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''[[https://www.wattpad.com/story/246977896-brightpelt-a-warriors-au Brightpelt]]'' is a Literature/WarriorCats alternate universe fanfiction written by rosecloud-.
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''[[https://www.wattpad.com/story/246977896-brightpelt-a-warriors-au Brightpelt]]'' is a Literature/WarriorCats alternate universe fanfiction written by rosecloud-.
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This fanfic contains examples of...
* AlternateUniverse: An AU as to what would happen if [[spoiler: Brightpaw never went to hunt the dogs with Swiftpaw, and if Ashpaw went instead]].
* BewareOfViciousDog: The dogs in this story.
* BigEater: Cloudtail.
** "I swear, your appetite hasn't changed since you were an apprentice," Brightstar joked. Cloudtail purred with amusement.
* CapsLock: The title is stylized in all caps.
** BRIGHTPELT
* CatUpATree: What Swiftpaw attempts to do [[spoiler: before he died]].
* FamilyUnfriendlyViolence: When Brightpaw, Fernpaw, Cloudtail, Graystripe and Fireheart go on a patrol to find Swiftpaw and Ashpaw, they find [[spoiler: Swiftpaw's dead corpse, which was described to have his throat torn out, eyes wide in terror, claws unsheathed, and blood staining his pelt]].
* FreeRangeChildren: No warriors come to supervise the apprentices when they go to see what's killing all the prey.
* OnlySaneMan: Brightpaw, Fernpaw, and Thornpaw
* PrecisionFStrike: What Swiftpaw says when Thornpaw refuses to go with Ashpaw and Swiftpaw.
** "Mouse-brain. When you wake up you'll be all by yourself in this damned den."
* {{Pun}}: Brightstar makes a pun of her name when going to the gathering.
** ''I'll lead ThunderClan with pride, like a bright star.''
* ReflectiveEyes: Brightpaw can see herself in Swiftpaw's eyes.
* SittingOnTheRoof: When Brightpelt is on a fence, she sees Cloudtail sitting on a twoleg roof.
* TitleDrop: Brightpaw recieves her warrior name, Brightpelt, in Chapter Seven.
* TheUnfavorite: Swiftpaw, apparently.
** [[spoiler: "Dogs," Bluestar rasped. "So you have found the threat to the forest." She paused. "At the cost of a useless apprentice."]]
** [[spoiler: Brightpaw glared at her leader. "Swiftpaw was ''not'' useless!"]]
* WeNeedADistraction: Cloudtail yowls to get the dogs away from Brightpelt and towards him.
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This fanfic contains examples of...
* AlternateUniverse: An AU as to what would happen if [[spoiler: Brightpaw never went to hunt the dogs with Swiftpaw, and if Ashpaw went instead]].
* BewareOfViciousDog: The dogs in this story.
* BigEater: Cloudtail.
** "I swear, your appetite hasn't changed since you were an apprentice," Brightstar joked. Cloudtail purred with amusement.
* CapsLock: The title is stylized in all caps.
** BRIGHTPELT
* CatUpATree: What Swiftpaw attempts to do [[spoiler: before he died]].
* FamilyUnfriendlyViolence: When Brightpaw, Fernpaw, Cloudtail, Graystripe and Fireheart go on a patrol to find Swiftpaw and Ashpaw, they find [[spoiler: Swiftpaw's dead corpse, which was described to have his throat torn out, eyes wide in terror, claws unsheathed, and blood staining his pelt]].
* FreeRangeChildren: No warriors come to supervise the apprentices when they go to see what's killing all the prey.
* OnlySaneMan: Brightpaw, Fernpaw, and Thornpaw
* PrecisionFStrike: What Swiftpaw says when Thornpaw refuses to go with Ashpaw and Swiftpaw.
** "Mouse-brain. When you wake up you'll be all by yourself in this damned den."
* {{Pun}}: Brightstar makes a pun of her name when going to the gathering.
** ''I'll lead ThunderClan with pride, like a bright star.''
* ReflectiveEyes: Brightpaw can see herself in Swiftpaw's eyes.
* SittingOnTheRoof: When Brightpelt is on a fence, she sees Cloudtail sitting on a twoleg roof.
* TitleDrop: Brightpaw recieves her warrior name, Brightpelt, in Chapter Seven.
* TheUnfavorite: Swiftpaw, apparently.
** [[spoiler: "Dogs," Bluestar rasped. "So you have found the threat to the forest." She paused. "At the cost of a useless apprentice."]]
** [[spoiler: Brightpaw glared at her leader. "Swiftpaw was ''not'' useless!"]]
* WeNeedADistraction: Cloudtail yowls to get the dogs away from Brightpelt and towards him.
