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-->'''Chief''':You're short-tempered, impulsive, and in more than one case, you've been guilty of outright dereliction of your duty, and have shown a critical lack of professionalism. ''[...]'' [But] as much as I dislike you, Commander, I want this project to succeed. Humanity will need its elite troops in the coming years. Those who can do what no others can. [I]n order for the S-[=IVs=] to live up to their full potential, they must be properly led. They must have a commanding officer that is competent, level headed, capable of delegation and absolutely able to maintain a view on the larger picture. You ''must'' become that person. And I believe you can.

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-->'''Chief''':You're -->'''Chief''': You're short-tempered, impulsive, and in more than one case, you've been guilty of outright dereliction of your duty, and have shown a critical lack of professionalism. ''[...]'' [But] as much as I dislike you, Commander, I want this project to succeed. Humanity will need its elite troops in the coming years. Those who can do what no others can. [I]n order for the S-[=IVs=] to live up to their full potential, they must be properly led. They must have a commanding officer that is competent, level headed, capable of delegation and absolutely able to maintain a view on the larger picture. You ''must'' become that person. And I believe you can.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Chief delivers an ''epic'' one to Palmer after he finds out about her mission. Right after [[HolyShitQuotient choke-slamming her into a wall]].

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* WhatTheHellHero: Chief delivers an ''epic'' one to Palmer after he finds out about her mission. Right after [[HolyShitQuotient choke-slamming her into a wall]].wall.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Chief delivers an ''epic'' one to Palmer after he finds out about her mission. Right after [[HolyShitQuotient choke-slamming her]] [[CrowningMomentofAwesome into a wall]].

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* WhatTheHellHero: Chief delivers an ''epic'' one to Palmer after he finds out about her mission. Right after [[HolyShitQuotient choke-slamming her]] [[CrowningMomentofAwesome her into a wall]].
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9287185/1/Consequences-of-Revelation Consequences of Revelation]]'' (SpaceBattles [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/consequences-of-revelation-a-halo-4-story.258526/ discussion thread]]) is a ''Franchise/{{Halo}}'' fanfic written by Aratech/Red Mage 04, the author of ''Fanfic/FinishingTheFight''. Now complete at four chapters.

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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9287185/1/Consequences-of-Revelation Consequences of Revelation]]'' (SpaceBattles (Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/consequences-of-revelation-a-halo-4-story.258526/ discussion thread]]) is a ''Franchise/{{Halo}}'' fanfic written by Aratech/Red Mage 04, the author of ''Fanfic/FinishingTheFight''. Now complete at four chapters.
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* StockholmSyndrome: Lasky privately wonders if Master Chief and the rest of the Spartans suffer from this in regards to Dr Halsey, whom they see as their mother.
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* ManBehindTheMan: Paragonsky was this for Osman. More importantly, it's pointed out that rather than the Mengele-style mad scientist that Paragonsky and Osman (and Karen Traviss) like to portray Doctor Halsey as, she was working directly for the military in a wartime situation. Every single experiment and resource would have to be okayed by higher-ups at ONI HQ, and if Halsey did anything, then it had to have been checked out by many, many other people first.

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* ManBehindTheMan: TheManBehindTheMan: Paragonsky was this for Osman. More importantly, it's pointed out that rather than the Mengele-style mad scientist that Paragonsky and Osman (and Karen Traviss) like to portray Doctor Halsey as, she was working directly for the military in a wartime situation. Every single experiment and resource would have to be okayed by higher-ups at ONI HQ, and if Halsey did anything, then it had to have been checked out by many, many other people first.
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* ThePeterPrinciple: The story implies that this is what Palmer's biggest issue is- she worked well commanding small teams, but was promoted beyond her level of skill. This causes her to make mistakes... but when you're as highly placed as "Leader of all SPARTAN forces on the most advanced UNSC ship in existence," any mistakes you make are magnified nearly exponentially.
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** [[spoiler: Inverted with Osman, as the Chief tells her she is no longer allowed to call him John.]]
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* ManBehindTheMan: Paragonsky was this for Osman. More importantly, it's pointed out that rather than the Mengele-style mad scientist that Paragonsky and Osman (and Karen Traviss) like to portray Doctor Halsey as, she was working directly for the military in a wartime situation. Every single experiment and resource would have to be okayed by higher-ups at ONI HQ

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* ManBehindTheMan: Paragonsky was this for Osman. More importantly, it's pointed out that rather than the Mengele-style mad scientist that Paragonsky and Osman (and Karen Traviss) like to portray Doctor Halsey as, she was working directly for the military in a wartime situation. Every single experiment and resource would have to be okayed by higher-ups at ONI HQHQ, and if Halsey did anything, then it had to have been checked out by many, many other people first.
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* ManBehindTheMan: Paragonsky was this for Osman. More importantly, it's pointed out that rather than the Mengele-style mad scientist that Paragonsky and Osman (and Karen Traviss) like to portray Doctor Halsey as, she was working directly for the military in a wartime situation. Every single experiment and resource would have to be okayed by higher-ups at ONI HQ
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: The Chief and Palmer get one in the same scene. Palmer, upon learning that she's been sidelined for training the SPARTAN soldiers in favor of Master Chief and Blue Team, goes up to Laskey to complain about this... while not wearing her helmet. The Master Chief, upon seeing her, is able to take her down in roughly half a second while making it clear not only his displeasure, but that he could kill her at any given moment.

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* BadassNormal: The Master Chief lists Sergeant Johnson [[spoiler:who was actually a SPARTAN I]], Captain Jacob Keyes, Commander Miranda Keyes, [[Literature/HaloTheFlood Sergeant Marvin Mobuto]], [[ColdSniper Simo Haya]], and [[OneManArmy Audie Murphy]] as ordinary people who were nonetheless exceedingly competent and skilled to snap Palmer out of her WhatMeasureIsANonSuper mentality.
** Then just to twist the knife further, he says that he would take any of them over almost all of her SPARTAN [=IVs=].

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* BadassNormal: The Master Chief lists Sergeant Johnson [[spoiler:who was actually a SPARTAN I]], I, not that he knows that]], Captain Jacob Keyes, Commander Miranda Keyes, [[Literature/HaloTheFlood Sergeant Marvin Mobuto]], [[ColdSniper Simo Haya]], and [[OneManArmy Audie Murphy]] as ordinary people who were nonetheless exceedingly competent and skilled to snap Palmer out of her WhatMeasureIsANonSuper mentality.
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mentality. Then just to twist the knife further, he says that he would take any of them over almost all of her SPARTAN [=IVs=].
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9287185/1/Consequences-of-Revelation Consequences of Revelation]]'' (SpaceBattles [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/consequences-of-revelation-a-halo-4-story.258526/ discussion thread]]) is a ''Franchise/{{Halo}}'' fanfic written by Aratech/Red Mage 04, the author of ''Fanfic/FinishingTheFight''..

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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9287185/1/Consequences-of-Revelation Consequences of Revelation]]'' (SpaceBattles [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/consequences-of-revelation-a-halo-4-story.258526/ discussion thread]]) is a ''Franchise/{{Halo}}'' fanfic written by Aratech/Red Mage 04, the author of ''Fanfic/FinishingTheFight''..
''Fanfic/FinishingTheFight''. Now complete at four chapters.
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* VillainousValour: [[spoiler:Osman's personal Spartan-[=IVs=]]] pull off some cunning traps that would have worked against anyone who wasn't a II.
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** Everyone present takes it as a sign that she has totally lost it.
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* FirstNameBasis: At the end of chapter 4 [[spoiler:Blue Team give Lasky their first names.]]
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-->'''Chief''': It had been suggested among my team that everyone here not wearing their full kit receive a stun-round to the head to try to drive the point home. ''[...]'' However, we eventually decided against this. You are not children. You are not raw recruits. I should not have to use the threat of physical pain and humiliation to make you understand the importance of wearing all of your armor. From now on if you are on duty and we catch you out of uniform, it will be an infraction. At first, we will restrict your R&R privileges and give you extra duties. If that fails to take, we will begin removing ranking stripes.

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-->'''Chief''': It had been suggested among my team that everyone here not wearing their full kit receive a stun-round to the head to try to drive the point home. ''[...]'' However, we eventually decided against this. You are not children. You are not raw recruits. I should not have to use the threat of physical pain and humiliation to make you understand the importance of wearing all of your armor. From now on if you are on duty and we catch you out of uniform, it will be an infraction. At first, we will restrict your R&R privileges and give you extra duties. If that fails to take, we will begin removing ranking stripes.
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* In Chapter 4, the [[spoiler:invasion of ONI headquarters to capture and arrest Osman]] is also a curb-stomp in the Spartan-[=IIs=]' favor. Blue Team and Crimson Team blitz through everything the station throws at them; they utterly thrash even [[spoiler:Osman's personal cadre of Spartan-[=IV=]s]] with almost no effort.

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* ** In Chapter 4, the [[spoiler:invasion of ONI headquarters to capture and arrest Osman]] is also a curb-stomp in the Spartan-[=IIs=]' favor. Blue Team and Crimson Team blitz through everything the station throws at them; they utterly thrash even [[spoiler:Osman's personal cadre of Spartan-[=IV=]s]] with almost no effort.
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* In Chapter 4, the [[spoiler:invasion of ONI headquarters to capture and arrest Osman]] is also a curb-stomp in the Spartan-[=IIs=]' favor. Blue Team and Crimson Team blitz through everything the station throws at them; they utterly thrash even [[spoiler:Osman's personal cadre of Spartan-[=IV=]s]] with almost no effort.
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* DoNotCallMePaul: The Chief tells Osman that she doesn't have the right to address him by his birth name.


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* VillainousBreakdown: Osman undergoes this.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9287185/1/Consequences-of-Revelation Consequences of Revelation]]'' (SpaceBattles [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/consequences-of-revelation-a-halo-4-story.258526/ discussion thread]]) by Aratech/Red Mage 04 is a ''Franchise/{{Halo}}'' fanfic written by Aratech, the author of ''Fanfic/FinishingTheFight''..

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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9287185/1/Consequences-of-Revelation Consequences of Revelation]]'' (SpaceBattles [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/consequences-of-revelation-a-halo-4-story.258526/ discussion thread]]) by Aratech/Red Mage 04 is a ''Franchise/{{Halo}}'' fanfic written by Aratech, Aratech/Red Mage 04, the author of ''Fanfic/FinishingTheFight''..
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* BulletholeDoor: Spartan Lasers, intended for anti-tank work, are equally good at turning walls into impromptu entrances.

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* OhCrap: Palmer, Laskey, and Roland all have one when Chief comes into contact with Palmer after having watched her shoot Doctor Halsey.

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* PraetorianGuard: Osman has [[spoiler:a group of SPARTAN-[=IVs=] loyal only to her.]]

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