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* ActionGirl
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* ActionGirlActionGirl: Yuki could count as one.
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* ArrogantKungFuGuy
* AstralProjection
* BadPowersBadPeople
* AstralProjection
* BadPowersBadPeople
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* ArrogantKungFuGuy
ArrogantKungFuGuy: One of the ninjas early in the story.
*AstralProjection
AstralProjection: [[spoiler: Minato's Rewind allows her to look through past events, and during this process, she becomes a projection that can move freely through the world]].
*BadPowersBadPeopleBadPowersBadPeople: An example would be Lavender Doctor's poisonous ability.
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*** [[spoiler: Gyoja]] didn't have the slightest chance against him as the Crimson King knew of his fatal weakness; [[spoiler:transforming into strings made it easier for Gyoja to be ripped apart.]]
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*** [[spoiler: Gyoja]] didn't have the slightest chance against him as the Crimson King knew of his fatal weakness; [[spoiler:transforming into strings made it easier for Gyoja to be ripped apart.apart, especially through the use of Enhanced Performance.]]
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* CynicismCatalyst
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* CynicismCatalystCynicismCatalyst: [[spoiler: The Crimson King successfully crushing Yuki's spirit during their last fight.]]
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* DislikesTheNewGuy: When Yuki was introduced to the Court, Marigold Mandarin couldn't stand her at all.
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* DislikesTheNewGuy: When Yuki was introduced to the Court, Marigold Mandarin couldn't could not stand her at all.
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* EvilIsBurningHot: While the Crimson King is a [[spoiler:fire dragon]], he doesn't use any fire-related abilities. As such, this trope is only downplayed.
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* EvilIsBurningHot: While the Crimson King is a [[spoiler:fire dragon]], he doesn't does not actually use any fire-related abilities. As such, this trope is only downplayed.
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* TheFaceless
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* TheFacelessTheFaceless: The Crimson King throughout most of ''Fall of the Crimson King''.
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* SerialKiller: In ''Rewound Memories'', [[spoiler:Yuki]] has become an assassin who kills her victims by freezing their blood.]] This has caused the public to assume that a serial killer with the powers to cause heart attacks is set loose on Shang Mu.
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* SerialKiller: In ''Rewound Memories'', [[spoiler:Yuki]] [[spoiler:Yuki has become an assassin who kills her victims by freezing their blood.]] This has caused the public to assume that a serial killer with the powers to cause heart attacks is set loose on Shang Mu.
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* SquashedFlat
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* SquashedFlatSquashedFlat: [[spoiler:What happens to Marigold Mandarin, at least to his head and arm, after his fight with Yuki and Yuuto.]]
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* TookALevelInBadass: Chapter 9 of [[spoiler:''Fall of the Crimson King'']] has Yuki obtain a new ability through training: the ability to [[spoiler:freeze someone's blood.]]
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* TookALevelInBadass: Chapter 9 of [[spoiler:''Fall of the Crimson King'']] has Yuki obtain a new ability through training: training; the ability to [[spoiler:freeze someone's blood.]]
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* TrashTalk
* WillTheyOrWontThey: Yuki and Yuuto
* WillTheyOrWontThey: Yuki and Yuuto
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* TrashTalk
TrashTalk: Some coming from an unnamed ninja early in the story.
* WillTheyOrWontThey: There are some milder moments that imply Yuki andYuutoYuuto would have at least become friends [[spoiler: if it was not for Yuuto unintentionally leaving her behind when it mattered most]]. Yuuto is somewhat implied to been in love with her.
* WillTheyOrWontThey: There are some milder moments that imply Yuki and
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The sequel, ''Rewound Memories'', centers around two seemingly unsolvable cases; one of mass murder, and the recent death of Kyushei. Minato, a detective from the Shang Mu Investigative Offices, gets hired by Mayor Zao in an attempt to prove his innocence in the Kyushei murder case. As more details are revealed during the investigation, it becomes slowly clear that the two cases correlate. (Dead; the author is planning a remake)
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The sequel, ''Rewound Memories'', centers around two seemingly unsolvable cases; one of mass murder, and the recent death of Kyushei. Minato, a detective from the Shang Mu Investigative Offices, gets hired by Mayor Zao in an attempt to prove his innocence in the Kyushei murder case. As more details are revealed during the investigation, it becomes slowly clear that the two cases correlate. (Dead; the author is planning has started a remake)
rewrite, ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13516846/1/ Mafia Rebirth]]'')
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The sequel, ''Rewound Memories'', centers around two seemingly unsolvable cases, the Kyushei murder case and one of mass murder. Minato, a detective from the Shang Mu Investigative Offices, gets hired by Mayor Zao in order to restore his reputation and proving his innocence in the murder of Kyushei. As more details are revealed during the investigation, it becomes slowly clear that the two cases correlate with each other. (Dead; author is planning a remake)
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The sequel, ''Rewound Memories'', centers around two seemingly unsolvable cases, the Kyushei murder case and cases; one of mass murder. murder, and the recent death of Kyushei. Minato, a detective from the Shang Mu Investigative Offices, gets hired by Mayor Zao in order an attempt to restore his reputation and proving prove his innocence in the Kyushei murder of Kyushei. case. As more details are revealed during the investigation, it becomes slowly clear that the two cases correlate with each other. correlate. (Dead; the author is planning a remake)
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** Once before Yuuto throws a knife at Marigold Mandarin to prevent him from [[spoiler:bringing out the matches in an attempt to light Yuki]].
** Another time before Marigold Mandarin [[spoiler:gets his head and leg crushed by a car]].
** Another time before Marigold Mandarin [[spoiler:gets his head and leg crushed by a car]].
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** Once Said by Yuuto before Yuuto he throws a knife at Marigold Mandarin Mandarin, to prevent him from [[spoiler:bringing out the matches in an attempt attempting to light Yuki]].
[[spoiler:light Yuki on fire]].
**Another time before Marigold Mandarin [[spoiler:gets his screams it before getting [[spoiler:his head and leg crushed by a car]].
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* CollapsingLair: [[spoiler: Justified as only moments after Yuki pierces Kyushei with a giant icicle the knockback launches him against the hideout's supporting structures and through a wall, causing the building to collapse.]]
* ContrastingSequelMainCharacter:
* ContrastingSequelMainCharacter:
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* CollapsingLair: [[spoiler: Justified Justified, as only moments after Yuki pierces Kyushei with a [[spoiler:Yuki's giant icicle the knockback launches him Kyushei against the hideout's supporting structures structures]].
* ContrastingSequelMainCharacter: Yuki is a bird andthrough assassin while Minato is a wall, causing the building to collapse.]]
* ContrastingSequelMainCharacter:panda and a detective.
* ContrastingSequelMainCharacter: Yuki is a bird and
* ContrastingSequelMainCharacter:
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*** [[spoiler: Gyoja didn't have the slightest chance against Kyushei as he knew Gyoja's fatal weakness. When Gyoja transformed into a piece of string he was more vulnerable to being ripped in half. Using Enhanced Performance, Kyushei was capable of ending his life instantly that way.]]
*** [[spoiler:The first half of his fight with Yuki was pretty much one-sided.]]
*** [[spoiler:The first half of his fight with Yuki was pretty much one-sided.]]
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*** [[spoiler: Gyoja Gyoja]] didn't have the slightest chance against Kyushei him as he the Crimson King knew Gyoja's of his fatal weakness. When weakness; [[spoiler:transforming into strings made it easier for Gyoja transformed into a piece of string he was more vulnerable to being be ripped in half. Using Enhanced Performance, Kyushei was capable of ending his life instantly that way.apart.]]
***[[spoiler:The The first half of his fight with Yuki [[spoiler:Yuki]] was pretty much one-sided.]]
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* EleventhHourSuperpower: The evolved form Yuki's Ice Manipulation, Blue Ice, which she acquired [[spoiler:during the fight against the Crimson King]].
* EliteMooks: Daichi and Jai.
* EliteMooks: Daichi and Jai.
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* EleventhHourSuperpower: The evolved form of Yuki's Ice Manipulation, Blue Ice, which she acquired [[spoiler:during the during her fight against the [[spoiler:the Crimson King]].
* EliteMooks: Daichi andJai.Jocho.
* EliteMooks: Daichi and
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* EvilIsBurningHot: While the Crimson King is a [[spoiler:fire dragon]], he doesn't use any fire-related abilities and as such this trope is only downplayed.
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* EvilIsBurningHot: While the Crimson King is a [[spoiler:fire dragon]], he doesn't use any fire-related abilities and as such abilities. As such, this trope is only downplayed.
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* ExplainingYourPowerToTheEnemy: The unnamed canine from chapter 4 explained to Yuki how his electric Nunchaku work.
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* ExplainingYourPowerToTheEnemy: The unnamed canine from chapter 4 explained to four gave Yuki an explanation of how his electric Nunchaku work.
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* ExtremelyShortTimespan: The entirely of ''Fall of the Crimson King'', except for the prologue chapters, lasted only 2-3 days.
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* ExtremelyShortTimespan: The entirely of ''Fall of the Crimson King'', except for the prologue chapters, lasted only 2-3 two-three days.
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* FunctionalMagic: Affinities are of the ''Inherent Gift'' kind; [[BornLucky only a select few]] [[RandomlyGifted are born with an Affinity]] and some develop one through stress.
* GeniusBruiser: The Crimson King always strives to know his enemies weaknesses and exploits them.
* GlassCannon: Yuki is horribly lethal with her ice attacks but can't take many direct blows.
* GeniusBruiser: The Crimson King always strives to know his enemies weaknesses and exploits them.
* GlassCannon: Yuki is horribly lethal with her ice attacks but can't take many direct blows.
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* GlassCannon: Yuki is horribly lethal with her ice attacks but can't take many
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* HeroicSecondWind: [[spoiler: Justified as Yuki got hold of a petal syringe, bringing her back to full health.]]
* InvisibleMeansUndodgeable: Yuki's [[spoiler: ability to freeze a person's blood]].
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: [[spoiler: This happens to Kyushei when he gets hit by Yuki's giant icicle.]]
* LongRangeFighter: Yuki's Ice Manipulation also gives her some long-range options by launching icicles or ice fists.
* MacGuffin: The recipe for the "Affinity Soup" that didn't end up being important and as such subverts the trope.
* InvisibleMeansUndodgeable: Yuki's [[spoiler: ability to freeze a person's blood]].
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: [[spoiler: This happens to Kyushei when he gets hit by Yuki's giant icicle.]]
* LongRangeFighter: Yuki's Ice Manipulation also gives her some long-range options by launching icicles or ice fists.
* MacGuffin: The recipe for the "Affinity Soup" that didn't end up being important and as such subverts the trope.
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* HeroicSecondWind: [[spoiler: Justified Justified, as Yuki [[spoiler:Yuki got hold of a petal syringe, bringing which brings her back to full health.]]
* InvisibleMeansUndodgeable: Yuki's[[spoiler: ability to freeze [[spoiler:freeze a person's blood]].
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice:[[spoiler: This happens to Kyushei [[spoiler:Kyushei]] when he gets hit by Yuki's [[spoiler:Yuki's giant icicle.]]
* LongRangeFighter: Yuki's Ice Manipulationalso gives her some long-range options by launching allowing to launch icicles or ice fists.
* MacGuffin:The Subverted, as the recipe for the "Affinity Soup" that didn't end up being important and as such subverts the trope.important.
* InvisibleMeansUndodgeable: Yuki's
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice:
* LongRangeFighter: Yuki's Ice Manipulation
* MacGuffin:
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** [[spoiler: The police officers in ''Fall of the Crimson King'', Yun, Kaede, and Namari, played card games during Yuki's fight against Kyushei]].
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** [[spoiler: The police officers in ''Fall of the Crimson King'', Yun, [[spoiler:Yun, Kaede, and Namari, Namari,]] played a card games during game while Yuki's fight against Kyushei]].was fighting [[spoiler:the Crimson King]].
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* SerialKiller: [[spoiler: In ''Rewound Memories'', Yuki has become an assassin who kills her victims by freezing their blood. This has caused the public to assume that a serial killer with the powers to cause heart attacks is set loose on Shang Mu.]]
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* SerialKiller: [[spoiler: In ''Rewound Memories'', Yuki [[spoiler:Yuki]] has become an assassin who kills her victims by freezing their blood. blood.]] This has caused the public to assume that a serial killer with the powers to cause heart attacks is set loose on Shang Mu.]]
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* TookALevelInBadass: [[spoiler: Chapter 9 of ''Fall of the Crimson King'' has Yuki obtain a new ability through training: the ability to freeze someone's blood.]]
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* TookALevelInBadass: [[spoiler: Chapter 9 of ''Fall [[spoiler:''Fall of the Crimson King'' King'']] has Yuki obtain a new ability through training: the ability to freeze [[spoiler:freeze someone's blood.]]
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''Fall of the Crimson King'' introduces the reader to Yuki, a falcon who had been living on her own ever since she was just an egg. As a result of injuring a member of the Red Scarves, she started to be hunted by their ranks. When Yuuto, a member of the Shoheki, saw Yuki fend off one of the Scarves, he immediately enlists the help of her in defeating the Crimson King, the boss of the rival gang, the Kakuchu.
The sequel, ''Rewound Memories'', centers around two seemingly unsolvable cases, the Kyushei murder case and one of mass murder. Minato, a detective from the Shang Mu Investigative Offices, gets hired by Mayor Zao in order to restore his reputation and proving his innocence in the murder of Kyushei. As more details are revealed during the investigation, it becomes slowly clear that the two cases correlate with each other.
The sequel, ''Rewound Memories'', centers around two seemingly unsolvable cases, the Kyushei murder case and one of mass murder. Minato, a detective from the Shang Mu Investigative Offices, gets hired by Mayor Zao in order to restore his reputation and proving his innocence in the murder of Kyushei. As more details are revealed during the investigation, it becomes slowly clear that the two cases correlate with each other.
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''Fall of the Crimson King'' introduces the reader to Yuki, a falcon who had been living on her own ever since she was just an egg. As a result of injuring a member of the Red Scarves, she started to be hunted by their ranks. When Yuuto, a member of the Shoheki, saw Yuki fend off one of the Scarves, he immediately enlists the help of her in defeating the Crimson King, the boss of the rival gang, the Kakuchu.
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The sequel, ''Rewound Memories'', centers around two seemingly unsolvable cases, the Kyushei murder case and one of mass murder. Minato, a detective from the Shang Mu Investigative Offices, gets hired by Mayor Zao in order to restore his reputation and proving his innocence in the murder of Kyushei. As more details are revealed during the investigation, it becomes slowly clear that the two cases correlate with eachother.
other. (Dead; author is planning a remake)
The sequel, ''Rewound Memories'', centers around two seemingly unsolvable cases, the Kyushei murder case and one of mass murder. Minato, a detective from the Shang Mu Investigative Offices, gets hired by Mayor Zao in order to restore his reputation and proving his innocence in the murder of Kyushei. As more details are revealed during the investigation, it becomes slowly clear that the two cases correlate with each
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* FunctionalMagic: Affinities are of the ''Inherent Gift'' kind; [[BornLucky only a select few are born with an Affinity]] and some develop one through stress.
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* FunctionalMagic: Affinities are of the ''Inherent Gift'' kind; [[BornLucky only a select few few]] [[RandomlyGifted are born with an Affinity]] and some develop one through stress.
* QuirkyMinibossSquad: The Court as a whole.
* RedemptionEqualsDeath: [[spoiler:Emerald Emissary]].
* RedemptionEqualsDeath: [[spoiler:Emerald Emissary]].
* SlidingScaleOfVillainEffectiveness
* SpellMyNameWithAThe: '''The''' Boss.
* SpellMyNameWithAThe: '''The''' Boss.
** WeWillMeetAgain:
--> "''This isn't over, you know!''"
---> -- '''Lavender Doctor'''
--> "''This isn't over, you know!''"
---> -- '''Lavender Doctor'''
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* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: [[spoiler: In chapter 15, The Boss used his mechanical parts to mimic the properties of Enhanced Performance, Crimson King's affinity, and punched a [[TorsoWithAView hole through Cerulean Samurai's chest]]. Making sure that the Cerulean Samurai would be killed, The Boss followed this up by a barrage of bullets from his minigun.]]
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* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: [[spoiler: In chapter 15, The Boss used his mechanical parts to mimic the properties of Enhanced Performance, Crimson King's affinity, and punched a [[TorsoWithAView hole through Cerulean Samurai's chest]]. Making sure that the Cerulean Samurai would be killed, The Boss followed this up by a barrage of bullets from his minigun.]]]]
* TrashTalk
* WillTheyOrWontThey: Yuki and Yuuto
* TrashTalk
* WillTheyOrWontThey: Yuki and Yuuto
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* ActionGirl
* AdjectiveAnimalAlehouse: The Jade Dragon.
* AdjectiveAnimalAlehouse: The Jade Dragon.
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* AntiHero: While also GangBangers, the Shoheki are still considered the LesserOfTwoEvils since they are the only faction Yuki is allied with. [[spoiler: Later it's also revealed that the Shoheki [[EnemyMine were secretly working with the Red Scarves]] in order for the two to take down their rival gang, the Kakuchu.]]
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* AntiHero: While also GangBangers, the Shoheki are still considered the LesserOfTwoEvils since they are the only faction Yuki is allied with. [[spoiler: Later
** Their GreyAndGrayMorality is further shown when it'salso revealed that the Shoheki [[EnemyMine they [[spoiler:[[EnemyMine were secretly working with the Red Scarves]] in order for the two to take down their rival gang, help with taking out the Kakuchu.]]
** Their GreyAndGrayMorality is further shown when it's
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* ArrogantKungFuGuy
* AstralProjection
* BadPowersBadPeople
* BigBad:
** In ''Fall of the Crimson King'' it's obviously [[spoiler:Kyushei]] alias the Crimson King.
* BigEater: Downplayed with Yuki.
* BigNo:
** Once before Yuuto throws a knife at Marigold Mandarin to prevent him from [[spoiler:bringing out the matches in an attempt to light Yuki]].
** Another time before Marigold Mandarin [[spoiler:gets his head and leg crushed by a car]].
* AstralProjection
* BadPowersBadPeople
* BigBad:
** In ''Fall of the Crimson King'' it's obviously [[spoiler:Kyushei]] alias the Crimson King.
* BigEater: Downplayed with Yuki.
* BigNo:
** Once before Yuuto throws a knife at Marigold Mandarin to prevent him from [[spoiler:bringing out the matches in an attempt to light Yuki]].
** Another time before Marigold Mandarin [[spoiler:gets his head and leg crushed by a car]].
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* CallingYourAttacks: The Boss cried out the name of the Affinity he copied; [[spoiler: Crimson King's Enhanced Performance]].
* ChaseScene: The entirety of the Convoy Mission.
* ChaseScene: The entirety of the Convoy Mission.
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* CloseRangeCombatant: A lot of Affinity users qualify for this.
** Cerulean Samurai's and Crimson King's Affinities are only as effective at close-range.
*** Same with The Boss, who [[spoiler: replicated both of their Affinities]].
** Cerulean Samurai's and Crimson King's Affinities are only as effective at close-range.
*** Same with The Boss, who [[spoiler: replicated both of their Affinities]].
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* CynicismCatalyst
* DangerousSixteenthBirthday: Applies to Yuki. Even though she had been hunted by the Red Scarves before that, the events of the first story have her [[spoiler:infiltrate a gang and commit mass murder]].
* DangerousSixteenthBirthday: Applies to Yuki. Even though she had been hunted by the Red Scarves before that, the events of the first story have her [[spoiler:infiltrate a gang and commit mass murder]].
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* DisabledSnarker: Emerald Emissary is mute yet snarky in his mind.
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* DumbMuscle: Cerulean Samurai.
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* EleventhHourSuperpower: The evolved form Yuki's Ice Manipulation, Blue Ice, which she acquired [[spoiler:during the fight against the Crimson King]].
* EliteMooks: Daichi and Jai.
* EliteMooks: Daichi and Jai.
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* EvilIsBurningHot: While the Crimson King is a [[spoiler:fire dragon]], he doesn't use any fire-related abilities and as such this trope is only downplayed.
* ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin:
** ''Fall of the Crimson King'' is about, well, the fall of the Crimson King.
* ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin:
** ''Fall of the Crimson King'' is about, well, the fall of the Crimson King.
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* ExposedToTheElements: Yuki wears the same outfit in a warmer and colder climate. That's justified as she grew up in the snowfields.
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* GeniusBruiser: The Crimson King always strives to know his enemies weaknesses and exploits them.
* GlassCannon: Yuki is horribly lethal with her ice attacks but can't take many direct blows.
* GlassCannon: Yuki is horribly lethal with her ice attacks but can't take many direct blows.
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* InvisibleMeansUndodgeable: Yuki's [[spoiler: ability to freeze a person's blood]].
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* MacGuffin: The recipe for the "Affinity Soup" that didn't end up being important and as such subverts the trope.
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* BadPowersBadPeople:
* ElementalPowers: Certain Affinities grant their users elemental powers.
** Yuki (Ice Manipulation/Blue Ice): AnIcePerson.
** Unnamed male canine (unnamed Affinity): ShockAndAwe.
** Unnamed male rabbit (unnamed Affinity): SandBlaster.
** Yuki (Ice Manipulation/Blue Ice): AnIcePerson.
** Unnamed male canine (unnamed Affinity): ShockAndAwe.
** Unnamed male rabbit (unnamed Affinity): SandBlaster.
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** CombatClairvoyance: Yuuto's Affinity, Fortune Acceleration, allows the user to foresee multiple outcomes and calculate the best course of action.
** ElementalPowers: Certain Affinities grant their users elemental powers.
*** Yuki (Ice Manipulation/Blue Ice): AnIcePerson.
*** Unnamed male canine (unnamed Affinity): ShockAndAwe.
*** Unnamed male rabbit (unnamed Affinity): SandBlaster.
** ExplosiveOverclocking: [[spoiler: Crimson King's Affinity, Enhanced Performance, boosts both his speed and power to an insane degree for a split second.]]
** PoisonousPerson: [[spoiler: Lavender Doctor's Affinity can emit poisonous gas.]]
** PowerCopying: Through [[{{Cyborg}} mechanical enhancements]] to The Boss' body, he is capable of mimicking the properties of various Affinities.
** RewindReplayRepeat: [[spoiler: Rewind, Minato's Affinity, allows the user to see into the past.]]
** SuperToughness: [[spoiler: Cerulean Samurai's Affinity, Bulk Up, increases the user's muscle mass and strength, and made his armor tough enough to withstand bullets.]]
** ElementalPowers: Certain Affinities grant their users elemental powers.
*** Yuki (Ice Manipulation/Blue Ice): AnIcePerson.
*** Unnamed male canine (unnamed Affinity): ShockAndAwe.
*** Unnamed male rabbit (unnamed Affinity): SandBlaster.
** ExplosiveOverclocking: [[spoiler: Crimson King's Affinity, Enhanced Performance, boosts both his speed and power to an insane degree for a split second.]]
** PoisonousPerson: [[spoiler: Lavender Doctor's Affinity can emit poisonous gas.]]
** PowerCopying: Through [[{{Cyborg}} mechanical enhancements]] to The Boss' body, he is capable of mimicking the properties of various Affinities.
** RewindReplayRepeat: [[spoiler: Rewind, Minato's Affinity, allows the user to see into the past.]]
** SuperToughness: [[spoiler: Cerulean Samurai's Affinity, Bulk Up, increases the user's muscle mass and strength, and made his armor tough enough to withstand bullets.]]
* StockPhrases:
** IWantMyMommy:
--> "M-Ma'am, what's going on?! I-I want mommy!"
---> -- '''Unnamed fox paperboy'''
** YouFool:
--> "I ''did'', you fool! It's not ''my'' fault it doesn't work on gas masks and has such a long cooldown!"
---> -- '''Lavender Doctor'''
** IWantMyMommy:
--> "M-Ma'am, what's going on?! I-I want mommy!"
---> -- '''Unnamed fox paperboy'''
** YouFool:
--> "I ''did'', you fool! It's not ''my'' fault it doesn't work on gas masks and has such a long cooldown!"
---> -- '''Lavender Doctor'''
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* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: [[spoiler: In chapter 15, The Boss used his mechanical parts to mimic the properties of Enhanced Performance, Crimson King's affinity, and punched a [[TorsoWithAView hole through Cerulean Samurai's chest]]. Making sure that the Cerulean Samurai would be killed, The Boss followed this up by a barrage of bullets from his minigun.]]
* YouFool:
---> '''Lavender Doctor''': "I ''did'', you fool! It's not ''my'' fault it doesn't work on gas masks and has such a long cooldown!"
* YouFool:
---> '''Lavender Doctor''': "I ''did'', you fool! It's not ''my'' fault it doesn't work on gas masks and has such a long cooldown!"
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* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: [[spoiler: In chapter 15, The Boss used his mechanical parts to mimic the properties of Enhanced Performance, Crimson King's affinity, and punched a [[TorsoWithAView hole through Cerulean Samurai's chest]]. Making sure that the Cerulean Samurai would be killed, The Boss followed this up by a barrage of bullets from his minigun.]]
* YouFool:
---> '''Lavender Doctor''': "I ''did'', you fool! It's not ''my'' fault it doesn't work on gas masks and has such a long cooldown!"]]
* YouFool:
---> '''Lavender Doctor''': "I ''did'', you fool! It's not ''my'' fault it doesn't work on gas masks and has such a long cooldown!"
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''Fall of the Crimson King'' introduces the reader to Yuki, a falcon who had been living on her own ever since she was just an egg. As a result of injuring a member of the Red Scarves, she started to be hunted by their ranks. When Yuuto, a member of the Shoheki, saw Yuki fend off one of the Scarves, he quickly enlisted the help of her in order to defeat the Crimson King, the boss of the rival gang, the Kakuchu.
The sequel, ''Rewound Memories'', centers around a seemingly unsolvable case of mass murder. Minato, a detective from the Shang Mu Investigative Offices, gets hired by Mayor Zao in order to prove his innocence in the murder case of Kyushei. During the investigation, it becomes slowly clear that the two cases correlate with each other.
The sequel, ''Rewound Memories'', centers around a seemingly unsolvable case of mass murder. Minato, a detective from the Shang Mu Investigative Offices, gets hired by Mayor Zao in order to prove his innocence in the murder case of Kyushei. During the investigation, it becomes slowly clear that the two cases correlate with each other.
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''Fall of the Crimson King'' introduces the reader to Yuki, a falcon who had been living on her own ever since she was just an egg. As a result of injuring a member of the Red Scarves, she started to be hunted by their ranks. When Yuuto, a member of the Shoheki, saw Yuki fend off one of the Scarves, he quickly enlisted immediately enlists the help of her in order to defeat defeating the Crimson King, the boss of the rival gang, the Kakuchu.
The sequel, ''Rewound Memories'', centers arounda two seemingly unsolvable cases, the Kyushei murder case and one of mass murder. Minato, a detective from the Shang Mu Investigative Offices, gets hired by Mayor Zao in order to prove restore his reputation and proving his innocence in the murder case of Kyushei. During As more details are revealed during the investigation, it becomes slowly clear that the two cases correlate with each other.
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'''Frosted Wings''' is an AlternateUniverse VideoGame/FreedomPlanet fanfiction written by WritingPoke. The series is currently split into two stories and has 26 chapters and 69,871 words total.
''Fall of the Crimson King'' introduces the reader to Yuki, a falcon who had been living on her own ever since she wasstill just an egg. As a result of injuring
injuring a member of the Red Scarves, she started to be hunted by their ranks. When Yuuto, a member of the Shoheki, saw Yuki fend off one of the Scarves, he quickly enlisted the help of her in order to defeat the Crimson King, the boss of the rival gang, the Kakuchu.
The sequel, ''Rewound Memories'', centers around a seemingly unsolvable case of mass murder. Minato, a detective from the Shang Mu Investigative Offices, gets hired by Mayor Zao in order to prove his innocence in the murder case of Kyushei. During the investigation, it becomes slowly clear that the two cases correlate with each other.
''Fall of the Crimson King'' introduces the reader to Yuki, a falcon who had been living on her own ever since she was
The sequel, ''Rewound Memories'', centers around a seemingly unsolvable case of mass murder. Minato, a detective from the Shang Mu Investigative Offices, gets hired by Mayor Zao in order to prove his innocence in the murder case of Kyushei. During the investigation, it becomes slowly clear that the two cases correlate with each other.
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!!This fanfiction contains examples of:
* AbortedArc: Early chapters of ''Fall of the Crimson King'' talk about the Crimson King's plans of obtaining the "[[SoupIsMedicine Affinity Soup]]", mentioned to be able to awaken an Affinity's fullest potential. [[spoiler: With the death of the Crimson King before he got hold of the recipe, this story arc ends up dropped and also wasn't reintroduced in ''Rewound Memories'']].
* AndNowForSomeoneCompletelyDifferent: While ''Fall of the Crimson King'' centers around Yuki, its sequel story, ''Rewound Memories'', revolves around Minato. Yuki herself still makes some smaller appearances though.
* AntagonistAbilities: A little more on the downplayed side but still applying, especially with the Affinity of the BigBad [[spoiler:[[ExplosiveOverclocking Enhanced Performance]], that boosts his speed and power immensely for a split second]].
* AntiHero: While also GangBangers, the Shoheki are still considered the LesserOfTwoEvils since they are the only faction Yuki is allied with. [[spoiler: Later it's also revealed that the Shoheki [[EnemyMine were secretly working with the Red Scarves]] in order for the two to take down their rival gang, the Kakuchu.]]
* AnyoneCanDie: While this definitely applies, it's downplayed as the main characters are still less likely to die.
* BadPowersBadPeople:
* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: While the Crimson King, who was earlier revealed to be Kyushei, was killed by the hands of Yuki, the story didn't end on a good note.]]
** [[spoiler:Yuuto, who had previously exhausted himself from the encounter against Marigold Mandarin, wasn't able to aid Yuki during the fight, saddening and upsetting her. It's only when Yuuto wakes up that he hears the mailbox that contains a message from Yuki, stating her anger towards him, and any attempt of apologizing is futile; their relationship was destroyed.]]
** [[spoiler:Yuki's depression goes even farther as Kyushei was not only still seen as a NiceGuy who was now brutally murdered, but also right about his claims.]]
* BloodierAndGorier: While the games based on the fanfiction use BloodlessCarnage and SymbolicBlood in the form of flower petals and CherryBlossoms, Frosted Wings doesn't censor any injuries and is generally more brutal.
* BoldInflation: The Crimson King typically speaks in bold text to represent his [[EvilSoundsDeep darker voice]].
* CentralTheme: The central theme of Frosted Wings is "redemption".
* CollapsingLair: [[spoiler: Justified as only moments after Yuki pierces Kyushei with a giant icicle the knockback launches him against the hideout's supporting structures and through a wall, causing the building to collapse.]]
* ContrastingSequelMainCharacter:
* CurbStompBattle:
** The Crimson King had two encounters that were in his favor.
*** [[spoiler: Gyoja didn't have the slightest chance against Kyushei as he knew Gyoja's fatal weakness. When Gyoja transformed into a piece of string he was more vulnerable to being ripped in half. Using Enhanced Performance, Kyushei was capable of ending his life instantly that way.]]
*** [[spoiler:The first half of his fight with Yuki was pretty much one-sided.]]
* DarkerAndEdgier: While the game's themes and the character of Brevon weren't lighthearted at all, Frosted Wings stays more consistent with its darker tones.
* DislikesTheNewGuy: When Yuki was introduced to the Court, Marigold Mandarin couldn't stand her at all.
* ElsewhereFic: The entirety of the story happens at a different time than the games and without most of Freedom Planet's main cast.
* ExplainingYourPowerToTheEnemy: The unnamed canine from chapter 4 explained to Yuki how his electric Nunchaku work.
* ExtremelyShortTimespan: The entirely of ''Fall of the Crimson King'', except for the prologue chapters, lasted only 2-3 days.
* TheFaceless
* {{Foreshadowing}}
* FunctionalMagic: Affinities are of the ''Inherent Gift'' kind; [[BornLucky only a select few are born with an Affinity]] and some develop one through stress.
** CombatClairvoyance: Yuuto's Affinity, Fortune Acceleration, allows the user to foresee multiple outcomes and calculate the best course of action.
** ElementalPowers: Certain Affinities grant their users elemental powers.
*** Yuki (Ice Manipulation/Blue Ice): AnIcePerson.
*** Unnamed male canine (unnamed Affinity): ShockAndAwe.
*** Unnamed male rabbit (unnamed Affinity): SandBlaster.
** ExplosiveOverclocking: [[spoiler: Crimson King's Affinity, Enhanced Performance, boosts both his speed and power to an insane degree for a split second.]]
** PoisonousPerson: [[spoiler: Lavender Doctor's Affinity can emit poisonous gas.]]
** PowerCopying: Through [[{{Cyborg}} mechanical enhancements]] to The Boss' body, he is capable of mimicking the properties of various Affinities.
** RewindReplayRepeat: [[spoiler: Rewind, Minato's Affinity, allows the user to see into the past.]]
** SuperToughness: [[spoiler: Cerulean Samurai's Affinity, Bulk Up, increases the user's muscle mass and strength, and made his armor tough enough to withstand bullets.]]
* HealingHerb: In this universe, the Crystal Flower petals from the games can also be used as medicine.
* HeartIsAnAwesomePower
* HeroicSecondWind: [[spoiler: Justified as Yuki got hold of a petal syringe, bringing her back to full health.]]
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: [[spoiler: This happens to Kyushei when he gets hit by Yuki's giant icicle.]]
* LongRangeFighter: Yuki's Ice Manipulation also gives her some long-range options by launching icicles or ice fists.
* MusicalThemeNaming:
** Every ''Fall of the Crimson King'' chapter that features the Crimson King prominently are named after songs produced by Music/KingCrimson.
*** Chapter 8: Century Schizoid Man.
*** Chapter 11 and 12: Court of the Crimson King.
*** Chapter 13: Moonchild.
*** Chapter 17: I Talk to the Wind.
*** Chapter 18 and 19: Epitaph.
** Remaining references to bands/songs in ''Fall of the Crimson King'':
*** Chapter 15: Highway to Hell by {{Music/ACDC}}.
*** Chapter 16: Here I Go Again by {{Music/Whitesnake}}.
*** Epilogue: Music/TheMoodyBlues.
** Likewise, tracks produced by The Moody Blues are the namesake for all ''Rewound Memories'' chapters that focus on Minato:
*** Chapter 3: Dawn Is A Feeling.
*** Chapter 5: Another Morning.
* NecessaryDrawback: [[spoiler: Without the cooldown of Enhanced Performance, Kyushei would be even more unstoppable.]]
* PoliceAreUseless:
** [[spoiler: The police officers in ''Fall of the Crimson King'', Yun, Kaede, and Namari, played card games during Yuki's fight against Kyushei]].
* SerialKiller: [[spoiler: In ''Rewound Memories'', Yuki has become an assassin who kills her victims by freezing their blood. This has caused the public to assume that a serial killer with the powers to cause heart attacks is set loose on Shang Mu.]]
* StartOfDarkness: [[spoiler: The ending of the ''Fall of the Crimson King'' is the start of Yuki's descent into darkness. Upset over Yuuto's betrayal and after Kyushei's death, she is lacking a direction in life to take. The money she obtained for the operation made her thinking about "going a step further". ]]
** [[spoiler: In ''Rewound Memories'', she is then revealed to have become an assassin.]]
** [[spoiler: She even started to become like Kyushei; she wants to keep her identity a secret and adapts his approach of obtaining as much information about a target as possible and exploiting its weaknesses.]]
* SquashedFlat
* SuperpowerLottery: Getting an Affinity, and a powerful/effective one, is mostly luck-based.
* TookALevelInBadass: [[spoiler: Chapter 9 of ''Fall of the Crimson King'' has Yuki obtain a new ability through training: the ability to freeze someone's blood.]]
* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: [[spoiler: In chapter 15, The Boss used his mechanical parts to mimic the properties of Enhanced Performance, Crimson King's affinity, and punched a [[TorsoWithAView hole through Cerulean Samurai's chest]]. Making sure that the Cerulean Samurai would be killed, The Boss followed this up by a barrage of bullets from his minigun.]]
* YouFool:
---> '''Lavender Doctor''': "I ''did'', you fool! It's not ''my'' fault it doesn't work on gas masks and has such a long cooldown!"
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!!This fanfiction contains examples of:
* AbortedArc: Early chapters of ''Fall of the Crimson King'' talk about the Crimson King's plans of obtaining the "[[SoupIsMedicine Affinity Soup]]", mentioned to be able to awaken an Affinity's fullest potential. [[spoiler: With the death of the Crimson King before he got hold of the recipe, this story arc ends up dropped and also wasn't reintroduced in ''Rewound Memories'']].
* AndNowForSomeoneCompletelyDifferent: While ''Fall of the Crimson King'' centers around Yuki, its sequel story, ''Rewound Memories'', revolves around Minato. Yuki herself still makes some smaller appearances though.
* AntagonistAbilities: A little more on the downplayed side but still applying, especially with the Affinity of the BigBad [[spoiler:[[ExplosiveOverclocking Enhanced Performance]], that boosts his speed and power immensely for a split second]].
* AntiHero: While also GangBangers, the Shoheki are still considered the LesserOfTwoEvils since they are the only faction Yuki is allied with. [[spoiler: Later it's also revealed that the Shoheki [[EnemyMine were secretly working with the Red Scarves]] in order for the two to take down their rival gang, the Kakuchu.]]
* AnyoneCanDie: While this definitely applies, it's downplayed as the main characters are still less likely to die.
* BadPowersBadPeople:
* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: While the Crimson King, who was earlier revealed to be Kyushei, was killed by the hands of Yuki, the story didn't end on a good note.]]
** [[spoiler:Yuuto, who had previously exhausted himself from the encounter against Marigold Mandarin, wasn't able to aid Yuki during the fight, saddening and upsetting her. It's only when Yuuto wakes up that he hears the mailbox that contains a message from Yuki, stating her anger towards him, and any attempt of apologizing is futile; their relationship was destroyed.]]
** [[spoiler:Yuki's depression goes even farther as Kyushei was not only still seen as a NiceGuy who was now brutally murdered, but also right about his claims.]]
* BloodierAndGorier: While the games based on the fanfiction use BloodlessCarnage and SymbolicBlood in the form of flower petals and CherryBlossoms, Frosted Wings doesn't censor any injuries and is generally more brutal.
* BoldInflation: The Crimson King typically speaks in bold text to represent his [[EvilSoundsDeep darker voice]].
* CentralTheme: The central theme of Frosted Wings is "redemption".
* CollapsingLair: [[spoiler: Justified as only moments after Yuki pierces Kyushei with a giant icicle the knockback launches him against the hideout's supporting structures and through a wall, causing the building to collapse.]]
* ContrastingSequelMainCharacter:
* CurbStompBattle:
** The Crimson King had two encounters that were in his favor.
*** [[spoiler: Gyoja didn't have the slightest chance against Kyushei as he knew Gyoja's fatal weakness. When Gyoja transformed into a piece of string he was more vulnerable to being ripped in half. Using Enhanced Performance, Kyushei was capable of ending his life instantly that way.]]
*** [[spoiler:The first half of his fight with Yuki was pretty much one-sided.]]
* DarkerAndEdgier: While the game's themes and the character of Brevon weren't lighthearted at all, Frosted Wings stays more consistent with its darker tones.
* DislikesTheNewGuy: When Yuki was introduced to the Court, Marigold Mandarin couldn't stand her at all.
* ElsewhereFic: The entirety of the story happens at a different time than the games and without most of Freedom Planet's main cast.
* ExplainingYourPowerToTheEnemy: The unnamed canine from chapter 4 explained to Yuki how his electric Nunchaku work.
* ExtremelyShortTimespan: The entirely of ''Fall of the Crimson King'', except for the prologue chapters, lasted only 2-3 days.
* TheFaceless
* {{Foreshadowing}}
* FunctionalMagic: Affinities are of the ''Inherent Gift'' kind; [[BornLucky only a select few are born with an Affinity]] and some develop one through stress.
** CombatClairvoyance: Yuuto's Affinity, Fortune Acceleration, allows the user to foresee multiple outcomes and calculate the best course of action.
** ElementalPowers: Certain Affinities grant their users elemental powers.
*** Yuki (Ice Manipulation/Blue Ice): AnIcePerson.
*** Unnamed male canine (unnamed Affinity): ShockAndAwe.
*** Unnamed male rabbit (unnamed Affinity): SandBlaster.
** ExplosiveOverclocking: [[spoiler: Crimson King's Affinity, Enhanced Performance, boosts both his speed and power to an insane degree for a split second.]]
** PoisonousPerson: [[spoiler: Lavender Doctor's Affinity can emit poisonous gas.]]
** PowerCopying: Through [[{{Cyborg}} mechanical enhancements]] to The Boss' body, he is capable of mimicking the properties of various Affinities.
** RewindReplayRepeat: [[spoiler: Rewind, Minato's Affinity, allows the user to see into the past.]]
** SuperToughness: [[spoiler: Cerulean Samurai's Affinity, Bulk Up, increases the user's muscle mass and strength, and made his armor tough enough to withstand bullets.]]
* HealingHerb: In this universe, the Crystal Flower petals from the games can also be used as medicine.
* HeartIsAnAwesomePower
* HeroicSecondWind: [[spoiler: Justified as Yuki got hold of a petal syringe, bringing her back to full health.]]
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: [[spoiler: This happens to Kyushei when he gets hit by Yuki's giant icicle.]]
* LongRangeFighter: Yuki's Ice Manipulation also gives her some long-range options by launching icicles or ice fists.
* MusicalThemeNaming:
** Every ''Fall of the Crimson King'' chapter that features the Crimson King prominently are named after songs produced by Music/KingCrimson.
*** Chapter 8: Century Schizoid Man.
*** Chapter 11 and 12: Court of the Crimson King.
*** Chapter 13: Moonchild.
*** Chapter 17: I Talk to the Wind.
*** Chapter 18 and 19: Epitaph.
** Remaining references to bands/songs in ''Fall of the Crimson King'':
*** Chapter 15: Highway to Hell by {{Music/ACDC}}.
*** Chapter 16: Here I Go Again by {{Music/Whitesnake}}.
*** Epilogue: Music/TheMoodyBlues.
** Likewise, tracks produced by The Moody Blues are the namesake for all ''Rewound Memories'' chapters that focus on Minato:
*** Chapter 3: Dawn Is A Feeling.
*** Chapter 5: Another Morning.
* NecessaryDrawback: [[spoiler: Without the cooldown of Enhanced Performance, Kyushei would be even more unstoppable.]]
* PoliceAreUseless:
** [[spoiler: The police officers in ''Fall of the Crimson King'', Yun, Kaede, and Namari, played card games during Yuki's fight against Kyushei]].
* SerialKiller: [[spoiler: In ''Rewound Memories'', Yuki has become an assassin who kills her victims by freezing their blood. This has caused the public to assume that a serial killer with the powers to cause heart attacks is set loose on Shang Mu.]]
* StartOfDarkness: [[spoiler: The ending of the ''Fall of the Crimson King'' is the start of Yuki's descent into darkness. Upset over Yuuto's betrayal and after Kyushei's death, she is lacking a direction in life to take. The money she obtained for the operation made her thinking about "going a step further". ]]
** [[spoiler: In ''Rewound Memories'', she is then revealed to have become an assassin.]]
** [[spoiler: She even started to become like Kyushei; she wants to keep her identity a secret and adapts his approach of obtaining as much information about a target as possible and exploiting its weaknesses.]]
* SquashedFlat
* SuperpowerLottery: Getting an Affinity, and a powerful/effective one, is mostly luck-based.
* TookALevelInBadass: [[spoiler: Chapter 9 of ''Fall of the Crimson King'' has Yuki obtain a new ability through training: the ability to freeze someone's blood.]]
* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: [[spoiler: In chapter 15, The Boss used his mechanical parts to mimic the properties of Enhanced Performance, Crimson King's affinity, and punched a [[TorsoWithAView hole through Cerulean Samurai's chest]]. Making sure that the Cerulean Samurai would be killed, The Boss followed this up by a barrage of bullets from his minigun.]]
* YouFool:
---> '''Lavender Doctor''': "I ''did'', you fool! It's not ''my'' fault it doesn't work on gas masks and has such a long cooldown!"
