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* ShoutOut: Jane's response to finding John and Rose is the first few lines of GLaDOS's from ''VideoGame/Portal2''.
-->'''Jane:''' Oh. It's ''you.'' It's been a long time. How have you been. Disregard that. It has not been a long time at all. Time has not elapsed in any significant manner since things got out of hand.
-->'''Jane:''' Oh. It's ''you.'' It's been a long time. How have you been. Disregard that. It has not been a long time at all. Time has not elapsed in any significant manner since things got out of hand.
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The story can be found on [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=12003&p=1 MSPfanventures]]
Considering that this is a alternate ending, there will be spoilers for Homestuck.
Considering that this is a alternate ending, there will be spoilers for Homestuck.
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The story can be found on [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=12003&p=1 MSPfanventures]]
MSPFA]].
Considering that this isa an alternate ending, there will be spoilers for Homestuck.
Considering that this is
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!! This fanfiction provides examples of:
* AbortedArc: One of the main reason for the fic is the amount of these caused by Homestuck's sudden ending.
* AbortedArc: One of the main reason for the fic is the amount of these caused by Homestuck's sudden ending.
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!! This fanfiction fanventure provides examples of:
* AbortedArc: One of the main reason for thefic fanventure is the amount of these caused by Homestuck's sudden ending.
* AbortedArc: One of the main reason for the
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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler: Aranea and Meenah]]
* NoWaterproofingInTheFuture: Lampshaded [[spoiler: It's how they defeat the crocker controlled Jane.]]
* NoWaterproofingInTheFuture: Lampshaded [[spoiler: It's how they defeat the crocker controlled Jane.]]
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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler: Aranea Aranea, Meenah, and Meenah]]
Vriska.]]
* NoWaterproofingInTheFuture:Lampshaded Lampshaded. [[spoiler: It's how they defeat the crocker controlled mind-controlled Jane.]]
* NoWaterproofingInTheFuture:
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* ShipTease: This is Homestuck
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* ShipTease: This is HomestuckHomestuck.
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* StepfordSmiler: Downplayed. Jake tries to act that he completely forgiven Dirk and Jane for what happened between the trickster incident and Gameover. Neither one of the two buys it.
* SparedByTheAdaptation: Considering that John doesn't recon all the way to before the Scratch, Davesprite doesn't get killed by Bec Noir.
* WhatTheHellHero: Unlike in canon, Rose witnesses her timelime's Roxy's demise instead of finding the body a long time afterwards. She's genuinely upset that no one told her about the doomed Roxy.
* SparedByTheAdaptation: Considering that John doesn't recon all the way to before the Scratch, Davesprite doesn't get killed by Bec Noir.
* WhatTheHellHero: Unlike in canon, Rose witnesses her timelime's Roxy's demise instead of finding the body a long time afterwards. She's genuinely upset that no one told her about the doomed Roxy.
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* StepfordSmiler: Downplayed. Jake tries to act that he completely forgiven Dirk and Jane for what happened between the trickster incident and Gameover.Game Over. Neither one of the two buys it.
* SparedByTheAdaptation: Considering that John doesn'trecon retcon all the way to before the Scratch, Davesprite doesn't get killed by Bec Noir.
* WhatTheHellHero: Unlike in canon, Rose witnesses hertimelime's timeline's Roxy's demise instead of finding the body a long time afterwards. She's genuinely upset that no one told her about the doomed Roxy.
* SparedByTheAdaptation: Considering that John doesn't
* WhatTheHellHero: Unlike in canon, Rose witnesses her
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* OtherMeAnnoysMe: Dave and Davesprite.
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* NoWaterproofingintheFuture: Lampshaded [[spoiler: It's how they defeat the crocker controlled Jane.]]
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* NoWaterproofingintheFuture: NoWaterproofingInTheFuture: Lampshaded [[spoiler: It's how they defeat the crocker controlled Jane.]]
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* NoWaterproofingintheFuture: Lampshaded [[spoiler: It's how they defeat the crocker controlled Jane.]]
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* Sparedbytheadaptation: Considering that John doesn't recon all the way to before the Scratch, Davesprite doesn't get killed by Bec Noir.
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* Sparedbytheadaptation: SparedByTheAdaptation: Considering that John doesn't recon all the way to before the Scratch, Davesprite doesn't get killed by Bec Noir.
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* Sparedbytheadaptation: Considering that John doesn't recon all the way to before the Scratch, Davesprite doesn't get killed by Bec Noir.
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* YouKillItYouBoughtIt: The Condense as in canon is under an immortality curse where she has eternal life in exchange for being a slave to Lord English. Whoever kills her gains the curse. [[spoiler: while in canon this is later forgotten about. Here Jane decides not to kill her for this very reason, opting instead to capture her.]]
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* YouKillItYouBoughtIt: The Condense as in canon is under an immortality curse where she has eternal life in exchange for being a slave to Lord English. Whoever kills her gains the curse. [[spoiler: while in canon this is later forgotten about. Here about, here Jane decides not to kill her for this very reason, opting instead to capture her.]]
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What comes next is a fic that tries to continue the character development from before the recon while also dodging the plot holes created from the original ending.
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What comes next is a fic that tries to continue the character development from before the recon retcon while also dodging the plot holes created from the original ending.
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Considering that this is a alternate ending. There will be spoilers for Homestuck.
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Considering that this is a alternate ending. There ending, there will be spoilers for Homestuck.
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** Lil Hal mentions that considering he was created from a brain ghost that from his point of view he was until he spontaneously was a pair of glasses.
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** Lil Hal mentions that considering he was created from a brain ghost that from his point of view he was Dirk until he spontaneously was a pair of glasses.
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* CloningBlues: Davesprite as in canon.
** Lil Hal mentions that considering he was created from a brain ghost that from his point of view he was until he spontaneously was a pair of glasses.
** Lil Hal mentions that considering he was created from a brain ghost that from his point of view he was until he spontaneously was a pair of glasses.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Erisolsprite gives one to Jake, telling him that while he always asked for advice he never bother to actually considers the advice given to him.
* StepfordSmiler: Downplayed. Jake tries to act that he completely forgiven Dirk and Jane for what happened between the trickster incident and Gameover. Neither one of the buys it.
* StepfordSmiler: Downplayed. Jake tries to act that he completely forgiven Dirk and Jane for what happened between the trickster incident and Gameover. Neither one of the buys it.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Erisolsprite gives one to Jake, telling him that while he always asked for advice he never bother bothers to actually considers consider the advice given to him.
* StepfordSmiler: Downplayed. Jake tries to act that he completely forgiven Dirk and Jane for what happened between the trickster incident and Gameover. Neither one of the two buys it.
* StepfordSmiler: Downplayed. Jake tries to act that he completely forgiven Dirk and Jane for what happened between the trickster incident and Gameover. Neither one of the two buys it.
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* CantKillYouStillNeedYou: Karkat and Kanaya know that the Condense needs them alive to bargain with Echidna. They use the opportunity to call her out for a few things.
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* StepfordSmiler: Downplayed. Jake tries to act that everything is completely forgiven Dirk and Jane for what happened between the trickster incident and Gameover. Neither one of the buys it.
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* StepfordSmiler: Downplayed. Jake tries to act that everything is he completely forgiven Dirk and Jane for what happened between the trickster incident and Gameover. Neither one of the buys it.
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* StepfordSmiler: Downplayed. Jake tries to act that everything is completely forgiven Dirk and Jane for what happened between the trickster incident and Gameover. Neither one of the buy it.
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* StepfordSmiler: Downplayed. Jake tries to act that everything is completely forgiven Dirk and Jane for what happened between the trickster incident and Gameover. Neither one of the buy buys it.
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An alternate ending to Homestuck from Game Over onwards. The major [[ForWantofaNail nail]] in the story being that John didn't go back in time to receive instructions from Terezi, meaning that he didn't go back to prevent Vriska's death. Instead John goes back just before the events of Gameover and Roxy restored everyone's memories by removing the nonexistence of those memories from everyone from that timeline.
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An alternate ending to Homestuck from Game Over onwards. The major [[ForWantofaNail nail]] in the story being that John didn't go back in time to receive instructions from Terezi, meaning that he didn't go back to prevent Vriska's death. Instead John goes back just before the events of Gameover and Roxy restored restores everyone's memories by removing the nonexistence of those memories from memories, catching everyone from that timeline.
up to speed on the situation.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Erisolsprite gives one to Jake, telling him that while he always asked for advice he never bother to actually act on the advice given to him.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Erisolsprite gives one to Jake, telling him that while he always asked for advice he never bother to actually act on considers the advice given to him.him.
* StepfordSmiler: Downplayed. Jake tries to act that everything is completely forgiven Dirk and Jane for what happened between the trickster incident and Gameover. Neither one of the buy it.
* StepfordSmiler: Downplayed. Jake tries to act that everything is completely forgiven Dirk and Jane for what happened between the trickster incident and Gameover. Neither one of the buy it.
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* BroughtDownToBadass: [[spoiler: Jade knocks the Green Sun out of the range of the session. She's still a god-tier Witch of Space.]]
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* BroughtDownToBadass: [[spoiler: Jade knocks the Green Sun out of the range of the session.session, losing all the powers that she gained from being fused with Bec. She's still a god-tier Witch of Space.]]
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* BroughtDownToBadass: [[spoiler: Jade knocks the Green Sun out of the range of the session. She's still a god-tier Witch of Space.]]
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* WhatTheHellHero: Unlike in canon, Rose witnesses her timelime's Roxy's demise instead of finding the body a long time afterwards. She's genuinely upset that no one told her about the doomed Roxy.
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* AbortedArc: One of the main reason for the fic is the amount of these caused by Homestuck sudden ending.
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* AbortedArc: One of the main reason for the fic is the amount of these caused by Homestuck Homestuck's sudden ending.
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* [[spoiler: Back for the Dead]]: [[spoiler: Erisolsprite]]
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* BackForTheDead: [[spoiler: Back for the Dead]]: Erisolsprite]]
* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:Erisolsprite]]Aranea and Meenah]]
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Erisolsprite gives one to Jake, telling him that while he always asked for advice he never bother to actually act on the advice given to him.
* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Erisolsprite gives one to Jake, telling him that while he always asked for advice he never bother to actually act on the advice given to him.
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* AbortedArc: One of the main reason for the fic is the amount of these caused by Homestuck sudden ending.
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* [[spoiler: Back for the Dead]]: [[spoiler: Erisolsprite]]
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* AlternateUniverseFic
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* AlternateUniverseFicAlternateUniverseFic
* YouKillItYouBoughtIt: The Condense as in canon is under an immortality curse where she has eternal life in exchange for being a slave to Lord English. Whoever kills her gains the curse. [[spoiler: while in canon this is later forgotten about. Here Jane decides not to kill her for this very reason, opting instead to capture her.]]
* YouKillItYouBoughtIt: The Condense as in canon is under an immortality curse where she has eternal life in exchange for being a slave to Lord English. Whoever kills her gains the curse. [[spoiler: while in canon this is later forgotten about. Here Jane decides not to kill her for this very reason, opting instead to capture her.]]
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An alternate ending to Homestuck from Game Over onwards. The major nail in the story being that John didn't go back in time to receive instructions from Terezi, meaning that he didn't go back to prevent Vriska's death. Instead John goes back just before the events of Gameover and Roxy restored everyone's memories by removing the nonexistence of those memories from everyone from that timeline.
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An alternate ending to Homestuck from Game Over onwards. The major nail [[ForWantofaNail nail]] in the story being that John didn't go back in time to receive instructions from Terezi, meaning that he didn't go back to prevent Vriska's death. Instead John goes back just before the events of Gameover and Roxy restored everyone's memories by removing the nonexistence of those memories from everyone from that timeline.
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The story can be found on [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=12003&p=1 MSPfanventures]]
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Considering that this is a alternate ending. There will be spoilers for Homestuck.
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Considering that this is a alternate ending. There will be spoilers for Homestuck.Homestuck.
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!! This fanfiction provides examples of:
* AlternateUniverseFic
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!! This fanfiction provides examples of:
* AlternateUniverseFic
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An alternate ending to Homestuck from Game Over onwards. The major nail in the story being that John didn't go back in time to receive instructions from Terezi, meaning that he didn't go back to prevent Vriska's death. Instead John goes back just before the events of Gameover and Roxy restored everyone's memories by removing the nonexistence of those memories from everyone from that timeline.
What comes next is a fic that tries to continue the character development from before the recon while also dodging the plot holes created from the original ending.
Considering that this is a alternate ending. There will be spoilers for Homestuck.
What comes next is a fic that tries to continue the character development from before the recon while also dodging the plot holes created from the original ending.
Considering that this is a alternate ending. There will be spoilers for Homestuck.
