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* BullyingADragon: After Ahsoka points out that Fives, having been resurrected and served the longest out of Domino Squad, has more experience than Rex, who believes that "experience outranks everything", Fives foolishly chooses to mock Rex for it. [[TooDumbToLive While the clones are in the middle of a sparring training session.]]
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* BullyingADragon: After Ahsoka points out that Fives, having been resurrected and served the longest out of Domino Squad, has more experience than Rex, who believes that "experience outranks everything", Fives foolishly chooses to mock Rex for it. [[TooDumbToLive While the clones are in the middle of a sparring training session.]]
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* TheChosenOne: Anakin is this, obviously. [[spoiler:Like the Mortis Arc, this becomes central, as The Daughter wishes to prevent his [[FaceHeelTurn fall to the Darkside]]. As such she, chooses the Domino Squad to serve as his vanguard to prevent this from happening. While the Son, chooses Krell to help bring this about.]]
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* TheChosenOne: Anakin is this, obviously. [[spoiler:Like the Mortis Arc, this becomes central, as The Daughter wishes to prevent his [[FaceHeelTurn fall to the Darkside]]. As such she, chooses the Domino Squad to serve as his vanguard to prevent this from happening. While the Son, Son chooses Krell to help bring this about.]]
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* BirdsOfAFeather: The [=501st=]'s resident BoisterousBruiser BloodKnight{{s}} Hevy and Hardcase get along swimmingly.
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* BirdsOfAFeather: The [=501st=]'s resident BoisterousBruiser BloodKnight{{s}} {{Blood Knight}}s Hevy and Hardcase get along swimmingly.
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** In most time travel stories, it's almost always a Jedi (usually Obi-wan or Anakin) or at least somebody who is Force-sensitive the one set back in time. In this story, however, it's a group of Clone Troopers.
** The time traveler is set back in time with the goal of stopping Palpatine, who they know is Darth Sidious, from wiping out the Jedi and turning the Republic into the Empire. Here, due the fact that all of them died before the end of the Clone Wars, Domino Squad instead use Fives' future knowledge to ensure past battles have better results with less casualties. Fives know about the chips and that Palpatine has something to do with them, but other than that he is unaware of their true purpose, that Palpatine is secretly a Sith Lord who's running both sides of the war, or what is his ultimate endgame.
** The time traveler is set back in time with the goal of stopping Palpatine, who they know is Darth Sidious, from wiping out the Jedi and turning the Republic into the Empire. Here, due the fact that all of them died before the end of the Clone Wars, Domino Squad instead use Fives' future knowledge to ensure past battles have better results with less casualties. Fives know about the chips and that Palpatine has something to do with them, but other than that he is unaware of their true purpose, that Palpatine is secretly a Sith Lord who's running both sides of the war, or what is his ultimate endgame.
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** In most time travel stories, it's almost always a Jedi (usually Obi-wan or Anakin) or at least somebody who is Force-sensitive the one set sent back in time. In this story, however, it's a group of Clone Troopers.
** The time traveler isset sent back in time with the goal of stopping Palpatine, who they know is Darth Sidious, from wiping out the Jedi and turning the Republic into the Empire. Here, due the fact that all of them died before the end of the Clone Wars, Domino Squad instead use Fives' future knowledge to ensure past battles have better results with less casualties. Fives know knows about the chips and that Palpatine has something to do with them, but other than that he is unaware of their true purpose, that Palpatine is secretly a Sith Lord who's running both sides of the war, or what is his ultimate endgame.
** The time traveler is
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** During a mission on Ord Mantell, when Obi-wan boasts how his division reached the meeting point before Anakin's, Anakin complaints that Obi-wan only won because he started on high ground.
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** During a mission on Ord Mantell, when Obi-wan boasts how his division reached the meeting point before Anakin's, Anakin complaints complains that Obi-wan only won because he started on high ground.
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* FormulaWithATwist: The PeggySue is a very popular genre in the Star Wars fandom, but this story has some twists that sets it apart from other stories with similar premises:
** In most time travel stories, it's almost always a Jedi (usually Obi-wan or Anakin) or at least somebody who is Force-sensitive the one set back in time. In this story, however, it's a group of Clone Troopers.
** The time traveler is set back in time with the goal of stopping Palpatine, who they know is Darth Sidious, from wiping out the Jedi and turning the Republic into the Empire. Here, due the fact that all of them died before the end of the Clone Wars, Domino Squad instead use Fives' future knowledge to ensure past battles have better results with less casualties. Fives know about the chips and that Palpatine has something to do with them, but other than that he is unaware of their true purpose, that Palpatine is secretly a Sith Lord who's running both sides of the war, or what is his ultimate endgame.
** In most time travel stories, it's almost always a Jedi (usually Obi-wan or Anakin) or at least somebody who is Force-sensitive the one set back in time. In this story, however, it's a group of Clone Troopers.
** The time traveler is set back in time with the goal of stopping Palpatine, who they know is Darth Sidious, from wiping out the Jedi and turning the Republic into the Empire. Here, due the fact that all of them died before the end of the Clone Wars, Domino Squad instead use Fives' future knowledge to ensure past battles have better results with less casualties. Fives know about the chips and that Palpatine has something to do with them, but other than that he is unaware of their true purpose, that Palpatine is secretly a Sith Lord who's running both sides of the war, or what is his ultimate endgame.
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* MythologyGag:
** During a mission on Ord Mantell, when Obi-wan boasts how his division reached the meeting point before Anakin's, Anakin complaints that Obi-wan only won because he started on high ground.
** When Anakin [[spoiler:finds out about the chips inside the Clones' heads and how it basically turns them into slaves]] Anakin laments that "he has become the very thing [he] swore to destroy".
** During a mission on Ord Mantell, when Obi-wan boasts how his division reached the meeting point before Anakin's, Anakin complaints that Obi-wan only won because he started on high ground.
** When Anakin [[spoiler:finds out about the chips inside the Clones' heads and how it basically turns them into slaves]] Anakin laments that "he has become the very thing [he] swore to destroy".
