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* AxCrazy: Berserker is paranoid, bloodthirsty schizophrenic who's always twitching and looking for something (or someone) to kill. Ironically, he's probably the ''least'' evil of the less moral Servants.
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* AxCrazy: Berserker is a paranoid, bloodthirsty schizophrenic who's always twitching and looking for something (or someone) to kill. Ironically, he's probably the ''least'' evil of the less moral Servants.
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* AxCrazy: Berserker is paranoid, bloodthirsty schizophrenic who's always twitching and looking for something (or someone) to kill. Ironically, he's probably the ''least'' evil of the less moral Servants.
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* AlasPoorVillain: Caster is an unrepentant monster who committed horrible crimes to achieve her goals, but her rejection of things like love and friendship comes from a combination of pride and lack of understanding their benefits. It's not until [[spoiler:Ryuunosuke dies]] that she finally understands what it feels like to truly care about someone else, and it drives her into a frenzy.
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* BerserkerTears: Caster sheds these as she attempts to [[spoiler:avenge Ryuunosuke's death]].
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* DarkIsEvil: Caster and [[spoiler:Avenger]] have black skin and clothes, respectively, and both are quite insidious.
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'''Fate:Zero Submission''' is a ''Literature/FateZero'' multi-crossover fanfiction by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2699084/Evowizard25 Evowizard25,]] in which, due to outside interference from the Greek goddess Eris, various beings from multiple franchises are summoned as Servants for the Fourth Grail War, with only Saber's identity remaining unchanged. Their identities are as follows:
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'''Fate:Zero Submission''' is a ''Literature/FateZero'' multi-crossover fanfiction by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2699084/Evowizard25 Evowizard25,]] in which, due to outside interference from the (incredibly bored) Greek goddess Eris, various beings from multiple franchises are summoned as Servants for the Fourth Grail War, with only Saber's identity remaining unchanged. Their identities are as follows:
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Throw in a few more Masters with personal scores to settle, and you have a much more chaotic Grail War.
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'''Fate:Zero Submission''' is a ''Anime/FateZero'' ''Literature/FateZero'' multi-crossover fanfiction by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2699084/Evowizard25 Evowizard25,]] in which, due to outside interference from the Greek goddess Eris, various beings from multiple franchises are summoned as Servants for the Fourth Grail War, with only Saber's identity remaining unchanged. Their identities are as follows:
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* TheCorruptor:
** Caster manages to bring out Kirei's inner monster.
** Kirei himself manages to turn Aoi into his accomplice.
** Caster manages to bring out Kirei's inner monster.
** Kirei himself manages to turn Aoi into his accomplice.
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* SelfMadeOrphan: [[spoiler:Kirei kills his father, fully cementing his villain status]].
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* SmarterThanYouLook: Ska Bloodtail seems like a dumb sycophant at first glance, and Berserker frequently calls him stupid, but as shown by his conversations with Kariya, he's quite eloquent. Notably, Ska doesn't engage in the typical Skaven VerbalTic nearly as often as Berserker does.
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** [[SubvertedTrope Subverted]] with Ryuunosuke, whose flattering words towards Caster are completely sincere.
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* TemptingFate: When a group of Skaven try to assault the Tohsaka home, Tokiomi scoffs at the idea that they'll even be able to get in. And then Berserker, who dug ''under'' the manor, shows up right behind him, ready and eager to kill him.
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* EvilCannotComprehendGood: Caster ''hates'' the concept of friendship, even brushing aside Ryuunosuke's attempts to bond with her. It's not until [[spoiler:his death]] that she understands it, and it drives her [[VillainousBreakdown into a frenzy.]]
* ALighterShadeOfBlack: Berserker is insane and can be just as vicious as Caster, but he's more capable of displays of loyalty and friendship, even developing a fondness for Sakura and, albeit indirectly, [[spoiler:getting her a decent stepmother]].
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* SycophanticServant: Ska Bloodtail is this towards Berserker, mostly out of fear, though Kariya deduces that they actually care for one another to an extent, much to Ska's bewilderment.
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** Ska Bloodtail is this towards Berserker, mostly out of fear, though Kariya deduces that they actually care for one another to an extent, much to Ska's bewilderment.
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** [[SubvertedTrope Subverted]] with Ryuunosuke, whose flattering words towards Caster are completely sincere.
* VainSorceress: Caster thinks highly of herself, even having Ryuunosuke brush her mane from time to time.
* VainSorceress: Caster thinks highly of herself, even having Ryuunosuke brush her mane from time to time.
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'''Fate:Zero Submission''' is a ''Anime/FateZero'' multi-crossover fanfiction by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2699084/Evowizard25 Evowizard25,]] in which, due to outside interference, interference from the Greek goddess Eris, various beings from multiple franchises are summoned as Servants for the Fourth Grail War, with only Saber's identity remaining unchanged. Their identities are as follows:
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* GreaterScopeVillain: [[spoiler:Eris, the Greek goddess of discord]], causes the shake-up to the plot [[ItAmusedMe for gits and shiggles]]--and [[KarmaHoudini faces no punishment for it, to boot.]]
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* GreaterScopeVillain: [[spoiler:Eris, Eris, the Greek goddess of discord]], discord, causes the shake-up to the plot [[ItAmusedMe for gits and shiggles]]--and [[KarmaHoudini faces no punishment for it, to boot.]]
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* GreaterScopeVillain: [[spoiler:Eris, the Greek goddess of discord]], causes the shake-up to the plot [[ItAmusedMe for gits and shiggles]]--and [[KarmaHoudini faces no punishment for it, to boot.]]
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* NoMacguffinNoWinner: Downplayed. [[spoiler:The corrupted Grail is destroyed, thus nobody gets a wish, but Saber and Assassin obtain physical bodies from the Grail's essence]].
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* CrazyPrepared: Rider [[spoiler:entrusts Saphira's ''eldunari'' to Waver in the event of his death, though Waver doesn't find out until after Rider is killed]].
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* IllKillYou: [[spoiler:Rider flies into a rage when Archer kills Saphira and tries to kill her by invoking her true name and telling her to die in the Ancient Language. It doesn't work]].
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* ShooOutTheClowns: Beast is the most cheerful and friendly Servant in the story sans Lancer. [[spoiler:Their respective deaths darken the tone]].
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:On the bitter part, a lot of people died over a prize that ultimately got destroyed in the end, Waver loses his girlfriend, and Aoi and Rin are being led down the path of villainy by Kirei Kotomine; on the sweet side, Sakura has a loving family and pieces of her two friends to keep her company, and Shirou and Illya get adopted by Saber and Assassin]].
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:On the bitter part, a lot of people died over a prize that ultimately got destroyed in the end, Waver loses his girlfriend, and Aoi and Rin are being led down the path of villainy by Kirei Kotomine; on the sweet side, Sakura has a loving family and pieces of her two friends to keep her company, Waver manages to keep his sanity with the help of Joseph Fields, and Shirou and Illya get adopted by Saber and Assassin]].
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Caster was certainly insidious in her home series, but she gets to commit multiple acts of *child murder* here.
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* AMatchMadeInStockholm: Berserker abducts a nurse named Himari and forces her to treat Kariya's worm infection. She ends up staying at the Matou household, grows fond of Kariya and Sakura, and ultimately [[spoiler:marries the former]].
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* OriginalCharacter: Joseph Fields, an American farmer and Master of Beast.
