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!! ''Future Earth, Future Sky'' provides examples of:
* AlmostKiss: Sousuke almost kisses Makoto… until thunder scares Makoto off balance
* BewareTheNiceOnes: Makoto upon Sousuke [[WhatTheHell,Hero? dumping him over text.]]
* BigBrotherInstinct: Haruka to Makoto and Rin to Haru.
* BreakTheHaughty: Sousuke starts the story as this, as best exemplified during his practice match with Makoto.
* ClosetKey: Makoto is this for Sousuke
* ComingofAgeStory
* DumpedViaTextMessage: Sousuke, overwhelmed by his own internal issues, breaks up with Makoto. Makoto, justifiably angry at being dumped over text, rushes over to Sousuke’s house. See above.
* EroticDream: Makoto often finds himself having these about Sousuke when they meet in college. Sousuke later confesses that the same thing happened for him too.
* EveryoneIsBi: Makoto is gay, Sousuke is attracted to men (although he isn’t sure of his exact sexuality), Haru is ace, most original characters are queer of some sort, etc.
* ExtremeDoormat: Makoto openly acknowledges this to be one of his biggest faults, which becomes a major plot point when he finds that he can’t bring it in himself to tell Sousuke that he needs sex.
* FirstLove: Sousuke is this for Makoto
* FriendVersusLover: One of the bigger conflicts in Makoto’s and Sousuke’s relationship is that Sousuke can’t find it in himself to get along with Haruka
* GayMentor: Sato is very well-versed with issues regarding different sexualities and is usually who the characters struggling with elements of their sexuality go to for help
* It’sNotYou,It’s Me: Sousuke finds his own internal struggles with his medication and recovering from his broken shoulder too overwhelming combined with his relationship with Makoto. He lists these as the reasons why he’s breaking up with him through text.
* JustTheWayYouAre: Makoto essentially says this to Sousuke, leading to them getting back together.
* Inorgasmia: Due to the medication pills Sousuke is taking, he finds himself unable to properly function sexually. Much to Makoto’s chagrin.
* NiceGuy: Makoto. Both Sousuke and Haru say he’s one to a fault.
* NoAntagonist: Almost every character is portrayed very sympathetically, and most of the story’s central conflict comes from the internalized battles of the characters as well as relationship conflicts.
* OfficialCouple: Sousuke and Makoto
* PapaWolf: Sousuke’s father to the point where it borders on being an Overprotective Dad.
* ParentsAsPeople: While Sousuke’s father clearly loves his son, he’s also very overprotective and has some of the same faults as his son
* Pride: Sousuke openly admits this to be one of his biggest flaws
* Pseudo-RomanticFriendship: Haruka describes his queerplatonic feelings for Makoto as ‘platonic soulmates’
* ShipperOnDeck: Sato is a very avid supporter of Makoto’s and Sousuke’s blossoming relationship
* SingleWomanSeeksGoodMan: Makoto falls in love with Sousuke in large part due to the kindness he displays even in Sousuke’s darkest times.
* StrongFamilyResemblance: Makoto notes that Sousuke looks exactly like his father
* TheirFirstTime: Makoto and Sousuke, eventually
* WhatTheHell,Hero: Rin calls out Sousuke and Makoto for their relationship neglecting Makoto and Haruka’s friendship
