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* ConflictingLoyalty: During the revolt against Brokenstar, Boulder found himself torn between his loyalty to Brokenstar, who had taken him in and given him a better life than he'd ever dreamed of as a rogue, and to his surrogate son Firefang and the warrior code that he idolized.
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* DramaticNecklaceRemoval: Rusty's collar gets torn off while fighting Ashfur.
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* DramaticNecklaceRemoval: Rusty's collar gets torn off while fighting Ashfur. Seeing it, Brokenstar announces that it's a sign from [=StarClan=] that Rusty is permitted to join [=ShadowClan=].
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* IAmTheNoun: In response to Yellowfang telling him not to kill Firefang since he's the fire from the prophecy that will save [=ShadowClan=], Brokenstar insists that he ''is'' [=ShadowClan=] and that anyone who opposes him is a traitor.
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* HappilyAdopted: Gorsekit doesn't mind the revelation that he's adopted.
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* HappilyAdopted: Gorsekit doesn't mind the revelation that he's adopted.adopted and was originally from [=WindClan=].
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* RescueRomance: Firefang saving Nightpaw from a poisonous snake is what first spurred her feelings for him.
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* MatureAnimalStory: The content is aimed at older fans than the original books. It has some more risque content, such as clearer allusions to sex.
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* BabiesEverAfter: The fanfic ends with [[spoiler:Firestar]] and [[spoiler:Nightwing]] having two toms named Talonkit and Smokekit. It also turns out that [[spoiler:Mistyfoot]] had a kit with [[spoiler:Firefang]] named [[spoiler:Bluepaw]].
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* BabiesEverAfter: The fanfic ends with [[spoiler:Firestar]] and [[spoiler:Nightwing]] having two toms named Talonkit and Smokekit. It also turns out that [[spoiler:Mistyfoot]] [[spoiler:Mistystar]] had a kit with [[spoiler:Firefang]] named [[spoiler:Bluepaw]].
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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: Yellowfang has the line "You two share tongues or compare your claw lengths or whatever it is young toms do".
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* HoldYourHippogriffs: Yellowfang has the line "You two share tongues or compare your claw lengths or whatever it is young toms do".
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* ShesAllGrownUp: Firefang finds Nightpaw's PrecociousCrush embarrassing until she begins maturing.
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* ShesAllGrownUp: SheIsAllGrownUp: Firefang finds Nightpaw's PrecociousCrush embarrassing until she begins maturing.
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* AdaptationalAngstUpgrade: Firepaw misses his owners and initially doubts whether he should be in [=ShadowClan=] or not. In the source books, he barely think twices about running off to [=ThunderClan=].
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* AdaptationalAngstUpgrade: Firepaw misses his owners and initially doubts whether he should be in [=ShadowClan=] or not. In the source books, he barely think twices thinks twice about running off to [=ThunderClan=].
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* AutomobilesAreAlien: Discussed. Firefang explains that cars aren't monstrous like the others think and that he's actually been inside one a few times. To this, Gorsepaw wonders if they should use a new term for cars. He comes up with "hrududu" and gets mocked.
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* AutomobilesAreAlien: Discussed. Firefang explains that cars (or "monsters" as cats call them) aren't monstrous like the others think and that he's actually been inside one a few times. To this, Gorsepaw wonders if they should use a new term for cars. He comes up with "hrududu" and gets mocked.
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* YouCantGoHomeAgain: Rusty mentions his owners will be worried about him, but Brokenstar mentions Rusty will be attacked or worse if he tries to go back home through [=ThunderClan=] territory. Rusty has no option than to stay with [=ShadowClan=].
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* YouCantGoHomeAgain: Rusty mentions his owners will be worried about him, but Brokenstar mentions points out that Rusty will be attacked or worse if he tries to go back home through [=ThunderClan=] territory. Rusty has no option than to stay with [=ShadowClan=].
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* ChildOfForbiddenLove: On top of the canon examples, there's the cross-Clan son of [[spoiler:Firestar]] and [[spoiler:Mistyfoot]].
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* AutomobilesAreAlien: Discussed. Firefang explains that cars aren't monstrous like the others think and that he's actually been inside one a few times. To this, Gorsepaw wonders if they should use a new term for cars. He comes up with "hrududu" and gets mocked.
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* YouCantGoHomeAgain: Rusty mentions his owners will be worried about him, but Brokenstar mentions Rusty will be attacked or worse if he tries to go back home through [=ThunderClan=] territory. Rusty has no option than to say with [=ShadowClan=].
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* YouCantGoHomeAgain: Rusty mentions his owners will be worried about him, but Brokenstar mentions Rusty will be attacked or worse if he tries to go back home through [=ThunderClan=] territory. Rusty has no option than to say stay with [=ShadowClan=].
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* BabiesEverAfter: The fanfic ends with [[spoiler:Firestar]] and [[spoiler:Nightwing]] having two toms named Talonkit and Smokekit. It also turns out that [[spoiler:Mistyfoot]] had a kit with [[spoiler:Firefang]].
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* BabiesEverAfter: The fanfic ends with [[spoiler:Firestar]] and [[spoiler:Nightwing]] having two toms named Talonkit and Smokekit. It also turns out that [[spoiler:Mistyfoot]] had a kit with [[spoiler:Firefang]].[[spoiler:Firefang]] named [[spoiler:Bluepaw]].
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* ShesAllGrownUp: Firefang finds Ravenpaw's PrecociousCrush embarrassing until she begins maturing.
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* ShesAllGrownUp: Firefang finds Ravenpaw's Nightpaw's PrecociousCrush embarrassing until she begins maturing.
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* ObliviousAdoption: Gorsekit is too young to remember being [=WindClan=] born but he always knew something was off about him.
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* ObliviousAdoption: Gorsekit is too young to remember being [=WindClan=] born but he always knew something was off about him. He didn't think it was that he was born in another Clan.
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* EmbarrassingFirstName: Firefang hates how [[NamesToRunawayFrom cruel and vicious]] that name is.
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* EmbarrassingFirstName: Firefang hates how [[NamesToRunawayFrom cruel and vicious]] aggressive]] that name is.sounds.
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* BabiesEverAfter: The fanfic ends with [[spoiler:Firestar]] and [[spoiler:Nightwing]] having two toms named and Stormkit.
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* BabiesEverAfter: The fanfic ends with [[spoiler:Firestar]] and [[spoiler:Nightwing]] having two toms named Talonkit and Stormkit.Smokekit. It also turns out that [[spoiler:Mistyfoot]] had a kit with [[spoiler:Firefang]].
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* PaternalSubstitute: Yellowfang is the closest Firefang has to a mother in [=ShadowClan=]. [[spoiler:She gives him a life at the end of the fic]].
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* PaternalSubstitute: ParentalSubstitute: Yellowfang is the closest Firefang has to a mother in [=ShadowClan=]. [[spoiler:She gives him a life at the end of the fic]].
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* ChildSoldiers: Gorsepaw isn't even six moons when he's made an apprentice.
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* BabiesEverAfter: The fanfic ends with [[spoiler:Firestar]] and [[spoiler:Nightwing]] having two toms named and Stormkit.
* BettyAndVeronica: There's Nightpaw and Mistyfoot. Nightpaw is a sweet but young cat who likes Firefang, while Mistyfoot is an alluring, older cat from [=RiverClan=] who is "dangerous" because she's from a rival Clan. Eventually, Mistyfoot and Firefang both realize they can't continue their forbidden romance.
* ChildSoldiers: Gorsepaw isn't even six moons when he's made an apprentice. Several kits also die because they were apprenticed too young.
* BettyAndVeronica: There's Nightpaw and Mistyfoot. Nightpaw is a sweet but young cat who likes Firefang, while Mistyfoot is an alluring, older cat from [=RiverClan=] who is "dangerous" because she's from a rival Clan. Eventually, Mistyfoot and Firefang both realize they can't continue their forbidden romance.
* ChildSoldiers: Gorsepaw isn't even six moons when he's made an apprentice. Several kits also die because they were apprenticed too young.
* DeadGuyJunior: [[spoiler:Mistystar]] named one of her kits "[[spoiler:Bluekit]]", after her deceased mother [[spoiler:Bluestar]].
* HappilyAdopted: Gorsekit doesn't mind the revelation that he's adopted.
* PaternalSubstitute: Yellowfang is the closest Firefang has to a mother in [=ShadowClan=]. [[spoiler:She gives him a life at the end of the fic]].
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* WouldHurtAChild: Tigerclaw has no issue beating up kittypet kittens like Rusty for accidentally going onto [=ThunderClan=] territory.
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* WouldHurtAChild: ShesAllGrownUp: Firefang finds Ravenpaw's PrecociousCrush embarrassing until she begins maturing.
* ShoutOut: Gorsepaw makes a ''Literature/WatershipDown'' reference when he says they should rename monsters (cars) into "Hrududu". Onewhisker even calls it "rabbit-brained" sounding.
* WouldHurtAChild:
** Tigerclaw has no issue beating up kittypet kittens like Rusty for accidentally going onto [=ThunderClan=]territory.territory.
** Brokenstar killed several kits.
* ShoutOut: Gorsepaw makes a ''Literature/WatershipDown'' reference when he says they should rename monsters (cars) into "Hrududu". Onewhisker even calls it "rabbit-brained" sounding.
* WouldHurtAChild:
** Tigerclaw has no issue beating up kittypet kittens like Rusty for accidentally going onto [=ThunderClan=]
** Brokenstar killed several kits.
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* AdaptationNameChange: Firepaw is named "Firefang", not "Fireheart".
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* ChildSoldiers: Gorsepaw isn't even six moons when he's made an apprentice.
* DawnAttack: Inverted. [=ShadowClan=] attacks [=WindClan=] at night. Firefang considers attacking while most of the Clan is sleeping to be immoral and the incident makes him doubt being a warrior.
* DawnAttack: Inverted. [=ShadowClan=] attacks [=WindClan=] at night. Firefang considers attacking while most of the Clan is sleeping to be immoral and the incident makes him doubt being a warrior.
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* EmbarrassingFirstName: Firefang hates how [[NamesToRunawayFrom cruel and vicious]] that name is.
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* HoldYourHippogriffs: Yellowfang has the line "You two share tongues or compare your claw lengths or whatever it is young toms do".
* ObliviousAdoption: Gorsekit is too young to remember being [=WindClan=] born but he always knew something was off about him.
* MaliciousMisnaming: Ashfur dislikes Firefang and calls him "Firepaw" the night of his vigil.
* MythologyGag: Chapter 11 has a scene where Bluestar mentions Firefang would make a good [=ThunderClan=] warrior. Graypaw is shocked by the idea of her letting a kittypet into the Clan.
* ObliviousAdoption: Gorsekit is too young to remember being [=WindClan=] born but he always knew something was off about him.
* MaliciousMisnaming: Ashfur dislikes Firefang and calls him "Firepaw" the night of his vigil.
* MythologyGag: Chapter 11 has a scene where Bluestar mentions Firefang would make a good [=ThunderClan=] warrior. Graypaw is shocked by the idea of her letting a kittypet into the Clan.
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* AdaptationalAngstUpgrade: Firepaw misses his owners and initially doubts whether he should be in [=ShadowClan=] or not. In the source books, he barely think twices about running off to [=ThunderClan=].
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* ForWantOfANail: The nail is that Bluestar doesn't ask Rusty to join her Clan.
* WouldHurtAChild: Tigerclaw has no issue beating up kittypet kittens like Rusty for accidentally going onto [=ThunderClan=] territory.
* WouldHurtAChild: Tigerclaw has no issue beating up kittypet kittens like Rusty for accidentally going onto [=ThunderClan=] territory.
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* DramaticNecklaceRemoval: Rusty's collar gets torn off while fighting Ashfur.
* ForWantOfANail: The nail is either that Bluestar doesn't ask Rusty to join herClan.
Clan or [=ShadowClan=] received the prophecy instead of [=ThunderClan=].
* TheProphecy: The "fire will save the Clan" prophecy was given to [=ShadowClan=] instead of [=ThunderClan=].
* WouldHurtAChild: Tigerclaw has no issue beating up kittypet kittens like Rusty for accidentally going onto [=ThunderClan=]territory.territory.
* YouCantGoHomeAgain: Rusty mentions his owners will be worried about him, but Brokenstar mentions Rusty will be attacked or worse if he tries to go back home through [=ThunderClan=] territory. Rusty has no option than to say with [=ShadowClan=].
* ForWantOfANail: The nail is either that Bluestar doesn't ask Rusty to join her
* TheProphecy: The "fire will save the Clan" prophecy was given to [=ShadowClan=] instead of [=ThunderClan=].
* WouldHurtAChild: Tigerclaw has no issue beating up kittypet kittens like Rusty for accidentally going onto [=ThunderClan=]
* YouCantGoHomeAgain: Rusty mentions his owners will be worried about him, but Brokenstar mentions Rusty will be attacked or worse if he tries to go back home through [=ThunderClan=] territory. Rusty has no option than to say with [=ShadowClan=].
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4992672/1/Fire-and-Shadow Fire and Shadow]]'' is a ''Literature/{{Warrior|Cats}}s'' fanfic that revolves around Rusty ending up in [=ShadowClan=], not [=ThunderClan=].
Rusty is a young housecat who is enamored with the local forest. While looking around one day, Rusty is attacked by a wild cat named Ravenpaw. Ravenpaw's mentor, Tigerclaw, dislikes a pet on their territory and attacks Rusty. Rusty is saved when he ends up in [=ShadowClan=] territory. Unable to go back through [=ThunderClan=] and get back home, Rusty is forced to join [=ShadowClan=] as an apprentice named Firepaw.
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!!This fanfic provides examples of:
* AlternateUniverseFic: Firestar becomes a [=ShadowClan=] warrior, not a [=ThunderClan=] one.
* ForWantOfANail: The nail is that Bluestar doesn't ask Rusty to join her Clan.
* WouldHurtAChild: Tigerclaw has no issue beating up kittypet kittens like Rusty for accidentally going onto [=ThunderClan=] territory.
Rusty is a young housecat who is enamored with the local forest. While looking around one day, Rusty is attacked by a wild cat named Ravenpaw. Ravenpaw's mentor, Tigerclaw, dislikes a pet on their territory and attacks Rusty. Rusty is saved when he ends up in [=ShadowClan=] territory. Unable to go back through [=ThunderClan=] and get back home, Rusty is forced to join [=ShadowClan=] as an apprentice named Firepaw.
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!!This fanfic provides examples of:
* AlternateUniverseFic: Firestar becomes a [=ShadowClan=] warrior, not a [=ThunderClan=] one.
* ForWantOfANail: The nail is that Bluestar doesn't ask Rusty to join her Clan.
* WouldHurtAChild: Tigerclaw has no issue beating up kittypet kittens like Rusty for accidentally going onto [=ThunderClan=] territory.
