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* BadassBoast: "I am Great! I am Powerful! And by all that is holy, ''[[KneelBeforeZod you will kneel before me, monster!]]''"monster!]]''"
* BearsAreBadNews: An [[CelestialBody Ursa Major]] appears, one that's [[MamaBear rather]] [[UnstoppableRage vexed]] by Flim and Flam accidentally [[TooDumbToLive hurting its cub.]]
* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: Lives up to her old boast in that she actually managed to defeat and drive off an Ursa Major. (Played with in that she had nothing left, and if the Ursa pressed the attack she'd be finished.)
* MamaBear: Flim and Flam accidentally hurt an Ursa Major's cub. She was understandably a little irritated at that.
* BearsAreBadNews: An [[CelestialBody Ursa Major]] appears, one that's [[MamaBear rather]] [[UnstoppableRage vexed]] by Flim and Flam accidentally [[TooDumbToLive hurting its cub.]]
* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: Lives up to her old boast in that she actually managed to defeat and drive off an Ursa Major. (Played with in that she had nothing left, and if the Ursa pressed the attack she'd be finished.)
* MamaBear: Flim and Flam accidentally hurt an Ursa Major's cub. She was understandably a little irritated at that.
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* OneWingedAngel: Both Rarity and Ember. Rarity grows to a large size because of Greedgrowth Insanity. Ember is temporarily aged up into an adult dragon to fight her.
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* CassandraTruth: Twilight, Discord and Pinkie Pie all tell Spike that his ShapeshiftingSeducer plan is a '''bad''' idea. He doesn't listen.
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* CassandraTruth: Twilight, Discord and Pinkie Pie all tell Spike that his ShapeshiftingSeducer plan is a '''bad''' idea. He doesn't listen. Rarity figures out who he is almost immediately.
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* CassandraTruth: Twilight, Discord and Pinkie Pie all tell Spike that his ShapeshiftingSeducer plan is a '''bad''' idea. He doesn't listen.
* ShapeshiftingSeducer: A rated-G version. Spike chooses to take on a unicorn form for one week (he pays the additional days) to try and flirt with Rarity.
* ShapeshiftingSeducer: A rated-G version. Spike chooses to take on a unicorn form for one week (he pays the additional days) to try and flirt with Rarity.
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* WrestlerInAllOfUs: Applejack gets herself in a wrestling match against Iron Will.
* BiTheWay: Rarity kidnaps people she finds physically attractive. Among them, there's Applejack, Trixie and Zecora. And she tries to add ''Ember'' to the list.
* ReallyGetsAround: Not technically, but... Rarity kidnaps people she finds physically attractive. We have: Spike, Big Macintosh, Applejack, Fancy Pants, Blueblood, Zecora, Trixie, Filthy Rich, Bulk Biceps, and a changeling.
* ReallyGetsAround: Not technically, but... Rarity kidnaps people she finds physically attractive. We have: Spike, Big Macintosh, Applejack, Fancy Pants, Blueblood, Zecora, Trixie, Filthy Rich, Bulk Biceps, and a changeling.
* AdaptationalVillainy: Remember Jet Set and Upper Crust, the two jerks from ''Sweet and Elite''? Here, they're revealed to be fanatical racists who, with the help of corrupt guards, beat up non-ponies and brainwash them in never coming back to Canterlot, all in the name of keeping the city "pure". They already had 18 victims, and Luna would have been the 19th...
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* FantasticRacism: During her exploration of Canterlot, Zebra Luna is turned away from and treated like crap by a pair of high-end businesses ... businesses... and is then beaten up by corrupt guards, guards at the service of the pony KuKluxKlan, as had 18 non-ponies before her. To say the least, Princess Celestia does not take the revelation lightly.lightly.
* GenreBlind: The two racist monsters take sadistic pleasure in gloating to their victims before brainwashing them. Luna takes an equal pleasure into lampshading their stupidity before getting away from them.
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* SeekingSanctuary: Canterlot's nobles have the right to extend the protection of sanctuary to anyone they want, and only the Princesses can break it. Fancy Pants invokes his right to protect Zebra Luna.
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* FantasticRacism: During her exploration of Canterlot, Zebra Luna is turned away from a pair of high-end businesses ... and is then beaten up by corrupt guards, as had 18 zebras non-ponies before her. To say the least, Princess Celestia does not take the revelation lightly.
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* FantasticRacism: During her exploration of Canterlot, Zebra Luna is turned away from a pair of high-end businesses ... and is then beaten up by corrupt guards, as had 18 zebras before her. To say the least, Princess Celestia does not take the revelation lightly.
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Which business? Why, turn ponies in other species for 24 hours! And because he's feeling nice, he gave a free transformation Twilight and all her friends.
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Which business? Why, turn ponies in other species for 24 hours! And because he's feeling nice, he gave a free transformation to Twilight and all her friends.
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''Discord's new business'' is a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfiction set somewhere after season 6.
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''Discord's new business'' New Business'' is a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfiction set somewhere after season 6.
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** The possible transformation are: Earth pony, pegasus, unicorn, alicorn, zebra, donkey, griffon, minotaur, old-type changeling (Pre-season 6), new-type changeling (Post-season 6), changeling royalty, dragon, and draconequus. Special requests are possible.
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** The possible transformation are: Earth pony, pegasus, unicorn, alicorn, zebra, donkey, griffon, minotaur, old-type changeling (Pre-season 6), new-type changeling (Post-season 6), changeling royalty, royalty (Chrysalis and Thorax types), dragon, and draconequus. Special requests are possible.
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** Later on, Diamond dog and [[Rule63 Genderswap]] are added to the list.
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* BreakingTheFourthWall: The first thing Pinkie as an Alicorn does is ''take over the narration and make the author fill in for her at Sugercube Corner!!'' Don't worry, she exchanges back at the end of the chapter.
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* BreakingTheFourthWall: The first thing Pinkie as an Alicorn does is ''take over the narration and make the author fill in for her at Sugercube Sugarcube Corner!!'' Don't worry, she exchanges back at the end of the chapter.
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* BeatTheCurseOutOfHim: How Ember brings Rarity back to her senses.
* WholePlotReference: This chapter is more or less "''Secret of my excess'', the remake", but with Spike and Rarity's roles reversed.
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* BeatTheCurseOutOfHim: How Ember brings Rarity back to her senses.
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* WholePlotReference: This chapter is more or less "''Secret of myexcess'', Excess'', the remake", Remake", but with Spike and Rarity's roles reversed.
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* BigSisterInstinct: When Celestia discovers what happened to Luna, she goes ''beyond'' mad.
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* BigSisterInstinct: When Celestia discovers what happened to Luna, that Luna was attacked while she was disguised, she goes ''beyond'' mad.
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Which business? Why, turn ponies in other species for 24 hours!
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Which business? Why, turn ponies in other species for 24 hours!
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* RealityEnsues: Flutteshy gets to find out how it's like to be a tree. It's not as great as she thought...
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* RealityEnsues: Flutteshy Fluttershy gets to find out how it's like to be a tree. It's not as great as she thought...
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Can be read [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/366849/discords-new-business here.]]
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* VoluntaryShapeshifting: The theme of the fic. Discord, for a fee, transforms his costumer in what he wants for 24 hours (or more).
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* VoluntaryShapeshifting: The theme of the fic. Discord, for a fee, transforms his costumer customer in what he wants they want for 24 hours (or more).
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* RelationshipUpgrade: Starlight and Sunburst.
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* BreakingTheFourthWall: The first thing Pinkie as an Alicorn does is ''take over the narration and make the author fill in for her at Sugercube Corner!!'' Don't worry, she exchanges back at the end of the chapter.
* TheMindIsAPlaythingOfTheBody: While she stays a CloudCuckooLander, Pinkie is also more mature as an Alicorn.
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* DidntSeeThatComing: Both InUniverse and OutOfUniverse.
--> '''Discord:''' ...Congratulations. You're now one of the only beings in the history of EVER who've caught me off-guard.
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* PunctuatedForEmphasis: '''You. Hurt. My. Sister.'''
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* TheMindIsAPlaythingOfTheBody: Fluttershy sees how Discord sees the world. And goes on a prank fest.
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* WhatTheHellHero: A light version. Rainbow Dash and the Apple family aren't happy at all to see Applejack be a {{Workaholic}}.
--> '''Rainbow Dash:''' AJ... I am disappoint...
* {{Workaholic}}: Applejack uses her freebie and her day off ''to do more work''.
--> '''Rainbow Dash:''' AJ... I am disappoint...
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* FantasticSlur: "Magpie".
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Gilda delivers a brutal one on the other griffons on how they let their selfishness and greed destroy their nation.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: What The fact that Discord has a permit for his business is what worries the most Twilight.
--> '''Twilight:''' A permit. As in he's doing this completely legally. As in he somehow managed the patience to actually sit through doing all the necessary paperwork.
* RealityEnsues: Flutteshy gets to find out how it's like to be a tree. It's not as great as she thought...
--> '''Twilight:''' A permit. As in he's doing this completely legally. As in he somehow managed the patience to actually sit through doing all the necessary paperwork.
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* TheMindIsAPlaythingOfTheBody: Some transformations provoke the trope. See Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, Starlight Glimmer and Rarity's chapters for more details.
* VoluntaryShapeshifting: The theme of the fic. Discord, for a fee, transforms his costumer in what he wants for 24 hours (or more).
** The possible transformation are: Earth pony, pegasus, unicorn, alicorn, zebra, donkey, griffon, minotaur, old-type changeling (Pre-season 6), new-type changeling (Post-season 6), changeling royalty, dragon, and draconequus. Special requests are possible.
*** Alicorn, changeling royalty, dragon, and draconequus are more expensive than the others, and require signing a "If I do bullshit during my transformation, it's my fault and not Discord's" form.
** Later on, Diamond dog and [[Rule63 Genderswap]] are added to the list.
** Some other forms are seen through other customers, like human or thestral.
* VoluntaryShapeshifting: The theme of the fic. Discord, for a fee, transforms his costumer in what he wants for 24 hours (or more).
** The possible transformation are: Earth pony, pegasus, unicorn, alicorn, zebra, donkey, griffon, minotaur, old-type changeling (Pre-season 6), new-type changeling (Post-season 6), changeling royalty, dragon, and draconequus. Special requests are possible.
*** Alicorn, changeling royalty, dragon, and draconequus are more expensive than the others, and require signing a "If I do bullshit during my transformation, it's my fault and not Discord's" form.
** Later on, Diamond dog and [[Rule63 Genderswap]] are added to the list.
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[[folder: Prologue: Opening day]]
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''Discord's opened a new shop. He did it legally. This will end well, I'm sure...''
''Discord's new business'' is a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfiction set somewhere after season 6.
As the title indicates, Discord puts in place a business. A ''legal'' one.
Which business? Why, turn ponies in other species for 24 hours!
Each chapter is focused on one character, his/her transformation for the day, and what happens to him/her.
And ''you'' decide who gets transformed in what!
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!! This fanfic provides examples of:
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* AudienceParticipation: As said above, the readers decide who gets transformed in what. More precisely, each chapter ends on revealing who will be the focus of the next chapter. From its publication, the readers have one week to vote for what transformation they want to see.
* VoluntaryShapeshifting:
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''Discord's new business'' is a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfiction set somewhere after season 6.
As the title indicates, Discord puts in place a business. A ''legal'' one.
Which business? Why, turn ponies in other species for 24 hours!
Each chapter is focused on one character, his/her transformation for the day, and what happens to him/her.
And ''you'' decide who gets transformed in what!
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!! This fanfic provides examples of:
[[foldercontrol]]
[[folder: In general]]
* AudienceParticipation: As said above, the readers decide who gets transformed in what. More precisely, each chapter ends on revealing who will be the focus of the next chapter. From its publication, the readers have one week to vote for what transformation they want to see.
* VoluntaryShapeshifting:
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