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* ScientificAndTechnologicalThemeNaming: ''Cheating Death'' plays heavily on District industry-based ThemeNaming, with Pi Orbit (22nd Games Victor) and fallen tributes Amp, Calculus, and Socket from District 3; and [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shunt_(electrical) Shunt]] Gaspar (12th Games Victor), Isobel ''Sparks'' (18th Games Victor), Neon [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Erg Erg]] (48th Games Victor), and Wattzon Holmes (55th Games Victor) from District 5.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13173434/1/Cheating-Death-Those-That-Lived Cheating Death: Those That Lived]]'' is [=CragmiteBlaster=]'s take on a certain ''Fanfic/TheVictorsProject'', a fanfic about the seventy-three ''Literature/TheHungerGames'' victors before Katniss and Peeta stepped foot in their arena.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13173434/1/Cheating-Death-Those-That-Lived Cheating Death: Those That Lived]]'' is [=CragmiteBlaster=]'s take on a certain ''Fanfic/TheVictorsProject'', a fanfic (although the story is in limbo since the author abruptly deleted their account in 2024) about the seventy-three ''Literature/TheHungerGames'' victors before Katniss and Peeta stepped foot in their arena.
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** Any Gamemaker who fails at their duties is thrown into a woodchipper that President Orion owns. Snow reuses it for his Gamemakers after he becomes president, and Paylor also makes use of it to [[spoiler:execute Snow's ministers and any remaining Gamemakers]] once she's made interim president following the Second Rebellion.
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** Any Gamemaker who fails at their duties is [[WoodChipperOfDoom thrown into a woodchipper that President Orion owns.owns]]. Snow reuses it for his Gamemakers after he becomes president, and Paylor also makes use of it to [[spoiler:execute Snow's ministers and any remaining Gamemakers]] once she's made interim president following the Second Rebellion.
* WoodChipperOfDoom: Any Gamemaker who fails at their duties is thrown into a woodchipper that President Orion owns]]. Snow reuses it for his Gamemakers after he becomes president, and Paylor also makes use of it to [[spoiler:execute Snow's ministers and any remaining Gamemakers]] once she's made interim president following the Second Rebellion.
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** One of Mizar's post-Games journal entries at the end of the chapter, where we learn the real name of "Knifey" (the District Four boy Teff killed during the Bloodbath): [[spoiler:Wave]] with ''24 Tributes: The Howling Island'' revealing his last name being [[spoiler:Igliak]].
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** One of Mizar's post-Games journal entries at the end of the chapter, where we learn the real name of "Knifey" (the District Four boy Teff killed during the Bloodbath): [[spoiler:Wave]] with ''24 Tributes: The Howling Island'' revealing his last name being to be [[spoiler:Igliak]].
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: In ''24 Tributes: The Howling Islands'', [[spoiler:Clawdette (the District Two girl)]] screamed at from a siren mutt pinning her to the ground, the cuts received from the siren, and the siren's bad breath.
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: In ''24 Tributes: The Howling Islands'', [[spoiler:Clawdette (the District Two girl)]] screamed at from a siren mutt pinning her to the ground, the cuts received from the siren, and the siren's bad breath.
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** One of Mizar's post-Games journal entries at the end of the chapter, where we learn the real name of "Knifey" (the District Four boy Teff killed during the Bloodbath): [[spoiler:Wave]].
** ''24 Tributes: The Howling Island'', where the other five Careers' names are revealed: [[spoiler:Admirable]] for "Biggie" (the District One boy), [[spoiler:Lotus Gallahan]] for "Leggy" (the District One girl), [[spoiler:Panzer Jones]] for "Swordy" (the District Two boy), [[spoiler:Clawette]] for "Speary" (the District Two girl), and [[spoiler:Pearl]] for "Punchy" (the District Four girl).
** ''24 Tributes: The Howling Island'', where the other five Careers' names are revealed: [[spoiler:Admirable]] for "Biggie" (the District One boy), [[spoiler:Lotus Gallahan]] for "Leggy" (the District One girl), [[spoiler:Panzer Jones]] for "Swordy" (the District Two boy), [[spoiler:Clawette]] for "Speary" (the District Two girl), and [[spoiler:Pearl]] for "Punchy" (the District Four girl).
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** One of Mizar's post-Games journal entries at the end of the chapter, where we learn the real name of "Knifey" (the District Four boy Teff killed during the Bloodbath): [[spoiler:Wave]].
[[spoiler:Wave]] with ''24 Tributes: The Howling Island'' revealing his last name being [[spoiler:Igliak]].
** ''24 Tributes: The Howling Island'', where the other five Careers' names are revealed:[[spoiler:Admirable]] [[spoiler:Admirable Hop]] for "Biggie" (the District One boy), [[spoiler:Lotus Gallahan]] for "Leggy" (the District One girl), [[spoiler:Panzer Jones]] for "Swordy" (the District Two boy), [[spoiler:Clawette]] [[spoiler:Clawdette Fall]] for "Speary" (the District Two girl), and [[spoiler:Pearl]] [[spoiler:Pearl Pinto]] for "Punchy" (the District Four girl).
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: In 24 Tributes: The Howling Islands, [[spoiler:Clawdette (the District Two girl)]] screamed at from a siren mutt pinning her to the ground, the cuts received from the siren, and the siren's bad breath.
--> "[[spoiler:Clawdette]] screamed. She screamed from the weight of the mutt. She screamed from the agony of the cuts. She screamed from the overpowering stench of fish forced into her nose."
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: In 24 ''24 Tributes: The Howling Islands, Islands'', [[spoiler:Clawdette (the District Two girl)]] screamed at from a siren mutt pinning her to the ground, the cuts received from the siren, and the siren's bad breath.
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** 24 Tributes: The Howling Island reveals that [[spoiler: Ratchet Park (the District Three girl)]] jumped into her electrical trap instead of letting the Careers kill her.
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** 24 ''24 Tributes: The Howling Island Island'' reveals that [[spoiler: Ratchet [[spoiler:Ratchet Park (the District Three girl)]] jumped into her electrical trap instead of letting the Careers kill her.
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** During the 42nd Hunger Games, Vueller says, "[[WesternAnimation/RickAndMorty Oh boy, here we go killing again!]]".
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** During the 42nd Hunger Games, Vueller Vuller says, "[[WesternAnimation/RickAndMorty Oh boy, here we go killing again!]]".
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: In 24 Tributes: The Howling Islands, [[spoiler:Clawdette (the District Two girl)]] screamed at from a siren mutt pinning her to the ground, the cuts received from the siren, and the siren's bad breath.
--> "[[spoiler:Clawdette]] screamed. She screamed from the weight of the mutt. She screamed from the agony of the cuts. She screamed from the overpowering stench of fish forced into her nose."
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--> "[[spoiler:Clawdette]] screamed. She screamed from the weight of the mutt. She screamed from the agony of the cuts. She screamed from the overpowering stench of fish forced into her nose."
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** Anyone who has finished reading the main story before reading ''24 Tributes'' will know that Spool obviously wins the 42nd Hunger Games.
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** ''24 Tributes: The Howling Island'', where the other five Careers' names are revealed: [[spoiler:Admirable]] for "Biggie" (the District One boy), [[spoiler:Lotus]] for "Leggy" (the District One girl), [[spoiler:Panzer]] for "Swordy" (the District Two boy), [[spoiler:Clawette]] for "Speary" (the District Two girl), and [[spoiler:Pearl]] for "Punchy" (the District Four girl).
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** ''24 Tributes: The Howling Island'', where the other five Careers' names are revealed: [[spoiler:Admirable]] for "Biggie" (the District One boy), [[spoiler:Lotus]] [[spoiler:Lotus Gallahan]] for "Leggy" (the District One girl), [[spoiler:Panzer]] [[spoiler:Panzer Jones]] for "Swordy" (the District Two boy), [[spoiler:Clawette]] for "Speary" (the District Two girl), and [[spoiler:Pearl]] for "Punchy" (the District Four girl).
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** One of Mizar's post-Games journal entries at the end of the chapter, where we learn the real name of "Knifey" (the District Four boy Teff killed during the boodbath): [[spoiler:Wave]].
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** One of Mizar's post-Games journal entries at the end of the chapter, where we learn the real name of "Knifey" (the District Four boy Teff killed during the boodbath): Bloodbath): [[spoiler:Wave]].
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* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: Downplayed. The Careers during the 28th Hunger Games are known by nicknames given by Teff rather than their real names. Justified because it's a first-person narrative from Teff's perspective. [[spoiler:We are later told the name of the Career she killed: Wave.]]
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* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: Downplayed. The Careers during the 28th Hunger Games are known by nicknames given by Teff rather than their real names. Justified because it's a first-person narrative from Teff's perspective. [[spoiler:We are later told Subverted in both:
** One of Mizar's post-Games journal entries at the end of the chapter, where we learn the real name of "Knifey" (the District Four boy Teff killed during theCareer she killed: Wave.]]boodbath): [[spoiler:Wave]].
** ''24 Tributes: The Howling Island'', where the other five Careers' names are revealed: [[spoiler:Admirable]] for "Biggie" (the District One boy), [[spoiler:Lotus]] for "Leggy" (the District One girl), [[spoiler:Panzer]] for "Swordy" (the District Two boy), [[spoiler:Clawette]] for "Speary" (the District Two girl), and [[spoiler:Pearl]] for "Punchy" (the District Four girl).
** One of Mizar's post-Games journal entries at the end of the chapter, where we learn the real name of "Knifey" (the District Four boy Teff killed during the
** ''24 Tributes: The Howling Island'', where the other five Careers' names are revealed: [[spoiler:Admirable]] for "Biggie" (the District One boy), [[spoiler:Lotus]] for "Leggy" (the District One girl), [[spoiler:Panzer]] for "Swordy" (the District Two boy), [[spoiler:Clawette]] for "Speary" (the District Two girl), and [[spoiler:Pearl]] for "Punchy" (the District Four girl).
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* ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14264476/1/Speak-Not-The-Dead Speak Not the Dead]]'', an AlternateUniverseFic outlining how Lisbeth "Beth" Trismegistus volunteered for and won the 126th Hunger Games, in a reality where the 75th Hunger Games has a different set-up.
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* ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14264476/1/Speak-Not-The-Dead Speak Not the Dead]]'', an AlternateUniverseFic outlining how Lisbeth "Beth" Trismegistus volunteered for and won the 126th Hunger Games, in a reality where the 75th Hunger Games has a different set-up.
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* ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14264476/1/Speak-Not-The-Dead Speak Not the Dead]]'', an AU fanfic outlining how Lisbeth "Beth" Trismegistus volunteered for and won the 126th Hunger Games.
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* ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14264476/1/Speak-Not-The-Dead Speak Not the Dead]]'', an AU fanfic AlternateUniverseFic outlining how Lisbeth "Beth" Trismegistus volunteered for and won the 126th Hunger Games.
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Also has a side fic called ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13586009/1/24-Tributes-The-Acidic-Forest 24 Tributes: The Acidic Forest]]'' outlining the 42nd Hunger Games told from the perspective of all the tributes. Tropes from that story will also be included here.
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* ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13586009/1/24-Tributes-The-Acidic-Forest 24 Tributes: The Acidic Forest]]''
* ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14303591/1/24-Tributes-The-Howling-Island 24 Tributes: The Howling Island]]'' about the 28th Hunger Games told from the perspective of all the tributes.
* ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14264476/1/Speak-Not-The-Dead Speak Not the Dead]]'', an AU fanfic outlining how Lisbeth "Beth" Trismegistus volunteered for and won the 126th Hunger Games.
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** Played [[MoodWhiplash slightly for laughs]] in Chapter 75 during the vote for and against the Capitol Games, where the chapter ends with a list of surviving Victors, their stances towards the proposed Capitol Games and their reasoning behind the vote. [[spoiler:The list ends with Librae being listed as [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers stranded in Hawaii]], but it also notes that had she been there, she would have voted no and tied the vote.]]
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** Played [[MoodWhiplash slightly for laughs]] in Chapter 75 during the vote for and against the Capitol Games, where the chapter ends with a list of surviving Victors, their stances towards the proposed Capitol Games and their reasoning behind the vote. [[spoiler:The list ends with Librae being listed as [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers stranded in Hawaii]], Hawaii, but it also notes that had she been there, she would have voted no and tied the vote.]]
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* WillTheyOrWontThey: Bear and Gwenith, who share many tender moments throughout the story. [[spoiler:The two finally openly admit to being in love with each other right before the Victor Purge and share their first and last kiss, but nothing more due to Bear deciding to stay behind and hold off the Peacekeepers so Gwenith can run off with Haymitch to jumpstart the Rebellion]].
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* CanonImmigrant: Of a sort. Two of the Victors, Spool and Lammy, are actually characters the author used for two SYOT stories.
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* LovableCoward: Platinum is a rare PlayedForDrama example, being a mediocre Career trainee who goes into the Hunger Games after an unwanted DisqualificationInducedVictory in the academy ranking system. She spends quite a bit of time during or before the Games vomiting, crying, screaming, or running, but she is a kind person who has a lot to be genuinely afraid of, feels terrible about her one kill, and perseveres through a brutal six weeks of isolation, injury, and near-starvation before her VictoryByEndurance.
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* SurroundedByIdiots: While training for the Games, Peridot certainly thought this of the rest of the Flawless Estate children, [[OnlySaneMan thinking it's a waste of time for everyone to bully and attempt to murder each other]] before even entering the arena. She even gets spat at and her arm broken for suggesting they stop acting like "savages".
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* MythArc: The "pacifist run", aka winning the Hunger Games without killing a single other tribute. Multiple Victors throughout the story attempt to complete a pacifist run only to fail for one reason or another, symbolizing how Panem is still a war-torn, oppressive state. [[spoiler:Therefore, Cupid finally managing to accomplish a pacifist run in the very last Games symbolizes that the era of the Hunger Games is over and that an era of peace between the Capitol and the Districts has finally begun]].
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* MythArc: The "pacifist run", aka AKA winning the Hunger Games without killing a single other tribute. Multiple Victors throughout the story attempt to complete a pacifist run only to fail for one reason or another, symbolizing how Panem is still a war-torn, oppressive state. [[spoiler:Therefore, Cupid finally managing to accomplish a pacifist run in the very last Games symbolizes that the era of the Hunger Games is over and that an era of peace between the Capitol and the Districts has finally begun]].begun.]]
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* EveryoneCanSeeIt: Pretty much everyone could tell Spool had it bad for Lammy. Mizar even wrote in his final letter that they should get married.
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** Pretty much everyone could tell Spool had it bad for Lammy. Mizar even wrote in his final letter that they should getmarried.married.
** Likewise, everyone knows that Bear and Gwenith have a thing for each other. Unlike Spool and Lammy however, they never gathered up the courage to act on their feelings [[spoiler:until the last possible moment]].
** Pretty much everyone could tell Spool had it bad for Lammy. Mizar even wrote in his final letter that they should get
** Likewise, everyone knows that Bear and Gwenith have a thing for each other. Unlike Spool and Lammy however, they never gathered up the courage to act on their feelings [[spoiler:until the last possible moment]].
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** The [[spoiler:Capitol Games]] can be seen as this near the end of the story from a District's perspective. [[spoiler:Justified because it's not only twenty-four Capitolite children entering the arena -- with twelve of them being forced to boot, but the sponsorship uses a "points" system, and the Districts can refuse to sponsor]].
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** The [[spoiler:Capitol Games]] can be seen as this near the end of the story from a District's perspective. [[spoiler:Justified because it's not only twenty-four Capitolite children entering the arena -- with twelve of them being forced to boot, but the sponsorship uses a "points" system, and the Districts can refuse to sponsor]].sponsor]]. It's also an invoked trope, because [[spoiler:Paylor only authorized the Games in order to stop all the vigilante attacks on the normal Capitolites]].