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* AmbiguousSituation: The Crew members occasionally experience [[PastLifeMemories memories of their lives from the Edgerunners story]]. While for most of the crew this makes sense, Lucy and Falco are the odd ones out: both survived the events of ''Edgerunners''. Since almost nobody is really acknowledging it to someone else, there's no information on whether the PastLifeMemories phenomena is solely subjected upon people who did died and, if so, how Lucy and Falco met their demises post-''Edgerunners''.
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** Following the prologue, Chapters 1 through 24, and the Falco Interlude, take place in the same timeframe as Episodes 2 through 4, between David's initial operation and Pilar's original death to the homeless cyberpsycho.
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** Falco has a case of this with a dash of AdaptationalBackstoryChange: he was a former Bakker, the same clan that Nomad V broke away from in one of ''VideoGame/Cyberpunk2077''[='=]s Lifepath prologues.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone:
** Pilar had one before the events of the story, when he learned in the worst possible way that he'd abandoned Rebecca to survive for herself in Night City.
** [[spoiler:Maine is horrified and angry with himself for his treatment of David during the NCPD job, which could have resulted in David dying from a gunshot would with no one there to retrieve him.]]
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* PassingTheTorch: [[spoiler:{{Discussed}}, but Maine's behavior following the end of the NCPD job suggests that he's planning to do this for David, recognizing the latter's potential and his own capabilities as a leader starting to falter. While Lucy is shocked by the idea that Maine will retire, Rebecca thinks it makes sense.]]


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** Pilar has recovered from his addiction to Glitter by the present, but he kept a baggie of the drug for when things became too much. [[spoiler: Spurred by his PastLifeMemories, he dumps the drug down the toilet.]]
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* DrugsAreBad: Two of Maine's crew, Pilar and Dorio, have dealt with the consequences of the ''Cyberpunk'' world's {{Fantastic Drug}}s, Glitter (for Pilar) and Juice (for Dorio). Their previous addictions stand in stark contrast with the chrome addiction that Maine and David both dealt with in ''Edgerunners'', and that David is [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/RecoveredAddict trying to deal with]] in this story.

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* DrugsAreBad: Two of Maine's crew, Pilar and Dorio, have dealt with the consequences of the ''Cyberpunk'' world's {{Fantastic Drug}}s, Glitter (for Pilar) and Juice (for Dorio). Their previous addictions stand in stark contrast with the chrome addiction that Maine and David both dealt with in ''Edgerunners'', and that David is [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/RecoveredAddict [[RecoveredAddict trying to deal with]] in this story.

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* DrugsAreBad: Two of Maine's crew, Pilar and Dorio, have dealt with the consequences of the ''Cyberpunk'' world's {{Fantastic Drug}}s, Glitter (for Pilar) and Juice (for Dorio).

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* DrugsAreBad: Two of Maine's crew, Pilar and Dorio, have dealt with the consequences of the ''Cyberpunk'' world's {{Fantastic Drug}}s, Glitter (for Pilar) and Juice (for Dorio). Their previous addictions stand in stark contrast with the chrome addiction that Maine and David both dealt with in ''Edgerunners'', and that David is [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/RecoveredAddict trying to deal with]] in this story.



** Dorio while she ran with the Animal gang led by Sylvia indulged in their homebrew drug usage to get swole, but injecting a bad batch ended up [[BodyHorror rotting a good chunk of her body]] and forcing her to get expensive life-saving amputation and surgery to survive. Since then, the only drugs she takes are oral-based and ones her ripper cleared with her.

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** Dorio Dorio, while she ran with the an Animal gang pack led by Sylvia Sylvia, indulged in their homebrew drug usage to get swole, but injecting a bad batch ended up [[BodyHorror rotting a good chunk of her body]] and forcing her to get expensive life-saving amputation and surgery to survive. Since then, the only drugs she takes are oral-based and ones her ripper cleared with her.


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* RecoveredAddict: What David is trying to do now. With his past experiences in ''Edgerunners'', David is painfully aware of how his chrome addiction led to his downward spiral and subsequent death. It's mainly due to his memories of the crew that drives him to agree with Viktor Vector's orders to not implant chrone for two months.

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** PlayedForLaughs during the girls' night out. When Dorio notes that Lucy is probably fantasizing, Lucy immediately tries to hide it by being deflective and looking to Kiwi for help. Unfortunately, Lucy's [[CrushBlush face is obviously heating up]], her attempt at deflection falls flat, and Kiwi pointedly looks away from her protegé.
--->'''Lucy''': ''(internally) [[DramaticIrony Traitor!]]''



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** PlayedForLaughs during the girls' night out. When Dorio notes that Lucy is probably fantasizing, Lucy immediately tries to hide it by being deflective and looking to Kiwi for help. Unfortunately, Lucy's [[CrushBlush face is obviously heating up]], her attempt at deflection falls flat, and Kiwi pointedly looks away from her protegé.
--->'''Lucy''': ''(internally) [[DramaticIrony Traitor!]]''


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* RhetoricalQuestionBlunder: When Sandy tells David that his HeroicSelfDeprecation borders on unhealthy levels, David asks them if their his therapist. Sandy responds that they don't qualify for being a therapist, but that David's [[MentalTimeTravel situation]] goes beyond anything a qualified therapist would believe, and that a therapy session would be prohibitively expensive. The fact that Sandy, despite all of this, still tries to help David as best they can leaves him humbled.
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* TheKnightsWhoSaySquee: While calling Edgerunners "knights" is a bit of a stretch, David sees Rebecca and Dorio, both professional mercenaries, geek out over science fiction and motorcycles, respectively.
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* ExplainExplainOhCrap: PlayedForLaughs. When talking with Lucy about Sandy's AI, David mentions that it knows what is going on becouse Sandy can see and feel what he does. Lucy then realises that Sandy has seen her and David be intimate, and has a small feakout.
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* DumbassHasAPoint: {{Downplayed}} with Pilar, the crew's "class clown". [[spoiler:When David finally explains to the others about the SI in his Sandevistan implant, Pilar dismisses it initially, pointing out that even a high-end military implant like David's doesn't have the capacity to host an AI. And normally, Pilar would be right: after all, he's the crew's Techie with an engineering degree.]]
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* DidntThinkThisThrough:
** The new cyberdeck that David gets for Lucy is superior to her old deck, allowing her to sling quickhacks with great ease. However, she has trouble using her hacks effectively with it in the crew's subsequent gig, which is when Kiwi reminds her that she should have upgrades her quickhacks as well.
** PlayedForDrama in the NCPD job. [[spoiler:Sandy gives David information from the NCPD handbook in order to not blow his cover as Officer Rodriguez. Unfortunately, this makes Maine and Kiwi suspicious of David, since none of this was covered in the crew's prepwork, and neither David nor Sandy realize why Maine's acting hostile all of a sudden until Rebecca snaps at Maine over the call: "so what if he knows some police codes?"]]

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** Lucy carries a deep-seated fear of [=AIs=] from her time in Arasaka's Old Net recovery project. [[spoiler:When she learns that her boyfriend has an AI in his Sandevistan, Lucy's first reaction is to run away, devastated by the thought that David was being used in some "horrible game". After confiding in Rebecca, Lucy resolves to herself that if "Sandy" is genuine in its desire to help David and the crew, she'll tolerate it; but if not, she will destroy it to protect David.]]

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** Lucy carries a deep-seated fear of [=AIs=] from her time in Arasaka's Old Net recovery project. [[spoiler:When she learns that her boyfriend has an AI in his Sandevistan, Lucy's first reaction is to run away, devastated by the thought that David was being used in some "horrible game". After confiding in Rebecca, Lucy resolves to herself that if "Sandy" is genuine in its desire to help David and the crew, she'll tolerate it; but if not, she will destroy it to protect David. Further discussion between herself, Sandy, David and Rebecca spurs Lucy and Sandy to at least establish a bond of trust that both want to protect David.]]


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* LoveConfession:
** A platonic one that throws Lucy, Rebecca and David for a loop comes from [[spoiler:Sandy, who considers David to be their "best choom" and "other half"]].

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** Lucy carries a deep-seated fear of [=AIs=] from her time in Arasaka's Old Net recovery project. [[spoiler:When she learns that her boyfriend has an AI in his Sandevistan, Lucy's first reaction is to run away, devastated by the thought that David was being used in some "horrible game". After confiding in Rebecca, Lucy resolves to herself that if "Sandy" is genuine in its desire to help David and the crew, she'll tolerate it; but if not, she will destroy it to protect David.]]



* BigBrotherInstinct: While Rebecca and Pilar tend to argue ''at best'', the latter is certainly protective of his little sister. Pilar takes David aside to [[SincerityMode sincerely]] warn him [[IfYouEverDoAnythingToHurtHer not to hurt Rebecca]], saying "I think you'll hurt her no matter what". Give how badly he failed to protect Rebecca before, this is likely his way to atone for it.

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* BerserkButton: People who talk badly and disrespectfully of Gloria are this for David. [[HateSink Katsuo]] mocking David over it elicits a reaction that makes both Sandy and Kiwi worry, forcing the latter to intervene before David attacks the bully in a fit of rage. Later, a cage fight with a Valentino gangoon who trash-talks about "[David's] mama" causes the young Martinez to see red. Fortunately, no one is seriously injured, and the gangoon learns that David had lost his mother in a shootout and apologizes for being insensitive about it.
* BigBrotherInstinct: While Rebecca and Pilar tend to argue ''at best'', the latter is certainly protective of his little sister. Pilar takes David aside to [[SincerityMode sincerely]] warn him [[IfYouEverDoAnythingToHurtHer not to hurt Rebecca]], saying "I think you'll hurt her no matter what". Give [[MyGreatestFailure how badly he failed to protect Rebecca before, before]], this is likely his way to atone for it.
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* ExplainExplainOhCrap: PlayedForLaughs. When talking with Lucy about Sandy's AI, David mentions that it knows what is going on becouse Sandy can see and feel what he does. Lucy then realises that Sandy has seen her and David be intimate, and has a small feakout.
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* BigBrotherInstinct: While Rebecca and Pilar tend to argue ''at best'', the latter is certainly protective of his little sister. Pilar takes David aside to [[SincerityMode sincerely]] warn him [[IfYouDoAnythingToHurtHer not to hurt Rebecca]], saying "I think you'll hurt her no matter what". Give how badly he failed to protect Rebecca before, this is likely his way to atone for it.

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* BigBrotherInstinct: While Rebecca and Pilar tend to argue ''at best'', the latter is certainly protective of his little sister. Pilar takes David aside to [[SincerityMode sincerely]] warn him [[IfYouDoAnythingToHurtHer [[IfYouEverDoAnythingToHurtHer not to hurt Rebecca]], saying "I think you'll hurt her no matter what". Give how badly he failed to protect Rebecca before, this is likely his way to atone for it.

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* BigBrotherInstinct: Pilar takes David aside to warn him not to hurt Rebecca, saying "I think you'll hurt her no matter what". Give how he failed to protect Rebecca before, this is likely his way to atone for it.
** Rebecca decides to mess with Pilar with a swollen belly after sex with David. What throws her for a loop is Pilar panicking at the sight, thinking she's pregnant, and starts asking her if she needs vitamins and a doctor, then starts to advance on an alarmed David. The misunderstanding is cleared up, but Rebecca (in her own way) thanks Pilar for offering, and he admits that somebody had to if she needed it.

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* BigBrotherInstinct: While Rebecca and Pilar tend to argue ''at best'', the latter is certainly protective of his little sister. Pilar takes David aside to [[SincerityMode sincerely]] warn him [[IfYouDoAnythingToHurtHer not to hurt Rebecca, Rebecca]], saying "I think you'll hurt her no matter what". Give how badly he failed to protect Rebecca before, this is likely his way to atone for it.
** Rebecca decides to mess with Pilar with a swollen belly after sex having [[TheirFirstTime her first time]] with David. What throws her and David for a loop is Pilar panicking at the sight, thinking she's pregnant, and starts asking her if she needs vitamins and a doctor, then starts to advance on an alarmed David. The Rebecca immediately clears up the misunderstanding is cleared up, before things get hairy, but Rebecca then she (in her own way) thanks Pilar for offering, and he admits that somebody had to if she needed it.


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* {{Foreshadowing}}: After Doctor Viktor properly re-installs the Sandevistan, he mentions to David that the implant was able to mostly integrate itself into his body on its own. This surprises David and leaves Lucy spooked. Later, during the crew's first job for Falkins, David feels a strange sensation of "a friendly squeeze", as though the Sandy is agreeing with some of his decisions. Eventually, Viktor tells David that the Sandy has an on-board AI that wants to help David.

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** Though David doesn't say it, and does his best to hide it, his disappointment in Kiwi over her betrayal seeps into his interactions with her. Kiwi does notice, and--as a result of some manner of PastLifeMemories--feels a little hurt, but doesn't know why.

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** Though David doesn't say it, and does his best to hide it, his disappointment in Kiwi over her betrayal seeps into his interactions with her. Kiwi does notice, and--as a result of some manner of PastLifeMemories--feels a little hurt, but doesn't know why.can't put a finger on why.
* DoubleEntendre: Rebecca tends to lean toward this, being a former Mox turned Edgerunner. She's introduced dropping a few while a ripperdoc is operating in her exposed guts, dropping the second one to fluster David.



* DrugsAreBad:
** Pilar getting addicted to [[FantasticDrug Glitter]] was the big catalyst to how he ended up abandoning Rebecca to fend for herself, and Maine told him to get it under control if he wanted to join the crew. A few brushes with his PastLifeMemories causes him to decide to turn over a new leaf, starting with flushing his remaining stash of the stuff down the toilet while pointedly ignoring the part of him craving another hit.

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* DrugsAreBad:
DrugsAreBad: Two of Maine's crew, Pilar and Dorio, have dealt with the consequences of the ''Cyberpunk'' world's {{Fantastic Drug}}s, Glitter (for Pilar) and Juice (for Dorio).
** Pilar getting addicted to [[FantasticDrug Glitter]] Glitter was the big catalyst to how he ended up abandoning Rebecca to fend for herself, and Maine told him to get it under control if he wanted to join the crew. A few brushes with his PastLifeMemories causes him to decide to turn over a new leaf, starting with flushing his remaining stash of the stuff down the toilet while pointedly ignoring the part of him craving another hit.
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* OhCrap:
** The Sandevistan AI has one when Viktor suggests the option of replacing the implant with a generic cyber-spine if only to avoid having said AI. Sandy's panic and sadness actually takes David by surprise, nearly making him fall over as the AI's emotions overwhelm him, but he assures Sandy that he's not going to get rid of them, which calms them down.

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* VillainTakesAnInterest: Jinta Tanaka initially planned on offing David when he hears from Evelyn Parker that David defeated Katsuo in their fight. But then he decides that David's more useful to him alive as a test subject for his Cyberskeleton project, contacting Principal Maliwan of the Arasaka Academy to offer David a full-ride scholarship with generous amounts of financial aid as bait.

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* ThisIsGonnaSuck: After the crew wraps up a gig with Falkins, Maine gets another gig immediately from [[BadBoss Faraday]] that he needs David for. The gig is to spike Katsuo Tanaka's ICE, and David needs to work with Kiwi for this one. Naturally, neither David nor Kiwi are very excited about it, since it means they have to cooperate despite their mutual distrust.
* VillainTakesAnInterest: Jinta Tanaka initially planned on offing having David assassinated when he hears from Evelyn Parker that David defeated Katsuo in their fight. But then he decides that David's more useful to him alive as a test subject for his Cyberskeleton project, contacting Principal Maliwan of the Arasaka Academy to offer David a full-ride scholarship with generous amounts of financial aid as bait.

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** David has gained a deep disgust with X-braindances, and is disgusted with himself that he ever had a fascination with them in the first place. He also has a hatred of the Scavs, for their cruelty and depravity (and their connections to said XBD scene).

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** David has gained a deep disgust with X-braindances, extreme braindances, and is disgusted with himself that he ever had a fascination with them in the first place. He also has a hatred of the Scavs, for their cruelty and depravity (and their connections to said XBD scene).



* ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend: Lucy. Compared to ''Edgerunners'', she doesn't fall into the trope as much in this story, but she does show hints of it.

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* ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend: Lucy. Compared to ''Edgerunners'', ''Edgerunners'' and how it had disastrous consequences, she doesn't fall into the trope as ''as'' much in this story, but she does show hints of it.it. The NCPD infiltration sees David in disguise being flirted with by a female officer, resulting in Kiwi having to stop Lucy from quickhacking the offending officer, which would have jeopardized both David and the gig.
* WhamLine: Viktor gives one to David in Chapter 12 regarding the latter's Sandevistan implant. Specifically, that it has an artificial intelligence, and said artificial intelligence likes its host David.



** Maine gets the brunt of one after the NCPD job [[spoiler:ends with David getting shot in the gut. Dorio chews him out for cutting the call with David, which could have led to his death]]. Kiwi also gets one off-scene [[spoiler:for the same reason, the netrunner commenting that her bad call resulted in the girls on the team being very mad at her]].

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** Maine gets the brunt of another one after the NCPD job [[spoiler:ends with David getting shot in the gut. Dorio chews him out for cutting the call with David, which could have led to his death]]. Kiwi also gets one off-scene [[spoiler:for the same reason, the netrunner commenting that her bad call resulted in the girls on the team being very mad at her]].
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** Dorio expresses to Maine (both in an open relationship with each other) her interest in "trying it" with David, on account of the formernost's "competence kink". [[spoiler:Of course, she's willing to refrain from doing so when Maine expresses his jealousy, and guilt thereof, of David's strength.]]

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** Dorio expresses to Maine (both in an open relationship with each other) her interest in "trying it" with David, on account of the formernost's formermost's "competence kink". [[spoiler:Of course, she's willing to refrain from doing so when Maine expresses his jealousy, and guilt thereof, of David's strength.]]
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* ShipTease:
** Dorio expresses to Maine (both in an open relationship with each other) her interest in "trying it" with David, on account of the formernost's "competence kink". [[spoiler:Of course, she's willing to refrain from doing so when Maine expresses his jealousy, and guilt thereof, of David's strength.]]
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The story follows David Martinez returning from his death by the hands of Adam Smasher, to his Sandevistan implant surgery [[MentalTimeTravel six months ago]]. Still grasping his new situation, David decides to take this chance to right his regrets from his first go-around, such as saving his crew from their deaths. Partway through, David gains an unexpected ally in the form of his experimental Sandevistan's AI.

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The story follows David Martinez returning from his death by the hands of Adam Smasher, to in the middle of his Sandevistan implant surgery [[MentalTimeTravel six months ago]]. Still grasping his new situation, David decides to take this chance to right his regrets from his first go-around, such as saving his crew from their deaths. Partway through, David gains an unexpected ally in the form of his experimental Sandevistan's AI.

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* BigBrotherInstinct: Rebecca decides to mess with Pilar with a swollen belly after sex with David. What throws her for a loop is Pilar panicking at the sight, thinking she's pregnant, and starts asking her if she needs vitamins and a doctor, then starts to advance on an alarmed David. The misunderstanding is cleared up, but Rebecca (in her own way) thanks Pilar for offering, and he admits that somebody had to if she needed it.

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* BigBrotherInstinct: Pilar takes David aside to warn him not to hurt Rebecca, saying "I think you'll hurt her no matter what". Give how he failed to protect Rebecca before, this is likely his way to atone for it.
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Rebecca decides to mess with Pilar with a swollen belly after sex with David. What throws her for a loop is Pilar panicking at the sight, thinking she's pregnant, and starts asking her if she needs vitamins and a doctor, then starts to advance on an alarmed David. The misunderstanding is cleared up, but Rebecca (in her own way) thanks Pilar for offering, and he admits that somebody had to if she needed it.
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* IDidWhatIHadToDo: [[spoiler:Kiwi uses this to justify her reporting suspicions of David to Maine, to an outraged Lucy. However, she doesn't mention the massive feeling of guilt she had when she did it, and she's forced to admit that the idea of David being a plant from the NCPD makes no sense.]]

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