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* NonSequiturThud: Rai after recieving a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown from the Xiaolin Monks.
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* NonSequiturThud: Rai after recieving receiving a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown from the Xiaolin Monks.
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* DeviousDaggers: Rai has all sorts of powers but he's especially fond of his dagger.
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* KnifeNut: Rai has all sorts of powers but he's especially fond of his dagger.
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* TheSleepless: Legends of Rai portray him as a being who can go without sleep. This is disproven when the Wudai Warrios find him trying to get some shut-eye in a broom closet.
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* TheSleepless: Legends of Rai portray him as a being who can go without sleep. This is disproven when the Wudai Warrios Warriors find him trying to get some shut-eye in a broom closet.
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* [[spoiler: DyingMomentOfAwesome: Possibly what happens when Clone Rai and Younger Rai fade away once Rai regains his humanity. And singing Frank Sinatra's 'My Way', complete with microphone, spolights and a tuxedo probably the best way to go.]]
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* [[spoiler: DyingMomentOfAwesome: Possibly what happens when Clone Rai and Younger Rai fade away once Rai regains his humanity. And singing Frank Sinatra's 'My Way', complete with microphone, spolights and a tuxedo probably the best way to go.]]
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-->'''Rai:''' [[CrowningMomentOfFunny Only if mine comes with extra syrup, Mr. Panda.]]
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-->'''Rai:''' [[CrowningMomentOfFunny [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments Only if mine comes with extra syrup, Mr. Panda.]]
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''Demon of Wind'' is an AlternateUniverseFic in the XiaolinShowdown archives written by Mr Makulu. In it, the Xiaolin Dragon Raimundo Pedrosa does not exist. To accompany the remaining three warriors, there's Rai: A snarky wind demon with a sense of humor not unlike his canon counterpart.
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''Demon of Wind'' is an AlternateUniverseFic in the XiaolinShowdown ''WesternAnimation/XiaolinShowdown'' archives written by Mr Makulu. In it, the Xiaolin Dragon Raimundo Pedrosa does not exist. To accompany the remaining three warriors, there's Rai: A snarky wind demon with a sense of humor not unlike his canon counterpart.
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* Tsundere: Kimiko, obviously. Has the most amusing reactions around Rai.
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* Tsundere: {{Tsundere}}: Kimiko, obviously. Has the most amusing reactions around Rai.
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* Metaphorgotten: {{Metaphorgotten}}:
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* SittingOnTheRoof: One of Rai's favourite places to go at the temple. Kimiko often goes there to join him herself.
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* FourIsDeath: [[spoiler: Omi mentions this when Rai is appointed the fourth Wudai Warrior. Rai says they'll figure that out later.]]
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* GoKartingWithBowser: Chase and Guan play a game of Xiangpi when Chase is powerless during the Heylin Eclipse.
--> '''Guan:''' While you are withdrawn from the world during the eclipse, I must withdraw as well for risk of upsetting the balance. I was hoping to take the opportunity to challenge an old friend to a friendly game of Xiangqi while we wait to see what will become of the world after the events of today.
-->'''Chase:''' You expect me to entertain some twisted sense of nostalgia?
-->'''Guan:''' You had something better to do today?
-->'''Chase:''' ''[glares]'' ..if I'm playing this stupid game, I get to be red.
--> '''Guan:''' While you are withdrawn from the world during the eclipse, I must withdraw as well for risk of upsetting the balance. I was hoping to take the opportunity to challenge an old friend to a friendly game of Xiangqi while we wait to see what will become of the world after the events of today.
-->'''Chase:''' You expect me to entertain some twisted sense of nostalgia?
-->'''Guan:''' You had something better to do today?
-->'''Chase:''' ''[glares]'' ..if I'm playing this stupid game, I get to be red.
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* TearsOfJoy: [[spoiler: Rai first gets a taste of being human again when he steps into the sunlight and feels its warmth. When Kimiko arrives he pulls her into a hug with tears streaming down his face.]]
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* [[spoiler: DyingMomentOfAwesome: Possibly what happens when Clone Rai and Younger Rai fade away once Rai regains his humanity. And singing Frank Sinatra's 'My Way', complete with microphone, spolights and a tuxedo probably the best way to go.]]
-->'''Rai:'''So that's it? No final closing number? Just an imaginary hand shake and a walk away. Aren't you at least going make some effort?
-->'''Clone Rai:''' Are you sure? Wouldn't it be better to play it low key and not ruin the moment?
-->'''Rai:''' Since when has low key been our style?
--> ''[cue singing]''
-->'''Rai:'''So that's it? No final closing number? Just an imaginary hand shake and a walk away. Aren't you at least going make some effort?
-->'''Clone Rai:''' Are you sure? Wouldn't it be better to play it low key and not ruin the moment?
-->'''Rai:''' Since when has low key been our style?
--> ''[cue singing]''
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* [[spoiler: HumanityEnsues: At the end of Chapter 26.]]
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* NoodleIncident: An incident with the emperor's daughter is mentioned a few times before we get an explanation.
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* NoodleIncident: An incident with the emperor's daughter is mentioned a few times before we get an explanation. Also Rai for some reason spanking every animal on the temple grounds. Or Kimiko making him apologize to each of them afterwards.
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-> ''"Oh right we haven't been introduced, I'm Rai; demon of the wind, lover of the ladies and kicker of the butt. And you are?"''
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-> ''"Oh ''"[[BadassBoast Oh right we haven't been introduced, I'm Rai; demon of the wind, lover of the ladies and kicker of the butt. And you are?"''are?]]"''
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* BadassBoast: See the title quote.
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I am making so many mistakes in my editing it is embarrassing. Apologies.
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* HellishPupils: Rai acquires these when he is a demon, [[SubvertedTrope although he's not that bad once you get to know him.] [[spoiler: They go away when he becomes human though.]]
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* HellishPupils: Rai acquires these when he is a demon, [[SubvertedTrope although he's not that bad once you get to know him.] ]] [[spoiler: They go away when he becomes human though.]]
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* HellishPupils: Rai acquires these when he is a demon, [[SubvertedTrope although he's not that bad once you get to know him.] [[spoiler: They go away when he becomes human though.]]
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* HeroicBSOD: Rai gets this later in the the third arc. Luckily Kimiko is there to [[GetAHoldOfYourself promptly snap him out of it.]]
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* HeroicBSOD: Rai gets this later in the the third arc. Luckily Kimiko is there to [[GetAHoldOfYourself [[GetAHoldOfYourselfMan promptly snap him out of it.]]
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* GetAHoldOfYourselfMan: Kimiko does this to Rai when he is [[HeroicBSOD BSODing.]]
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* HeroicBSOD: Rai gets this later in the the third arc. Luckily Kimiko is there to [[GetAHoldOfYourself promptly snap him out of it.]]
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* AppliedPhlebotinum: A Virtue, which is created on the deathbed of a powerful being, has the power to pretty much do anything. [[spoiler: Including turning some certain demons human.]]
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* TheAtoner: [[spoiler: Chiyoko is the descendant of the priestess Chiyo who 1500 years ago wanted to help Rai become human. After accidentally sending an ambush after him, Chiyo had a vision that one of her descendants would be able to break the curse and created a Virtue on her deathbed. It had since been passed down each generation eventually to Chiyoko, making it her duty to restore Rai's humanity.]]
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* HeWhoFightsMonsters: [[spoiler: Rai is inches from killing Chiyoko with his dagger when he stops.]]
--> '''Rai:''' I'm a demon; not a monster.
--> '''Rai:''' I'm a demon; not a monster.
* KnifeNut: Rai has all sorts of powers but he's especially fond of his dagger.
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* ThouShaltNotKill: The reason why there are so many SealedEvilInACan s' running around. Rai gets into an argument with Kimiko when he doesn't follow the Xiaolin moral code on a slippery con-man dragon.
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* ThouShaltNotKill: The reason why there are so many SealedEvilInACan s' running around. Rai gets into an argument with Kimiko when he doesn't follow the Xiaolin moral code on a slippery con-man dragon.
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* BerserkButton / UnstoppableRage: Do '''not''' hurt Kimiko in front of Rai.
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* GetOut: Rai yells this at the Cleansers when one of them struck Kimiko with an arrow. [[spoiler: Turns out it was Hannibal disguised as a cleanser to 'get the fire going' as he put it.]]
