Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 3,4 (click to see context) from:
The story begins with the four main ninja, Nya and Sensei Wu, and follows the plot of the first season of Ninjago. The Serpentine, Lord Garmadon and the author's original bad-guys, the Agamemnon, are the main threats the heroes have to deal with. Luckily, they have help, in the form of four other ninja destined to join them.
to:
The story begins with the four main ninja, Nya and Sensei Wu, and follows the plot of is based off the first season of Ninjago. the show, with a more realistic (well, as realistic as you can go with a fanfic based around show staring Lego ninjas) and adult approach. The Serpentine, Lord Garmadon and fanfics each have been praised for being able to keep the author's original bad-guys, characters completely in character, while making the Agamemnon, situations darker.
While the Serpentine are still the mainthreats villains, and stopping the heroes have to deal with. Luckily, they have help, in release of the form of four other Great Devourer is still the main objective, the story features some new elements as well. There are powerful deities that chose the ninja destined as their advocate, a prophecy that introduces three female ninja and causes Nya to join them.
their ranks, and a new threat – the Agamemnon.
While the Serpentine are still the main
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* BodyHorror: Sasha has a fun experience in the third book where she was painfully forced to transform [[spoiler: into a Serpentine]]. Luckily this was reversed.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 96,97 (click to see context) from:
* RunningGag: There are a few of these, but the biggest would have to be Jay's invention, the Portable Motion Sensors - PMS for short.
to:
* RunningGag: There are a few of these, but the biggest would have to be and most of them are centered around Jay. Jay's nicknames for Kai (he seems to come up with a different one each time) and his invention, the Portable Motion Sensors - PMS (PMS for short.
short) are the two major running gags in the series.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
* ItSucksToBeTheChosenOne: Lloyd has to deal with harsh training for a ten-year-old, and knows he will have to fight his father one day. And the rest of the chosen heroes don’t have it easy either.
* LoveTriangle: Though it doesn’t last very long, there is a slight one between [[spoiler: Cole, Sasha and Zane.]]
* SacredBowAndArrows: Ayane’s weapon is literally named the Bow of Divinity [[spoiler: though that’s actually the name of the spirit in the bow.]]
Changed line(s) 99,100 (click to see context) from:
* TranquilFury: A few examples, but Zane and Ebony both are the most likely to use this trope.
to:
* TranquilFury: ShownTheirWork: The author has actually researched multiple languages, multiple martial arts, weapons and other things to make this series a little more realistic.
*TranquilFury: A few examples, but Zane and Ebony both are the most likely to use this trope.
*TranquilFury: A few examples, but Zane and Ebony both are the most likely to use this trope.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* AwfulTruth: One of the first things Ebony does when she joins the team is rip into Ayane about her personality – and Ayane admits that it is true. Later, there is also the revelation that [[spoiler: Ebony’s true name is Cereza Garmadon, and her mother was the queen of the Agamemnon.]]
Added DiffLines:
* DeadPersonConversation: [[spoiler: Sensei Wu and Ebony have one in the last book.]]
* EarnYourHappyEnding: Depends on your definition of happy, but after [[spoiler: watching Ebony almost die in her trial, fighting hordes of Serpentine, watching their mentor die and having to destroy the Great Devourer – a giant snake that devour an entire city]] they definitely earned the break they get.
* EmotionsVsStoicism: Before her character development, everyone wanted Ebony to express her emotions a bit more.
* EarnYourHappyEnding: Depends on your definition of happy, but after [[spoiler: watching Ebony almost die in her trial, fighting hordes of Serpentine, watching their mentor die and having to destroy the Great Devourer – a giant snake that devour an entire city]] they definitely earned the break they get.
* EmotionsVsStoicism: Before her character development, everyone wanted Ebony to express her emotions a bit more.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* AndTheAdventureContinues: The ending to the last book fits this, considering it’s leading to the next series.
Added DiffLines:
*BreakTheCutie: This almost happens to Ayane [[spoiler: when she had watched Zane ‘die’ in front her before she was kidnapped.]] Lloyd also is hinted at breaking in the last book. [[spoiler: It’s confirmed to have happened in the next series.]]
Added DiffLines:
* CostumePorn: The outfits the ninja and kunoichi wear look amazing.
* DarkerAndEdgier: Compared to the original show? By a lot.
* DarkerAndEdgier: Compared to the original show? By a lot.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
*BewareTheSillyOnes: Jay can be absolutely ridiculous at some points, and the whole team of heroes can be told off by the enemies for behaving this way. Doesn’t stop them from taking down entire armies.
Added DiffLines:
* MesACrowd: Garmadon and Ebony both have the abilities to create shadow copies of themselves and use it against their opponents.
Added DiffLines:
* YouCantFightFate: That won’t stop Lloyd and Ebony from trying, though
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 20,21 (click to see context) from:
* BadassBookworm: Zane and Ebony might be the most intelligent members of the team, but that won't stop them from kicking Serpentine butt.
to:
* BadassBookworm: Zane and Ebony might be the most intelligent members of the team, team with a deep love of books, but that won't stop them from kicking Serpentine butt.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 1,2 (click to see context) from:
Elements is a Ninjago fanfiction series, starting with the first book [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8315871/1/The-Makings-of-a-Storm The Makings of a Storm]].
to:
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 54,55 (click to see context) from:
* LivingWeapon: [[spoiler: The girls’ weapons are alive, with their own names are personalities. Usually their very helpful, but sometimes they just decide to tease the girls.]]
to:
* LivingWeapon: [[spoiler: The girls’ weapons are alive, with their own names are personalities. Usually their they're very helpful, but sometimes they just decide to tease the girls.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 75 (click to see context) from:
to:
-->'''Cole:''' I've never been one to be labeled a narcissus, but I look damn good up close, well, without the grumpy sulk that is.\\
'''Jay:''' Are you as turned-on as I am?
'''Jay:''' Are you as turned-on as I am?
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 75,79 (click to see context) from:
[-‘’’Cole’’’: I've never been one to be labeled a narcissus, but I look damn good up close well, without the grumpy sulk that is.-]
[-‘’’Jay ’’’: Are you as turned-on as I am?-]
[-‘’’Jay ’’’: Are you as turned-on as I am?-]
to:
[-‘’’Jay ’’’: Are you as turned-on as I am?-]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 74,75 (click to see context) from:
* ScrewYourself: Played with in a lost chapter, where the ninja switch bodies. Cole comments that he never realized how attractive he really was. Jay (in Cole's body) only takes it a step further by asking Cole if he was as turned on as him.
to:
* ScrewYourself: Played with in a lost chapter, where the ninja switch bodies.bodies (Cole and Jay switched with each other, and Zane and Kai switched with each other). Cole comments that he never realized how attractive he really was. Jay (in Cole's body) only takes it a step further by asking Cole if he was as turned on as him.further.
[-‘’’Cole’’’: I've never been one to be labeled a narcissus, but I look damn good up close well, without the grumpy sulk that is.-]
[-‘’’Jay ’’’: Are you as turned-on as I am?-]
[-‘’’Cole’’’: I've never been one to be labeled a narcissus, but I look damn good up close well, without the grumpy sulk that is.-]
[-‘’’Jay ’’’: Are you as turned-on as I am?-]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 66,67 (click to see context) from:
* RedEyesTakeWarning: Certain Serpentine, Lord Garmadon and some of the Agamemnon have red eyes. And all of them are people you want to avoid. Even Ebony and Lloyd, two heroes with red eyes, are considered to be pretty dangerous. The fact that they want to their defy destiny doesn't help.
to:
* RedEyesTakeWarning: Certain Serpentine, Lord Garmadon and some of the Agamemnon have red eyes. And all of them are people you want to avoid. Even Ebony and Lloyd, two heroes with red eyes, are considered to be pretty dangerous. [[spoiler: The fact that they want to defy their defy destiny doesn't help.
help.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 26,27 (click to see context) from:
* BigBad: Despite the major threat the Serpentine present, and the fact that the Agamemnon have [[spoiler: committed genocide before and probably will do it again]] Lord Garmadon is still the threat everyone seems concerned with.
to:
* BigBad: Despite the major threat the Serpentine present, and the fact that the Agamemnon have [[spoiler: committed genocide before and probably will do it again]] again]], Lord Garmadon is still the threat everyone seems concerned with.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* AdaptationalBadass: The author did a lot of research to make the ninja more badass than they are in the show. Unfortunately for the heroes, the bad guys are all a lot more dangerous as well.
Added DiffLines:
* BilingualBonus: Though the translations are present, the work is a lot more enjoyable if you do speak a few languages as the heroes occasionally throw in a few phrases from their native tongue.
* BittersweetEnding: In book four, the final book of the series, they [[spoiler: may have managed to stop the Great Devourer and Ebony is content with her relationship with the ninja, but the Serpentine are still active, Lord Garmadon is on the loose and Sensei Wu died – which only made Lloyd and Ebony more determined to stop their destiny.]]
* BittersweetEnding: In book four, the final book of the series, they [[spoiler: may have managed to stop the Great Devourer and Ebony is content with her relationship with the ninja, but the Serpentine are still active, Lord Garmadon is on the loose and Sensei Wu died – which only made Lloyd and Ebony more determined to stop their destiny.]]
Added DiffLines:
* LethalChef: Fans of Ninjago know Cole is a lethal chef, but this takes it up a notch when [[spoiler: he almost kills Nya, by serving her something she was allergic to.]]
* LivingWeapon: [[spoiler: The girls’ weapons are alive, with their own names are personalities. Usually their very helpful, but sometimes they just decide to tease the girls.]]
* LivingWeapon: [[spoiler: The girls’ weapons are alive, with their own names are personalities. Usually their very helpful, but sometimes they just decide to tease the girls.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 1,2 (click to see context) from:
Elements is a Ninjago fanfiction series, starting with the first book [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8315871/1/The-Makings-of-a-Storm The Makings of a Storm]]. It follows the main plot of the first season, and the main characters, with a slightly alternate plot, a few bonus villains and some female ninja OCs thrown in. It does involve some shipping, but that isn't the main focus of the series.
to:
Elements is a Ninjago fanfiction series, starting with the first book [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8315871/1/The-Makings-of-a-Storm The Makings of a Storm]]. It
The story begins with the four main ninja, Nya and Sensei Wu, and follows themain plot of the first season, season of Ninjago. The Serpentine, Lord Garmadon and the author's original bad-guys, the Agamemnon, are the main characters, with a slightly alternate plot, a few bonus villains and some female threats the heroes have to deal with. Luckily, they have help, in the form of four other ninja OCs thrown in. It does involve some shipping, but that isn't the main focus of the series.destined to join them.
The story begins with the four main ninja, Nya and Sensei Wu, and follows the
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 46,47 (click to see context) from:
* LoveEpiphany: Everyone, expect for Jay and Nya, go through this eventually.
to:
* LoveEpiphany: Everyone, expect except for Jay and Nya, go through this eventually.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* BewareTheNiceOnes: You really don’t want to mess with Ayane or Jay.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* BigBad: Despite the major threat the Serpentine present, and the fact that the Agamemnon have [[spoiler: committed genocide before and probably will do it again]] Lord Garmadon is still the threat everyone seems concerned with.
* BlackAndWhiteMorality: Most of the heroes firmly believe what they're doing is right, and that the villains have to be stopped at all cost. [[spoiler: Ebony and Lloyd, however, disagree since most of their family is on the side of evil.]]
* BlackAndWhiteMorality: Most of the heroes firmly believe what they're doing is right, and that the villains have to be stopped at all cost. [[spoiler: Ebony and Lloyd, however, disagree since most of their family is on the side of evil.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
*AngelsDevilsAndSquid: With the ninja and their gods as the ‘Angel’ side, Lord Garmadon and the Agamemnon cover the ‘Devil’ part and the Serpentine, once they start experimenting, slide into the ‘Squid’.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* AffectionateNickname: Zane calls Ayane his angel (in Russian) while Kai enjoys calling Ebony Snow White (in Japanese). The gods also like to nickname their advocates as well.
Added DiffLines:
* InsultOfEndearment: This is what Kai's nickname for Ebony becomes. Though really, it wasn't that much of an insulting nickname to begin with - it just brought up bad memories for Ebony.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
* BadassBookworm: Zane and Ebony might be the most intelligent members of the team, but that won't stop them from kicking Serpentine butt.
* CharacterDevelopment: Everyone gains some character development, but the prime example is Ebony.
* FighterMageThief: Nya and Sasha are the two fighters, Ayane plays the mage with her healing abilities, and Ebony's abilities and attacks make her the thief.
* GlowingEyes: You know you're about to read about something awesome when a ninja's eyes start to glow.
* JerkassGods: Even though they are helping humanity, some of the stuff the put the ninja through really makes them come across as this. Especially in the lost chapters, where they revealed that they consider the ninja a form of entertainment.
* GlowingEyes: You know you're about to read about something awesome when a ninja's eyes start to glow.
* JerkassGods: Even though they are helping humanity, some of the stuff the put the ninja through really makes them come across as this. Especially in the lost chapters, where they revealed that they consider the ninja a form of entertainment.
* RedEyesTakeWarning: Certain Serpentine, Lord Garmadon and some of the Agamemnon have red eyes. And all of them are people you want to avoid. Even Ebony and Lloyd, two heroes with red eyes, are considered to be pretty dangerous. The fact that they want to their defy destiny doesn't help.
Changed line(s) 36 (click to see context) from:
* RunningGag: There are a few of these, but the biggest would have to be Jay's invention, the Portable Motion Sensors - PMS for short.
to:
* RunningGag: There are a few of these, but the biggest would have to be Jay's invention, the Portable Motion Sensors - PMS for short.short.
* ScrewYourself: Played with in a lost chapter, where the ninja switch bodies. Cole comments that he never realized how attractive he really was. Jay (in Cole's body) only takes it a step further by asking Cole if he was as turned on as him.
*TranquilFury: A few examples, but Zane and Ebony both are the most likely to use this trope.
----
* ScrewYourself: Played with in a lost chapter, where the ninja switch bodies. Cole comments that he never realized how attractive he really was. Jay (in Cole's body) only takes it a step further by asking Cole if he was as turned on as him.
*TranquilFury: A few examples, but Zane and Ebony both are the most likely to use this trope.
----
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 22,23 (click to see context) from:
* LongHairIsFeminine: All the girls expect Nya have long hair.
to:
* LongHairIsFeminine: All the girls expect but Nya have long hair.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* KillAllHumans: The Serpentine's main goal. It's not going so well for them at the moment.
* LongHairIsFeminine: All the girls expect Nya have long hair.
* LongHairIsFeminine: All the girls expect Nya have long hair.
Added DiffLines:
* MoodWhiplash: When you least expect it, the mood completely changes.
Added DiffLines:
* RapunzelHair: Sasha fills out this trope easily. You kind of wonder how she can fight with all that hair.
Added DiffLines:
* ReptilesAreAbhorrent: The Serpentine, who constantly are trying to either kill the ninja or destroy Ninjago.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 1,2 (click to see context) from:
Elements is a Ninjago fanfiction series, starting with the first book [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8315871/1/The-Makings-of-a-Storm The Makings of a Storm]]. It follows the main plot of the first season, with a few bonus villains and heroes thrown in.
to:
Elements is a Ninjago fanfiction series, starting with the first book [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8315871/1/The-Makings-of-a-Storm The Makings of a Storm]]. It follows the main plot of the first season, and the main characters, with a slightly alternate plot, a few bonus villains and heroes some female ninja OCs thrown in.in. It does involve some shipping, but that isn't the main focus of the series.
Added DiffLines:
*RedOniBlueOni: There are a few examples of this, but the most notable would be Kai (as the red oni) and Ebony (as the blue oni).
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 1 (click to see context) from:
Elements is a [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/WesternAnimation/Ninjago Ninjago]] fanfiction series, starting with the first book [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8315871/1/The-Makings-of-a-Storm The Makings of a Storm]].
to:
Elements is a [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/WesternAnimation/Ninjago Ninjago]] Ninjago fanfiction series, starting with the first book [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8315871/1/The-Makings-of-a-Storm The Makings of a Storm]]. It follows the main plot of the first season, with a few bonus villains and heroes thrown in.
----
!! This fanfic contains examples of:
*AbnormalAmmo: Ayane's bow can shoot arrows of pure light at enemies.
*ActionGirl: The canon character Nya, as well as the three OCs Sasha, Ayane and Ebony, all fit this trope to a T.
*BadassBoast: Almost every time they're in a battle, someone comes up with something. Kai tries, but he usually fails.
*BattleCouple: Nya and Jay, Cole and Sasha, Ayane and Zane and Ebony and Kai.
*ComicallySerious: Zane and Ebony, occasionally.
*DeadpanSnarker: Ebony loves this trope, and the rest indulge in it occasionally.
*FanService: With what the main characters are wearing, it's constant fan service.
*LoveEpiphany: Everyone, expect for Jay and Nya, go through this eventually.
*OppositesAttract: The two couples Zane and Ayane, and Kai and Ebony are perfect examples of this.
*RunningGag: There are a few of these, but the biggest would have to be Jay's invention, the Portable Motion Sensors - PMS for short.
----
!! This fanfic contains examples of:
*AbnormalAmmo: Ayane's bow can shoot arrows of pure light at enemies.
*ActionGirl: The canon character Nya, as well as the three OCs Sasha, Ayane and Ebony, all fit this trope to a T.
*BadassBoast: Almost every time they're in a battle, someone comes up with something. Kai tries, but he usually fails.
*BattleCouple: Nya and Jay, Cole and Sasha, Ayane and Zane and Ebony and Kai.
*ComicallySerious: Zane and Ebony, occasionally.
*DeadpanSnarker: Ebony loves this trope, and the rest indulge in it occasionally.
*FanService: With what the main characters are wearing, it's constant fan service.
*LoveEpiphany: Everyone, expect for Jay and Nya, go through this eventually.
*OppositesAttract: The two couples Zane and Ayane, and Kai and Ebony are perfect examples of this.
*RunningGag: There are a few of these, but the biggest would have to be Jay's invention, the Portable Motion Sensors - PMS for short.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
Elements is a [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/WesternAnimation/Ninjago Ninjago]] fanfiction series, starting with the first book [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8315871/1/The-Makings-of-a-Storm The Makings of a Storm]].
