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* GroinAttack: During a brawl with her Academy bullies, Kara kicked one of them -Quex-Ul- in the groin to get him off her.

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* GroinAttack: During a brawl with her Academy bullies, Kara kicked one of them -Quex-Ul- them, Quex-Ul, in the groin to get him off her.



'''Kal:''' (frowning) And then what? Bygones become bygones and we all become one happy family with Zod?\\

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'''Kal:''' (frowning) ''(frowning)'' And then what? Bygones become bygones and we all become one happy family with Zod?\\



* HoistByHisOwnPetard: General Zod's decisions consistently ruin his chances to achieve his goals. He gets Lois kidnapped, even though Kara points out such an action will make Kal-El to not trust them, and turns down Kara's suggestion to look for another suitable world after talking Kal into coming with them, despite she had already convinced her cousin to cooperate.

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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: General Zod's decisions consistently ruin his chances to achieve his goals. He gets Lois kidnapped, kidnaps Lois, even though Kara points out such an action will make Kal-El to not trust them, and turns down Kara's suggestion to look for another suitable world after talking Kal into coming with them, despite even though she had already convinced her cousin to cooperate.



* IHaveYourWife: General Zod gets ComicBook/LoisLane abducted to ensure Kal-El's cooperation. When Kara points out that holding his lover hostage is guaranteed to ''alienate'' him, Zod just brushes off her concerns.

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* IHaveYourWife: General Zod gets has ComicBook/LoisLane abducted to ensure Kal-El's cooperation. When Kara points out that holding his lover hostage is guaranteed to ''alienate'' him, Zod just brushes off her concerns.



'''Ro-Zar:''' (outraged) On whose authority?\\
[Zod guns the Council leader down]\\
'''Dru-Zod:''' (seething) My own.

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'''Ro-Zar:''' (outraged) ''(outraged)'' On whose authority?\\
[Zod ''[Zod guns the Council leader down]\\
down]''\\
'''Dru-Zod:''' (seething) ''(seething)'' My own.



* MythologyGag: The bullies taunting Kara in the in first scene -Aethyr-Zer, Car-Vex, and Quex-Ul- are named after several {{Phantom Zone}}rs enemies of the House of El in several comicbook continuities.

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* MythologyGag: The bullies taunting Kara in the in first scene -Aethyr-Zer, scene, Aethyr-Zer, Car-Vex, and Quex-Ul- Quex-Ul, are named after several {{Phantom Zone}}rs enemies of the House of El in several comicbook comic book continuities.



* TranslationConvention: It is understood that Kryptonians speak their own language during the flashback scenes.



'''Aethyr-Zer:''' Sir we were…\\
'''Dru-Zod:''' Did I give you permission to speak?! You called Kara-El a freak and defective and yet you are the ones I see as defective and useless. If you cannot maintain discipline when you are off duty then you aren't worthy of standing in these halls. You three are dismissed." (to Kara) "Who threw the first punch?\\

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'''Aethyr-Zer:''' Sir we were…\\
were...\\
'''Dru-Zod:''' Did I give you permission to speak?! You called Kara-El a freak and defective and yet you are the ones I see as defective and useless. If you cannot maintain discipline when you are off duty then you aren't worthy of standing in these halls. You three are dismissed." (to Kara) "Who ''(to Kara)'' Who threw the first punch?\\


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* WhatMeasureIsANonHuman: In the aftermath of Zods attack Kara surrenders to the US military. Several human rights groups contact the government wanting to know the conditions of her confinement and when her trial will take place. This angers Secretary of Defense Blackburn who states that Kara isn't human and and an enemy combatant and thus doesn't have any rights though the President tells them that she is beign well treated (which she is) and her trial date hasn't been confirmed.

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* WhatMeasureIsANonHuman: In the aftermath of Zods attack Kara surrenders to the US military. Several human rights groups contact the government wanting to know the conditions of her confinement and when her trial will take place. This angers Secretary of Defense Blackburn who states that Kara isn't human and and an enemy combatant and thus doesn't have any rights though the President tells them that she is beign being well treated (which she is) and her trial date hasn't been confirmed.
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* TheScapegoat: President Sears initially plans for Kara to take all the blame for all the death and destruction caused by the Kryptonian invasion despite her not being involved with the attempted terraforming and actually assisting Superman in saving Earth. He reasons that the people who lost loved ones need someone to blame and in fairness Kara was a part of Zods group.

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* TheScapegoat: President Sears initially plans for Kara to take all the blame for all the death and destruction caused by the Kryptonian invasion despite her not being involved with the attempted terraforming and actually assisting Superman in saving Earth. He reasons that the people who lost loved ones need someone to blame and in fairness Kara was a part of Zods group. It all becomes moot when Amanda Waller convinces them that Kara could be very useful to them.



* WhatMeasureIsANonHuman: In the aftermath of Zods attack Kara surrenders to the US military. Several human rights groups contact the government wanting to know the conditions of her confinement and when her trial will take place. This angers Secretary of Defense Blackburn who states that Kara isn't human and and an enemy combatant and thus doesnt have any rights.

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* WhatMeasureIsANonHuman: In the aftermath of Zods attack Kara surrenders to the US military. Several human rights groups contact the government wanting to know the conditions of her confinement and when her trial will take place. This angers Secretary of Defense Blackburn who states that Kara isn't human and and an enemy combatant and thus doesnt doesn't have any rights.rights though the President tells them that she is beign well treated (which she is) and her trial date hasn't been confirmed.
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* TheScapegoat: President Sears initially plans for Kara to take all the blame for all the death and destruction caused by the Kryptonian invasion despite her not being involved with the attempted terraforming and actually assisting Superman in saving Earth. He reasons that the people who lost loved ones need someone to blame and in fairness Kara was a part of Zods group.


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* WhatMeasureIsANonHuman: In the aftermath of Zods attack Kara surrenders to the US military. Several human rights groups contact the government wanting to know the conditions of her confinement and when her trial will take place. This angers Secretary of Defense Blackburn who states that Kara isn't human and and an enemy combatant and thus doesnt have any rights.
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