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* ShipTease: There's a lot of subtext between [[Dacey Mormont and Jaime Lannister.]]
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* ShipTease: There's a lot of subtext between [[Dacey [[spoiler: Dacey Mormont and Jaime Lannister.]]
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* InSpiteOfNail: [[spoiler: Jaime still loses his hand, its just that its his left.]]
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* InSpiteOfNail: InSpiteOfANail: [[spoiler: Jaime still loses his hand, its just that its his left.]]
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* InSpiteOfNail: [[spoiler: Jaime still loses his hand, its just that its his left.]]
* ObnoxiousInLaws: Subverted. Catelyn doesn't like Daenerys initially, but doesn't get enough interaction with her to become this trope. Later on they start to get along.
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* ObnoxiousInLaws: Subverted. Catelyn doesn't like Daenerys initially, but doesn't get enough interaction with her to become this trope. Later on they start to get along.ShipTease: There's a lot of subtext between [[Dacey Mormont and Jaime Lannister.]]
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* BeneathSuspicion: Subverted. Tywin notices that his cupbearer[[hottip:*:It's Arya in disguise]] is little too smart to a common girl like she claims to be.
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* BeneathSuspicion: Subverted. Tywin notices that his cupbearer[[hottip:*:It's Arya in disguise]] is little too smart to be a common girl like she claims to be.
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* ADayInTheLimelight: The fic focuses on Daenerys and Robb, but has interludes to show what's going on in the outside world. So far the interludes have been narrated by Tyrion, Jorah, Sansa, and Tywin.
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* FingerInTheMail: Tywin orders Tyrion to cut off Sansa Stark's finger and send it to her brother as a warning. Tyrion [[EveryoneHasStandards can't bring himself to hurt her]], so he sends Bronn to pay a lowborn girl for her finger.
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* InSeriesNickname: [[spoiler: The Ice Dragon, for Iagan Stark. It's a nod to his heritage as a Stark and a Targaryen]]
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* BabiesMakeEverythingBetter: Daenerys is pregnant with Robb's heir, which improves her relationship with Robb and his mother Catelyn.
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* BabiesMakeEverythingBetter: Daenerys is pregnant with gives birth to Robb's heir, Iagan Stark, which improves her relationship with Robb and his mother Catelyn.
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* BirthDeathJuxtaposition: [[spoiler: Iagan Stark is born as Stark men purge the Ironborn from Winterfell. Lampshaded when the narrative describes how father and son are both covered in blood, but for different reasons.]]
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* ApeShallNeverKillApe: Because of this trope, [[spoiler: Theon]] stayed neutral when his people [[spoiler: attacked Winterfell]]. This makes [[spoiler: Robb]] lose faith in him, even going as far as to call him an oath breaker.
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* CrazyJealousGuy: [[spoiler: Jorah, who's in love with a married woman, though that's not much he can do about it.]]
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* TearfulSmile: When Dany first tells Robb that she's pregnant.
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* BirthDeathJuxtaposition: [[spoiler: Iagan Stark is born as Stark men purge the Ironborn from Winterfell.]]
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* TravelingAtTheSpeedOfPlot: [[spoiler: Daenerys must have been in labor a long time if Robb was able to march to Winterfell, fight off the Ironborn, and be there in time to witness his son's birth.]]
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* TheConfidant: Dacey Mormont to Danerys Stark. Guess it runs in the family.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9373351/1/Frozen-Fire Frozen Fire]] by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4352373/rainonmonday rainonmonday]] is a Robb Stark/Daenerys Targaryen Shipping and A/U fanfiction. It has been generally well received by fans.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9373351/1/Frozen-Fire Frozen Fire]] by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4352373/rainonmonday rainonmonday]] is a AU fanfiction of ASongOfIceAndFire[=/=]GameOfThrones. In it, Robb Stark/Daenerys Stark marries Daenerys Targaryen Shipping and A/U fanfiction.at the beginning of the series, altering both their storylines. It has been generally well received by fans.
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* HonorBeforeReason: Reconstructed. Eddard Stark's decision to marry his son to the sister of the king's worst enemy came with some huge risks, but so far things have worked out well for the young couple.
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* HonorBeforeReason: Reconstructed. Eddard Stark's decision to marry his son to the sister of the king's worst enemy came (because he didn't want another innocent person to die)came with some huge risks, but so far things have worked out well for the young couple.
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* LadyMacbeth[=/=]ManipulativeBitch: Daenerys is accused of being such, but she isn't.
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* LadyMacbeth[=/=]ManipulativeBitch: Many people believe that Daenerys is accused of being such, just using Robb to get the Iron Throne. While she does want the throne, she genuinely loves him and isn't manipulating him at all. Interestingly enough, she did consider manipulating him in the first chapter, but she isn't.that never came to fruition.
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* WhatTheHellHero: In chapter seven, Robb gets angry and Daenerys for only thinking about how to get the throne without any thought to the consequences it might have for his family.
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* WhatTheHellHero: In chapter seven, Robb gets angry and at Daenerys for only thinking about how to get the throne without any thought to the consequences it might have for his family.
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* GreenEyedMonster: Theon is jealous of Dany because was welcomed into the Stark family while he wasn't.
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* GreenEyedMonster: Theon is jealous of Dany because she was welcomed into the Stark family while he wasn't.
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* CoolBigSis: Dany is to Bran and Rickon.
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* CoolBigSis: Dany is one to Bran and Rickon.Rickon, especially since the rest of their family is away.
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** [[spoiler: Jorah travels back to the North, where he is wanted, in hopes of being with Daenerys again.]]
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** [[spoiler: Jorah travels back to the North, where he is wanted, wanted as a fugitive, in hopes of being with Daenerys again.]]
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* {{Turncoat}}: Many houses in the Reach turns against their liege lords the Tyrells to support the Starks because they don't agree with the Tyrell's schemes to make Maegery queen.
* UndyingLoyalty: Irri, Jhiqui and Doreah followed Dany all the way to Winterfell, becoming the first Dothrahki to do so.
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* {{Turncoat}}: Many houses in the Reach turns turn against their liege lords the Tyrells to support the Starks because they don't agree with the Tyrell's schemes plot to make Maegery Maergery queen.
* UndyingLoyalty: Irri, Jhiqui and Doreah followed Dany all the way across the Narrow Sea, to Winterfell, becoming the firstDothrahki Dothraki to do so.
* UndyingLoyalty: Irri, Jhiqui and Doreah followed Dany all the way across the Narrow Sea, to Winterfell, becoming the first
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* CoolBigSis: Deconstructed. Dany is to Bran and Rickon, but she can't take the place of their family.
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Eddard Stark offered her a deal. Safe return to the Seven Kingdoms but in exchange she would need to marry his son, to keep her under watch instead of killing her like Robert wanted. She accepted because she believed she could work on her plans from within. She could turn the Young Wolf in her ally. But she wasn't expecting Robb Stark not to be like the men she knew.
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Eddard Stark offered her a deal. Safe return to the Seven Kingdoms but in exchange she would need to marry his son, to keep her under watch instead of killing her like Robert wanted. She accepted because she believed she could work on her plans from within. She could turn the Young Wolf in her ally. But she wasn't expecting Robb Stark not to be like the men she knew.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9373351/1/Frozen-Fire Frozen Fire]] by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4352373/rainonmonday rainonmonday]] is a Robb Stark/Daenerys Targaryen Shipping and A/U fanfiction. It has been generally well received by fans.
[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9373351/1/Frozen-Fire Frozen Fire]] by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4352373/rainonmonday rainonmonday]] is a Robb Stark/Daenerys Targaryen Shipping and A/U fanfiction. It has been generally well received by fans.
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* {{Irony}}: Robb sends Dany back home because [[spoiler: he doesn't want his child born on a battlefield. She goes into labor the day the ironborn attack Winterfell.]]
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* {{Irony}}: [[spoiler: Robb sends Dany back home because [[spoiler: he doesn't didn't want his child born on a battlefield. She goes into labor the day the ironborn attack Winterfell.]]
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* {{Irony}}: Robb sends Dany back home because [[spoiler: he doesn't want his child born on a battlefield. She goes into labor the day the ironborn attack Winterfell.]]
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* InTheHood: Justified, Dany has to hide her distinctive white hair.* PerfectlyArrangedMarriage: Robb and Daenerys, but not without a few bumps in the road.
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* PerfectlyArrangedMarriage: Robb and Daenerys, but not without a few bumps in the road.
* ObnoxiousInLaws: Subverted. Catelyn doesn't like Daenerys initially, but doesn't get enoughinterection interaction with her to become this trope. Later on they start to get along.
* ObnoxiousInLaws: Subverted. Catelyn doesn't like Daenerys initially, but doesn't get enough
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** Robb keeps [[Jorah Mormont]] fighting for him because he knows the man will do anything to keep [[spoiler: Daenerys]] happy.
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* GreenEyedMonster: Theon is jealous of Dany because was welcomed into the Stark family while he wasn't.
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* HorribleJudgeOfCharacter: Averted. Daenerys realizes that [[spoiler: Theon would have betrayed Robb if his father asked him to,]] so she insists that he stay where she can watch him and doesn't trust him with weapons.
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* LadyMacbeth[=/=]ManipulativeBitch: Daenerys is accused of being such, but she isn't.
* MythologyGag: When Theon accuses Dany of wanting to claim the Iron Throne though her son, she states that if she wanted the Iron Throne, she would have conquered it herself. That's exactly what she's planning to do in the books.
* MythologyGag: When Theon accuses Dany of wanting to claim the Iron Throne though her son, she states that if she wanted the Iron Throne, she would have conquered it herself. That's exactly what she's planning to do in the books.
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* BrutalHonesty: Jaime telling Daenerys about her [[BrokenBird mother]] and [[AxeCrazy father]].
* TheConfidant: Dacey Mormont to Danerys Stark. Guess it runs in the family.
* TheConfidant: Dacey Mormont to Danerys Stark. Guess it runs in the family.
* DeathSeeker: [[spoiler: Jorah, when he discovers that [[LoveHurts the woman he loves is pregnant with another man's child and happy without him]]. Robb, however, won't kill him and makes him serve in his army.]]
* DreamingOfThingsToCome: [[spoiler: Daenerys has a nightmare about Robb's death and Theon's betrayal. The latter has been subverted.]]
* DreamingOfThingsToCome: [[spoiler: Daenerys has a nightmare about Robb's death and Theon's betrayal. The latter has been subverted.]]
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* {{Irony}}: Robb sends Dany back home because [[spoiler: he doesn't want his child born on a battlefield. She goes into labor the day the ironborn attack Winterfell.
* ObnoxiousInLaws: Subverted. Catelyn doesn't like Daenerys initially, but doesn't get enough interection with her to become this trope. Later on they start to get along.
* ObnoxiousInLaws: Subverted. Catelyn doesn't like Daenerys initially, but doesn't get enough interection with her to become this trope. Later on they start to get along.
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* {{Turncoat}}: Many houses in the Reach turns against their liege lords the Tyrells to support the Starks because they don't agree with the Tyrell's schemes to make Maegery queen.
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** Daenerys feels the need to prove her loyalty to Robb by putting a knife to her own throat, saying she'd sooner die than betray him.
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* AwesomeMomentOfCrowning: Robb ascension to King In the North, make even more awesome with Daenerys declaring her loyalty as well.
* BabiesMakeEverythingBetter: Daenerys is pregnant with Robb's heir, which improves her relationship with Catelyn.
* BabiesMakeEverythingBetter: Daenerys is pregnant with Robb's heir, which improves her relationship with Catelyn.
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* HotBlooded: Puns aside, Daenerys, as Robb points out.
* InTheHood: Justified, Dany has to hide her distinctive white hair.* PerfectlyArrangedMarriage: Robb and Daenerys, but not without a few bumps in theroad.road.
* * ObnoxiousInLaws: Subverted. Catelyn doesn't like Daenerys initially, but doesn't get enough interection with her to become this trope. Later on they start to get along.
* InTheHood: Justified, Dany has to hide her distinctive white hair.* PerfectlyArrangedMarriage: Robb and Daenerys, but not without a few bumps in the
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* WhatTheHellHero: In chapter seven, Robb gets angry and Daenerys for only thinking about how to get the throne without any thought to the consequences it might have for his family.
* WhatTheHellHero: In chapter seven, Robb gets angry and Daenerys for only thinking about how to get the throne without any thought to the consequences it might have for his family.
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Eddard Stark offered her a deal. Safe return to the Seven Kingdoms but in exchange she would need to marry his son, to keep her under watch instead of killing her like Robert wanted. She accepted because she believed she could work on her plans from within. She could turn the Young Wolf in her ally. But she wasn't expecting Robb Stark not to be like the men she knew.
* BelligerentSexualTension: Robb and Dany, until chapter four.
* CoolBigSis: Dany to Bran and Rickon.
* CultureShock: It takes a while for Dany and her handmaidens to get used to the North.
* InTheHood: Justified, Dany has to hide her distinctive white hair.
* HonorBeforeReason: Reconstructed. Eddard Stark's desire to spare Dany's life came with some huge risks, but so far things have worked out.
* PerfectlyArrangedMarriage: Robb and Daenerys, but not without a few bumps in the road.
* RevengeBeforeReason: Subverted. Daenerys wants revenge against the Lannisters, but quickly realizes that she has to be rational about it.
* UndyingLoyalty: Irri, Jhiqui and Doreah followed Dany all the way to Winterfell, becoming the first Dothrahki to do so.
* BelligerentSexualTension: Robb and Dany, until chapter four.
* CoolBigSis: Dany to Bran and Rickon.
* CultureShock: It takes a while for Dany and her handmaidens to get used to the North.
* InTheHood: Justified, Dany has to hide her distinctive white hair.
* HonorBeforeReason: Reconstructed. Eddard Stark's desire to spare Dany's life came with some huge risks, but so far things have worked out.
* PerfectlyArrangedMarriage: Robb and Daenerys, but not without a few bumps in the road.
* RevengeBeforeReason: Subverted. Daenerys wants revenge against the Lannisters, but quickly realizes that she has to be rational about it.
* UndyingLoyalty: Irri, Jhiqui and Doreah followed Dany all the way to Winterfell, becoming the first Dothrahki to do so.
