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* BerserkButton: Black Mari belting out a speech about how worthless she is is answered byy Asuka with some weak tesponses, but the moment Mari insults Rei and Ranma, Asuka had enough. [[spoiler:Even with the reveal that Asuka was just stringing Sivana along to see what was her deal, she ''still'' decided enough was enough when she said those insults.]]
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* BerserkButton: Black Mari belting out a speech about how worthless she is is answered byy by Asuka with some weak tesponses, responses, but the moment Mari insults Rei and Ranma, Asuka had enough. [[spoiler:Even with the reveal that Asuka was just stringing Sivana along to see what was her deal, she ''still'' decided enough was enough when she said those insults.]]
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* WhoWritesThisCrap: InUniverse: "[[MyRulesAreNotYourRules Different Universes, Different Rules]]", [[spoiler:and the universe Georgia comes from followed those of TheSilverAgeOfComics--such a balls-out stupid plan as the one she was doing actually would have had a ''very'' high chance of working on her 'verse... then again, chances of the hero coming back to being a hero at about the same speed as she became a villain were also high.]]
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* WhoWritesThisCrap: InUniverse: "[[MyRulesAreNotYourRules Different Universes, Different Rules]]", [[spoiler:and the universe Georgia comes from followed those of TheSilverAgeOfComics--such a balls-out stupid plan as the one she was doing actually would have had a ''very'' high chance of working on her 'verse... then again, chances of the hero coming back to being a hero at about the same speed as she became a villain were also high.]]]]
* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: Asuka's reaction to seeing an amalgam of Black Adam (sworn enemy of Marvel alts like her) and Mari Illustrious Makinami (she actively dislikes the Mari that's also Captain America).
* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: Asuka's reaction to seeing an amalgam of Black Adam (sworn enemy of Marvel alts like her) and Mari Illustrious Makinami (she actively dislikes the Mari that's also Captain America).
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* StrikeMeDownWithAllYourAnger: [[spoiler:Georgia's entire plan depends on Asuka "killing" Black Mari in a rage (every detail, including it being Mari (because everybody knows how annoyed/angry Asuka is to "Cap" Mari, at that point of the storyline) was calculated by Georgia Sivana to increase the chances of this happening). Asuka figuring out she's being set up and dealing with the threat in a more smart manner [[SpannerInTheWorks completely tosses the plan out the window]].]]
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* StrikeMeDownWithAllYourAnger: StrikeMeDownWithAllOfYourHatred: [[spoiler:Georgia's entire plan depends on Asuka "killing" Black Mari in a rage (every detail, including it being Mari (because everybody knows how annoyed/angry Asuka is to "Cap" Mari, at that point of the storyline) was calculated by Georgia Sivana to increase the chances of this happening). Asuka figuring out she's being set up and dealing deals with the threat in a more smart manner [[SpannerInTheWorks completely tosses the plan out the window]].]]
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* BerserkButton: Black Mari belting out a speech about how worthless she is is answered byy Asuka with some weak tesponses, but the moment Mari insults Rei and Ranma, Asuka had enough. [[spoiler:Even with the reveal that Asuka was just stringing Sivana along to see what was her deal, she ''still'' decided enough was enough when she said those insults.]]
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* IncorruptiblePurePureness: Played with. Although Asuka is not lacking in flaws (she's a ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' Fiction--even coming from a universe where she was better-adjusted, she has ''[[DysfunctionJunction many]]''), she ''[[JerkWithAHeartOfGold still]]'' is worthy of having the powers of Shazam.
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* StrikeMeDownWithAllYourAnger: [[spoiler:Georgia's entire plan depends on Asuka "killing" Black Mari in a rage (every detail, including it being Mari (because everybody knows how annoyed/angry Asuka is to "Cap" Mari, at that point of the storyline).storyline) was calculated by Georgia Sivana to increase the chances of this happening). Asuka figuring out she's being set up and dealing with the threat in a more smart manner [[SpannerInTheWorks completely tosses the plan out the window]].]]
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* StrikeMeDownWithAllYourAnger: [[spoiler:Georgia's entire plan depends on Asuka "killing" Black Mari in a rage (every detail, including it being Mari (because everybody knows how annoyed/angry Asuka is to "Cap" Mari, at that point of the storyline). Asuka figuring out she's being set up and dealing with the threat in a more smart manner [[SpannerInTheWorks completely tosses the plan out the window]].]]
* WhoWritesThisCrap: InUniverse: "[[MyRulesAreNotYourRules Different Universes, Different Rules]]", [[spoiler:and the universe Georgia comes from followed those of TheSilverAgeOfComics--such a balls-out stupid plan as the one she was doing actually would have had a ''very'' high chance of working on her 'verse... then again, chances of the hero coming back to being a hero at about the same speed as she became a villain were also high.]]
* WhoWritesThisCrap: InUniverse: "[[MyRulesAreNotYourRules Different Universes, Different Rules]]", [[spoiler:and the universe Georgia comes from followed those of TheSilverAgeOfComics--such a balls-out stupid plan as the one she was doing actually would have had a ''very'' high chance of working on her 'verse... then again, chances of the hero coming back to being a hero at about the same speed as she became a villain were also high.]]
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* EvilCounterpart: "Black" Mari, an Alternate of Mari Illustrious Shikinami with the powers of Black Adam, and the haughtiness to match, just looking to beat down Asuka and give her TheReasonYouSuckSpeech. [[spoiler:Turns out that she was deliberately engineered by Georgia Sivana in order to obtain maximum anger from Asuka, in her plan to have her unleash all of it, "kill" Mari, and go "dark side".]]
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* EvilCounterpart: "Black" Mari, an Alternate of Mari Illustrious Shikinami with the powers of Black Adam, and the haughtiness to match, just looking to beat down Asuka and give her TheReasonYouSuckSpeech.TheReasonYouSuckSpeech as she lies there broken. [[spoiler:Turns out that she was deliberately engineered by Georgia Sivana in order to obtain maximum anger from Asuka, in her plan to have her unleash all of it, "kill" Mari, and go "dark side".]]
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A simple slice-of-life view of Asuka Langley Shikinami, a.k.a. "Marvel Asuka"... of course, being a superheroine in [[WorldOfBadass the Core Timeline]] usually includes [[LetsYouAndHimFight super-powered beat-downs.]]
And still... there is more to ''this'' particular super-powered beat-down than meets the eye...
[[http://marcoasalazarm.deviantart.com/art/CLASH-OF-MARVELS-A-Coreline-Short-Story-629250159 Clash Of Marvels A Coreline Short Story]] is located on Deviant Art.
Currently under construction. Please add tropes as you see them!
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!!This story has the following Tropes:
* DisappointedByTheMotive: [[spoiler:Asuka is more than a little surprised (and so is Misato, on the following debriefing) to hear that Sivana did all of this in order to make Asuka susceptible to become an ally of hers, because she was just ''that'' desperate [[IJustWantToHaveFriends to get a friend]].]]
* EvilCounterpart: "Black" Mari, an Alternate of Mari Illustrious Shikinami with the powers of Black Adam, and the haughtiness to match, just looking to beat down Asuka and give her TheReasonYouSuckSpeech. [[spoiler:Turns out that she was deliberately engineered by Georgia Sivana in order to obtain maximum anger from Asuka, in her plan to have her unleash all of it, "kill" Mari, and go "dark side".]]
* HowWeGotHere: The whole story is being told as a debriefing Asuka is giving Misato in its aftermath.
* IncorruptiblePurePureness: Played with. Although Asuka is not lacking in flaws (she's a ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' Fiction--even coming from a universe where she was better-adjusted, she has ''[[DysfunctionJunction many]]''), she ''[[JerkWithAHeartOfGold still]]'' is worthy of having the powers of Shazam.
* ImpostorForgotOneDetail: In her long time fighting, Asuka has faced off against people with protective force fields and holographic disguises several times and knows how it feels to punch them--[[spoiler:that's why she knew she was going against someone using PoweredArmor and a Mari disguise as soon as she gave the first strike. Also it seems that it's pretty hard to get perfectly indestructible glasses (even on The Line), so Mari's glasses not even being scratched after the first hit straight to her face was another sign.]]
* LetsYouAndHimFight: "Marvel" Asuka Langley Shikinami vs. [[EvilCounterpart "Black" Mari]].
* StrikeMeDownWithAllYourAnger: [[spoiler:Georgia's entire plan depends on Asuka "killing" Black Mari in a rage (every detail, including it being Mari (because everybody knows how annoyed/angry Asuka is to "Cap" Mari, at that point of the storyline). Asuka figuring out she's being set up and dealing with the threat in a more smart manner [[SpannerInTheWorks completely tosses the plan out the window]].]]
And still... there is more to ''this'' particular super-powered beat-down than meets the eye...
[[http://marcoasalazarm.deviantart.com/art/CLASH-OF-MARVELS-A-Coreline-Short-Story-629250159 Clash Of Marvels A Coreline Short Story]] is located on Deviant Art.
Currently under construction. Please add tropes as you see them!
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!!This story has the following Tropes:
* DisappointedByTheMotive: [[spoiler:Asuka is more than a little surprised (and so is Misato, on the following debriefing) to hear that Sivana did all of this in order to make Asuka susceptible to become an ally of hers, because she was just ''that'' desperate [[IJustWantToHaveFriends to get a friend]].]]
* EvilCounterpart: "Black" Mari, an Alternate of Mari Illustrious Shikinami with the powers of Black Adam, and the haughtiness to match, just looking to beat down Asuka and give her TheReasonYouSuckSpeech. [[spoiler:Turns out that she was deliberately engineered by Georgia Sivana in order to obtain maximum anger from Asuka, in her plan to have her unleash all of it, "kill" Mari, and go "dark side".]]
* HowWeGotHere: The whole story is being told as a debriefing Asuka is giving Misato in its aftermath.
* IncorruptiblePurePureness: Played with. Although Asuka is not lacking in flaws (she's a ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' Fiction--even coming from a universe where she was better-adjusted, she has ''[[DysfunctionJunction many]]''), she ''[[JerkWithAHeartOfGold still]]'' is worthy of having the powers of Shazam.
* ImpostorForgotOneDetail: In her long time fighting, Asuka has faced off against people with protective force fields and holographic disguises several times and knows how it feels to punch them--[[spoiler:that's why she knew she was going against someone using PoweredArmor and a Mari disguise as soon as she gave the first strike. Also it seems that it's pretty hard to get perfectly indestructible glasses (even on The Line), so Mari's glasses not even being scratched after the first hit straight to her face was another sign.]]
* LetsYouAndHimFight: "Marvel" Asuka Langley Shikinami vs. [[EvilCounterpart "Black" Mari]].
* StrikeMeDownWithAllYourAnger: [[spoiler:Georgia's entire plan depends on Asuka "killing" Black Mari in a rage (every detail, including it being Mari (because everybody knows how annoyed/angry Asuka is to "Cap" Mari, at that point of the storyline). Asuka figuring out she's being set up and dealing with the threat in a more smart manner [[SpannerInTheWorks completely tosses the plan out the window]].]]
