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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: Star has no response when Danny asks her if the A-Listers were her friends would they tell her that her drawing hobby isn't cool.
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: Star has no response when Danny asks her Star if the A-Listers were really her friends friends, why would they tell her that her drawing hobby isn't cool.cool? Star has no response.
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* BrutalHonesty: Danny points out to Star that the A-Listers aren't real friends since they boss her around and discourage her art hobby just because it doesn't fit their shallow standards.
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* BrutalHonesty: Danny points out breaks it to Star that the A-Listers aren't real friends since they boss her around and discourage her art hobby just because it doesn't fit their shallow standards.
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* BullyHunter: At the end, Star forces the school staff to punish the A-Listers for their bullying by threatening to have her dad sue the school.
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* BullyHunter: At the end, Star forces the school Casper High staff to punish start punishing the A-Listers for their bullying by threatening to have her dad sue the school.
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* FutureLoser: Danny points out to Star that Dash won't amount to anything in the future because he doesn't even try to have a life after Senior year and Paulina will either stay the same shallow doll she is now or be forced to get a dead-end job when her parents finally wise up about her SpoiledBrat behavior and cut her off from her inheritance.
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* FutureLoser: Discussed. Danny points out to Star that Dash won't amount to anything in the future because he doesn't even try bother trying to have a life after Senior senior year and while Paulina will either stay the same shallow doll she is now or be forced to grow up and get a dead-end job when her parents finally wise up about her SpoiledBrat behavior and cut her off from her inheritance.
* HighSchoolRejects: Discussed. Danny points out to Star that obsessing over popularity is pointless because in 10 years, nobody will care whether she was popular in high school. The A-Listers' lives will go downhill after graduation because they don't care about preparing for the real world and are only interested in taking advantage of senior year to throw their weight around and bully others. Meanwhile, Danny will become an astronaut, Sam will probably join some environmental organization, and Tucker will go to his dream school MIT.
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* PetTheDog:
** Danny assures Star that she is a better person than the A-Listers because she proved it back on the island by helping him.
** Star defends Danny from the A-Listers bullying and makes Lancer punish them for it or else her dad will sue the school.
** Danny assures Star that she is a better person than the A-Listers because she proved it back on the island by helping him.
** Star defends Danny from the A-Listers bullying and makes Lancer punish them for it or else her dad will sue the school.
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* PetTheDog:
** Danny assures Star that she is a better person thanPetTheDog: In the A-Listers because she proved it back on the island by helping him.
**end, Star defends Danny from the A-Listers A-Listers' bullying and makes Lancer punish them for it or else her dad will sue the school.
** Danny assures Star that she is a better person than
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Danny points out to Star that obsessing over popularity is pointless because in 10 years nobody will care if she was popular in high school since the A-Listers lives will go downhill after high school because they don't care about preparing for the real world and are only focused on enjoying Senior year while Danny will be astronaut, Sam will join some environmental movement, and Tucker will likely go to his dream school MIT.
* SympathyfortheHero: Star does feel sorry for Danny for all the bullying he goes through because of Dash after seeing how lousy it feels to be stuck in a locker when they're forced to hide in one from the island beast when they're trapped with it after getting locked in the school and it further motivates her to stand up for him against the A-Listers harassment.
* SympathyfortheHero: Star does feel sorry for Danny for all the bullying he goes through because of Dash after seeing how lousy it feels to be stuck in a locker when they're forced to hide in one from the island beast when they're trapped with it after getting locked in the school and it further motivates her to stand up for him against the A-Listers harassment.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Danny points out to SympathyForTheHero: Star that obsessing over popularity is pointless because in 10 years nobody will care if she was popular in high school since the A-Listers lives will go downhill after high school because they don't care about preparing for the real world and are only focused on enjoying Senior year while Danny will be astronaut, Sam will join some environmental movement, and Tucker will likely go to his dream school MIT.
* SympathyfortheHero: Star does feelfeels sorry for Danny for over all the bullying he goes through because of endures from Dash after seeing just how lousy it feels to be stuck in a locker when they're forced to hide in one from the island beast when they're trapped with it after getting locked in the school and it beast. It further motivates her to stand up for him against the A-Listers A-Listers' harassment.
* SympathyfortheHero: Star does feel
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* ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend: Okay, she is not his girlfriend but [[spoiler: when Danny gets captured by the ghost that has been stalking then, Star goes to save him.]]
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* ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend: Okay, she is not his girlfriend but [[spoiler: when Danny gets captured by the ghost that has been stalking then, them, Star goes to save him.]]
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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Danny assures Star that the real her who isn't trying to be an A-Lister is a much better person.
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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Danny assures Star that the real her who isn't trying to be an A-Lister is a much better person.person, which she proved back on the island by helping him.
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: Star has no response when Danny asks her if the A-Listers were her friends would they tell her that her drawing hobby isn't cool.
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* BrutalHonesty: Danny points out to Star that the A-Listers aren't real friends since they boss her around and discourage her art hobby just because it doesn't fit their shallow standards.
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* BullyHunter: At the end, Star forces the school staff to punish the A-Listers for their bullying by threatening to have her dad sue the school.
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* FutureLoser: Danny points out to Star that Dash won't amount to anything in the future because he doesn't even try to have a life after Senior year and Paulina will either stay the same shallow doll she is now or be forced to get a dead-end job when her parents finally wise up about her SpoiledBrat behavior and cut her off from her inheritance.
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* PetTheDog:
** Danny assures Star that she is a better person than the A-Listers because she proved it back on the island by helping him.
** Star defends Danny from the A-Listers bullying and makes Lancer punish them for it or else her dad will sue the school.
** Danny assures Star that she is a better person than the A-Listers because she proved it back on the island by helping him.
** Star defends Danny from the A-Listers bullying and makes Lancer punish them for it or else her dad will sue the school.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Danny points out to Star that obsessing over popularity is pointless because in 10 years nobody will care if she was popular in high school since the A-Listers lives will go downhill after high school because they don't care about preparing for the real world and are only focused on enjoying Senior year while Danny will be astronaut, Sam will join some environmental movement, and Tucker will likely go to his dream school MIT.
* SympathyfortheHero: Star does feel sorry for Danny for all the bullying he goes through because of Dash after seeing how lousy it feels to be stuck in a locker when they're forced to hide in one from the island beast when they're trapped with it after getting locked in the school and it further motivates her to stand up for him against the A-Listers harassment.
* SympathyfortheHero: Star does feel sorry for Danny for all the bullying he goes through because of Dash after seeing how lousy it feels to be stuck in a locker when they're forced to hide in one from the island beast when they're trapped with it after getting locked in the school and it further motivates her to stand up for him against the A-Listers harassment.
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* WomenPreferStrongMen: Star is impressed by how brave Danny is for standing up to the beast from the island.
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* JerkassHasAPoint:
** Danny points out to Star that the A-Listers aren't real friends because they treat her like a lackey by telling her what she can or can't do as well as well as only hanging out with her for her looks, wealth, and athleticism; they also don't care about her since they showed no concern for when she was trapped on the island or locked in the school while Paulina only cares that Star won't attend her party.
** In "Trapped", he points out to Star that caring about popularity is pointless because when you graduate nobody will care how popular you were in school so you should enjoy school by hanging out with people you actually like.
** Danny points out to Star that the A-Listers aren't real friends because they treat her like a lackey by telling her what she can or can't do as well as well as only hanging out with her for her looks, wealth, and athleticism; they also don't care about her since they showed no concern for when she was trapped on the island or locked in the school while Paulina only cares that Star won't attend her party.
** In "Trapped", he points out to Star that caring about popularity is pointless because when you graduate nobody will care how popular you were in school so you should enjoy school by hanging out with people you actually like.
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* JerkassHasAPoint:
**JerkassHasAPoint: Danny is not really a jerkass, but him breaking Star's bubble kickstarts her reformation.
** He points out to Star that the A-Listers aren't real friends because they treat her like a lackey by telling her what she can or can'tdo as well as well as do, and only hanging hang out with her for her looks, wealth, and athleticism; they also don't care about her since they showed no concern for Star when she was trapped on the island or locked in the school while school, with Paulina only cares upset that Star won't wouldn't attend her party.
**In "Trapped", he points out to He also tells Star that caring about popularity is pointless in the long run because when after you graduate graduate, nobody will care how popular you were in high school so you should enjoy school that time by being yourself and hanging out with people you actually like.
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** He points out to Star that the A-Listers aren't real friends because they treat her like a lackey by telling her what she can or can't
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** Vlad pays for antagonizing Star and Danny by getting trapped by the former in the Fenton Thermos.
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** Vlad [[spoiler:Vlad]] pays for antagonizing Star and Danny by getting trapped by the former Star in the Fenton Thermos.
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* LaserGuidedKarma: When Star threatens to sue Mr. Lancer and the school for allowing Dash and the A-Listers to get away with their bullying, Mr. Lancer punishes Dash by giving him detention.
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* LaserGuidedKarma: JerkassHasAPoint:
** Danny points out to Star that the A-Listers aren't real friends because they treat her like a lackey by telling her what she can or can't do as well as well as only hanging out with her for her looks, wealth, and athleticism; they also don't care about her since they showed no concern for when she was trapped on the island or locked in the school while Paulina only cares that Star won't attend her party.
** In "Trapped", he points out to Star that caring about popularity is pointless because when you graduate nobody will care how popular you were in school so you should enjoy school by hanging out with people you actually like.
* LaserGuidedKarma:
** When Star threatens to sue Mr. Lancer and the school for allowing Dash and the A-Listers to get away with their bullying, Mr. Lancer punishes Dash by giving himdetention.detention.
** Vlad pays for antagonizing Star and Danny by getting trapped by the former in the Fenton Thermos.
** Danny points out to Star that the A-Listers aren't real friends because they treat her like a lackey by telling her what she can or can't do as well as well as only hanging out with her for her looks, wealth, and athleticism; they also don't care about her since they showed no concern for when she was trapped on the island or locked in the school while Paulina only cares that Star won't attend her party.
** In "Trapped", he points out to Star that caring about popularity is pointless because when you graduate nobody will care how popular you were in school so you should enjoy school by hanging out with people you actually like.
* LaserGuidedKarma:
** When Star threatens to sue Mr. Lancer and the school for allowing Dash and the A-Listers to get away with their bullying, Mr. Lancer punishes Dash by giving him
** Vlad pays for antagonizing Star and Danny by getting trapped by the former in the Fenton Thermos.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13205463/1/Trapped Trapped]]'' is the first sequel to the ''WesternAnimation/DannyPhantom'' fanfic ''[[Fanfic/DannyPhantomStranded "Stranded"]]''. Star is obsessed with learning about Danny and his secret.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13205463/1/Trapped Trapped]]'' is the first sequel to the ''WesternAnimation/DannyPhantom'' fanfic ''[[Fanfic/DannyPhantomStranded "Stranded"]]''.Stranded]]'' and its second story arc. Star is obsessed with learning about Danny and his secret.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13205463/1/Trapped Trapped]]'' is the first sequel to the ''WesternAnimation/DannyPhantom'' fanfic ''[[Fanfic/DannyPhantomStranded "Stranded"]]. Star is obsessed with learning about Danny and his secret.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13205463/1/Trapped Trapped]]'' is the first sequel to the ''WesternAnimation/DannyPhantom'' fanfic ''[[Fanfic/DannyPhantomStranded "Stranded"]]."Stranded"]]''. Star is obsessed with learning about Danny and his secret.
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''https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13205463/1/Trapped'' is the first sequel to the ''WesternAnimation/DannyPhantom'' fanfic ''[[Fanfic/DannyPhantomStranded "Stranded"]]. Star is obsessed with learning about Danny and his secret.
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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Danny assures Star that the real her who isn't trying to be an A-Lister is a much better person.
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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Danny assures Star that the real her who isn't trying to be an A-Lister is a much better person.
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''https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13205463/1/Trapped'' is the first sequel to the ''WesternAnimation/DannyPhantom'' fanfic ''[[Fanfic/DannyPhantomStranded "Stranded"]]. Star is obsessed with learning about Danny and his secret.
!! Tropes:
* AdultsAreUseless: Like in the show, Mr. Lancer favors the A-Listers and does nothing to stop their bullying. Star turns the tables on him when she threatens to have her father sue him and the school, forcing him to punish Dash and the other A-Listers.
* AlmostHoldingHands: While Danny is still flustered from [[spoiler:the kiss]], Star briefly attempts to reach out for his hand. She pulls back before he can notices and mentally scolds herself for the attempt.
* AlmostKiss: After Danny compliments her drawing skills and gives a few kind words, Star is touched and seems like she's about to kiss him on the lips. Then a ghost attacks them.
* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: After Danny is captured by [[spoiler:the monster of Specter Island]], Star decides to repay him for his kind words and concern for her by going to save him.
* BigBrotherInstinct: Danny fires at [[spoiler:Vlad]] for daring to call Danielle a "mistake".
* BigDamnKiss: [[spoiler:Star grabs hold of Danny and kisses him on the lips after they survive both the monster and Vlad Plasmius. After a second of shock, Danny kisses her back.]]
* BoyMeetsGhoul: Gender inverted. Star is unknowingly falling for Danny Phantom, a half-ghost hybrid.
* BullyingADragon: Star questions why Danny lets Dash bully him when the monster they encountered on the island could've easily torn him in half, yet Danny was smart and skilled enough to stand up to it.
* ClingyJealousGirl: Sam, unsurprisingly, isn't pleased that Star keeps looking at Danny. Star thinks she should just get over Danny if she's never going to make a move.
* DistressedDude: Star takes it upon herself to save Danny from the monster.
* EvilIsPetty: [[spoiler:Vlad messing with Danny and Star in the school was nothing more than just him trolling the boy.]]
* HairpinLockpick: Danny takes one of Star's bobby pins and claims he's use it to unlock a door. However, he's actually using his powers while she looks away, using the pin as a way to trick her.
* HeldGaze: While hiding in a locker together and hearing him compliment her drawing skills, Star spends a good deal of time staring into Danny's eyes.
* HeelFaceTurn: Star in the last chapter decides to leave the A-Lister once and for all, while threatening to sue the school to make the teachers punish them.
* LaserGuidedKarma: When Star threatens to sue Mr. Lancer and the school for allowing Dash and the A-Listers to get away with their bullying, Mr. Lancer punishes Dash by giving him detention.
* LuminescentBlush: Danny and Star blush bright enough to look like tomatoes after [[spoiler:they kiss.]]
* NiceJobBreakingItHero:
** By locking Danny in the bathroom, Star ends up trapping the both of them in the school, after hours with a ghost after them.
** Also due to wasting the power on her phone, Star can’t call for help.
* PapaWolf: When Star doesn't arrive home, her father decides to call the police.
* ParentsAsPeople: Star's dad does love her and cares for her well being, but he has a very busy schedule due to being a successful lawyer and rarely spends time with her. However, the moment he thinks her life is in danger, he leaps into action.
* PositiveFriendInfluence: Becoming friends with Danny causes Star to reject the A-Listers.
* RageBreakingPoint: Star, having had enough of Danny lying to her, locks him in the bathroom until he tells her the truth.
* RescueRomance: Saving her life a few times has made Star grow very interested in Danny.
* ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections: [[InvertedTrope Inverted]]. Star threatens to have her father sue the school and Mr. Lancer unless he stops favoring the A-Listers and punishes them for their bullying.
* ShipperOnDeck: Valerie quickly picks up on Star's growing attraction to Danny and, despite her still lingering feelings for him, thinks they'd be good together.
* SkewedPriorities: When Star is grounded and texts Paulina that she can't go to her party, Paulina is only annoyed that she won't be there and even suggests she sneak out, not caring that Star was trapped inside the school. This angers Star and is a factor in her quitting the A-Listers.
* SlapSlapKiss: Literal example. [[spoiler:Star slaps Danny twice for two things that genuinely angered her before she becomes very affectionate and kisses him.]]
* {{Tsundere}}: Star becomes one to Danny overtime. When she's not mad at him, she's growing fond of his heroic side and later, after slapping him, [[spoiler:kisses him on the lips]].
* {{Unishment}}: When Star reveals to her father that she got herself and Danny trapped in school, he punishes her by grounding her for the weekend and forbidding her from going to Paulina's party. However, not even wanting to go to the party in the first place and happy she can spend time with her father, Star does not consider this a punishment at all.
* ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend: Okay, she is not his girlfriend but [[spoiler: when Danny gets captured by the ghost that has been stalking then, Star goes to save him.]]
* WithFriendsLikeThese: As Danny pointed out, the A-Listers don't care about Star, telling her what she can and can't do. Paulina did not even care that Star was trapped in the school, only focusing on Star missing a party and making ''her'' look bad. Realizing Danny was right, Star unfriends Paulina and quits the A-Listers.
* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Danny assures Star that the real her who isn't trying to be an A-Lister is a much better person.
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!! Tropes:
* AdultsAreUseless: Like in the show, Mr. Lancer favors the A-Listers and does nothing to stop their bullying. Star turns the tables on him when she threatens to have her father sue him and the school, forcing him to punish Dash and the other A-Listers.
* AlmostHoldingHands: While Danny is still flustered from [[spoiler:the kiss]], Star briefly attempts to reach out for his hand. She pulls back before he can notices and mentally scolds herself for the attempt.
* AlmostKiss: After Danny compliments her drawing skills and gives a few kind words, Star is touched and seems like she's about to kiss him on the lips. Then a ghost attacks them.
* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: After Danny is captured by [[spoiler:the monster of Specter Island]], Star decides to repay him for his kind words and concern for her by going to save him.
* BigBrotherInstinct: Danny fires at [[spoiler:Vlad]] for daring to call Danielle a "mistake".
* BigDamnKiss: [[spoiler:Star grabs hold of Danny and kisses him on the lips after they survive both the monster and Vlad Plasmius. After a second of shock, Danny kisses her back.]]
* BoyMeetsGhoul: Gender inverted. Star is unknowingly falling for Danny Phantom, a half-ghost hybrid.
* BullyingADragon: Star questions why Danny lets Dash bully him when the monster they encountered on the island could've easily torn him in half, yet Danny was smart and skilled enough to stand up to it.
* ClingyJealousGirl: Sam, unsurprisingly, isn't pleased that Star keeps looking at Danny. Star thinks she should just get over Danny if she's never going to make a move.
* DistressedDude: Star takes it upon herself to save Danny from the monster.
* EvilIsPetty: [[spoiler:Vlad messing with Danny and Star in the school was nothing more than just him trolling the boy.]]
* HairpinLockpick: Danny takes one of Star's bobby pins and claims he's use it to unlock a door. However, he's actually using his powers while she looks away, using the pin as a way to trick her.
* HeldGaze: While hiding in a locker together and hearing him compliment her drawing skills, Star spends a good deal of time staring into Danny's eyes.
* HeelFaceTurn: Star in the last chapter decides to leave the A-Lister once and for all, while threatening to sue the school to make the teachers punish them.
* LaserGuidedKarma: When Star threatens to sue Mr. Lancer and the school for allowing Dash and the A-Listers to get away with their bullying, Mr. Lancer punishes Dash by giving him detention.
* LuminescentBlush: Danny and Star blush bright enough to look like tomatoes after [[spoiler:they kiss.]]
* NiceJobBreakingItHero:
** By locking Danny in the bathroom, Star ends up trapping the both of them in the school, after hours with a ghost after them.
** Also due to wasting the power on her phone, Star can’t call for help.
* PapaWolf: When Star doesn't arrive home, her father decides to call the police.
* ParentsAsPeople: Star's dad does love her and cares for her well being, but he has a very busy schedule due to being a successful lawyer and rarely spends time with her. However, the moment he thinks her life is in danger, he leaps into action.
* PositiveFriendInfluence: Becoming friends with Danny causes Star to reject the A-Listers.
* RageBreakingPoint: Star, having had enough of Danny lying to her, locks him in the bathroom until he tells her the truth.
* RescueRomance: Saving her life a few times has made Star grow very interested in Danny.
* ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections: [[InvertedTrope Inverted]]. Star threatens to have her father sue the school and Mr. Lancer unless he stops favoring the A-Listers and punishes them for their bullying.
* ShipperOnDeck: Valerie quickly picks up on Star's growing attraction to Danny and, despite her still lingering feelings for him, thinks they'd be good together.
* SkewedPriorities: When Star is grounded and texts Paulina that she can't go to her party, Paulina is only annoyed that she won't be there and even suggests she sneak out, not caring that Star was trapped inside the school. This angers Star and is a factor in her quitting the A-Listers.
* SlapSlapKiss: Literal example. [[spoiler:Star slaps Danny twice for two things that genuinely angered her before she becomes very affectionate and kisses him.]]
* {{Tsundere}}: Star becomes one to Danny overtime. When she's not mad at him, she's growing fond of his heroic side and later, after slapping him, [[spoiler:kisses him on the lips]].
* {{Unishment}}: When Star reveals to her father that she got herself and Danny trapped in school, he punishes her by grounding her for the weekend and forbidding her from going to Paulina's party. However, not even wanting to go to the party in the first place and happy she can spend time with her father, Star does not consider this a punishment at all.
* ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend: Okay, she is not his girlfriend but [[spoiler: when Danny gets captured by the ghost that has been stalking then, Star goes to save him.]]
* WithFriendsLikeThese: As Danny pointed out, the A-Listers don't care about Star, telling her what she can and can't do. Paulina did not even care that Star was trapped in the school, only focusing on Star missing a party and making ''her'' look bad. Realizing Danny was right, Star unfriends Paulina and quits the A-Listers.
* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Danny assures Star that the real her who isn't trying to be an A-Lister is a much better person.
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