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** Bonnie, as always, tends to react with "SO CUTE!" to new Pokemon.
** Kairi is prone to this [[spoiler:around Pokemon, in particular a Rockruff she meets in Pyrite Town and the Larvitar and Ralts she and Riku find in the S.S. ''Libra''. "At this point she was convinced that nearly every single Pokemon in existence was incredibly cute and must be protected at all costs." For his part, Larvitar doesn't appreciate it.]]

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** Bonnie, as always, tends to react with "SO CUTE!" to new Pokemon.
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** Kairi is prone to this [[spoiler:around Pokemon, Pokémon, in particular a Rockruff she meets in Pyrite Town and the Larvitar and Ralts she and Riku find in the S.S. ''Libra''. "At this point she was convinced that nearly every single Pokemon Pokémon in existence was incredibly cute and must be protected at all costs." For his part, Larvitar doesn't appreciate it.]]



** Kairi asks [[spoiler:her new Pokemon whether "Ralts" is her name or her species. She answers, "Yes!", before translating that Riku's Larvitar says yes too. "About being called Larvitar, that is. It'd be silly if he was called Ralts."]]

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** Kairi asks [[spoiler:her new Pokemon Pokémon whether "Ralts" is her name or her species. She answers, "Yes!", before translating that Riku's Larvitar says yes too. "About being called Larvitar, that is. It'd be silly if he was called Ralts."]]
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* PrecociousCrush: Implied when [[spoiler:Michael chooses to stick close to Kairi when they explore the ruined Cipher facility. Everyone reacts to this with barely concealed amusement.]]
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* SherlockScan: [[spoiler:Michael impresses Kairi and Riku with his analysis of the aftermath of a battle

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* AlienNonInterferenceClause: As usual, the World Order prevents Sora from telling his new friends about coming from another world [[spoiler:until he has no other choice, in the wake of the Heartless attack on Pyrite Town. Kairi, Riku and Jiminy intended to follow this as well, but Kairi's Ralts quickly learns the truth using telepathy and blabs it to Riku's Larvitar.]]

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* AlienNonInterferenceClause: As usual, the World Order prevents Sora from telling his new friends about coming from another world [[spoiler:until until he has no other choice, in the wake of the Heartless attack on Pyrite Town. Kairi, [[spoiler:Kairi, Riku and Jiminy intended to follow this as well, but Kairi's Ralts quickly learns the truth using telepathy and blabs it to Riku's Larvitar.Larvitar. They later come clean to Lily to some extent, revealing they have a history with the Heartless, and to Michael after he sees them with their Keyblades.]]



* CombatCommentator: Played for laughs with TheAnnouncer of a tournament in Phenac City, who's remarkably unenthusiastic about commentating on the battles. Brock suggests that he must be new and filling in for someone else, while Bonnie says that "It's like they found some random guy off the street and stuck him up in the announcer booth!" He does improve slightly in the final match (Ash and Serena vs Brock and Bonnie), thanks to the excitement of it.
* ConfusedBystanderInterview: Following the [[spoiler:Heartless attack on Pyrite Town, Fabe appears on the local news. While obviously unaware of the full story - he believes it was an attack by some kind of Shadow Pokémon, - he does identify Ash by name, revealing him as a snagger, causing Ash to regret giving his name at the Duel Square.]]

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* CombatCommentator: CombatCommentator:
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Played for laughs with TheAnnouncer of a tournament in Phenac City, who's remarkably unenthusiastic about commentating on the battles. Brock suggests that he must be new and filling in for someone else, while Bonnie says that "It's like they found some random guy off the street and stuck him up in the announcer booth!" He does improve slightly in the final match (Ash and Serena vs Brock and Bonnie), thanks to the excitement of it.
** In Chapter 18, [[spoiler:Michael provides commentary for Kairi and Riku while watching a recording of an attack on the Cipher facility, identifying Ash and Serena by name (and noting that Bonnie looks familiar).]]
* ConfusedBystanderInterview: Following the [[spoiler:Heartless Heartless attack on Pyrite Town, Fabe appears on the local news. While obviously unaware of the full story - he believes it was an attack by some kind of Shadow Pokémon, - he does identify Ash by name, revealing him as a snagger, causing Ash to regret giving his name at the Duel Square.Square.
* CurbStompBattle: In Chapter 18, [[spoiler:the security footage of a raid on a Cipher facility reveals a fairly one-sided fight between Ash's group and six Cipher goons.
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** In Chapter 15, [[spoiler:after Sora, comparing this world to his own, offhandedly comments "Yeah, sure, I can use magic, but anyone can do that!" It takes Serena a minute to notice the implications of that (that she might be able to learn to use it using the magic staff she found earlier), but before she can ask him about it, she gets distracted by their arrival in Agate Village and the subject is dropped. It's not until the following chapter that she learns to use it.]]

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** In Chapter 15, [[spoiler:after Sora, comparing this world to his own, offhandedly comments "Yeah, sure, I can use magic, but anyone can do that!" It takes Serena a minute to notice the implications of that (that she might be able to learn to use it using the magic staff she found earlier), but before she can ask him about it, she gets distracted by their arrival in Agate Village and the subject is dropped. It's not until the following chapter that she learns to use it.uses her staff for the first time.]]



* ExactWords: When Brock asks Sora if he can tell them where he's from and how he got here, Sora answers, "I'm not quite sure." Not technically a lie, since he doesn't know anything about the VoidBetweenTheWorlds he was in before, or how much he can tell them without breaking the [[AlienNonInterferenceClause World Order]]. Brock takes this to mean [[FakingAmnesia he has amnesia]], and [[SureLetsGoWithThat Sora doesn't correct him]] [[spoiler:until he absolutely has to]].

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* ExactWords: When Brock asks Sora if he can tell them where he's from and how he got here, Sora answers, "I'm not quite sure." Not technically a lie, since he doesn't know anything about the VoidBetweenTheWorlds he was in before, or how much he can tell them without breaking the [[AlienNonInterferenceClause World Order]]. Brock takes this to mean [[FakingAmnesia he has amnesia]], and [[SureLetsGoWithThat Sora doesn't correct him]] [[spoiler:until until he absolutely has to]].to.



* GlobalCurrency: Sora's leftover munny from his own adventures has been converted into Poké since he arrived in Orre.

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* GlobalCurrency: Sora's leftover munny from his own adventures has been converted into Poké since he arrived in Orre. He admits to his friends that he has no idea how it works.



* InternalReveal: In Chapter 10, [[spoiler:Sora tells his new friends everything about the Heartless, Xehanort, etc, (complete with a LetMeGetThisStraight from Brock). In turn, Ash tells Sora, Serena and Bonnie about his own world-saving adventures and why he was called the Chosen One.]]

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In Chapter 10, [[spoiler:Sora Sora tells his new friends everything about the Heartless, Xehanort, etc, (complete with a LetMeGetThisStraight from Brock). In turn, Ash tells Sora, Serena and Bonnie about his own world-saving adventures and why he was called the Chosen One.One.
** In Chapter 18, [[spoiler:Kairi reveals to Lily that she and Riku have a history with the Heartless, to persuade her to let them go after Professor Krane, though doesn't reveal more than that yet. They later have to reveal more to Michael, after he follows them on their rescue mission and sees them using their Keyblades.
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* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: [[spoiler:When Sora explains how fighting Heartless has made him and his friends get stronger, Bonnie compares it to "experience points in a game".]]

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* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: [[spoiler:When When Sora explains how fighting Heartless has made him and his friends get stronger, Bonnie compares it to "experience points in a game".]]



* LimitBreak: Namechecked when [[spoiler:Sora's fight with a Guard Armor leads him to create a Limit Move with Ash and Pikachu, "Ten Million Volt Thunderstorm".]]

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* LimitBreak: Namechecked when [[spoiler:Sora's Sora's fight with a Guard Armor leads him to create a Limit Move with Ash and Pikachu, "Ten Million Volt Thunderstorm".]]



* MoneySpider: [[spoiler:When Sora explains how the Heartless leave behind munny and other useful items, the group suddenly realise that they had picked up a fair bit of it (in their bank accounts, that is) from the previous day's attack without even noticing.]]

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** Similarly, Chapter 18 has [[spoiler:Michael, Kairi and Riku show up at a Cipher facility shortly after a raid by what turns out to have been Ash and Sora's group, though the exact outcome of their rescue attempt remains to be seen.]]
* MoneySpider: [[spoiler:When When Sora explains how the Heartless leave behind munny and other useful items, the group suddenly realise that they had picked up a fair bit of it (in their bank accounts, that is) from the previous day's attack without even noticing.noticing.
* NotHelpingYourCase: Immediately following the exchange under RhetoricalQuestionBlunder, [[spoiler:Riku asks Michael if the gang that Ash Ketchum fought were anything like Cipher. Michael snorts and says that Cipher would have beaten Team Rocket easily. It takes him a moment to realise his mistake.
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* OutsideContextProblem: Sora has no idea what Pokémon are (much to Ash and everyone else's bafflement). In turn, [[spoiler:Ash and his friends have no idea what TheHeartless are when they show up]]. Illustrated both ways in Chapter 11, with Sora having to remember [[CallingYourAttacks to call out Pokémon attacks rather than his own spells]] during his first battle with Rufflet, while [[spoiler:a news report on the Heartless attack in Pyrite Town can only assume they were some kind of Shadow Pokémon (Fabe refers to Shadows as Sableye, Soldiers as Bisharp and Large Bodies as Snorlax). In addition, Ash and the other trainers are out of their depth in a fight against a Guard Armor, as they've almost never had to deal with an enemy attacking them directly]].

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* OutsideContextProblem: Sora has no idea what Pokémon are (much to Ash and everyone else's bafflement). In turn, [[spoiler:Ash Ash and his friends have no idea what TheHeartless are when they show up]]. up. Illustrated both ways in Chapter 11, with Sora having to remember [[CallingYourAttacks to call out Pokémon attacks rather than his own spells]] during his first battle with Rufflet, while [[spoiler:a a news report on the Heartless attack in Pyrite Town can only assume they were some kind of Shadow Pokémon (Fabe refers to Shadows as Sableye, Soldiers as Bisharp and Large Bodies as Snorlax). In addition, Ash and the other trainers are out of their depth in a fight against a Guard Armor, as they've almost never had to deal with an enemy attacking them directly]].directly.



* RhetoricalQuestionBlunder: In Chapter 18, [[spoiler:Kairi tries to dissuade Michael from going after Cipher to rescue Professor Krane, pointing out that he's eleven. Michael naturally points out that most trainers leave home at his age. "Ash Ketchum started when he was ''ten''!" When Kairi asks if Ash decided to pick a fight with a criminal organization, Michael retorts that Team Rocket actually kept picking fights with him, blindsiding her and Riku.]]



* SherlockScan: [[spoiler:Michael impresses Kairi and Riku with his analysis of the aftermath of a battle



* SoreLoser: [[spoiler:After Sora and Serena defeat Vant and Serena snags his Shadow Toxel, he reacts like a ManChild, claiming he was just going to get rid of Toxel anyway.]]

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* SoreLoser: [[spoiler:After After Sora and Serena defeat Vant and Serena snags his Shadow Toxel, he reacts like a ManChild, claiming he was just going to get rid of Toxel anyway.]]



* TagalongChronicler: As always, Jiminy Cricket, [[spoiler:whose journal helps Sora explain his backstory to Ash and friends, and who later accompanies Kairi and Riku on their rescue mission.]]
* TemptingFate: In Chapter 11, [[spoiler:when a Guard Armor drops out of the sky nearby, Sora starts to express confidence that they can take it easily, only to be interrupted by several dozen Soldier Heartless showing up as well, followed by ''a second'' Guard Armor.]]

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* TagalongChronicler: As always, Jiminy Cricket, [[spoiler:whose whose journal helps Sora explain his backstory to Ash and friends, and [[spoiler:and who later accompanies Kairi and Riku on their rescue mission.]]
* TagalongKid: [[spoiler:Michael secretly follows Kairi and Riku on their mission to rescue Professor Krane.]]
* TemptingFate: In Chapter 11, [[spoiler:when when a Guard Armor drops out of the sky nearby, Sora starts to express confidence that they can take it easily, only to be interrupted by several dozen Soldier Heartless showing up as well, followed by ''a second'' Guard Armor.]]



* TheresNoKillLikeOverkill: In Chapter 11, [[spoiler:Sora, Ash and Pikachu's limit break, used to defeat two Guard Armors and a bunch of Soldier Heartless. Brock and Serena both consider it overkill, while the author agrees but considers it both fun to write and WorthIt.]]

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* TheresNoKillLikeOverkill: In Chapter 11, [[spoiler:Sora, Sora, Ash and Pikachu's limit break, used to defeat two Guard Armors and a bunch of Soldier Heartless. Brock and Serena both consider it overkill, while the author agrees but considers it both fun to write and WorthIt.]]



** Chapter 9: [[spoiler:In the Land of Departure, Kairi gets a call from Xion saying that they've found Sora. In Pyrite Town, the heroes visit Fateen's Fortune Telling, where Fateen not only recognises Ash as TheChosenOne but identifies Sora as a Guardian of Light, warning him that darkness is encroaching on the world. Before Sora can explain any of this to the group, the Heartless make an appearance nearby and Sora is forced to break his cover.]]

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** Chapter 9: [[spoiler:In In the Land of Departure, Kairi gets a call from Xion saying that they've found Sora. In Pyrite Town, the heroes visit Fateen's Fortune Telling, where Fateen not only recognises Ash as TheChosenOne but identifies Sora as a Guardian of Light, warning him that darkness is encroaching on the world. Before Sora can explain any of this to the group, the Heartless make an appearance nearby and Sora is forced to break his cover.]]
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* AnnoyingYoungerSibling: As in canon, [[spoiler:Jovi is about as exasperating to Michael as everyone else, though she does prove to be unexpectedly effective teacher to Kairi and Riku.]]

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* AnnoyingYoungerSibling: As in canon, [[spoiler:Jovi is about as exasperating to Michael as everyone else, though she does prove to be unexpectedly effective as a teacher to Kairi and Riku.]]

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* AnnoyingYoungerSibling: As in canon, [[spoiler:Jovi is about as exasperating to Michael as everyone else.]]

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* AnnoyingYoungerSibling: As in canon, [[spoiler:Jovi is about as exasperating to Michael as everyone else.else, though she does prove to be unexpectedly effective teacher to Kairi and Riku.]]



* ElementalRockPaperScissors: Discussed by Sora, who struggles to get his head around it while watching a battle:

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** [[spoiler:Kairi and Riku are slightly quicker to get a handle on it with help from Jovi and Michael. At one point Riku questions the logic behind Ice ''not'' being super effective against Water and Michael can't dispute his reasoning: "Every Pokémon battle I've ever watched that involved Ice types had them freezing any nearby water to give them an edge in battle."]]


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* IJustWantToBeSpecial: Played with when [[spoiler:Ash approaches Eagun for help with learning to use Aura. Eagun asks him if he may be feeling envy over Sora's abilities and Serena's growing magic. Ash admits to this, but maintains that it's more an issue of him feeling helpless against the Heartless. Eagun approves of his attitude and agrees to train him.]]
-->'''Ash''': I want to fight because I don't want to be a burden anymore. The second time we fought the Heartless, I had to run and hide while Sora and our Pokémon protected us. I hated it. I want to learn Aura so ''I'' can be the one protecting the others. I know I'll probably never be the warrior Sora is, and that's okay. But I don't want to be the one he – and Serena now, I guess – have to worry about protecting. I ''refuse'' to sit and hide while our world is under attack. I want to help.
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* AdaptationalBadass: [[spoiler: In this version, Eagun is an Aura Guardian capable of KiAttack and also has a Lucario.]]


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* JustifiedCriminal: {{Discussed|Trope}} when the group learns Wes's backstory from Rui's grandmother. It's noted that many become criminals just to survive in Orre, since the region lacks resources and opportunities in addition to Pokémon.
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* BrutalHonesty: Bonnie has a tendency toward this when criticising Orre for being far behind the rest of the world, even when surrounded by locals such as at Phenac Stadium. While some of them are noticeable irritated by her statement, others seem to treat it as JerkassHasAPoint.

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* BrutalHonesty: Bonnie has a tendency toward this when criticising Orre for being far behind the rest of the world, even when surrounded by locals such as at Phenac Stadium. While some of them are noticeable noticeably irritated by her statement, statements, others seem to treat it as JerkassHasAPoint.
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* CallingYourAttacks: The story makes use of the fact that both franchises do it, with Sora having to remember to call out Pokémon attacks rather than his own spells: ""Rufflet, Aer - I mean, Tailwind!" [[spoiler:It also comes up when Serena calls out "Fire!" to order a coordinated attack on a Defender, only to accidentally cast Fire with the Magus Staff she found earlier, which hits the Defender.]]
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* RightWayWrongWayPair: Bonnie shows Sora a video of one of Ash's Alola League battles to show how the announcers are ''supposed'' to hype the crowd up, contrasting him with the terrible commentator they're listening to in Phenac City.

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** In Chapter 15, [[spoiler:after Sora, comparing this world to his own, offhandedly comments "Yeah, sure, I can use magic, but anyone can do that!" It takes Serena a minute to notice the implications of that (that she might be able to learn to use it using the magic staff she found earlier), but before she can ask him about it, she gets distracted by their arrival in Agate Village and the subject is dropped.]]

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** In Chapter 15, [[spoiler:after Sora, comparing this world to his own, offhandedly comments "Yeah, sure, I can use magic, but anyone can do that!" It takes Serena a minute to notice the implications of that (that she might be able to learn to use it using the magic staff she found earlier), but before she can ask him about it, she gets distracted by their arrival in Agate Village and the subject is dropped. It's not until the following chapter that she learns to use it.]]



* ALighterShadeOfBlack: Ash notes that most of the crime syndicates he's faced in the past [[EvenEvilHasStandards had standards]] about attacking trainers directly. By Chapter 16, it becomes apparent that Cipher does ''not'': [[spoiler:"Whatever dark and eldritch deal they made to employ the Heartless in their machinations was proof enough of that."]]



* WhamEpisode: Chapter 9: [[spoiler:In the Land of Departure, Kairi gets a call from Xion saying that they've found Sora. In Pyrite Town, the heroes visit Fateen's Fortune Telling, where Fateen not only recognises Ash as TheChosenOne but identifies Sora as a Guardian of Light, warning him that darkness is encroaching on the world. Before Sora can explain any of this to the group, the Heartless make an appearance nearby and Sora is forced to break his cover.]]
* WhamLine: In Chapter 8, [[spoiler:Greevil's unidentified ally warns him that there's a Keyblade user somewhere in this world (obviously the reader already knows this, but not the fact that said ally knew anything about Keyblades, or that Greevil knew enough to not need further information).]]

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Chapter 9: [[spoiler:In the Land of Departure, Kairi gets a call from Xion saying that they've found Sora. In Pyrite Town, the heroes visit Fateen's Fortune Telling, where Fateen not only recognises Ash as TheChosenOne but identifies Sora as a Guardian of Light, warning him that darkness is encroaching on the world. Before Sora can explain any of this to the group, the Heartless make an appearance nearby and Sora is forced to break his cover.]]
** Chapter 16: [[spoiler:Cipher launches a Heartless attack on Agate Village. The heroes are able to fight them off, but Dakim succeeds in destroying the Relic Stone, their best option for purifying Shadow Pokémon. During the battle, Sora's Rufflet evolves into Braviary and Sora creates a new Keyblade from one of his feathers, named Brave Bird. Elsewhere, Serena uses her magic staff for the first time.]]
* WhamLine: In Chapter 8, [[spoiler:Greevil's Greevil's unidentified ally warns him that there's a Keyblade user somewhere in this world (obviously the reader already knows this, but not the fact that said ally knew anything about Keyblades, or that Greevil knew enough to not need further information).]]

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* DelayedReaction: While gossiping with Sora about Ash and Serena, Bonnie compares their ChildhoodFriendRomance to him and Kairi. Sora agrees before taking a moment to realise they're suddenly talking about him. As the narration puts it, "All that was missing was [[RecordNeedleScratch the cliché sound of a record scratching]]."

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While gossiping with Sora about Ash and Serena, Bonnie compares their ChildhoodFriendRomance to him and Kairi. Sora agrees before taking a moment to realise they're suddenly talking about him. As the narration puts it, "All that was missing was [[RecordNeedleScratch the cliché sound of a record scratching]].""
** In Chapter 15, [[spoiler:after Sora, comparing this world to his own, offhandedly comments "Yeah, sure, I can use magic, but anyone can do that!" It takes Serena a minute to notice the implications of that (that she might be able to learn to use it using the magic staff she found earlier), but before she can ask him about it, she gets distracted by their arrival in Agate Village and the subject is dropped.]]
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** On the other side, the events of ''VideoGame/KingdomHeartsMelodyOfMemory'' are ignored, so Kairi doesn't decide to start training with Aqua until a few chapters in.

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** On the other side, the events of ''VideoGame/KingdomHeartsMelodyOfMemory'' are ignored, along with the months that Kairi spent asleep as part of their search for Sora, so Kairi doesn't decide to start starts training with Aqua until a few chapters in.lot sooner.
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* OutsideContextProblem: Sora has no idea what Pokémon are (much to Ash and everyone else's bafflement). In turn, [[spoiler:Ash and his friends have no idea what TheHeartless are when they show up]]. Illustrated both ways in Chapter 11, with [[spoiler:Sora having to remember [[CallingYourAttacks to call out Pokémon attacks]] rather than his own spells during his first battle with Rufflet, while a news report on the Heartless attack in Pyrite Town can only assume they were some kind of Shadow Pokémon (Fabe compares them to Sableye, Bisharp and Snorlax). On the other side, Ash and the other trainers are out of their depth in a fight against a Guard Armor, as they've almost never had to deal with an enemy attacking them directly]].

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* OutsideContextProblem: Sora has no idea what Pokémon are (much to Ash and everyone else's bafflement). In turn, [[spoiler:Ash and his friends have no idea what TheHeartless are when they show up]]. Illustrated both ways in Chapter 11, with [[spoiler:Sora Sora having to remember [[CallingYourAttacks to call out Pokémon attacks]] attacks rather than his own spells spells]] during his first battle with Rufflet, while a [[spoiler:a news report on the Heartless attack in Pyrite Town can only assume they were some kind of Shadow Pokémon (Fabe compares them refers to Shadows as Sableye, Soldiers as Bisharp and Large Bodies as Snorlax). On the other side, In addition, Ash and the other trainers are out of their depth in a fight against a Guard Armor, as they've almost never had to deal with an enemy attacking them directly]].

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* AnnoyingYoungerSibling: As in canon, [[spoiler:Jovi is about as exasperating to Michael as everyone else.]]



* BroadStrokes: In the Pokémon world, the story picks up a few years after ''Anime/PokemonTheSeriesSunAndMoon'' and ignores ''Anime/PokemonJourneysTheSeries'', with Ash and Serena [[AgeLift aged up]] to 18. In addition, the events of ''VideoGame/KingdomHeartsMelodyOfMemory'' are ignored, so Kairi doesn't decide to start training with Aqua until a few chapters in.
* CanonName: The protagonists of ''Colosseum'' and ''Gale of Darkness'' go by combinations of their English and Japanese names: Wes Leo and Michael Ryuto respectively.

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** The story begins just prior to the events of ''Gale of Darkness'', [[spoiler:with Kairi and Riku entering the region and meeting Michael around the time of Professor Krane's kidnapping)]], but the Aura reader introduced in that game is removed to give Sora's AuraVision a role in Ash's group.
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* CanonName: The protagonists of ''Colosseum'' and ''Gale of Darkness'' both go by combinations of their English and Japanese canon names: Wes Leo and Michael Ryuto respectively.



** Kairi asks [[spoiler:her new Pokemon whether "Ralts" is her name or her species. She answers, "Yes!", as does Riku's Larvitar. Ralts then clarifies that he's called Larvitar. "It'd be silly if he was called Ralts."]]

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** Kairi asks [[spoiler:her new Pokemon whether "Ralts" is her name or her species. She answers, "Yes!", as does before translating that Riku's Larvitar. Ralts then clarifies that he's Larvitar says yes too. "About being called Larvitar. "It'd Larvitar, that is. It'd be silly if he was called Ralts."]]


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* TwoLinesNoWaiting: At first the story only occasionally cuts away to Kairi and Riku preparing to go after Sora, [[spoiler:but starting with their arrival in Chapter 12, it alternates between Sora and Ash's group and Kairi, Riku and Michael.]]

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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/34941868/chapters/87014950 Colosseum of the Heart]]'' is an ongoing {{Crossover}} fanfic between ''Franchise/KingdomHearts'' and ''Anime/PokemonTheSeries'', also including settings and characters from ''VideoGame/PokemonColosseum''. The story is written by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Ikell/pseuds/Ikell Ikell]] and published on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn, [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13984759/1/Colosseum-of-the-Heart as well as]] Website/FanfictionDotNet.

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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/34941868/chapters/87014950 Colosseum of the Heart]]'' is an ongoing {{Crossover}} fanfic between ''Franchise/KingdomHearts'' and ''Anime/PokemonTheSeries'', also including settings and characters from ''VideoGame/PokemonColosseum''.''VideoGame/PokemonColosseum'' and ''VideoGame/PokemonXDGaleOfDarkness''. The story is written by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Ikell/pseuds/Ikell Ikell]] and published on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn, [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13984759/1/Colosseum-of-the-Heart as well as]] Website/FanfictionDotNet.



* CanonName: The protagonists of ''Colosseum'' and ''Gale of Darkness'' go by combinations of their English and Japanese names: Wes Leo and Michael Ryuto respectively.



* MagicStaff: [[spoiler:Serena finds a Magus Staff during a Heartless attack in Phenac City, Sora recognising it as similar to the ones Donald uses.]]

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* MagicStaff: [[spoiler:Serena finds a Magus Staff during a Heartless attack in at Phenac City, Stadium, Sora recognising it as similar to the ones Donald uses.]]



* MissedHimByThatMuch: In Chapter 12 [[spoiler:when Kairi and Riku arrive in Pyrite Town not long after Sora and Ash's group left.]] The author's notes indicate this will be happening again, comparing it to the number of times Sora just missed meeting Donald and Goofy in Traverse Town.

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* MissedHimByThatMuch: Shows up repeatedly, the author comparing it to the original game and how long it took for Sora to meet Donald and Goofy in Traverse Town:
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In Chapter 12 [[spoiler:when Kairi and Riku arrive in Pyrite Town not long after Sora and Ash's group left.]] The author's notes indicate this will be happening again, comparing it to ]]
** Chapter 14 has [[spoiler:Michael, Kairi and Riku arrive at Professor Krane's lab not long after an attack by Cipher and
the number Heartless, which also destroyed their chance of times accessing his contact information for Sora just missed meeting Donald and Goofy in Traverse Town.Ash]].


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* RepeatingSoTheAudienceCanHear: Most of the conversations between [[spoiler: [[PokemonSpeak Larvitar]] and [[{{Telepathy}} Ralts]], though often the latter is also translating for Kairi and Riku.]]

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* BlackAndGreyMorality: As in ''Colosseum'', the morality of "snagging" Shadow Pokémon is explored, with Ash and Serena being worried about becoming no better than Team Rocket but quickly deciding that Cipher needs to be stopped.

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* BattleCouple: Ash and Serena are heading this way, especially after their double battle in the Phenac City tournament.
* BlackAndGreyMorality: As in ''Colosseum'', the morality of "snagging" Shadow Pokémon is explored, with Ash and Serena being worried about becoming no better than Team Rocket but quickly deciding that Cipher needs to be stopped.



* CombatCommentator: Played for laughs with TheAnnouncer of a tournament in Phenac City, who's remarkably unenthusiastic about commentating on the battles. Brock suggests that he must be new and filling in for someone else, while Bonnie says that "It's like they found some random guy off the street and stuck him up in the announcer booth!" He does improve slightly by the final match.

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* CombatCommentator: Played for laughs with TheAnnouncer of a tournament in Phenac City, who's remarkably unenthusiastic about commentating on the battles. Brock suggests that he must be new and filling in for someone else, while Bonnie says that "It's like they found some random guy off the street and stuck him up in the announcer booth!" He does improve slightly by in the final match.match (Ash and Serena vs Brock and Bonnie), thanks to the excitement of it.



* ElementalRockPaperScissors: Discussed by Sora, who struggles to get his head around it while watching a battle:
-->'''Sora''': Wait, if steel is weak to fighting, but psychic is strong against it, does that mean Toxicroak has an advantage against Metang or not? ''[[OhMyGods Light]]'', types are hard. How do you guys do it?\\
'''Pikachu''': [[PokemonSpeak Ka-pi-pi.]]\\
'''Sora''': ...That was not helpful.



** Kairi asks [[spoiler:her Ralts whether "Ralts" is her name or her species. She answers, "Yes!", as does Riku's Larvitar. Ralts then clarifies that he's called Larvitar. "It'd be silly if he was called Ralts."]]

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** Kairi asks [[spoiler:her Ralts new Pokemon whether "Ralts" is her name or her species. She answers, "Yes!", as does Riku's Larvitar. Ralts then clarifies that he's called Larvitar. "It'd be silly if he was called Ralts."]]
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* CombatCommentator: Played for laughs with the announcer of a tournament in Phenac City, who's remarkably unenthusiastic about commentating on the battles. Brock suggests that he must be new and filling in for someone else, while Bonnie says that "It's like they found some random guy off the street and stuck him up in the announcer booth!" He does improve slightly by the final match.

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* CombatCommentator: Played for laughs with the announcer TheAnnouncer of a tournament in Phenac City, who's remarkably unenthusiastic about commentating on the battles. Brock suggests that he must be new and filling in for someone else, while Bonnie says that "It's like they found some random guy off the street and stuck him up in the announcer booth!" He does improve slightly by the final match.
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* CombatCommentator: Played for laughs with the announcer of a tournament in Phenac City, who's remarkably unenthusiastic about commentating on the battles, at least at first. Brock suggests that he must be new and filling in for someone else, while Bonnie suggests that they "found some random guy off the street and stuck him in the announcer booth!" He does improve slightly by the final match.

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* CombatCommentator: Played for laughs with the announcer of a tournament in Phenac City, who's remarkably unenthusiastic about commentating on the battles, at least at first. battles. Brock suggests that he must be new and filling in for someone else, while Bonnie suggests says that "It's like they "found found some random guy off the street and stuck him up in the announcer booth!" He does improve slightly by the final match.

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* AlienNonInterferenceClause: As usual, the World Order prevents Sora from telling his new friends about coming from another world [[spoiler:until he has no other choice, in the wake of the Heartless attack on Pyrite Town. Kairi, Riku and Jiminy intended to follow this as well, but her Ralts quickly learns the truth using telepathy.]]

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* AlienNonInterferenceClause: As usual, the World Order prevents Sora from telling his new friends about coming from another world [[spoiler:until he has no other choice, in the wake of the Heartless attack on Pyrite Town. Kairi, Riku and Jiminy intended to follow this as well, but her Kairi's Ralts quickly learns the truth using telepathy.telepathy and blabs it to Riku's Larvitar.]]



* CombatCommentator: Played for laughs with the announcer of a tournament in Phenac City, who's remarkably unenthusiastic about commentating on the battles, at least at first. Brock suggests that he must be new and filling in for someone else, while Bonnie suggests that they "found some random guy off the street and stuck him in the announcer booth!" He does improve slightly by the final match.



* CutenessProximity: Kairi is prone to this [[spoiler:around Pokemon, in particular a Rockruff she meets in Pyrite Town and the Larvitar and Ralts she and Riku find in the S.S. ''Libra''. "At this point she was convinced that nearly every single Pokemon in existence was incredibly cute and must be protected at all costs."]]

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* CutenessProximity: CutenessProximity:
** Bonnie, as always, tends to react with "SO CUTE!" to new Pokemon.
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Kairi is prone to this [[spoiler:around Pokemon, in particular a Rockruff she meets in Pyrite Town and the Larvitar and Ralts she and Riku find in the S.S. ''Libra''. "At this point she was convinced that nearly every single Pokemon in existence was incredibly cute and must be protected at all costs."]]" For his part, Larvitar doesn't appreciate it.]]



* MathematiciansAnswer: Kairi asks [[spoiler:her Ralts whether "Ralts" is her name or her species. She answers, "Yes!", as does Riku's Larvitar. Ralts then clarifies that he's called Larvitar. "It'd be silly if he was called Ralts."]]

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* MathematiciansAnswer: MagicStaff: [[spoiler:Serena finds a Magus Staff during a Heartless attack in Phenac City, Sora recognising it as similar to the ones Donald uses.]]
* MathematiciansAnswer:
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Kairi asks [[spoiler:her Ralts whether "Ralts" is her name or her species. She answers, "Yes!", as does Riku's Larvitar. Ralts then clarifies that he's called Larvitar. "It'd be silly if he was called Ralts."]]"]]
** This exchange, about Ash's Shadow Metang:
-->'''Bonnie''': Ash, it's a battle junkie. Every fight you throw it into, it's like a rampaging Tauros.\\
'''Ash''': Hey, they're not that bad!\\
'''Serena''': Metang or Tauros?\\
'''Ash''': Yes.



* OhMyGods: Ash and Serena use Arceus this way a few times.
* OutsideContextProblem: Sora has no idea what Pokémon are (much to Ash and everyone else's bafflement). In turn, [[spoiler:Ash and his friends have no idea what TheHeartless are when they show up]]. Illustrated both ways in Chapter 11, with [[spoiler:Sora having to remember [[CallingYourAttacks to call out Pokémon attacks]] rather than his own spells during his first battle with Rufflet, while a news report on the Heartless attack in Pyrite Town can only assume they were some kind of Shadow Pokémon (Fabe compares them to Sableye, Bisharp and Snorlax). In addition, Ash and the other trainers are out of their depth in a fight against a Guard Armor, as they've almost never had to deal with an enemy attacking them directly]].

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* OhMyGods: Ash and Serena use Arceus this way a few times.
times. Sora uses "Light" in the same context.
* OutsideContextProblem: Sora has no idea what Pokémon are (much to Ash and everyone else's bafflement). In turn, [[spoiler:Ash and his friends have no idea what TheHeartless are when they show up]]. Illustrated both ways in Chapter 11, with [[spoiler:Sora having to remember [[CallingYourAttacks to call out Pokémon attacks]] rather than his own spells during his first battle with Rufflet, while a news report on the Heartless attack in Pyrite Town can only assume they were some kind of Shadow Pokémon (Fabe compares them to Sableye, Bisharp and Snorlax). In addition, On the other side, Ash and the other trainers are out of their depth in a fight against a Guard Armor, as they've almost never had to deal with an enemy attacking them directly]].
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* CutenessProximity: Kairi is prone to this [[spoiler:around Pokemon, in particular a Rockruff she meets in Pyrite Town and the Larvitar and Ralts she and Riku find in the S.S. ''Libra''. "At this point she was convinced that nearly every single Pokemon in existence was incredibly cute and must be protected at all costs."]]

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