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* DeadlyDecadentCourt: Unity City seems to be host to one and both House Marik and House Liao appear to rule over them.
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** Fuu O'Hare is a double reference to Fubuki from Kancolle and ''WesternAnimation/BuckyOHareAndTheToadWars''.
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** Fuu O'Hare is a double reference to Fubuki from Kancolle and ''WesternAnimation/BuckyOHare''.
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** Mary Kaga and Weiss (White) Plains are Kancolle references. Marge Pritchard’s entire crew are named for Hammer’s Slammers characters.
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** Mary Kaga and Weiss (White) Plains are Kancolle [[VideoGame/KantaiCollection Kancolle]] references. Marge Pritchard’s entire crew are named for Hammer’s Slammers ''Literature/HammersSlammers'' characters.
** Fuu O'Hare is a double reference to Fubuki from Kancolle andBucky O'Hare.''WesternAnimation/BuckyOHare''.
** Fuu O'Hare is a double reference to Fubuki from Kancolle and
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* RescueRomance: Helena Cameron ends up falling for the MIIO agent who extracted her from Terra. [[spoiler: After losing the election for First Lord, she happily hoofs it back to Davion space, marries him, and opens a bakery]].
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* RescueRomance: Helena Cameron ends up falling for the MIIO agent who extracted her from Terra. [[spoiler: After losing the election for First Lord, Director-General of the Terran Hegemony, she happily hoofs it back to Davion space, marries him, and opens a bakery]].
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* SuccessionCrisis: After the Amaris coup, the council gets into a dispute over who the next Star Lord should be. [[spoiler:John Davion eventually gets so disgusted with the infighting that he announces that not only will he not nominate or back any candidate - which actually makes things easier, as it leaves an odd number of members in the council to work things out, preventing ties - if they don't elect ''somebody'' by the end of the year, his nation will secede from the Star League on the grounds that it was no longer a functioning government.]]
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* SuccessionCrisis: After the Amaris coup, the council gets into a dispute over who the next Star Lord should be.be, as the elected Director-General of the Terran Hegemony is not a descendant of the Star Lord, but from a branch family (see ExactWords above). [[spoiler:John Davion eventually gets so disgusted with the infighting that he announces that not only will he not nominate or back any candidate - which actually makes things easier, as it leaves an odd number of members in the council to work things out, preventing ties - if they don't elect ''somebody'' by the end of the year, his nation will secede from the Star League on the grounds that it was no longer a functioning government.]]
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** Fuu 'O Hare is a double reference to Fubuki from Kancolle and Bucky 'o Hare.
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* MoreDakka: At Robinson, [[spoiler:during the confrontation between John Davion and Minoru Kurita, John lures Minoru into an ambush with the help of an improvised decoy, then obliterates his Otomo bodyguard and forcibly dismounts him by applying 30 Alacorn IV tanks, each sporting 3 [=AC/20=] autocannons. Every volley from the tanks would fill the killbox with ''90'' bursts of brutal autocannon fire. Several of the Otomo were piloting fairly lightweight Light and Medium mechs. When Minoru tried to flee the ambush, he had the rare chance to see Otomo mechs flat-out ''disintergrate'' from being pummeled by firepower that would have torn apart Assault mechs]].
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* MagnificentBastard: InUniverse, Hanse Davion's sharp mind and foreknowledge of upcoming events allows John Davion to appear like a brilliant mastermind in how he orchestrates plans and sets up seemingly-prescient beneficial business deals, earning the respect of many nobles and awe from intel officers who see him turn Hanse's analysis into brilliant intel insights.
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* MagnificentBastard: InUniverse, Hanse Davion's sharp mind and foreknowledge of upcoming events allows John Davion to appear like a brilliant mastermind in how he orchestrates plans and sets up seemingly-prescient beneficial business deals, earning the respect of many nobles and awe from intel officers who see him turn Hanse's analysis into brilliant intel insights. For example, being unable to red-flag Amaris's cunning plans to Richard Cameron, he rolls with it and instead co-opts Amaris's plotting, using similar business cutouts to covertly build up his forces, and then right before the coup, he makes a sizeable loan from Terran banks known to be in collusion with Amaris, such that when the coup actually does go through, he is immediately able to seize those bank's assets and 'confiscate' their funds, nullifying his loans from them in a blink; he later slowly drip-feeds the money he "steals" from Amaris's plotting via this scheme into the war economy so he can prop up the logistics trains needed to support the campaigns to liberate the Terran Hegemony.
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* MagnificentBastard: [[InUniverse Hanse is Hanse]], of course, and John learns well from his example.
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* MagnificentBastard: [[InUniverse InUniverse, Hanse is Hanse]], of course, Davion's sharp mind and foreknowledge of upcoming events allows John learns well Davion to appear like a brilliant mastermind in how he orchestrates plans and sets up seemingly-prescient beneficial business deals, earning the respect of many nobles and awe from his example. intel officers who see him turn Hanse's analysis into brilliant intel insights.
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** Due to the change in the circumstances behind the inevitable conflict between the Draconis Combine and the Federated Suns (with [[spoiler:the Combine acting on behalf of the Star League to force a seceding Suns back in]]), instead of Minoru Kurita perishing at Kentares IV to a AFFS sniper as in the original timeline causing Jinjiro to snap and launch the infamous Kentares Massacre, rather [[spoiler:Jinjiro is lost in a misjump attempting to extract his forces from a brutal ASF meatgrinder at Robinson, and Minoru is later captured when he attempts to assault Robinson himself later, and John has him publicly executed for allowing the miners at Canaan to be gassed, turning his death into an Inner Sphere-wide warning that atroctities against civilians will not be tolerated by the Federated Suns]]. They still die, but the circumstances around their deaths is very different from the original timeline.
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** Due to the change in the circumstances behind the inevitable conflict between the Draconis Combine and the Federated Suns (with [[spoiler:the Combine acting on behalf of the Star League to force a seceding Suns back in]]), instead of Minoru Kurita perishing at Kentares IV to a AFFS sniper as in the original timeline causing Jinjiro to snap and launch the infamous Kentares Massacre, rather [[spoiler:Jinjiro is lost in a misjump attempting to extract his forces from a brutal ASF meatgrinder at Robinson, and Minoru is later captured when he attempts to assault Robinson himself later, and John has him publicly executed for allowing the miners at Canaan to be gassed, turning his death into an Inner Sphere-wide warning that atroctities atrocities against civilians will not be tolerated by the Federated Suns]]. They still die, but the circumstances around their deaths is very different from the original timeline.
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** Due to the change in the circumstances behind the inevitable conflict between the Draconis Combine and the Federated Suns (with [[spoiler:the Combine acting on behalf of the Star League to force a seceding Suns back in]]), instead of Minoru Kurita perishing at Kentares IV to a AFFS sniper as in the original timeline causing Jinjiro to snap and launch the infamous Kentares Massacre, rather [[spoiler:Jinjiro is lost in a misjump attempting to extract his forces from a brutal ASF meatgrinder at Robinson, and Minoru is later captured when he attempts to assault Robinson himself later, and John has him publicly executed for allowing the miners at Canaan to be gassed, turning his death into an Inner Sphere-wide warning that atroctities against civilians will not be tolerated by the Federated Suns]]. They still die, but the circumstances around their deaths is very different from the original timeline.
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* FixFic: John Davion, upon finding out about the Succession Wars and the loss of advanced technology afflicting the future of the Inner Sphere, decides to tap Hanse's foreknowledge to try and head off the worst of the incoming conflict and decline from affecting the Federated Suns.
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** The treaty that formed the Star League said that the position of Star Lord would always go to a ''descendant'' of the first Star Lord, not the ''heir'' of the first Star Lord. This causes a SuccessionCrisis when the position of Director-General of the Terran Hegemony falls to a Cameron who is from a different branch of the family, which means that he does have the right to claim the title of Star Lord by right of birth.
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** The treaty that formed the Star League said that the position of Star Lord would always go to a ''descendant'' of the first Star Lord, not the ''heir'' of the first Star Lord. This causes a SuccessionCrisis when the position of Director-General of the Terran Hegemony falls to a Cameron who is from a different branch of the family, which means that he does not have the right to claim the title of Star Lord by right of birth.
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As of early 2019, the story was the most favorited Battletech fanfic on fanfiction.net.
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* CurbstompBattle: The AFFS - and particularly FSN - pulls these repeatedly on the Capellans and Draconians, and even occasionally against the Star League Defense Force.
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** Alexandra Davion's jump-trooper squad includes [[Series/StargateSG1 Jack, Danny, Sam, and (possibly) a big quiet guy named Murray]].
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** The SLN forces at Saturn include the warships Reuben James and Battleaxe, two ships that played a notable role in Literature/RedStormRising.
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** The SLN forces at Saturn include the warships Reuben James ''Reuben James'' and Battleaxe, ''Battleaxe'', two ships that played a notable role in Literature/RedStormRising.
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* TheCatchPhraseCatchesOn: Magic Bushido Hands was coined by readers in response to House Kurita's sometimes questionable thought processes. It's since spread as a phrase beyond even Battletech threads, also applied to WWII Imperial Japan.
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* EasyLogistics: Averted extremely hard. Much of John and Hanse's planning involves ensuring that the AFFS can get as much equipment and supplies as possible, complete with emergency doomsday caches and hidden backup shipyards being constructed; in addition, Operation Oxbow is aimed at crippling the supply lines of his foes once hostilities are an inevitability, and it succeeds at bringing the Liao offensive to a dead halt and greatly weakening the Kurita pushes at Robinson. One of the supply raids was fortuitous enough to uncover a hidden cache of nuclear missiles, which the Suns were using up faster than they could produce as a result of their ASF heavy carrier doctrine relying on nukes for anti-ship warfare.
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* EasyLogistics: Averted extremely hard. Much of John and Hanse's planning involves ensuring that the AFFS can get as much equipment and supplies as possible, complete with emergency doomsday caches and hidden backup shipyards being constructed; in addition, Operation Oxbow is aimed at crippling the supply lines of his foes once hostilities are an inevitability, and it succeeds at bringing the Liao offensive to a dead halt and greatly weakening the Kurita pushes at Robinson. One of the supply raids was fortuitous enough to uncover a hidden cache of nuclear missiles, which the Suns were using up faster than they could produce as a result of their ASF heavy carrier doctrine relying on nukes for anti-ship warfare. Hanse and John even discuss this briefly, as the former has never seen such a large force of battlemechs that are mostly of several uniform and standard builds with no hint of customization or cannibalized parts anywhere, and he even praises the mechtechs from his time for being miracle workers at keeping post-Succession Wars mechs anywhere near functional.
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** John's choice to keep his relations with the SLDF friendly result in multiple things - Kerensky ends up making him a general and including him in the chain of command, making him 'one of them'; [[spoiler:his good relations with [=DeChevilier=] ensures that when the good general ragequits his commission and leaves, the resulting Exodus doesn't quite go as far as the Clan Homeworlds and instead forms a Pentagon Alliance inside the OWA that remains friendly with the Suns]], and ultimately allows him to peacefully absorb a large portion of the SLDF that sided with him into the AFFS.
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** John's choice to keep his relations with the SLDF friendly and assist directly with the Amaris Coup result in multiple things - Kerensky ends up making him a general and including him in the chain of command, making him 'one of them'; [[spoiler:his good relations with [=DeChevilier=] ensures that when the good general ragequits his commission and leaves, the resulting Exodus doesn't quite go as far as the Clan Homeworlds and instead forms a Pentagon Alliance inside the OWA that remains friendly with the Suns]], and ultimately allows him to peacefully absorb a large portion of the SLDF that sided with him into the AFFS.
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* [[spoiler:BittersweetEnding: John fails to save the Star League but ultimately prevents the Dark Ages of the Succession Wars(and the formation of Comstar and likely the Clans, and thus by extension the Clan Invasion and Jihad), Hanse finally moves on, and John's granddaughter Victoria will bring a new hope for peace.]]
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* [[spoiler:BittersweetEnding: John fails to save the Star League but ultimately prevents the Dark Ages much of the devastation of the First Succession Wars(and War(and the formation of Comstar and likely the Clans, and thus by extension the Second and Third Succession Wars, the Clan Invasion Invasion, and unknown to them both, the Jihad), Hanse finally moves on, and John's granddaughter Victoria will bring a new hope for peace.]]
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* RescueRomance: Helena Cameron ends up falling for the MIIO agent who extracted her from Terra. [[spoiler: After losing the election for First Lord, she happily hoofs it back to Davion space, marries him, and opens a bakery]].
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** The treaty that formed the Star League said that the position of Star Lord would always go to a ''descendant'' of the first Star Lord, not the ''heir'' of the first Star Lord. This causes a SuccessionCrisis when the position of Director-General of the Terran Hegemony falls to a Cameron who is from a different branch of the family, which means that he does have the right to claim the title of Star Lord by right of birth.
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You can find it on fanfiction.net [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12738224/1/Davion-Davion-Deceased here]].
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You can find it on fanfiction.net [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12738224/1/Davion-Davion-Deceased here]].
here]]. Copies on PDF can be found through links [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/davion-davion-deceased-a-battletech-au.586222/page-335#post-46547869 here]] and there's link to the Technical Readout [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/davion-davion-deceased-a-battletech-au.586222/page-174#post-45693994 here]]
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* AllThereInTheManual – Book 1 ends each chapter with an in-universe ‘sidebar’ discussing the setting
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* AllThereInTheManual – Book 1 ends each chapter with an in-universe ‘sidebar’ discussing the settingsetting. In addition a Technical Readout document exists for some of the designs that appear.
* FemmeFataleSpy: The downfall of [[spoiler: Thaddeus Marik]]
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** Once the Aramis Coup kicks off, John apologizes to Hanse, realizing that their plans could cause him to have never been born. [[spoiler:Years later, during the Succession War, Hanse realizes that John's grandson should have been born a month before. Fortunately, it seems to have no effect on Hanse's existence or memories.]]
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** Once the Aramis Amaris Coup kicks off, John apologizes to Hanse, realizing that their plans could cause him to have never been born. [[spoiler:Years later, during the Succession War, Hanse realizes that John's grandson should have been born a month before. Fortunately, it seems to have no effect on Hanse's existence or memories.]]
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** In particular, borrowing over half a trillion Star League dollars from Terran Hegemony banks(particularly those Hanse said supported Amaris) on the eve of the coup. Normally no one would _dare_ default on Terran loans but with the Coup about to happen, John has an ironclad reason to decline to repay the loans.
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** In particular, borrowing over half a trillion Star League dollars from Terran Hegemony banks(particularly those Hanse said supported Amaris) on the eve of the coup. Normally no one would _dare_ dare to default on Terran loans but with the Coup about to happen, John has an ironclad reason to decline to repay the loans.
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* WhamLine: The ending of Loyalist 21: [[spoiler: "...by the start of next year, then the Federated Suns will, with sorrow but resolution, secede from the Star League."]]
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* WhamLine: The ending of Loyalist 21: [[spoiler: "...by the start of next year, then the Federated Suns will, with sorrow but resolution, secede from the Star League."]]"]]
* YoungestChildWins: [[spoiler: Zabu Kurita, the younger son of Minoru Kurita, becomes Coordinator rather than his older half-brother who is missing, presumed dead.]]
* YoungestChildWins: [[spoiler: Zabu Kurita, the younger son of Minoru Kurita, becomes Coordinator rather than his older half-brother who is missing, presumed dead.]]
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* RankUp: A fair number of characters experience this, being stars in a story spanning decades, but the most prominent examples are Susan Sandoval and Ethan Moreau Moreau, who first appear as junior Lieutenants in the AFFS and SLDF, and rise rapidly through the ranks of the AFFS and SLDF respectivelyranks, making General within just over a decade.
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* TankGoodness: The AFFS and SLDF both use large numbers of armoured units, notably the Demon tanks prized by Marge Pritchard. House Davion are very fond of their Merkava and Alacorn tanks.
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* TankGoodness: The AFFS and SLDF both use large numbers of armoured units, notably the Demon tanks prized by Marge Pritchard. House Davion are very fond of their Merkava and Alacorn tanks. [[spoiler: So fond, in fact, that Minoru Kurita isn't taken down by John Davion, but by a battalion of Alacorn Mark IV tanks.]]
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* MagnificentBastard: Hanse is Hanse, of course, and John learns well from his example.
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* MemeticBadass: InUniverse, John's reforms turns the MIIO into the scariest intel/spy/black ops organisation in the Inner Sphere, as their perceived effectiveness turns them into the boogymen of all the other spy organisations. It gets to the point where [[spoiler:some of the agents were actually poised to abduct Thomas Kurita-Davion from Terra itself on the day that Zabu ordered him gassed at what would become the final the Star League Council Meeting]].
* MemeticBadass: InUniverse, John's reforms turns the MIIO into the scariest intel/spy/black ops organisation in the Inner Sphere, as their perceived effectiveness turns them into the boogymen of all the other spy organisations. It gets to the point where [[spoiler:some of the agents were actually poised to abduct Thomas Kurita-Davion from Terra itself on the day that Zabu ordered him gassed at what would become the final the Star League Council Meeting]].
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''Davion & Davion (Deceased)'' is a ''TabletopGame/BattleTech'' fanfic written by drakensis in 2017 and 2018 ("Book 1: Idealist" was written for the 2017 National Novel Writing Month). The first draft of "Book 2: Loyalist" was completed by Christmas 2017 and finished posting by April 2018. "Book 3: [[spoiler: Secessionist]]", which concludes the trilogy, had it's final chapter posted on the Spacebattles forum for review on April 24, 2018(The fact that this was also the day of the release of the [[VideoGame/BattleTech BattleTech video game]] is not exactly a coincidence).
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''Davion & Davion (Deceased)'' is a ''TabletopGame/BattleTech'' fanfic written by drakensis in 2017 and 2018 ("Book 1: Idealist" was written for the 2017 National Novel Writing Month). The first draft of "Book 2: Loyalist" was completed by Christmas 2017 and finished posting by April 2018. "Book 3: [[spoiler: Secessionist]]", which concludes the trilogy, had it's final chapter posted on the Spacebattles [[Website/SpacebattlesDotCom Spacebattles.com]] forum for review on April 24, 2018(The fact that this was also the day of the release of the [[VideoGame/BattleTech BattleTech video game]] is not exactly a coincidence).
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* EveryoneHasStandards: The Combine's reputation takes a hit after [[spoiler:Minoru has the workers in the Canaan Mines on Robinson gassed]] and the news gets out. John Davion shapes public opinion in favor of the Suns [[spoiler:by publicly denouncing the atrocity and executing Minoru after capturing him]]. This also spurs the Capellans to fight cleanly under the rules of the Ares Convention, and is instrumental [[spoiler:in getting the 'Cappies to surrender in good faith after being cut off from their jumpships after a failed raid against a Suns shipyard, as well as ultimately shaping their relations such that Balthazar Liao is comfortable making an mutual defense pact with the Davions in the epilogue]]. As another consquence of the incident, the SLDF units under an ex-Combine General turn against the Kurita House, and while they are ultimately defeated, they bleed the fleets of the Dracs even more.
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* ForWantOfANail: Once the Aramis Coup kicks off, John apologizes to Hanse, realizing that their plans could cause him to have never been born. [[spoiler:Years later, during the Succession War, Hanse realizes that John's grandson should have been born a month before. Fortunately, it seems to have no effect on Hanse's existence or memories.]]
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** Once the Aramis Coup kicks off, John apologizes to Hanse, realizing that their plans could cause him to have never been born. [[spoiler:Years later, during the Succession War, Hanse realizes that John's grandson should have been born a month before. Fortunately, it seems to have no effect on Hanse's existence or memories.]]]]
** Hanse's concerns about the Word of Blake lead John's plans to keep Toyama and Blake separated, and his ultimately keeping the Sun's HPG network under their own control when [[spoiler:they secede from the Star League]] spurs other Great Houses to do the same, preventing Blake from ever gaining the total control of the HPG network needed to make Comstar possible.
** John's choice to keep his relations with the SLDF friendly result in multiple things - Kerensky ends up making him a general and including him in the chain of command, making him 'one of them'; [[spoiler:his good relations with [=DeChevilier=] ensures that when the good general ragequits his commission and leaves, the resulting Exodus doesn't quite go as far as the Clan Homeworlds and instead forms a Pentagon Alliance inside the OWA that remains friendly with the Suns]], and ultimately allows him to peacefully absorb a large portion of the SLDF that sided with him into the AFFS.
** Once the Aramis Coup kicks off, John apologizes to Hanse, realizing that their plans could cause him to have never been born. [[spoiler:Years later, during the Succession War, Hanse realizes that John's grandson should have been born a month before. Fortunately, it seems to have no effect on Hanse's existence or memories.
** Hanse's concerns about the Word of Blake lead John's plans to keep Toyama and Blake separated, and his ultimately keeping the Sun's HPG network under their own control when [[spoiler:they secede from the Star League]] spurs other Great Houses to do the same, preventing Blake from ever gaining the total control of the HPG network needed to make Comstar possible.
** John's choice to keep his relations with the SLDF friendly result in multiple things - Kerensky ends up making him a general and including him in the chain of command, making him 'one of them'; [[spoiler:his good relations with [=DeChevilier=] ensures that when the good general ragequits his commission and leaves, the resulting Exodus doesn't quite go as far as the Clan Homeworlds and instead forms a Pentagon Alliance inside the OWA that remains friendly with the Suns]], and ultimately allows him to peacefully absorb a large portion of the SLDF that sided with him into the AFFS.
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''Davion & Davion (Deceased)'' is a ''TabletopGame/BattleTech'' fanfic written by drakensis in 2017 and 2018 ("Book 1: Idealist" was written for the 2017 National Novel Writing Month). The first draft of "Book 2: Loyalist" was completed by Christmas 2017 and finished posting by April 2018. "Book 3: [[spoiler: Secessionist]]", which concludes the trilogy, had it's final chapter posted on the Spacebattles forum for review on April 24, 2018.
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''Davion & Davion (Deceased)'' is a ''TabletopGame/BattleTech'' fanfic written by drakensis in 2017 and 2018 ("Book 1: Idealist" was written for the 2017 National Novel Writing Month). The first draft of "Book 2: Loyalist" was completed by Christmas 2017 and finished posting by April 2018. "Book 3: [[spoiler: Secessionist]]", which concludes the trilogy, had it's final chapter posted on the Spacebattles forum for review on April 24, 2018.
2018(The fact that this was also the day of the release of the [[VideoGame/BattleTech BattleTech video game]] is not exactly a coincidence).
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* [[spoiler:BittersweetEnding: John fails to save the Star League but ultimately prevents the Dark Ages of the Succession Wars(and the formation of Comstar and likely the Clans, and thus by extension the Clan Invasion and Jihad), Hanse finally moves on, and John's granddaughter Victoria will help bring together a new alliance that, while not as complete as the Star League, will be dominant over the other powers.]]
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* [[spoiler:BittersweetEnding: John fails to save the Star League but ultimately prevents the Dark Ages of the Succession Wars(and the formation of Comstar and likely the Clans, and thus by extension the Clan Invasion and Jihad), Hanse finally moves on, and John's granddaughter Victoria will help bring together a new alliance that, while not as complete as the Star League, will be dominant over the other powers.hope for peace.]]
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* DyingDream: Hanse gets ''three:'' The one that starts it all, an encounter with a mortally-wounded Victor from his original timeline, and [[spoiler: the final one when he finally passes on]].