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* AuraVision: One of the enhanced senses that Weiss gets from her faunus heritage is the ability to see magnetism in the form of auroras coalescing around highly magnetic things. In this case it might be more apt to say she has [[JustForPun Aurora Vision]].

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* AuraVision: One of the enhanced senses that Weiss gets from her faunus heritage is the ability to see magnetism in the form of auroras coalescing around highly magnetic things. In this case it might be more apt to say she has [[JustForPun Aurora Vision]].
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''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/28015515/ Craving the Sky]]'' by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/najio/ najio]] is an ongoing ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' fan fic in which Weiss Schnee is -- to the surprise of both her parents -- born with a pair of wings. Forbidden from removing her wings until her 18th birthday -- first by a promise her parents made to her grandfather, then later by {{blackmail}} by her sister -- Weiss has had to keep her wings bound and her status as a faunus secret her entire life.

Beginning in a similar place to canon RWBY, this story features a much lonelier and more self-loathing Weiss who nevertheless behaves superficially like her canon counterpart. Keeping her wings bound all her life has left them malformed, unhealthy, and in nearly constant pain, while growing up with [[FantasticRacism Jacques]] for a father has left Weiss with a whole host of deep emotional scars, as well as some very warped ideas about how the world works.

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''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/28015515/ Craving the Sky]]'' by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/najio/ najio]] is an ongoing a ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' fan fic in which Weiss Schnee is -- to the surprise of both her parents -- born with a pair of wings. Forbidden from removing her wings until her 18th birthday -- first by a promise her parents made to her grandfather, then later by {{blackmail}} by her sister -- Weiss has had to keep her wings bound and her status as a faunus secret her entire life.

Beginning in a similar place to canon RWBY, this story features a much lonelier and more self-loathing Weiss who nevertheless initially behaves superficially like her canon counterpart. Keeping her wings bound all her life has left them malformed, unhealthy, and in nearly constant pain, while growing up with [[FantasticRacism Jacques]] for a father has left Weiss with a whole host of deep emotional scars, as well as some very warped ideas about how the world works.
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* BigDamnHeroes: As in the original, Raven shows up out of nowhere to save Yang's life. This time however it's from Adam during the attack on Amity rather than from Neo during the breach of Vale, since the latter doesn't occur in this timeline.

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* BigDamnHeroes: As in the original, Raven shows up out of nowhere to save Yang's life. This time however it's from Adam [[spoiler:Adam during the attack on Amity Amity]] rather than from Neo during the breach of Vale, since the latter doesn't occur in this timeline.
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* TalkingTheMonsterToDeath: Completely unarmed, aura broken, and with her back against the wall, Weiss manages to talk Ilia down from bombing Amity Colosseum's engines by using her knowledge of their [[HideYourOtherness similar circumstances]] to make her realize that they're not so different, then urging her not to let her anger use her.

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* TalkingTheMonsterToDeath: Completely unarmed, aura broken, and with her back against the wall, Weiss manages to talk Ilia [[spoiler:Ilia]] down from bombing Amity Colosseum's engines by using her knowledge of their [[HideYourOtherness similar circumstances]] to make her realize that they're not so different, then urging her not to let her anger use her.
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* RiddleForTheAges: It's never explained where exactly Weiss's Faunus traits came from.
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* AdultFear: Willow, upon seeing her two youngest children [[spoiler:dive out of an upper-story window]], likens it to watching the world end.

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* GreenEyedMonster: Part of Weiss's initial apparent prejudice towards faunus is borne out of jealousy over them having traits that aren't mangled the way her wings are. At first this manifests in hating seeing faunus who openly expose their traits, flaunting them in a way she never could. After learning that Blake is one as well and has been hiding her ears underneath her bow, her opinion shifts towards hating faunus who can easily hide their traits, due to her jealousy over how difficult and painful it is to keep her own trait hidden.
* GuiltComplex: Between Jacques' abuse growing up and her belief that she destroyed her parents' marriage, Weiss tends to assume that any interpersonal drama that's in any way connected to her is her fault

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Part of Weiss's initial apparent prejudice towards faunus is borne out of jealousy over them having traits that aren't mangled the way her wings are. At first this manifests in hating seeing faunus who openly expose their traits, flaunting them in a way she never could. After learning that Blake is one as well and has been hiding her ears underneath her bow, her opinion shifts towards hating faunus who can easily hide their traits, due to her jealousy over how difficult and painful it is to keep her own trait hidden.
** Subverted in the case of Yang's feelings about Weiss dating Blake. She misinterpreted her own feelings as jealousy.
* GuiltComplex: Between Jacques' abuse growing up and her belief that she destroyed her parents' marriage, Weiss tends to assume that any interpersonal drama that's in any way connected to her is her faultfault.


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* JerkassRealization: Inverted. Comparing Blake's father to her own finally gets Weiss to realize that her miserable childhood was her father's fault rather than her own.
-->She hadn't been petulant, all those years. He'd been cruel.

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Rewrote the description to stand on its own and actually describe the story rather than be a series of passive-aggressive potshots at a completely different fan fic. Seriously, what the hell was I thinking when I wrote that?


''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/28015515/ Craving the Sky]]'' by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/najio/ najio]] is an ongoing ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' fan fic in which Weiss Schnee is inexplicably born with a pair of wings, and has grown up keeping the fact that she is a faunus secret from the rest of the world.

While this premise [[Fanfic/TheWanderingOne isn't new]], what sets this story apart is how realistic it is. Rather than her wings being cut off at birth and inexplicably regrowing when she attends Beacon, here she has bound them down her entire life, with all the medical complications you would expect from not allowing limbs to grow properly. Removing her wings is treated with all the seriousness as any other permanent body alteration. Additionally, being raised in a loveless household by a [[FantasticRacism racist father]] who decidedly does ''not'' make an [[BigotryException exception]] for her has left Weiss with a whole host of deep emotional scars which don't just go away once she starts to accept herself.

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''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/28015515/ Craving the Sky]]'' by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/najio/ najio]] is an ongoing ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' fan fic in which Weiss Schnee is inexplicably -- to the surprise of both her parents -- born with a pair of wings, wings. Forbidden from removing her wings until her 18th birthday -- first by a promise her parents made to her grandfather, then later by {{blackmail}} by her sister -- Weiss has had to keep her wings bound and has grown up keeping the fact that she is her status as a faunus secret from the rest of the world.

While this premise [[Fanfic/TheWanderingOne isn't new]], what sets
her entire life.

Beginning in a similar place to canon RWBY,
this story apart is how realistic it is. Rather than features a much lonelier and more self-loathing Weiss who nevertheless behaves superficially like her canon counterpart. Keeping her wings being cut off at birth and inexplicably regrowing when she attends Beacon, here she has bound all her life has left them down her entire life, malformed, unhealthy, and in nearly constant pain, while growing up with all the medical complications you would expect from not allowing limbs to grow properly. Removing her wings is treated with all the seriousness as any other permanent body alteration. Additionally, being raised in a loveless household by a [[FantasticRacism racist father]] who decidedly does ''not'' make an [[BigotryException exception]] Jacques]] for her a father has left Weiss with a whole host of deep emotional scars which don't just go away once she starts to accept herself.
scars, as well as some very warped ideas about how the world works.



* AllPsychologyIsFreudian: Deconstructed. While looking for books about wing care, Weiss stumbles upon a textbook claiming that any faunus who dates a human has a PowerDynamicsKink, and is usually either submissive or AggressiveSubmissive. Blake explains that the author is just a racist quack whose most famous study got debunked when someone redid it with a human control group, and whose response when a faunus says his research doesn't describe them is to claim they're lying.

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* AllPsychologyIsFreudian: Deconstructed. While looking for books about wing care, Weiss stumbles upon a textbook claiming that any faunus who dates a human has a PowerDynamicsKink, and is usually either submissive or AggressiveSubmissive. Blake explains that the author is just a racist quack whose most famous study got debunked when someone redid it with a human control group, and whose response when a faunus says his research doesn't describe them the only reason he got published is because other racists like to claim they're lying.hear about how Faunus secretly like to be treated terribly.



* ApologisesALot: One of the many ways in which Jacques abused Weiss was making her apologize for even the most minor mistakes. While she's normally TheUnapologetic around others, she'll revert to this under stress.

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* ApologisesALot: One of the many ways in which Jacques abused Weiss was making her apologize for even the most minor mistakes. While she's normally TheUnapologetic around others, she'll revert to this TheUnapologetic, when under stress.emotional stress Weiss has a tendency to do this. [[spoiler:Jacques also forces her to apologize a lot at home, and is likely the reason why she does so under stress]].



* AuraVision: One of the enhanced senses that Weiss gets from her faunus heritage is the ability to see magnetism in the form of auroras coalescing around highly magnetic things. This, along with her [[TheNoseKnows sense of smell]] allow her to figure out that Penny is a machine within seconds of meeting her.
* BastardAngst: Pretty much everyone assumes that Weiss is a bastard, and the girl herself firmly believes she tore her parents' marriage apart. That said, it's not clear whether she even ''is'' a bastard. Willow insists that she didn't cheat on Jacques, but supposedly faunus can never be born from two human parents.

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* AuraVision: One of the enhanced senses that Weiss gets from her faunus heritage is the ability to see magnetism in the form of auroras coalescing around highly magnetic things. This, along with her [[TheNoseKnows sense of smell]] allow her In this case it might be more apt to figure out that Penny is a machine within seconds of meeting her.
say she has [[JustForPun Aurora Vision]].
* BastardAngst: Pretty much everyone assumes that Weiss is a bastard, and the girl herself firmly believes she tore convinced that her birth destroyed her parents' marriage apart. That said, it's not clear whether she even ''is'' a bastard. Willow insists marriage, and she's spent most of her life trying to prove to her father that she didn't cheat on Jacques, but supposedly faunus can never be born from two human parents.she's worthy of inheriting the SDC.



* {{Blackmail}}: Winter threatens to publicly reveal Weiss's status as a faunus if Jacques dares to break his word to Nicholas and remove Weiss's wings before she turns 18. [[spoiler:Penny later takes inspiration from this in order to convince General Ironwood to let her attend Beacon by threatening to expose ''her own'' status as an android to the general public.]]
* BlessedWithSuck: Weiss feels this way about her sense of smell. While it has come in handy several times, she still considers the ability to tell what brand of toothpaste someone did or ''didn't'' use from across the room to be more curse than blessing.

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* {{Blackmail}}: Winter threatens to publicly reveal Weiss's status as a faunus if Jacques dares to break his word to Nicholas and remove Weiss's wings before she turns 18.eighteen. [[spoiler:Penny later takes inspiration from this in order to convince General Ironwood to let her attend Beacon by threatening to expose ''her own'' status as an android to the general public.]]
* BlessedWithSuck: Weiss feels this way about her sense of smell. While it has come in handy several times, she still considers the ability doesn't really enjoy being able to tell what brand of toothpaste someone did or ''didn't'' use smell someone's breath from across the room to be more curse than blessing.room.



* ConditionedToAcceptHorror: Weiss initially sees her father's treatment of her as normal, if mildly unfair, because that's all she's ever known.



* DaddyDNATest: Jacques has had several done with Weiss, but they keep coming out inconclusive.



* DroppingTheBombshell: Every time Weiss reveals her wings to someone who doesn't already know she's a faunus, it counts as this.



* EpiphanicPrison: The majority of Weiss's issues come from trying to heal the rift in her family and earn her father's love. [[spoiler:Once she accepts that Jacques will always hate her, she decides to publicly reveal her wings]].



* GilliganCut: Willow, upon deciding to [[spoiler:end her marraige with Jacques]], decides that however she goes about it, she'll do it calmly. Cut to her slamming open the door to [[spoiler:her husband's office]] in a rage and furiously [[spoiler:demanding a divorce, having just heard the recording of Jacques trying to bribe Weiss into leaving their son for dead]].

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* GilliganCut: Willow, upon deciding to [[spoiler:end her marraige marriage with Jacques]], decides that however she goes about it, she'll do it calmly. Cut to her slamming open the door to [[spoiler:her husband's office]] in a rage and furiously [[spoiler:demanding a divorce, having just heard the recording of Jacques trying to bribe Weiss into leaving their son for dead]].



* GuiltComplex: Thanks to her father's abuse growing up, Weiss has a strong belief that all she does is make things worse for the people around her. She always assumes that any conflict or drama that's in any way connected to her is her fault, and always assumes people are upset with her over it. Even when directly told otherwise, she has trouble believing it.
* HandingOverTheCrapSack: According to Ghira, this was the intent behind gifting Menagerie to the Faunus. The governments who drafted the treaty after the Great War didn't expect the faunus settlers to survive, and weren't too pleased when the people they'd sent to die started building a city instead.

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* GuiltComplex: Thanks to her father's Between Jacques' abuse growing up, Weiss has a strong up and her belief that all she does is make things worse for the people around her. She always assumes destroyed her parents' marriage, Weiss tends to assume that any conflict or interpersonal drama that's in any way connected to her is her fault, and always assumes people are upset with her over it. Even when directly told otherwise, she has trouble believing it.
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* HandingOverTheCrapSack: According to Ghira, this was the intent behind gifting Menagerie to the Faunus. The governments who drafted the treaty after the Great War didn't expect the faunus Faunus settlers to survive, and weren't too pleased when the people they'd sent to die started building a city instead.



* HeroicBSOD: Weiss has one when she thinks she's come between Blake and Yang and caused them to break up. It takes a pep talk from Winter and reassurances from Blake and Yang to break her out of it.
* HeroicSelfDeprecation: Unsurprisingly, being raised by a man who hates her and berates her for the smallest things that often aren't even her fault has left Weiss with extremely low self-esteem. She almost always expects anger and reprimands whenever she opens herself up to others, and she's always surprised when she receives sympathy instead.

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* HeroicBSOD: Weiss has one when she thinks she's come between [[spoiler: caused Blake and Yang and caused them to break up.up]]. It takes a pep talk from Winter and reassurances from Blake and Yang to break her out of it.
* HeroicSelfDeprecation: Unsurprisingly, being raised by a man who hates her and berates her for the smallest things that often -- many of which aren't even her fault -- has left Weiss with extremely low self-esteem. She almost always expects anger and reprimands whenever she opens herself up to others, and she's always surprised when she receives sympathy instead.



* MightyGlacier: Exaggerated. One of the things Blake shows her friends during their stay on Menagerie is an absolutely huge, ancient, and NighInvulnerable Grimm called Grandpa Grump. Despite being capable of levelling settlements singlehandedly, the thing has such thick and heavy armor that it can barely move more than a few inches at a time even when actively trying to attack. Kids on the island like to throw rocks at it for fun.

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* MightyGlacier: Exaggerated. One of the things Blake shows her friends during their stay on Menagerie is an absolutely huge, ancient, and NighInvulnerable Grimm called Grandpa Grump. Despite being capable of levelling leveling settlements singlehandedly, the thing has such thick and heavy armor that it can barely move more than a few inches at a time even when actively trying to attack. Kids on the island like to throw rocks at it for fun.



** Kali takes it a step further by also filling this role for Yang, dropping everything to talk to her after the latter's disappointing encounter with her ''actual'' mother.



* StockholmSyndrome: At the start of the story Weiss sees nothing wrong with the way her father has treated her.



* TheUnapologetic: Weiss hates apologies, and struggles to give them even when she knows she's in the wrong. [[AbusiveParents Thanks to her upbringing]], she believes that the purpose of an apology is to be humiliating for the apologizer. Interestingly, this also means that she tends to dislike receiving apologies from people she actually cares about.

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* TheUnapologetic: Weiss hates apologies, and struggles to give them even when she knows she's in the wrong. [[AbusiveParents Thanks to her upbringing]], [[spoiler:This is because she believes that thinks the purpose of an apology is to be humiliating for the apologizer.humiliating]]. Interestingly, this also means that she tends to dislike receiving apologies from people she actually cares about.


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* WhamLine: Weiss drops one which casts her status as TheUnapologetic under a completely different light.
-->'''Nora:''' I know we accidentally tripped over some... [[BuffySpeak stuff]]. We all have stuff, though. You weren't trying to hurt us, but we weren't trying to hurt you, either.\\
'''Weiss:''' Good. [[spoiler:Then I see no reason why we have to humiliate each other to illustrate the point]].

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* {{Dissimile}}: The sensation of vertigo that Weiss gets when she feels that HopeIsScary is frequently compared to the sensation that she doesn't get when she's around cliffs and deadly drops.



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** Blake's parents almost instantly pick up that there's something wrong with Weiss's home life, and are quick to start making up for all the good parenting she never got with the Schnees. Ghira in particular reaches out to her several times despite his bad first impression of her even before he learns her full circumstances. By the end of Weiss's stay on Menagerie, the Belladonnas have all but adopted her.

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ParentalSubstitute: Blake's parents almost instantly pick up that there's something wrong with Weiss's home life, and are quick to start making up for all the good parenting she never got with the Schnees. Ghira in particular reaches out to her several times despite his bad first impression of her even before he learns her full circumstances. By the end of Weiss's stay on Menagerie, the Belladonnas have all but adopted her.



* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Glynda Goodwitch is surprisingly sympathetic to Weiss's situation. When Weiss nearly gets Blake and herself killed due to hiding an injury during a Grimm hunt, she's initially furious but softens considerably once Weiss comes clean about her reasons, and despite canceling the mission still gives the team a passing grade. Later, when Weiss's father cuts her off so that she can't pay Beacon's tuition, Goodwitch merely expresses disappointment at Jacques failing to meet her lowest expectations before agreeing to speaking to Ozpin about granting Weiss financial aid. She also isn't fooled for a second when [[spoiler:Jacques pretends to be a loving and supportive father on the news]].

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Glynda Goodwitch is surprisingly sympathetic to Weiss's situation. When Weiss nearly gets Blake and herself killed due to hiding an injury during a Grimm hunt, she's initially furious but softens considerably once Weiss comes clean about her reasons, and despite canceling the mission still gives the team a passing grade. Later, when Weiss's father cuts her off so that she can't pay Beacon's tuition, Goodwitch merely expresses disappointment at Jacques failing to meet her lowest expectations before agreeing to speaking to Ozpin about granting Weiss financial aid. She also isn't fooled for a second when [[spoiler:Jacques pretends to be a loving and supportive father on the news]].



* SourOutsideSadInside: Weiss is this when she first starts attending Beacon. Any time someone comes close to discovering that she's a faunus or says something that hits too close to home, she lashes out in hopes of hurting them as much as she's hurting inside. She even acknowledges it outright once she starts to grow out of it, lamenting how she used to relish in the hatred thrown her way by her classmates but which now feels painful.

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* SourOutsideSadInside: Weiss is this when she first starts attending Beacon. Any time someone comes close to discovering that she's a Beacon, and she doesn't even realize it. She hates seeing other faunus or says something that hits too close to home, she lashes with their traits out in hopes of hurting them as much as she's hurting inside. She even acknowledges it outright once the open and doesn't understand why, and she starts to grow out of it, lamenting how she used to relish relishes in the hatred thrown her way by her classmates but which now feels painful.she receives from people who don't know she's different.

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* AdultFear: Willow, upon seeing her two youngest children [[spoiler:dive out of an upper-story window]], likens it to watching the world end.



* DirtyCoward: Jacques, and he's even worse than in canon. Here, when faced with a White Fang attack on his home, he repeatedly tries to bribe Weiss into abandoning Willow and Whitley just to get himself out of harm's way slightly faster.

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* DirtyCoward: Jacques, and he's even worse than in canon. Here, when faced with a White Fang attack on Jacques is willing to [[spoiler:bribe his home, he repeatedly tries to bribe Weiss daughter into abandoning Willow and Whitley their family]] just to get himself out of harm's way save his own skin slightly faster.sooner.



* EngineeredPublicConfession: To try to sabotage Jacques' election campaign, she visits him in his office while wearing a HiddenWire. After years of learning how to avoid making him angry, she finds it almost too easy to bring the worst out of him.



* GetOut: [[spoiler:Willow]], already furious at [[spoiler:Jacques and demanding a divorce]] for hitting [[spoiler:Weiss]] and trying to leave [[spoiler:Whitley]] to die, devolves into this after [[spoiler:she gets him to admit the real reason he married her]].
* GilliganCut: Willow, upon deciding to [[spoiler:end her marraige with Jacques]], decides that however she goes about it, she'll do it calmly. Cut to her slamming open the door to [[spoiler:her husband's office]] in a rage and furiously [[spoiler:demanding a divorce, having just heard the recording of Jacques trying to bribe Weiss into leaving their son for dead]].



* HiddenWire: Weiss wears a microphone salvaged from a surveilance drone in order to get a recording of how Jacques really treats her in an attempt to sabotage his election campaign. Unfortunately Atlas suffers a major power outage during the meeting.

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* HiddenWire: Weiss wears a microphone salvaged from a surveilance drone in order to get a recording of how Jacques really treats her in an attempt to sabotage his election campaign. Unfortunately Atlas suffers a major power outage during the meeting.[[spoiler:She gets even more than she was hoping for when Adam and Cinder attack, and he tries to sell out his family just to save himself]].



* LoveRevelationEpiphany: Yang doesn't realize that she and Weiss are attracted to each other until Weiss [[spoiler:grabs her by the collar and pulls her down into a BigDamnKiss]].



* MamaBear: It takes a lot to bring it out of her, but when she finds out [[spoiler:Jacques hit Weiss and tried to leave Whitley to die]], it's enough to send Willow into a rage. The fact that [[spoiler:Jacques also tried to abandon ''her'']] doesn't even cross her mind.



* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Willow has this realization in light of [[spoiler:the attack on the Schnee family manor, in which she's made to realize that Jacques' abuse isn't something she can work through, that trying is hurting her kids and pushing away Weiss, and especially that two of her children would be dead if Weiss had cut off her wings like she and Jacques wanted]].



* OhCrap: Jacques has an absolutely ''priceless'' one when he finds out Weiss was recording their meeting during the attack on the Schnee family manor.



* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: In one story of Menagerie's early years, Atlas and Mistral sent an army to take over the island only to find Grandpa Grump (see MightyGlacier above) waiting for them on the beach. Not knowing that the huge Grimm could barely move, they promptly turned around and left.
* SelfHarm: When Weiss is going through her HeroicBSOD, she [[spoiler: unconsciously summons a Boarbatusk to attack herself and doesn't even realize it until Ruby shoves her out of harm's way]].

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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: In one a story Blake tells of Menagerie's early years, Atlas and Mistral sent an army to take over the island only to find Grandpa Grump (see MightyGlacier above) waiting for them on the beach. Not knowing that the huge Grimm could barely move, they promptly turned around and left.
* SelfHarm: When Weiss is going through her HeroicBSOD, she [[spoiler: unconsciously [[spoiler: summons a Boarbatusk to attack herself herself]] and doesn't even realize it until Ruby shoves her out of harm's way]].way.



* TalkingTheMonsterToDeath: Completely unarmed and with her back against the wall, Weiss manages to talk Ilia down from bombing Amity Colosseum's engines by using her knowledge of their [[HideYourOtherness similar circumstances]] to make her realize that they're not so different, then urging her not to let her anger use her.

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* TalkingTheMonsterToDeath: Completely unarmed unarmed, aura broken, and with her back against the wall, Weiss manages to talk Ilia down from bombing Amity Colosseum's engines by using her knowledge of their [[HideYourOtherness similar circumstances]] to make her realize that they're not so different, then urging her not to let her anger use her.



* TranquilFury: Weiss settles into "an icy calm" when [[spoiler:Jacques repeatedly tries to bribe her into leaving the rest of their family to die]].



* UselessBystanderParent: Played completely straight here unlike the source material. In this continuity, Weiss's birth and the subsequent accusations of cheating are what drove Willow to alcoholism rather than Jacques explicitly telling her he married her for her money. As a result, she's deluded herself into thinking that if Weiss can just get Jacques to accept her as his daughter that it will somehow fix their relationship.

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* UselessBystanderParent: Played completely straight here unlike the source material. In this continuity, Weiss's birth and the subsequent accusations of cheating are what drove Willow to alcoholism rather than Jacques explicitly telling her he married her for her money. As a result, she's deluded herself into thinking that if Weiss can just get Jacques to accept her as his daughter that it will somehow fix their relationship. [[spoiler:Subverted when Willow realizes her relationship with Jacques is irreperable and decides to divorce him]].

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* HandingOverTheCrapSack: According to Ghira, this was the intent behind gifting Menagerie to the Faunus. The governments who drafted the treaty after the Great War didn't expect the faunus settlers to survive. While they couldn't force most faunus to move there, they could send convicted criminals such as the former slaves who rose up against their masters and turned the tide of the war. Atlas and Mistral weren't too pleased when the people they'd sent to die started building a city instead.

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* HandingOverTheCrapSack: According to Ghira, this was the intent behind gifting Menagerie to the Faunus. The governments who drafted the treaty after the Great War didn't expect the faunus settlers to survive. While they couldn't force most faunus to move there, they could send convicted criminals such as the former slaves who rose up against their masters survive, and turned the tide of the war. Atlas and Mistral weren't too pleased when the people they'd sent to die started building a city instead.


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* SentencedToDownUnder: This is what gifting Menagerie to the faunus was really meant to be. Any faunus that had been convicted of a crime (such as rebelling against their enslavers and turning the tide of the Great War, for example) were forced to settle on the untamed, Grimm-infested island where they were not expected to survive.

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* HandingOverTheCrapSack: According to Ghira, this was the intent behind gifting Menagerie to the Faunus. The governments who drafted the treaty after the Great War didn't expect the faunus settlers to survive. While they couldn't force most faunus to move there, they could send convicted criminals such as the former slaves who rose up against their masters and turned the tide of the war. Atlas and Mistral weren't too pleased when the people they'd sent to die started building a city instead.



* MeaningfulRename: In the second interview, Weiss deliberately refers to Jacques by his maiden name, implicitly disowning him.

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* MeaningfulRename: In While giving an interview at one of the second interview, Schnee dust mines, Weiss deliberately refers to Jacques by his maiden name, name Gelé, implicitly disowning him.him.
* MightyGlacier: Exaggerated. One of the things Blake shows her friends during their stay on Menagerie is an absolutely huge, ancient, and NighInvulnerable Grimm called Grandpa Grump. Despite being capable of levelling settlements singlehandedly, the thing has such thick and heavy armor that it can barely move more than a few inches at a time even when actively trying to attack. Kids on the island like to throw rocks at it for fun.


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* BigDamnHeroes: As in the original, Raven shows up out of nowhere to save Yang's life. This time however it's from Adam during the attack on Amity rather than from Neo during the breach of Vale, since the latter doesn't occur in this timeline.



* ForWantOfANail: Between Salem's absence in this story and her presence in the sister story ''Griffon'', whose only stated difference is that Weiss's wings were cut off at age ten, it carries the implication that Winter stepping in to prevent the operation created a butterfly effect which led to the defeat of Salem. Somehow.



* ShipperOnDeck: After being the first to realize that everyone in their love triangle are all mutually attracted to each other, Blake happily starts helping Weiss and Yang to acknowledge their feelings for each other so that they can form a OneTrueThreesome.

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* ShipperOnDeck: After being the first to realize that everyone in their love triangle are all mutually attracted to each other, Blake happily starts helping Weiss and Yang to acknowledge their feelings for each other so that they can form a OneTrueThreesome.trinogamous relationship.



* SleepCute: In chapter 45, an offer from Yang to preen Weiss's feathers for her so the latter can take a nap leads to both of them falling asleep while hugging each other.

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* SleepCute: In chapter 45, an offer from Yang to preen Weiss's feathers for her so the latter can take a nap get some rest leads to both of them falling asleep while hugging each other.



* UselessBystanderParent: Played completely straight here rather than zigzagged. In this continuity, Weiss's birth and the subsequent accusations of cheating are what drove Willow to alcoholism rather than Jacques explicitly telling her he married her for her money. As a result, she's deluded herself into thinking that if Weiss can just get Jacques to accept her as his daughter that it will somehow fix their relationship.

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* UselessBystanderParent: Played completely straight here rather than zigzagged.unlike the source material. In this continuity, Weiss's birth and the subsequent accusations of cheating are what drove Willow to alcoholism rather than Jacques explicitly telling her he married her for her money. As a result, she's deluded herself into thinking that if Weiss can just get Jacques to accept her as his daughter that it will somehow fix their relationship.


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* WhatMeasureIsANonCute: Briefly discussed. Sienna Khan describes faunus like Fiona as having "cute privilege". The latter acknowledges the point, but finds her wording distasteful.

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* HatesBeingTouched: Weiss. It's heavily implied that it stems from a fear of someone discovering her wings, though it's taken on a life of its own and also been made worse by the aforementioned CreepyPhysical.

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* HatesBeingTouched: Weiss. It's heavily implied that it stems from a fear of someone discovering her wings, though it's since taken on a life of its own and also been made worse by the aforementioned CreepyPhysical.



* HurtComfortFic: A large part of the plot of the story is helping Weiss get through her veritable mountain of issues.
* ICanStillFight: When Weiss discovers that her wound from [[spoiler:Ilia]]'s infiltration of the CCT is infected while on her team's end of year combat mission with Goodwitch, she decides to keep it a secret in order to avoid having to end the mission early or let more people learn about her faunus heritage. Naturally this backfires horribly as her condition worsens, and nearly gets her and Blake killed.

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* HurtComfortFic: A large part of the plot of the story is helping Weiss get through her veritable mountain of issues.
* ICanStillFight: When Weiss discovers that her wound from [[spoiler:Ilia]]'s the CCT infiltration of the CCT is infected while on her team's end of year combat mission with Goodwitch, she decides to keep it a secret in order to avoid having to end the mission early or let more people learn about her faunus heritage. Naturally this backfires horribly as her condition worsens, and nearly gets her and Blake killed.



* LoveEpiphany: Weiss has hers about both Blake and Yang while they're on either side of her stretching and massaging her wings.



* ManipulativeBastard: Jacques Schnee. As of chapter 39, he has yet to do or say a single thing that hasn't in some way been meant to manipulate Weiss.

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* ManipulativeBastard: MamasBabyPapasMaybe: Most people who know that Weiss is a faunus assume she's a bastard, especially Jacques Schnee. As of chapter 39, he has yet to do or say a single thing himself, even though Willow insists she didn't cheat. It doesn't help that hasn't in some way been meant to manipulate Weiss.the paternity tests keep coming out inconclusive.

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