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** While still rude and now having a tendency to pepper every sentence [[SirSwearsALot with a swear or two]], Boscha is considerably nicer in this fic.
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** While still rude and now having a tendency to pepper every sentence [[SirSwearsALot with a swear or two]], Boscha is considerably nicer in this fic.fic, and lacks the elitism she had in canon.
* ButtMonkey: Boscha is the one who gets turned into a ball by Eda the most.
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--->'''Boscha:''' I think I've found my most favorite sport ever. It's called Grudgby and it's like basketball, except it's a full-contact sport! And Luz? Luz? LUZ... you can set the ball on FIRE."
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--->'''Boscha:''' I think I've found my most favorite sport ever. It's called Grudgby and it's like basketball, except it's a full-contact sport! And Luz? Luz? LUZ... you can set the ball on FIRE."
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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: While still rude and now having a tendency to pepper every sentence [[SirSwearsALot with a swear or two]], Boscha is considerably nicer in this fic.
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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: While AdaptationalNiceGuy:
**While still rude and now having a tendency to pepper every sentence [[SirSwearsALot with a swear or two]], Boscha is considerably nicer in thisfic.fic.
**Amity shows her nice side right away in her first appearance with her bullying antics towards Willow being an act just to get her mother to leave them alone. Many of her mean actions in the story are either done reluctantly or by accident.
**While still rude and now having a tendency to pepper every sentence [[SirSwearsALot with a swear or two]], Boscha is considerably nicer in this
**Amity shows her nice side right away in her first appearance with her bullying antics towards Willow being an act just to get her mother to leave them alone. Many of her mean actions in the story are either done reluctantly or by accident.
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*LoveAtFirstSight:
** Rather than having a nasty impression of Luz when they first met, Amity was instantly smitten by the human when she first laid eyes on her.
**Likewise, Boscha was immediately enamored by Skara's features when they met while she was a ball.
** Rather than having a nasty impression of Luz when they first met, Amity was instantly smitten by the human when she first laid eyes on her.
**Likewise, Boscha was immediately enamored by Skara's features when they met while she was a ball.
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* ChildhoodFriendRomance: Boscha and Skara were friends before the former ended up on Earth minus her memories, and there's some clear attraction between them after Boscha returns to the Isles.
