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* BelligerentSexualTension: Seems to be developing between Applejack and Soarin', at least on AJ's part.
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* DoggedNiceGuy: Soarin' to Applejack, before the relationship shifts to full {{BST}} territory.
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* BelligerentSexualTension: Seems to be developing between Applejack and Soarin', at least on AJ's part.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Rainbow Dash is highly confused when Soarin' turns down the offer of free food to focus on training.
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* OverlyLongName: Pinkie Pie's daughter, Tootselina Margaret Esmerelda Gummy Pie. There's also Peregrin Algernon Horatio Squeak, AKA Pipsqueak.
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* OverlyLongName: Pinkie Pie's daughter, Tootselina Margaret Esmerelda Gummy Pie. Pie.
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** Soarin' seems to have developed a crush on Applejack despite (or perhaps because of) the fact that their first interaction involved her chewing him out for his self-pity.
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* MetaphorIsMyMiddleName: "Danger" is Pipsqueak's middle name, or would be if "me uncle Algy hadn't taken precedence."
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* ShipTease: Applebloom apparently didn't know Pipsqueak was back in Ponyville, or what a [[ThroughAFaceFullOfFur handsome stallion he'd grown into]].
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* ShipTease: Applebloom apparently didn't know Pipsqueak was back in Ponyville, or what a [[ThroughAFaceFullOfFur [[SheIsAllGrownUp handsome stallion he'd grown into]].
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* MyBiologicalClockIsTicking: Even though she's only thirty, Applejack is starting to feel old, and feels pressured to continue the family (even tough Big Macintosh already has kids, she feels the need to have some herself).
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* ShipTease: Applebloom apparently didn't know Pipsqueak was back in Ponyville, or what a [[ThroughAFaceFullOfFur handsome stallion he'd grown into]].
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* YeOldeButcheredeEnglishe: Used by Sweetie Belle in Chapter 2 to get Bobbin (one of Rarity's hired help) to help her down to the ground, as she was dressed up as Princess Celestia and hanging in the air by harnesses. Then a horseshoe flies off and clonks him in the head. The resulting hijinks (including Sweetie Belle yo-yoing on the rope) spark Twilight Sparkle's EurekaMoment.
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* YeOldeButcheredeEnglishe: Used by Sweetie Belle in Chapter 2 to get Bobbin (one of Rarity's hired help) to help her down to the ground, as she was dressed up as Princess Celestia and hanging in the air by harnesses. Then a horseshoe flies off and clonks him in the head. The resulting hijinks (including Sweetie Belle yo-yoing on the rope) spark Twilight Sparkle's EurekaMoment.
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* JawDrop: Twilight and Spike's reaction to the first MamaBear moment listed below. Rarity is kind enough to close their mouths for them.
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* CallBack: Nurse Redheart ''still'' has trouble keeping the Mane Six quiet in the maternity ward.
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* BrickJoke: When Pinkie is worrying about where Tootsie is after she runs off, she wonders if maybe she's running an illegal gambling operation. After her new baby is born, Tootsie lists all the things she can't wait to teach her new little sister, which apparently includes three card monte.
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* InTheBlood: Tootsie seems to have inherited her mother's Pinkie Sense, and Windfall has inherited [[DeathGlare The Stare]].
* MamaBear: Implied with Fluttershy, who manages to get a crowd blocking her path to disperse by telling them that they're keeping her from delivering Windfall to a play date with Tootsie. And then we get to see a definite example of this when she uses the Stare to break up an argument between Rainbow Dash and Applejack that's upsetting the children.
-->'''Rarity''': Everypony in Ponyville knows better than to get in Fluttershy's way where her children are concerned.
* MamaBear: Implied with Fluttershy, who manages to get a crowd blocking her path to disperse by telling them that they're keeping her from delivering Windfall to a play date with Tootsie. And then we get to see a definite example of this when she uses the Stare to break up an argument between Rainbow Dash and Applejack that's upsetting the children.
-->'''Rarity''': Everypony in Ponyville knows better than to get in Fluttershy's way where her children are concerned.
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* WeNamedTheMonkeyJack: Part of Tootsie's OverlyLongName includes a shoutout to Gummy.
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* WeNamedTheMonkeyJack: Part of Tootsie's OverlyLongName includes a shoutout to Gummy.Gummy.
* YeOldeButcheredeEnglishe: Used by Sweetie Belle in Chapter 2 to get Bobbin (one of Rarity's hired help) to help her down to the ground, as she was dressed up as Princess Celestia and hanging in the air by harnesses. Then a horseshoe flies off and clonks him in the head. The resulting hijinks (including Sweetie Belle yo-yoing on the rope) spark Twilight Sparkle's EurekaMoment.
* YeOldeButcheredeEnglishe: Used by Sweetie Belle in Chapter 2 to get Bobbin (one of Rarity's hired help) to help her down to the ground, as she was dressed up as Princess Celestia and hanging in the air by harnesses. Then a horseshoe flies off and clonks him in the head. The resulting hijinks (including Sweetie Belle yo-yoing on the rope) spark Twilight Sparkle's EurekaMoment.
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* IDidWhatIHadToDo: [[InvertedTrope Inverted.]] Rainbow Dash uses this in the second person in Chapter 4 [[spoiler:after Spitfire had to cut a fading Soarin' from the Wonderbolts. The decision had clearly tore Spitfire up:]]
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* IDidWhatIHadToDo: [[InvertedTrope Inverted.]] Rainbow Dash uses this in the second person in Chapter 4 [[spoiler:after Spitfire had to cut a fading Soarin' from the Wonderbolts. The decision had clearly tore Spitfire up:]]
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-->[[spoiler:"I f-f-feel like I just s-sawed off one of my own wings." (Note that she was weeping when she said this.)]]
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* IDidWhatIHadToDo: [[InvertedTrope Inverted.]] Rainbow Dash uses these words in Chapter 4 [[spoiler:after Spitfire had to cut a fading Soarin' from the Wonderbolts. The decision had clearly tore Spitfire up:]]
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* IDidWhatIHadToDo: [[InvertedTrope Inverted.]] Rainbow Dash uses these words this in the second person in Chapter 4 [[spoiler:after Spitfire had to cut a fading Soarin' from the Wonderbolts. The decision had clearly tore Spitfire up:]]
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* IDidWhatIHadToDo: [[InvertedTrope Inverted.]] Rainbow Dash uses these words in Chapter 4 [[spoiler:after Spitfire had to cut a fading Soarin' from the Wonderbolts. The decision had clearly tore Spitfire up:]]
-->[[spoiler:"I f-f-feel like I just s-sawed off one of my own wings." (Note that she was weeping when she said this.)]]
-->[[spoiler:"I f-f-feel like I just s-sawed off one of my own wings." (Note that she was weeping when she said this.)]]
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* [[IDidWhatIHadToDo You Did What You Had To Do]]: Said by Rainbow Dash to Spitfire in Chapter 4 [[spoiler:after Spitfire had to cut a fading Soarin' from the Wonderbolts. The decision had clearly tore Spitfire up.]]
-->[[spoiler:"I f-f-feel like I just s-sawed off one of my own wings."]]
* [[IDidWhatIHadToDo You Did What You Had To Do]]: Said by Rainbow Dash to Spitfire in Chapter 4 [[spoiler:after Spitfire had to cut a fading Soarin' from the Wonderbolts. The decision had clearly tore Spitfire up.]]
-->[[spoiler:"I f-f-feel like I just s-sawed off one of my own wings."]]
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* WeNamedTheMonkeyJack: Part of Tootsie's OverlyLongName includes a shoutout to Gummy.
* [[IDidWhatIHadToDo You Did What You Had To Do]]: Said by Rainbow Dash to Spitfire in Chapter 4 [[spoiler:after Spitfire had to cut a fading Soarin' from the Wonderbolts. The decision had clearly tore Spitfire up.]]
-->[[spoiler:"I f-f-feel like I just s-sawed off one of my own wings."]]Gummy.
* [[IDidWhatIHadToDo You Did What You Had To Do]]: Said by Rainbow Dash to Spitfire in Chapter 4 [[spoiler:after Spitfire had to cut a fading Soarin' from the Wonderbolts. The decision had clearly tore Spitfire up.]]
-->[[spoiler:"I f-f-feel like I just s-sawed off one of my own wings."]]
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* WeNamedTheMonkeyJack: Part of Tootsie's OverlyLongName includes a shoutout to Gummy.
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* WeNamedTheMonkeyJack: Part of Tootsie's OverlyLongName includes a shoutout to Gummy.Gummy.
* [[IDidWhatIHadToDo You Did What You Had To Do]]: Said by Rainbow Dash to Spitfire in Chapter 4 [[spoiler:after Spitfire had to cut a fading Soarin' from the Wonderbolts. The decision had clearly tore Spitfire up.]]
-->[[spoiler:"I f-f-feel like I just s-sawed off one of my own wings."]]
* [[IDidWhatIHadToDo You Did What You Had To Do]]: Said by Rainbow Dash to Spitfire in Chapter 4 [[spoiler:after Spitfire had to cut a fading Soarin' from the Wonderbolts. The decision had clearly tore Spitfire up.]]
-->[[spoiler:"I f-f-feel like I just s-sawed off one of my own wings."]]
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* CerebusRetcon: Soarin's eating habits in ''Windfall'' [[spoiler: are what lead to his being cut from the Wonderbolts in Chapter 4]].
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* CerebusRetcon: Along with Pinkie Pie's imagination mentioned above, Soarin's eating habits in ''Windfall'' [[spoiler: are what lead to his being cut from the Wonderbolts in Chapter 4]].
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* TheDragAlong: Applejack is not sold on the artificial wings and is most definitely not an opera pony, but in Chapter 5 she agrees to accompany the other ponies when they go present the idea to the princesses. Rarity argues that her skepticism about the wings would be a bonus in the princesses' eyes.
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* CerebusRetcon: Soarin's eating habits in ''Windfall'' [[spoiler: is what leads to his being cut from the Wonderbolts in Chapter 4]].
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* CerebusRetcon: Soarin's eating habits in ''Windfall'' [[spoiler: is are what leads lead to his being cut from the Wonderbolts in Chapter 4]].
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* ImagineTheAudienceNaked: Rarity offers this advice to Sweetie Belle when the latter's stage fright threatens to flare up again. Sweetie Belle tries to remind Rarity that ponies don't normally ''wear'' clothes.
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* ImagineTheAudienceNaked: Rarity offers this advice to Sweetie Belle when the latter's stage fright threatens to flare up again. Sweetie Belle tries to remind Rarity that [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E26TheBestNightEver ponies don't normally ''wear'' clothes.wear clothes]].
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* OurDragonsAreDifferent: According to Twilight, due to dragons being magic creatures, their physical forms change based on their desires. As an example, she mentions a dragon who lived by himself in the middle of nowhere who grew a second head just so he'd have someone to [[TalkingToThemselves talk to]]. This is also apparently why Spike has wings now when he didn't during his [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E10SecretOfMyExcess greed-induced growth spurt]] -- he didn't want them back then, but has since learned to enjoy the concept of personal flight.
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* OurDragonsAreDifferent: According to Twilight, due to dragons being magic creatures, their physical forms change based on their desires. As an example, she mentions a dragon who lived by himself in the middle of nowhere who grew a second head just so he'd have someone to [[TalkingToThemselves [[TalkingToThemself talk to]]. This is also apparently why Spike has wings now when he didn't during his [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E10SecretOfMyExcess greed-induced growth spurt]] -- he didn't want them back then, but has since learned to enjoy the concept of personal flight.
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* BerserkButton: Insulting Pumpkin is one for Pound -- his friends did it, and he beat them to pulps for it.
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* EurekaMoment: Twilight first starts working on how to help non-pegasus ponies fly after conversations with Pinkie and Pumpkin, but doesn't settle on the idea to use artificial wings until she sees Sweetie Belle wearing a pair as part of her Princess Celestia costume.
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** Twilight's test flights are right out of IronMan.
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** Twilight's test flights are right out of IronMan.''Film/IronMan''.
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** Two of Tootsie Pie's middle names are [[Discworld/CarpeJugulum Margaret and Esmerelda]].
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* Overly-Long Name: Pinkie Pie's daughter, Tootselina Margaret Esmerelda Gummy Pie.
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** Twilight's test flights are right out of IronMan.
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* BlessedWithSuck: Normally Pinkie's stream-of-consciousness rambling is either endearing or annoying. [[CerebusRetcon Now it's driving her to pieces because her imagination runs wild when her daughter is missing]].
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* WackyCravings: A [[AddedAlliterativeAppeal pregnant Pinkie Pie appears to prefer pickled peppers.]]
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* WeNamedTheMonkeyJack: Part of Tootsie's OverlyLongName includes a shoutout to Gummy.
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[[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/09/story-windfall.html Earth and Sky]] is the sequel to the ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic ''Fanfic/Windfall'', and takes place about three years after the events of that story.
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[[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/09/story-windfall.html Earth and Sky]] is the sequel to the ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic ''Fanfic/Windfall'', ''Fanfic/{{Windfall}}'', and takes place about three years after the events of that story.
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[[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/09/story-windfall.html Earth and Sky]] is the sequel to the ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic ''Fanfic/Windfall'', and takes place about three years after the events of that story.
Twilight Sparkle manages to find the time in her busy schedule to visit her friends in Ponyville. Among other things, she finds there's a bit of tension in some of her friends' mixed-race families: Pinkie Pie's got a pegasus daughter (and another little winged bundle of joy due any day now) that she's running ragged try to keep up with, young Pound Cake recently got into a fight with some of his pegasus friends who were making fun of his sister Pumpkin, and even the Apples are a bit sorry they can't keep up with Fluttershy and little Windfall. But Twilight's been thinking this problem over and gets an idea for an invention that, with the help of Apple Bloom and Rarity, could be just the thing to solve it...
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*AdultFear: Pinkie Pie gets a dose of this when her daughter Tootsie wanders off, and she expresses worry to Twilight that being an earth pony with a pegasus daughter will cause them to drift apart.
*ImagineTheAudienceNaked: Rarity offers this advice to Sweetie Belle when the latter's stage fright threatens to flare up again. Sweetie Belle tries to remind Rarity that ponies don't normally ''wear'' clothes.
*RuleOfThree: It takes three attempts for Twilight Sparkle to make working artificial wings. Of course, it takes a bit longer for her to figure out how to properly ''use'' them.
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** Sweetie Belle is apparently playing Princess Celestia in Wagoner's ''[[Theatre/TheRingOfTheNibelung The Ring of the Neighbelung]]''.
*WackyCravings: A [[AddedAlliterativeAppeal pregnant Pinkie Pie appears to prefer pickled peppers.]]
Twilight Sparkle manages to find the time in her busy schedule to visit her friends in Ponyville. Among other things, she finds there's a bit of tension in some of her friends' mixed-race families: Pinkie Pie's got a pegasus daughter (and another little winged bundle of joy due any day now) that she's running ragged try to keep up with, young Pound Cake recently got into a fight with some of his pegasus friends who were making fun of his sister Pumpkin, and even the Apples are a bit sorry they can't keep up with Fluttershy and little Windfall. But Twilight's been thinking this problem over and gets an idea for an invention that, with the help of Apple Bloom and Rarity, could be just the thing to solve it...
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!!This fanfic contains examples of:
*AdultFear: Pinkie Pie gets a dose of this when her daughter Tootsie wanders off, and she expresses worry to Twilight that being an earth pony with a pegasus daughter will cause them to drift apart.
*ImagineTheAudienceNaked: Rarity offers this advice to Sweetie Belle when the latter's stage fright threatens to flare up again. Sweetie Belle tries to remind Rarity that ponies don't normally ''wear'' clothes.
*RuleOfThree: It takes three attempts for Twilight Sparkle to make working artificial wings. Of course, it takes a bit longer for her to figure out how to properly ''use'' them.
*ShoutOut:
** Sweetie Belle is apparently playing Princess Celestia in Wagoner's ''[[Theatre/TheRingOfTheNibelung The Ring of the Neighbelung]]''.
*WackyCravings: A [[AddedAlliterativeAppeal pregnant Pinkie Pie appears to prefer pickled peppers.]]
