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* BloodBrothers: Due to the Fiksians' sense of psychoempathy (more important for them than, say, sight is to humans), the Three Captains' emotional bond makes Vsevolod and Kim Norn's brothers by Fiksian law.
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* PracticallyDifferentGenerations: Since the Captains [[spoiler:immediately accept First, Second and Third as their sisters]], it leads to this trope, since the girls are barely older than their children.
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* PracticallyDifferentGenerations: Since the Captains [[spoiler:immediately accept First, Second and Third as their sisters]], it leads to this trope, since the girls are barely older (or, in [[spoiler:First]]'s case, younger) than their children.
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* KarmaHoudiniWarranty: Jolly U, who escaped punishment in the first fanfic, is finally shot by Kim here.
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* AlwaysChaoticEvil: Purposefully subverted with the natives of Krokrys. Pashka and Alice meet a good-hearted Krokrys boy they nickname Fedya, and Alice muses that every sapient species has good and bad people born to it.
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* UnexpectedKindness: Having never encountered human kindness or basic decency at all (except for her two friends and fellow prisoners), Second is astonished when Kim refuses to shoot Jolly U when the latter is holding her, a complete stranger to Kim, as a HumanShield.
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* ClonesArePeopleToo: [[spoiler:First, Second and Third]], created as [[spoiler:the Captains']] clones, end up getting names and identities of their own and start to live a normal life.
* PracticallyDifferentGenerations: Since the Captains [[spoiler:immediately accept First, Second and Third as their sisters]], it leads to this trope, since the girls are barely older than their children.
* UnexpectedKindness: Having never encountered human kindness or basic decency at all (exceptfor from her two friends and fellow prisoners), Second is astonished when Kim refuses to shoot Jolly U when the latter is holding her, a complete stranger to Kim, as a HumanShield.
* PracticallyDifferentGenerations: Since the Captains [[spoiler:immediately accept First, Second and Third as their sisters]], it leads to this trope, since the girls are barely older than their children.
* UnexpectedKindness: Having never encountered human kindness or basic decency at all (except
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* UnexpectedKindness: Having never encountered human kindness or basic decency at all (except for her two friends and fellow prisoners), Second is astonished when Kim refuses to shoot Jolly U when the latter is holding her, a complete stranger to Kim, as a HumanShield.
* UnexpectedKindness: Having never encountered human kindness or basic decency at all (except for her two friends and fellow prisoners), Second is astonished when Kim refuses to shoot Jolly U when the latter is holding her, a complete stranger to Kim, as a HumanShield.
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: The Third Captain's name is never mentioned in the books (and he is AdaptedOut entirely in the animated film). Here, he is called Norn Iils.
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: NamedByTheAdaptation:
** The Third Captain's name is never mentioned in the books (and he is AdaptedOut entirely in the animated film). Here, he is called NornIils.Iils.
** The Second Captain likewise lacks a name in the books, and the film only calls him Kim without elaborating whether it's the first or last name or nickname. Here, he is named Kim Janson.
** The Third Captain's name is never mentioned in the books (and he is AdaptedOut entirely in the animated film). Here, he is called Norn
** The Second Captain likewise lacks a name in the books, and the film only calls him Kim without elaborating whether it's the first or last name or nickname. Here, he is named Kim Janson.
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''[[https://ficbook.net/readfic/2982392 Earth — Fiks Travel Route]]'' is an ''Literature/AliceGirlFromTheFuture'' ContinuationFic written in Russian by [[https://ficbook.net/authors/214638 Мирилас]].
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''[[https://ficbook.net/readfic/2982392 Earth — Fiks Travel Route]]'' is an ''Literature/AliceGirlFromTheFuture'' ContinuationFic written in Russian by [[https://ficbook.net/authors/214638 Мирилас]]. It initially follows the events of the canon but, unlike the latter, shows Alice developing a close friendship with the Three Captains – and, eventually, something more than that with the third captain.
It has two sequels – ''The Episodes of Life'' and ''The Unbreakable Thread''.
It has two sequels – ''The Episodes of Life'' and ''The Unbreakable Thread''.
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* HalfHumanHybrid: Defied. Humans and Fiksians aren't genetically compatible, and it's explicitly stated that artificial hybridization of sapient species is forbidden in the galaxy. Alice and Norn will only be able to have children via insemination from another donor or adoption.
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* HalfHumanHybrid: Defied. Humans and Fiksians aren't genetically compatible, and it's explicitly stated that artificial hybridization of sapient species is forbidden in the galaxy. Alice and Norn will only be able to have children via insemination from another donor or adoption. However, things get a bit changed in the sequel.
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!! Tropes featured in the first sequel, ''The Episodes of Life'':
* CoolOldLady: Svetlana, the First Captain's mother, is a charismatic and regal-looking woman who is still a great ballet dancer at the age of seventy.
* HalfHumanHybrid: Unlike in the first fanfic, it's played straight. In the neighboring galaxy, the hybridization technologies are much more advanced, allowing Norn and Alice to have children of their own. Their son Kir is human-looking but has the Fiksian purple eyes and sense of psychoempathy, and their daughter Tetta has the Fiksian looks, save for human blonde hair, and is comfortable with the Earth's gravity.
* LikeParentLikeChild: Marina, the Second Captain's daughter, is just as adventurous as her father and dreams of spaceflight.
* CoolOldLady: Svetlana, the First Captain's mother, is a charismatic and regal-looking woman who is still a great ballet dancer at the age of seventy.
* HalfHumanHybrid: Unlike in the first fanfic, it's played straight. In the neighboring galaxy, the hybridization technologies are much more advanced, allowing Norn and Alice to have children of their own. Their son Kir is human-looking but has the Fiksian purple eyes and sense of psychoempathy, and their daughter Tetta has the Fiksian looks, save for human blonde hair, and is comfortable with the Earth's gravity.
* LikeParentLikeChild: Marina, the Second Captain's daughter, is just as adventurous as her father and dreams of spaceflight.
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* TechnicolorEyes: Norn's eyes are purple.
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* TechnicolorEyes: Norn's eyes are purple.purple.
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* HalfHumanHybrid: Defied. Humans and Fiksians aren't genetically compatible, and it's explicitly stated that hybridization of sapient species is forbidden in the galaxy. Alice and Norn will only be able to have children via artificial insemination from another donor or adoption.
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* HalfHumanHybrid: Defied. Humans and Fiksians aren't genetically compatible, and it's explicitly stated that artificial hybridization of sapient species is forbidden in the galaxy. Alice and Norn will only be able to have children via artificial insemination from another donor or adoption.
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* HalfHumanHybrid: Defied. Humans and Fiksians aren't genetically compatible, and it's explicitly stated that hybridization of sapient species is forbidden in the galaxy. Alice and Norn will only be able to have children via artificial insemination from another donor or adoption.
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* AndTheAdventureContinues: The fic ends with newly married Alice and Norn leaving for a grand intergalactic expedition.
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* AccidentalMarriage: Downplayed. Norn and Alice ''want'' to get married, but they are planning to wait until she is eighteen, and Alice wishes for a romantic wedding with a FairytaleWeddingDress and everything. Instead, their psychoempathic union happens due to mortal danger, while they are fighting Rat on the Third Planet.
* JailbaitWait: Norn firmly tells Alice to wait with the romance until she turns eighteen. Due to certain unforeseen circumstances, they end up married almost a year earlier.
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* PatchworkFic: The fic is mainly based on the books but borrows the names Buran and Kim for the First (here, it's his last name) and Second Captains from ''Animation/TheMysteryOfTheThirdPlanet''.
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* PatchworkFic: The fic is mainly based on the books but borrows the names Buran and Kim for the First (here, it's his last name) and Second Captains from ''Animation/TheMysteryOfTheThirdPlanet''.''Animation/TheMysteryOfTheThirdPlanet''.
* TechnicolorEyes: Norn's eyes are purple.
* TechnicolorEyes: Norn's eyes are purple.
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* MistakenForRomance: When Kira finds Alice weeping after Kim's wedding, she at first thinks that she is in love with Kim. Alice turns out to have had a LoveEpiphany about ''another'' of the captains.
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* OneTrueLove: Due to their unique psyche, the Fiksians only get married when a psychoempathic union occurs, meaning that they quite literally ''can't'' marry anyone except a true soulmate.
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* BloodBrothers: Due to the Fiksians' sense of psychoempathy (more important for them than, say, sight is to humans), the Three Captains' emotional bond makes Vsevolod and Kim Norn's brothers by Fiksian law.
* HonoraryUncle: Alice makes friends very quickly. A week after meeting the First and Second Captains, she's already calling them Uncle Seva and Uncle Kim.
* HonoraryUncle: Alice makes friends very quickly. A week after meeting the First and Second Captains, she's already calling them Uncle Seva and Uncle Kim.
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: The Third Captain's name is never mentioned in the books (and he is AdaptedOut entirely in the animated film). Here, he is called Norn.
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: The Third Captain's name is never mentioned in the books (and he is AdaptedOut entirely in the animated film). Here, he is called Norn.Norn Iils.
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* InterspeciesRomance: Alice, a human from Earth, eventually falls in love with and marries Norn, a Fiksian native with six arms and three legs and extremely high empathy abilities.
* NamedByTheAdaptation: The Third Captain's name is never mentioned in the books (and he is AdaptedOut entirely in the animated film). Here, he is called Norn.
* NamedByTheAdaptation: The Third Captain's name is never mentioned in the books (and he is AdaptedOut entirely in the animated film). Here, he is called Norn.
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* AscendedExtra: In the books, the Three Captains are at best briefly mentioned after ''Literature/TheVoyageOfAlice''. Here, they are the main characters along with Alice.
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* AdaptationalRelationshipOverhaul: Like in ''Animation/TheMysteryOfTheThirdPlanet'', Rat is always the mastermind and the TortureTechnician of the two pirates. In ''Literature/TheVoyageOfAlice'', both these traits, as part of EarlyInstallmentWeirdness, belonged to Jolly U.
* AdaptationalVillainy:
** In the series, the pirates eventually go through a HeinousnessRetcon, and several later books, especially ''Literature/TheWarWithLilliputians'', feature them in an affectionate FriendlyEnemy dynamic with Alice. Here, they start as vicious and ruthless and remain this way; Jolly U decides to become a RetiredMonster by the end, but out of fear rather than due to any changes in his morals.
** In the books, Rat's sadistic tendencies are only brought up once in a BlackComedy throwaway line about him collecting torture techniques; otherwise, even in their worst phases, the pirates torture prisoners only for information and never out of sheer spite. Here, Rat is extremely sadistic and plans to torture Alice just to get his revenge on her.
* AscendedExtra: In the books, the Three Captains are at best briefly mentioned after ''Literature/TheVoyageOfAlice''. Here, they are the main characters along withAlice.Alice.
* PatchworkFic: The fic is mainly based on the books but borrows the names Buran and Kim for the First (here, it's his last name) and Second Captains from ''Animation/TheMysteryOfTheThirdPlanet''.
* AdaptationalVillainy:
** In the series, the pirates eventually go through a HeinousnessRetcon, and several later books, especially ''Literature/TheWarWithLilliputians'', feature them in an affectionate FriendlyEnemy dynamic with Alice. Here, they start as vicious and ruthless and remain this way; Jolly U decides to become a RetiredMonster by the end, but out of fear rather than due to any changes in his morals.
** In the books, Rat's sadistic tendencies are only brought up once in a BlackComedy throwaway line about him collecting torture techniques; otherwise, even in their worst phases, the pirates torture prisoners only for information and never out of sheer spite. Here, Rat is extremely sadistic and plans to torture Alice just to get his revenge on her.
* AscendedExtra: In the books, the Three Captains are at best briefly mentioned after ''Literature/TheVoyageOfAlice''. Here, they are the main characters along with
* PatchworkFic: The fic is mainly based on the books but borrows the names Buran and Kim for the First (here, it's his last name) and Second Captains from ''Animation/TheMysteryOfTheThirdPlanet''.
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''[[https://ficbook.net/readfic/2982392 Earth — Fiks Travel Route]]'' is an ''Literature/AliceGirlFromTheFuture'' ContinuationFic written in Russian by [[https://ficbook.net/authors/214638 Мирилас]].
!! Tropes featured in the fanfic:
* AscendedExtra: In the books, the Three Captains are at best briefly mentioned after ''Literature/TheVoyageOfAlice''. Here, they are the main characters along with Alice.
!! Tropes featured in the fanfic:
* AscendedExtra: In the books, the Three Captains are at best briefly mentioned after ''Literature/TheVoyageOfAlice''. Here, they are the main characters along with Alice.
