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* TheMagicComesBack: Downplayed version of this trope. [[spoiler: Shirou's slow transformation into a god is causing a return of Mystery to the world. As a result, not only is magecraft returning to a level of strenght similar to that of The Age of Gods, but Phantasmal Species are also returning from The Reverse Side of The World.]]
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* HammerTime: ...the trope is the NAME of the crossover.
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* {{Polyamory}}: [[spoiler:Shirou eventually develops a relationship with Sakura, Rin, and Ayako.]]
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* InnocentInnuendo: Sakura keeps giving these to Ayako. Which keeps driving her mad.
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* InnocentInnuendo: Sakura keeps giving these to Ayako, which keeps driving her mad.
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** [[spoiler:In Chapter 50, Caren Ortensia undergoes one when she finds out from Rin that the Fuyuki Holy Grail is corrupted.]]
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* HumanityEnsues: In Chapter 50, [[spoiler:Illya became a HalfHumanHybrid while Sella and Leysritt became fully human after the 3 of them underwent a ritual that was set up by Shirou.]]
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* TakingYouWithMe: [[spoiler: Seeing that his ambitions of immortality are about to be cut short by the son of the Magus Killer, [[ForTheEvulz Zouken attempts to pull this trope on Sakura,]] so that even if Shirou does somehow kills him permanently, it will be a PyrrhicVictory.]]
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* TakingYouWithMe: [[spoiler: Seeing that his ambitions of immortality are about to be cut short by the son of the Magus Killer, [[ForTheEvulz Zouken attempts to pull this trope on Sakura,]] so that even if Shirou does somehow kills him permanently, it will be a PyrrhicVictory. Unfortunately for Zouken, this attempt failed miserable and Sakura ultimately recovers from the ordeal.]]
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* OnlyTheChosenMayWield : Mjolnir, of course. Odin's enchantment also gets [[UpToEleven buffed by the One-Above-All]], so that none but truly worthy can wield it.
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* OnlyTheChosenMayWield : Mjolnir, of course. Odin's enchantment also gets [[UpToEleven buffed by the One-Above-All]], One-Above-All, so that none but truly worthy can wield it.
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* AdaptaionalNiceGuy: Shinji, of all people has a case of this. He's still a bit of a dick, but being friends with Shirou earlier than canon has softened him up a bit, most prominent when Shirou starts to ask him about his living situation with Zouken, he tried to tell him off partly out of concern for Shirou's well-being and not wanting him to get hurt.
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* AdaptaionalNiceGuy: AdaptationalNiceGuy: Shinji, of all people has a case of this. He's still a bit of a dick, but being friends with Shirou earlier than canon has softened him up a bit, most prominent when Shirou starts to ask him about his living situation with Zouken, he tried to tell him off partly out of concern for Shirou's well-being and not wanting him to get hurt.
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* AdaptaionalNiceGuy: Shinji, of all people has a case of this. He's still a bit of a dick, but being friends with Shirou earlier than canon has softened him up a bit, most prominent when Shirou starts to ask him about his living situation with Zouken, he tried to tell him off partly out of concern for Shirou's well-being and not wanting him to get hurt.
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* DramaticIrony: Yomamura Taya has taken extra precaution in trying to protect her loved ones against "Rakurai", [[spoiler: Shirou's alter-ego]] thinking he's a Magus up to no good...yet she couldn't be anymore wrong.
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* ImproperlyParanoid: Yomamura's got a bit of a case of this, being afraid of "Rakurai" and taking a number of precautions in case they cross paths. While it's a bit justified since in the world of being a Magus, one needs to watch their back, considering that it's [[spoiler: Shirou going around saving people and taking down criminals]], it can be a bit too much.
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* HiddenDepths: Gray. She is extremely good at playing the role of a queen. [[spoiler: [[FridgeBrillianceThis Makes sense, seeing that she is Arthuria's descendant.]]]]
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* HiddenDepths: Gray. She is extremely good at playing the role of a queen. [[spoiler: [[FridgeBrillianceThis Makes [[FridgeBrilliance This makes sense, seeing that she is Arthuria's descendant.]]]]
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* MaleGaze: Lorelei. Specifically, her ass, apparently.
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* HiddenDepths: Gray. She is extremely good at playing the role of a queen. [[spoiler: [[FridgeBrillianceThis makes sense, seeing that she is Arthuria's descendant.]]]]
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* HiddenDepths: Gray. She is extremely good at playing the role of a queen. [[spoiler: [[FridgeBrillianceThis makes Makes sense, seeing that she is Arthuria's descendant.]]]]
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* HiddenDepths: Gray. She is extremely good at playing the role of a queen. [[spoiler: [[FridgeBrillianceThis makes sense, seeing that she is Arthuria's descendant.]]]]
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** [[spoiler: Zouken. Once Shirou comes to save Sakura from him, he decides to kill Sakura in order to make sure that Shirou's victory is meaningless.]]
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** [[spoiler: Zouken. Once Shirou comes to save Sakura from him, he decides to kill Sakura in order to make sure that Shirou's victory is meaningless. Ultimately, even this attempt failed and Sakura got better.]]
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Tearjerker is YMMV.
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* AdaptationalBadass: Even before obtaining Mjolnir, Shirou in this story got a much better training and even his magic circuts were opened, courtesy of Kiritsugu.
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* AdaptationalBadass: Even before obtaining Mjolnir, Shirou in this story got a much better training and even his magic circuts circuits were opened, courtesy of Kiritsugu.
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* DoesNotKnowHisOwnStrength: Averted. Thanks to the final enchantment by Thor before his death, Shirou is gradually getting stronger, so he doesn't destroy Earth and possibly himself in the process.
** [[spoiler: Played straight in chapter 14.]] [[spoiler: He accidentally snaps Oni's spine in an attempt to stop him from shooting the two hostages.]]
** [[spoiler: Played straight in chapter 14.]] [[spoiler: He accidentally snaps Oni's spine in an attempt to stop him from shooting the two hostages.]]
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* DoesNotKnowHisOwnStrength: DoesNotKnowHisOwnStrength:
** Averted. Thanks to the final enchantment by Thor before his death, Shirou is gradually getting stronger, so he doesn't destroy Earth and possibly himself in the process.
** [[spoiler: Played straight in chapter 14.]] [[spoiler: He accidentally snaps Oni's spine in an attempt to stop him from shooting the two hostages.]]
** Averted. Thanks to the final enchantment by Thor before his death, Shirou is gradually getting stronger, so he doesn't destroy Earth and possibly himself in the process.
** [[spoiler: Played straight in chapter 14.
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* HeroicBSOD: Shirou suffers one, after [[spoiler: [[TearJerker his first kill.]]]]
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* HeroicBSOD: Shirou suffers one, after [[spoiler: [[TearJerker his first kill.]]]]]]
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* ThouShaltNotKill: Shirou believes that he needs to keep this up in order to become a hero. [[spoiler: [[TearJerker It doesn't stick.]]]]
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* ThouShaltNotKill: Shirou believes that he needs to keep this up in order to become a hero. [[spoiler: [[TearJerker It doesn't stick.]]]]]]
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** [[spoiler: Once he finds out about Sakura's "training", he can't even think about forgiving himself until he saves her.]]
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** [[spoiler: Once he finds out about Sakura's "training", he can't even think about forgiving himself until understand how he saves her.could have been so dense after all signs that appeared in front of him. Needless to say, he immediately decides to rectify the situation.]]
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* TakingYouWithMe: [[spoiler: Seeing that his ambitions of immortality are about to be cut short by the son of the Magus Killer, [[ForTheEvulz Zouken attempts to pull this trope on Sakura,]] so that even if Shirou does somehow manage to end him, it would be a PyrrhicVictory.]]
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* TakingYouWithMe: [[spoiler: Seeing that his ambitions of immortality are about to be cut short by the son of the Magus Killer, [[ForTheEvulz Zouken attempts to pull this trope on Sakura,]] so that even if Shirou does somehow manage to end him, kills him permanently, it would will be a PyrrhicVictory.]]
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* HonorBeforeReason: Once Shirou breaks into the room where a rune specialist is, he finds a message where the magus gives him all the knowledge on the runes. When he sees all the cruelties that had been committed for the sake of the research, he decides not to oblige the maguses request and burns all of his research papers.
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* HonorBeforeReason: Once Shirou breaks into the room where a rune specialist is, he finds a message where the magus gives him all the knowledge on the runes. When he sees all the cruelties that had been committed for the sake of the research, he decides not to oblige the maguses request of sparing his research and burns all of his research papers.
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* HonorBeforeReason: Once Shirou breaks into the room where a rune specialist is, he finds a message where the magus gives him all the knowledge on the runes. When he sees all the cruelties that had been committed for the sake of the research, he decides not to oblige the maguses request and burns all of his research papers.
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* BetterToDieThanBeKilled: When one of the maguses with rune specialization sees "Rakurai" wrecking the boundary fields of their secret base, moreover, once he sees the rune scripture on the Mjolnir he [[SanitySlippage loses it]]. He decides to kill himself, rather than allow "Rakurai" the honor of taking his life.
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* BetterToDieThanBeKilled: When one of the maguses with rune specialization maguses, Oliver Waudenstad, sees "Rakurai" wrecking the boundary fields of their secret base, moreover, once he sees the rune scripture runes on the Mjolnir and figures out few words due to being a rune specialist, he [[SanitySlippage loses it]]. He decides to kill himself, rather than allow "Rakurai" the honor of taking his life.to capture him which he believes would lead to torture and imprisonment, or something much worse.
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