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After the events of "The Inquestion" in which the void absorbs Elmore, Gumball wakes up in a very disturbing town that is similar to his own, but is dark and covered in ink. While trying to find his family, he comes across toon/human hybrids that want to kill him. Can Gumball survive and return to his home, or will he become another victim of the abyss?
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After the events of "The Inquestion" Inquisition" in which the void absorbs Elmore, Gumball wakes up in a very disturbing town that is similar to his own, but is dark and covered in ink. While trying to find his family, he comes across toon/human hybrids that want to kill him. Can Gumball survive and return to his home, or will he become another victim of the abyss?
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''Elmore Ink'' is a ''WesternAnimation/TheAmazingWorldOfGumball'' fanfic with elements of ''VideoGame/BendyAndTheInkMachine'' written by Devilmegaultraman.
The story can be read [[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/13802412/1/ here.]]
The story can be read [[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/13802412/1/ here.]]
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The story can be read [[https://m.
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* {{Cuteness Proximity}}: Carmella towards Gumball when she first sees him.
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* {{Cuteness Proximity}}: Carmella towards Gumball when she first sees him.
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[[caption-width-right:350:Fear The Demon]]:
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* HorsemenOfTheApocalype: The Ink Wattersons represents The Horseman of The Apocalypse but with five instead of four. They even ride horses when they first come together as a group.
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* HorsemenOfTheApocalype: HorsemenOfTheApocalypse: The Ink Wattersons represents The Horseman of The Apocalypse but with five instead of four. They even ride horses when they first come together as a group.
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After the events of "The Inquestion" in which the void absorbs Elmore, Gumball wakes up in a very disturbing town that is similar to his own, but is dark and covered in ink. While trying to find his family, he comes across toon/human hybrids that want to kill him. Can Gumball survive and return to his home, or will he becomes another victim of the abyss?
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After the events of "The Inquestion" in which the void absorbs Elmore, Gumball wakes up in a very disturbing town that is similar to his own, but is dark and covered in ink. While trying to find his family, he comes across toon/human hybrids that want to kill him. Can Gumball survive and return to his home, or will he becomes become another victim of the abyss?
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* BodyHorror: Victims of "The Inkquisition" show parts of there bodies that have turned into there cartoon counterparts.
* {Expy}: The Creator is one to Joey Drew. Wanting to bring there creations to life but wanting to use human souls to achieve them.
* FiveStagesOfGrief: The Horsemen of the Inkquisition also represents this
* Richard is Denial
* Anais is Anger
* Nicole is Bargaining
* "Gumball" is Depression
* Darwin is Acceptance
* {Expy}: The Creator is one to Joey Drew. Wanting to bring there creations to life but wanting to use human souls to achieve them.
* FiveStagesOfGrief: The Horsemen of the Inkquisition also represents this
* Richard is Denial
* Anais is Anger
* Nicole is Bargaining
* "Gumball" is Depression
* Darwin is Acceptance
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* BodyHorror: Victims of "The Inkquisition" show parts of there their bodies that have turned into there their cartoon counterparts.
counterparts.
*{Expy}: {{Expy}}: The Creator is one to Joey Drew. Wanting to bring there creations to life but wanting to use human souls to achieve them. \n\n*
%%* FiveStagesOfGrief: The Horsemen of the Inkquisition also represents this
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*Denial.
%%** Anais isAnger
*Anger.
%%** Nicole isBargaining
*Bargaining.
%%** "Gumball" isDepression
*Depression.
%%** Darwin isAcceptance
Acceptance.
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%%* FiveStagesOfGrief: The Horsemen of the Inkquisition also represents this
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** Anais is Pestilence
** Nicole is War
** Richard is Famine
** Darwin is Death
** "Gumball" himself is Conquest
* KarmicDeath: Toon Rob is killed by "Gumball" a human that was turned into a toon. After Rob himself tried to make the students in Elmore into humans.
** Nicole is War
** Richard is Famine
** Darwin is Death
** "Gumball" himself is Conquest
* KarmicDeath: Toon Rob is killed by "Gumball" a human that was turned into a toon. After Rob himself tried to make the students in Elmore into humans.
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** Anais is Pestilence
Pestilence.
** Nicole isWar
War.
** Richard isFamine
Famine.
** Darwin isDeath
Death.
** "Gumball" himself isConquest
Conquest.
* KarmicDeath: Toon Rob is killed by"Gumball" "Gumball", a human that was turned into a toon. After toon, after Rob himself tried to make the students in Elmore into humans.
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** Richard is
** Darwin is
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* KarmicDeath: Toon Rob is killed by
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* HorsemenoftheApocalype: The Ink Wattersons represents The Horseman of The Apocalypse but with five instead of four. They even ride horses when they first come together as a group.
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* HorsemenoftheApocalype: {Expy}: The Creator is one to Joey Drew. Wanting to bring there creations to life but wanting to use human souls to achieve them.
* FiveStagesOfGrief: The Horsemen of the Inkquisition also represents this
* Richard is Denial
* Anais is Anger
* Nicole is Bargaining
* "Gumball" is Depression
* Darwin is Acceptance
* HorsemenOfTheApocalype: The Ink Wattersons represents The Horseman of The Apocalypse but with five instead of four. They even ride horses when they first come together as a group.
* FiveStagesOfGrief: The Horsemen of the Inkquisition also represents this
* Richard is Denial
* Anais is Anger
* Nicole is Bargaining
* "Gumball" is Depression
* Darwin is Acceptance
* HorsemenOfTheApocalype: The Ink Wattersons represents The Horseman of The Apocalypse but with five instead of four. They even ride horses when they first come together as a group.
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** "Gumball" himself is Conquest
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** "Gumball" himself is ConquestConquest
* KarmicDeath: Toon Rob is killed by "Gumball" a human that was turned into a toon. After Rob himself tried to make the students in Elmore into humans.
* KarmicDeath: Toon Rob is killed by "Gumball" a human that was turned into a toon. After Rob himself tried to make the students in Elmore into humans.
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!!''Elmore Ink'' provides examples of:
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!!''Elmore Ink'' provides examples of:of:
* BodyHorror: Victims of "The Inkquisition" show parts of there bodies that have turned into there cartoon counterparts.
* HorsemenoftheApocalype: The Ink Wattersons represents The Horseman of The Apocalypse but with five instead of four. They even ride horses when they first come together as a group.
** Anais is Pestilence
** Nicole is War
** Richard is Famine
** Darwin is Death
** "Gumball" himself is Conquest
* BodyHorror: Victims of "The Inkquisition" show parts of there bodies that have turned into there cartoon counterparts.
* HorsemenoftheApocalype: The Ink Wattersons represents The Horseman of The Apocalypse but with five instead of four. They even ride horses when they first come together as a group.
** Anais is Pestilence
** Nicole is War
** Richard is Famine
** Darwin is Death
** "Gumball" himself is Conquest
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After the events of "The Inquestion" and the void absorb Elmore, Gumball wakes up in a very disturbing town that is similar to his own, but is dark and covered in ink. While trying to find his family, he comes across toon/human hybrids that want to kill him. Can Gumball survive and return to his home, or will he becomes another victim of the abyss?
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After the events of "The Inquestion" and in which the void absorb absorbs Elmore, Gumball wakes up in a very disturbing town that is similar to his own, but is dark and covered in ink. While trying to find his family, he comes across toon/human hybrids that want to kill him. Can Gumball survive and return to his home, or will he becomes another victim of the abyss?
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is a ''WesternAnimation/TheAmazingWorldOfGumball'' fanfic with elements of ''VideoGame/BendyAndTheInkMachine'' written by Devilmegaultraman.
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''Elmore Ink'' is a ''WesternAnimation/TheAmazingWorldOfGumball'' fanfic with elements of ''VideoGame/BendyAndTheInkMachine'' written by Devilmegaultraman.
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After the events of "The Inquestion" and the void absorbed Elmore. Gumball wakes up in a very disturbing world that is similar to his own but the town is dark and covered in ink. While trying to find his family he comes across toon/human hybrids that what to kill him. Can Gumball survive and return to his home or will he becomes another victim of the abyss as so many do before him?
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After the events of "The Inquestion" and the void absorbed Elmore. absorb Elmore, Gumball wakes up in a very disturbing world town that is similar to his own own, but the town is dark and covered in ink. While trying to find his family family, he comes across toon/human hybrids that what want to kill him. Can Gumball survive and return to his home home, or will he becomes another victim of the abyss as so many do before him?
abyss?
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is a ''WesternAnimation/TheAmazingWorldOfGumball'' fanfic with elements of ''VideoGame/BendyAndTheInkMachine'' written by Devilmegaultraman. It can be read
[[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/13802412/1/ here.]]
[[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/13802412/1/ here.]]
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is a ''WesternAnimation/TheAmazingWorldOfGumball'' fanfic with elements of ''VideoGame/BendyAndTheInkMachine'' written by Devilmegaultraman. It
The story can beread
read [[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/13802412/1/ here.]]
The story can be
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is a ''WesternAnimation/TheAmazingWorldOfGumball'' fanfic with elements of ''VideoGame/BendyAndTheInkMachine'' written by Devilmegaultraman. It can be read here
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is a ''WesternAnimation/TheAmazingWorldOfGumball'' fanfic with elements of ''VideoGame/BendyAndTheInkMachine'' written by Devilmegaultraman. It can be read here
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is a ''WesternAnimation/TheAmazingWorldOfGumball'' fanfic with elements of ''VideoGame/BendyAndTheInkMachine'' written by Devilmegaultraman. It can be read here
[[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/13802412/1/ here.]]
After the events of "The Inquestion" and the void absorbed Elmore. Gumball wakes up in a very disturbing world that is similar to his own but the town is dark and covered in ink. While trying to find his family he comes across toon/human hybrids that what to kill him. Can Gumball survive and return to his home or will he becomes another victim of the abyss as so many do before him?
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!!''Elmore Ink'' provides examples of:
[[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/13802412/1/ here.]]
After the events of "The Inquestion" and the void absorbed Elmore. Gumball wakes up in a very disturbing world that is similar to his own but the town is dark and covered in ink. While trying to find his family he comes across toon/human hybrids that what to kill him. Can Gumball survive and return to his home or will he becomes another victim of the abyss as so many do before him?
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!!''Elmore Ink'' provides examples of:
