History Fanfic / DyingSoul

* ShoutOut: The author shouts out ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'' and ''WebVideo/DontHugMeImScared'' in the author's notes, comparing Hanako to Renesmee and saying that they were inspired to add the [[spoiler: cannibalism scene]] because of DHMIS 5.

[[https://www.quotev.com/story/12309064/Dying-Soul Dying Soul]] is an...[[MindScrew interesting]] crossover fanfic between {{Music/Vocaloid}} and the {{Franchise/Danganronpa}} series, featuring gratuitous violence and profanity, extremely hammy villains, and constant author's notes not only interrupt the story, but go on for far, ''far'' too long while doing so. Possibly the Vocaloid fandom's equivalent to [[Fanfic/MyInnerLife My Inner Life]] in terms of quality, but not quite as infamous.

[[caption-width-right:350:The image used as the cover for the story.]]

* SpellMyNameWithAnS: In the character bios for the sequel, [[spoiler:Mayu's]] son's name is spelled Hisoka. Within the actual story, it is spelled as Misoka.

* PlotRelevantAgeUp: The concept is introduced towards the end of the first story, aging Hanako up from a baby to a young child. In ''Ghosts of the Past'', all the fankids receive one.

* CatGirl: Luka, Flower, Maika, and Gakupo's other slaves become one when they reach the mansion. It's not explained why or how Gakupo has the power to do this.

* DeadFic: Hasn't been updated since 2020.

* AllThereInTheManual: The author's profile contains a set of [[https://www.quotev.com/story/12388703/Ghosts-Of-The-Past-Character-Bios/ character bios]] for a SpinOffspring [[https://www.quotev.com/story/12388703/Ghosts-Of-The-Past/ sequel]], and the description for the set of bios specifically states to read them before reading said sequel.

* ClusterFBomb: In a similar vein to [[Fanfic/MyImmortal My Immortal]], pretty much every character swears constantly with very little provocation.
--> '''Fukase:''' "Alright bitches we got five minutes before his gf comes here and tries to fuckin kills us"

* PlotRelevantAgeUp: Hanako, Flower and Gakupo's daughter, matures quickly in a similar fashion to ''Literature/{{Twilight}}''[='=]s Renesmee. The author even [[LampshadeHanging points this out]] in a note.

[[https://www.quotev.com/story/12309064/Dying-Soul Dying Soul]] is an...[[MindScrew interesting]] crossover fanfic between {{Music/Vocaloid}} and the {{Franchise/Danganronpa}} series, featuring gratuitous violence and profanity, extremely hammy villains, and constant author's notes not only interrupt the story, but go on for far, ''far'' too long while doing so. Possibly the Vocaloid fandom's equivalent to [[Fanfic/MyInnerLife My Inner Life]] in terms of quality, but not quite as infamous. [[quoteright:250:https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/dyingsoulcover.jpg]]
[[caption-width-right:250:The image used as the cover for the story.]]

[[https://www.quotev.com/story/12309064/Dying-Soul Dying Soul]] is an...[[MindScrew interesting]] crossover fanfic between {{Music/Vocaloid}} and the {{Franchise/Danganronpa}} series, featuring gratuitous violence and profanity, extremely hammy villains, and constant author's notes not only interrupt the story, but go on for far, ''far'' too long while doing so. Possibly the Vocaloid fandom's equivalent to [[Fanfic/MyInnerLife My Inner Life]] in terms of quality, but not quite as infamous. [[quoteright:350:https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/mvzqvs2jaaaa_2.jpg]]
[[caption-width-right:350:The image used as the cover on Quotev.]]

[[https://www.quotev.com/story/12309064/Dying-Soul Dying Soul]] is an...[[MindScrew interesting]] crossover fanfic between {{Music/Vocaloid}} and the {{Franchise/Danganronpa}} series, featuring gratuitous violence and profanity, extremely hammy villains, and constant author's notes not only interrupt the story, but go on for far, ''far'' too long while doing so. Possibly the Vocaloid fandom's equivalent to [[Fanfic/MyInnerLife My Inner Life]] in terms of quality, but not quite as infamous.

* NinjaPirateZombieRobot: After [[spoiler: Fukase and Kaito]] are brought [[BackFromTheDead back from the dead]], the villains become [[ItMakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext "magic ninja neko vampires".

!! Dying Soul contains examples of:

* [[AuthorAppeal Author Appeal]]: The author seems to be fond of [[OurVampiresAreDifferent vampires]], [[CatGirl nekos]], and [[GuyOnGuyIsHot gay ships]], shoehorning them in at every opportunity.
* [[AxCrazy Ax-Crazy]]: The majority of the cast, including the main character, kill other characters without any sort of explanation or remorse, and even practice [[spoiler: cannibalism]].
* [[BackFromTheDead Back From The Dead]]: Fukase and Kaito are murdered and their organs harvested by Flower in the fifth chapter, said organs later being ''eaten'' by [[spoiler:Gakupo]] in Chapter 7. They come back later and [[FaceHeelTurn join the villains]].
* [[BastardBoyfriend Bastard Boyfriend]]: Gakupo is described as being the most powerful gang leader in all of Japan, and he kidnaps people from gangs he's defeated and forces them to be his sex slaves. He also [[spoiler: [[ImAHumanitarian gladly eats a soup made of human blood and organs]]]]. And yet, he's still portrayed as Flower's soulmate, with Flower giving birth to his child in Chapter 16.
* [[BigFancyHouse Big, Fancy House]]: Gakupo's home, Sword Mansion, where most of the story takes place, is likely supposed to be one, although due to the BeigeProse, it's not really described in much detail.

* [[CatGirl Cat Girl]]: Luka, Flower, Maika, and Gakupo's other slaves become one when they reach the mansion. It's not explained why or how Gakupo has the power to do this.
* [[ClusterFBomb Cluster F Bomb]]: In a similar vein to [[Fanfic/MyImmortal My Immortal]], pretty much every character swears constantly with very little provocation.

* [[DemotedToExtra Demoted To Extra]]: The {{Franchise/Danganronpa}} characters seem like they're going to play a big role, but they don't really do much, besides [[spoiler: [[{{VisualNovel/DanganronpaV3KillingHarmony}} Kaito Momota]] killing the [[OneSteveLimit other]] [[{{Music/Vocaloid}} Kaito]]]].

* [[DontExplainTheJoke Don't Explain The Joke]]: The author butts in pretty much every single time a joke is made to explain it with an author's note.
* [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Exactly What It Says On The Tin]]: The twenty-first chapter is titled [[spoiler: "Mayu Dies"]]. Guess what happens.

* [[FrenchMaidOutfit French Maid Outfit]]: Gakupo's female slaves all wear these.
* GlasgowGrin: As mentioned before under EyeScream, Flower carves this onto Fukase's face after harvesting his organs for a soup to feed to Gakupo.

* [[MeaningfulName Meaningful Name]]: Flower's [[GooGooGodlike child]] is named Hanako, which translates to "flower child".
* [[MindScrew Mind Screw]]: Characters are brought back from the dead randomly, and killed off just as quickly, nobody seems to have any motivation for their actions and kill each other at the drop of a hat, and none of their various powers are ever given a decent explanation. The [[RougeAnglesOfSatin spelling]] does not help.
* [[NinjaPirateZombieRobot Ninja Pirate Zombie Robot]]: After [[spoiler: Fukase and Kaito are brought [[BackFromTheDead back from the dead]]]], the villains become [[ItMakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext "magic ninja neko vampires"]].
* [[NoIndoorVoice No Indoor Voice]]: It would be easier to find a line of [[BigBad Mayu's]] dialogue that ''isn't'' in all caps. Take this quote from Chapter 16:

* [[OneSteveLimit One Steve Limit]]: Averted, there are two Kaitos from two [[{{VisualNovel/DanganronpaV3KillingHarmony}} completely]] [[{{Music/Vocaloid}} different]] sources, although neither of them do very much.
* [[PlayingWithFire Playing With Fire]]: Gumi gains fire powers in Chapter 9 and uses them to attack Flower. They are never brought up again.
* [[PlotRelevantAgeUp Plot Relevant Age Up]]: Hanako, Flower and Gakupo's daughter, matures quickly in a similar fashion to {{Literature/Twilight}}'s Renesmee. The author even [[LampshadeHanging points this out]] in a note.
* ShoutOut: The author shouts out {{Literature/Twilight}} and [[WebVideo/DontHugMeImScared DHMIS]] in the author's notes, comparing Hanako to Renesmee and saying that they were inspired to add the [[spoiler: cannibalism scene]] because of DHMIS 5.

* [[SpotlightStealingSquad Spotlight Stealing Squad]]: Flower, Gakupo, and, after her birth, their child, Hanako take away a lot of attention from the rest of the characters. ''Especially'' Hanako.

* [[ThisIsForEmphasisBitch This Is For Emphasis, Bitch!]]: Used by Flower after [[spoiler:Gakupo is accidentally shot by Meiko]] in Chapter 11.

--> '''Hanako:''' "I think everyones soul is dying now"
--> '''Gakupo:''' "But even a dying soul can change evryting"