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* HaveAGayOldTime: Spinel seems to be insulted that the Gems referred to her as a nun, but quickly realizes it doesn't mean what she thought it would be.
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* BadAss: The Crystal Gems as they fight the monsters [[spoiler: and Spinel.]]
** Doubly so for Garnet, [[spoiler: she unflinchingly walks towards Spinel, who was probably capable of decimating her.]]
** HandicappedBadAss: Spinel may be blind, but she defeated a giant sea serpent with minimal effort.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10729810/1/Cleaves-Cuts-and-Cracks Cleaves, Cuts and Cracks]] is a ''WesternAnimation/StevenUniverse'' fanfiction made by Creator/{{BreadlessSandwich}}.Breadless Sandwich. It follow the story of Spinel, who Steven accidentally finds and rescues from a mysterious place. Steven, wanting to help the newcomer, decides to let her stay. The Crystal Gems, however, have different opinions on the topic. There's also another problem; Spinel's gem is cracked.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10729810/1/Cleaves-Cuts-and-Cracks Cleaves, Cuts and Cracks]] is a ''WesternAnimation/StevenUniverse'' fanfiction made by Creator/{{BreadlessSandwich}}. It follow the story of Spinel, who Steven accidentally finds and rescues from a mysterious place. Steven, wanting to help the newcomer, decides to let her stay, the stay. The Crystal Gems however Gems, however, have different opinions on the topic. There is There's also another problem, problem; Spinel's gem is cracked.
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* Yandere: Spinel states that she would do anything to be reunited with Obsidian. [[spoiler: Even if she has to fight the Crystal Gems.]]
* YouShallNotPass: [[spoiler: Spinel does this at the end coupled with ''DontMakeMeDestroyYou''.]]
* YouShallNotPass: [[spoiler: Spinel does this at the end coupled with ''DontMakeMeDestroyYou''.]]
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* Yandere: {{Yandere}}: Spinel states that she would do anything to be reunited with Obsidian. [[spoiler: Even if she has to fight the Crystal Gems.]]
* YouShallNotPass: [[spoiler: Spinel does this at the end coupled with ''DontMakeMeDestroyYou''.]]
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10729810/1/Cleaves-Cuts-and-Cracks Cleaves, Cuts and Cracks]] is a ''WesternAnimation/StevenUniverse'' fanfiction made by Creator/{{BreadlessSandwich}}. It follow the story of Spinel, who Steven accidentally finds and rescues from a mysterious place. Steven Steven, wanting to help the newcomer newcomer, decides to let her stay, the Crystal Gems however has have different opinions on the topic. There is also just one another problem, Spinel's gem is cracked.
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* AndIMustScream: What Spinel's fate would have been if Steven didn't find her. Being stuck inside a place that randomly appears and being blind prevents her to find from finding a way to escape. She could have been there forever forever, considering Gems are practically immortal.
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* ButtMonkey: True to canon, Amethyst is usually the one being at the butt of the jokes. She even mentions it as "Pick on Amethyst Day."
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Spinel suffers immense damage from fighting theone being at Crystal Gems and probably wouldn't be waking up soon, on the butt of bright side, at least she's back with her friend, Obsidian.]]
** DownerEnding: [[spoiler: If you actually read closely, Spinel states that thejokes. She even mentions it as "Pick on Amethyst Day."damages are permanent. Considering she was literally falling apart...]]
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** DownerEnding: [[spoiler: If you actually read closely, Spinel states that the damages are permanent. Considering she was literally falling apart...]]
* BigCreepyCrawlies: [[spoiler: The fate of Obsidian.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Spinel suffers immense damage from fighting ButtMonkey: True to canon, Amethyst is usually the Crystal Gems and probably wouldn't be waking up soon, on one being at the bright side, at least she's back with her friend, Obsidian.]]
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* ComicallyMissingThePoint: When the Crystal Gems have to leave for something, they look for a way to keep Spinel entertained. Amethyst brings in the television with a Japanese film playing, Pearl disagrees for obvious reasons so Amethyst brings in a book instead.
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* AndIMustScream: What Spinel's fate if Steven didn't find her. Being stuck inside a place that randomly appears and being blind prevents her to find a way to escape. She could have been there forever considering Gems are practically immortal.
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* HaveAGayOldTime: Spinel seems to be insulted that the Gems referred to her as a nun, but quickly realizes it doesn't mean what she thought it would be.
** [[FridgeHorror Fridge Horror]] kicks in when you think of just how long Spinel must have been inside the Sanctum if she knows about that.
* HaveAGayOldTime: Spinel seems to be insulted that the Gems referred to her as a nun, but quickly realizes it doesn't mean what she thought it would be.
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* PowerDegeneration: The main drawback of Spinel's powers which prevents it from being godlike. The more she uses her powers the worse her crack gets. It teeters on the line of [[BlessedWithSuck Blessed With Suck]] since even using them for a few moments triggers damage.
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* TakenForGranite: Spinel's special skill focuses on this, crystallizing the target and shattering them at will. [[spoiler: Ironically enough, this is how she slowly dies.]]
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** She even laughs at the fact that [[spoiler: her arm fell off.]]
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* RunningGag: Spinel facing the wrong direction, most often when she faces the wall or something else when talking to someone. [[spoiler: [[PlayedForDrama Played for Drama]] when her blindness forces her to frantically thrash around on her fight with the Crystal Gems.]]
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* ButtMonkey: True to canon, Amethyst is usually the one being at the butt of the jokes. She even mentions it as "Pick on Amethyst Day."
* BigCreepyCrawlies: [[spoiler: The fate of Obsidian.]]
* CerebusRollerCoaster: The story really swings back and forth on being lighthearted and gritty.
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* FamilyUnfriendlyDeath: [[spoiler: Spinel literally falls to pieces as the fight story goes on. By the end, her body was cracked and even her arm fell off.]]
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* Irony: Spinel points this out, she wants to find her friend but she is blind.
* MysteriousPast: Nothing really is known about Spinel before she was trapped. Unfortunately, the story ends before any answers are given.
* Foreshadowing: Spinel's monologue has her asking "Will they take away my limbs too?". Guess what happens.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10729810/1/Cleaves-Cuts-and-Cracks Cleaves, Cuts and Cracks]] is a ''WesternAnimation/StevenUniverse'' fanfiction made by Creator/{{BreadlessSandwich}}. It follow the story of Spinel, who Steven accidentally finds and rescues from a mysterious place. Steven wanting to help the newcomer decides to let her stay, the Crystal Gems however has different opinions on the topic. There is also just one problem, Spinel's gem is cracked.
!!This fanfic uses the tropes:
*Badass: The Crystal Gems as they fight the monsters [[spoiler: and Spinel.]]
** Doubly so for Garnet, [[spoiler: she unflinchingly walks towards Spinel, who was probably capable of decimating her.]]
**HandicappedBadass: Spinel may be blind, but she defeated a giant sea serpent with minimal effort.
*BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Spinel suffers immense damage from fighting the Crystal Gems and probably wouldn't be waking up soon, on the bright side, at least she's back with her friend, Obsidian.]]
**DownerEnding: [[spoiler: If you actually read closely, Spinel states that the damages are permanent. Considering she was literally falling apart...]]
*CooldownHug: [[spoiler: Garnet gives Spinel one at the end.]]
*CoolOldLady: Spinel's pretty much cool with everything, from being pranked to being buried in sand.
*NoAntagonist: There really isn't a major threat, apart from the monsters the Gems fight. [[spoiler: At least, before Spinel has a breakdown during the final chapters.]]
*TakenForGranite: Spinel's special skill focuses on this, crystallizing the target and shattering them at will. [[spoiler: Ironically enough, this is how she slowly dies.]]
*TomatoInTheMirror: [[spoiler: After being hugged by Garnet, Spinel realizes she had been selfish for thinking only for herself.]]
!!This fanfic uses the tropes:
*Badass: The Crystal Gems as they fight the monsters [[spoiler: and Spinel.]]
** Doubly so for Garnet, [[spoiler: she unflinchingly walks towards Spinel, who was probably capable of decimating her.]]
**HandicappedBadass: Spinel may be blind, but she defeated a giant sea serpent with minimal effort.
*BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Spinel suffers immense damage from fighting the Crystal Gems and probably wouldn't be waking up soon, on the bright side, at least she's back with her friend, Obsidian.]]
**DownerEnding: [[spoiler: If you actually read closely, Spinel states that the damages are permanent. Considering she was literally falling apart...]]
*CooldownHug: [[spoiler: Garnet gives Spinel one at the end.]]
*CoolOldLady: Spinel's pretty much cool with everything, from being pranked to being buried in sand.
*NoAntagonist: There really isn't a major threat, apart from the monsters the Gems fight. [[spoiler: At least, before Spinel has a breakdown during the final chapters.]]
*TakenForGranite: Spinel's special skill focuses on this, crystallizing the target and shattering them at will. [[spoiler: Ironically enough, this is how she slowly dies.]]
*TomatoInTheMirror: [[spoiler: After being hugged by Garnet, Spinel realizes she had been selfish for thinking only for herself.]]