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* KarmaHoudini: Downplayed. [[spoiler: Lucy is arrested for the shooting she committed, but since the public somehow doesn't know that she came from the human world, they never learn about the five murders she committed there, and therefore, she doesn't get punished for them, just the 20 murders she committed during the shooting.]]
** [[spoiler: Though technically speaking she will still be executed as punishment for her crimes in the pokmeon world, and is thus being unknowingly punished for her murders in the human world as well. Justice will still be served to her either way, even if the pokemon prosecutors don't know of her other crimes.]]
** [[spoiler: Though technically speaking she will still be executed as punishment for her crimes in the pokmeon world, and is thus being unknowingly punished for her murders in the human world as well. Justice will still be served to her either way, even if the pokemon prosecutors don't know of her other crimes.]]
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* CruelAndUnusualDeath: See RapeAsDrama.
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* RapeAsDrama: Lucy [[spoiler:'''rapes''' Roxy the Vulpix ''with her gun barrel'' '''[[TheresNoKillLikeOverkill before shooting her inside her cervix]]''' and then attacks her friend while she bleed to death on the floor.]]
* SerialKiller: She killed her parents, and her three ex-boyfriends before the events of the story. She goes on to kill [[spoiler: 20]] more during the Wigglytuff Guild Massacre.
* ShoutOut: The final victim is [[spoiler: a Shinx named Cubbie Voltage]], which sounds like a reference to [[spoiler: Music/FosterThePeople band member Cubbie Fink, who just so happens to have a cousin who survived UsefulNotes/{{Columbine}}]].
** Additionally, the shooter is named Lucy Mathers, which might be a reference to Music/{{Eminem}}, real name Marshal Mathers III, who is known for making somewhat dark rap songs giving off similar vibes as this story. Eminem even mentioned UsefulNotes/{{Columbine}} in a few of his songs.
* SerialKiller: She killed her parents, and her three ex-boyfriends before the events of the story. She goes on to kill [[spoiler: 20]] more during the Wigglytuff Guild Massacre.
* ShoutOut: The final victim is [[spoiler: a Shinx named Cubbie Voltage]], which sounds like a reference to [[spoiler: Music/FosterThePeople band member Cubbie Fink, who just so happens to have a cousin who survived UsefulNotes/{{Columbine}}]].
** Additionally, the shooter is named Lucy Mathers, which might be a reference to Music/{{Eminem}}, real name Marshal Mathers III, who is known for making somewhat dark rap songs giving off similar vibes as this story. Eminem even mentioned UsefulNotes/{{Columbine}} in a few of his songs.
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* RapeAsDrama: Lucy [[spoiler:'''rapes''' Roxy the Vulpix ''with her gun barrel'' '''[[TheresNoKillLikeOverkill before shooting her inside her cervix]]''' and then attacks her friend while she bleed bleeds to death on the floor.]]
* SerialKiller:She Lucy killed her parents, parents and her three ex-boyfriends before the events of the story. She goes on to kill [[spoiler: 20]] more during the Wigglytuff Guild Massacre.
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** The final victim is [[spoiler: a Shinx named Cubbie Voltage]], which sounds like a reference to [[spoiler: Music/FosterThePeople band member Cubbie Fink, who just so happens to have a cousin who survived UsefulNotes/{{Columbine}}]].
**Additionally, the The shooter is named Lucy Mathers, which might be a reference to Music/{{Eminem}}, real name Marshal Mathers III, who is known for making somewhat dark rap songs giving off similar vibes as this story. Eminem even mentioned UsefulNotes/{{Columbine}} in a few of his songs.that occasionally reference UsefulNotes/{{Columbine}}.
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** The final victim is [[spoiler: a Shinx named Cubbie Voltage]], which sounds like a reference to [[spoiler: Music/FosterThePeople band member Cubbie Fink, who just so happens to have a cousin who survived UsefulNotes/{{Columbine}}]].
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* WeAllDieSomeday: Lucy belives a dark spin on this, as part of her StrawNihilist mentality.
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* CruelAndUnusualDeath: See RapeAsDrama.
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* TheDeadHaveNames: There is a bonus chapter listing off all the victims.
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* EnemiesList: There is a bonus chapter listing off all the victims.
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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: The story details a mass shooting at the Wigglytuff Guild, which is very clearly the Pokémon Mystery Dungeon equivelant of a school shooting. UsefulNotes/{{Columbine}} is even listed among many school shootings at the start of the story.
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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: The story details a mass shooting at the Wigglytuff Guild, which is very clearly the Pokémon Mystery Dungeon equivelant equivalent of a school shooting. UsefulNotes/{{Columbine}} is even listed among many school shootings at the start of the story.
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**[[spoiler: Though technically speaking she will still be executed as punishment for her crimes in the pokmeon world, and is thus being unknowingly punished for her murders in the human world as well. Justice will still be served to her either way, even if the pokemon prosecutors don't know of her other crimes.]]
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* EveryoneDiesSomeday: Lucy belives this, as part of her StrawNihilist mentality.
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* RapeAsDrama: Lucy [[spoiler:'''rapes''' Roxy the Vulpix ''with her gun barrel'' '''[[TheresNoKillLikeOverkill before shooting her inside her cervix]]''' and then attack her friend while she bleed to death on the floor.]]
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* RapeAsDrama: Lucy [[spoiler:'''rapes''' Roxy the Vulpix ''with her gun barrel'' '''[[TheresNoKillLikeOverkill before shooting her inside her cervix]]''' and then attack attacks her friend while she bleed to death on the floor.]]
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* VileVillainSaccharineShow: Lucy Mathers, an AxCrazy SerialKiller in the E rated ''Pokemon'' universe.
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* VileVillainSaccharineShow: Lucy Mathers, an AxCrazy SerialKiller in the E rated ''Pokemon'' universe.universe.
* WeAllDieSomeday: Lucy belives a dark spin on this, as part of her StrawNihilist mentality.
* WeAllDieSomeday: Lucy belives a dark spin on this, as part of her StrawNihilist mentality.
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* EveryoneDiesSomeday: Lucy belives this, as part of her StrawNihilist mentality.
* RapeAsDrama: Lucy [[spoiler:'''rapes''' Roxy the Vulpix ''with her gun barrel'' '''[[TheresNoKillLikeOverkill before shooting her inside her cervix]]''' and then attack her friend while she bleed to death on the floor.]]
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* TheresNoKillLikeOverkill: After Lucy kills [[spoiler: Myst the Male Meowstic]], she decides to [[spoiler: drag the body into an empty tent, and set it ablaze]].
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* TheresNoKillLikeOverkill: After Lucy kills [[spoiler: Myst the Male Meowstic]], she decides to [[spoiler: drag the body into an empty tent, and set it ablaze]].ablaze]].
* VileVillainSaccharineShow: Lucy Mathers, an AxCrazy SerialKiller in the E rated ''Pokemon'' universe.
* VileVillainSaccharineShow: Lucy Mathers, an AxCrazy SerialKiller in the E rated ''Pokemon'' universe.
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Link [[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/14100343/1/ here]], but please, [[WhatDoYouMeanItsNotForKids know that this isn't a happy-go-lucky poketale]].
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Lucy kills 20 Pokémon during her rampage, but is eventually arrested, and given a death sentence]].
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* ShoutOut: The final victim is [[spoiler: a Shinx named Cubbie Voltage]], which sounds like a reference to [[spoiler: Music/FosterThePeople band member Cubbie Fink, who just so happens to have a cousin who survivied UsefulNotes/{{Columbine}}]].
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* ShoutOut: The final victim is [[spoiler: a Shinx named Cubbie Voltage]], which sounds like a reference to [[spoiler: Music/FosterThePeople band member Cubbie Fink, who just so happens to have a cousin who survivied survived UsefulNotes/{{Columbine}}]].
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* KnightTemplarBigBrother: Lucy is tackled to the ground by a male Meowstic named Myst Felicity, the older brother of Kit Felicity the Skitty, [[spoiler: one of Lucy's victims]], and tires to kill her and avenge his sister's death. [[spoiler: He fails, and is killed]].
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* KnightTemplarBigBrother: Lucy is tackled to the ground by a male Meowstic named Myst Felicity, the older brother of Kit Felicity the Skitty, [[spoiler: one of Lucy's victims]], and tires tries to kill her and [[spoiler: avenge his sister's death.death]]. [[spoiler: He fails, and is killed]].
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* AbusiveParents: Lucy's parents were not the best people to be raised by; her mother was incredibly religious and lived in fear of her daughter being possessed by evil, and her father quote "liked her a little ''too much'' for her own good.
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* AbusiveParents: Lucy's parents were not the best people to be raised by; her mother was incredibly religious and lived in fear of her daughter being possessed by evil, and her father quote "liked her a little ''too much'' for her own good.good".
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''Blaster: The Wigglytuff Guild Massacre'' (also known as simply ''Blaster'') is a ''VideoGame/PokemonMysteryDungeon'' fanfic created by {{Tropers/UPMan}}. It is one of his DarkerAndEdgier fanfics, and is partially inspired by the tragic tale of UsefulNotes/{{Columbine}}
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''Blaster: The Wigglytuff Guild Massacre'' (also known as simply ''Blaster'') is a ''VideoGame/PokemonMysteryDungeon'' fanfic created by {{Tropers/UPMan}}.Creator/{{UPMan}}. It is one of his DarkerAndEdgier fanfics, and is partially inspired by the tragic tale of UsefulNotes/{{Columbine}}
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** Additionally, the shooter is named Lucy Mathers, which might be a reference to Music/{{Eminem}}, real name Marshal Mathers III, who is known for making somewhat dark rap songs giving off similar vibes as this story. Eminem even mentioned UsefulNotes/Columbine in a few of his songs.
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** Additionally, the shooter is named Lucy Mathers, which might be a reference to Music/{{Eminem}}, real name Marshal Mathers III, who is known for making somewhat dark rap songs giving off similar vibes as this story. Eminem even mentioned UsefulNotes/Columbine UsefulNotes/{{Columbine}} in a few of his songs.
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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: The story details a mass shooting at the Wigglytuff Guild, which is very clearly the Pokémon Mystery Dungeon equivelant of a school shooting. UsefulNotes/{{Columbine}} is even listed among many school shootings at the start of the story.
* EnemiesList: There is a bonus chapter listing off all the victims.
* EnemiesList: There is a bonus chapter listing off all the victims.
* KillTheCutie: Several cute Pokémon are killed during the shooting.
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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: The story details a mass shooting at the Wigglytuff Guild, which is very clearly the Pokémon Mystery Dungeon equivelant of a school shooting. UsefulNotes/{{Columbine}} is even listed among many school shootings at the start of the story.
* KillTheCutie: Several cute Pokémon are killed during the shooting.
* TheresNoKillLikeOverkill: After Lucy kills [[spoiler: Myst the Male Meowstic]], she decides to [[spoiler: drag the body into an empty tent, and set it ablaze]].
* KillTheCutie: Several cute Pokémon are killed during the shooting.
* TheresNoKillLikeOverkill: After Lucy kills [[spoiler: Myst the Male Meowstic]], she decides to [[spoiler: drag the body into an empty tent, and set it ablaze]].
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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: The LastNameBasis: Lucy is only referred to in the story details a mass shooting at the Wigglytuff Guild, which is very clearly by her last name: Mathers.
* MeaningfulName: The victims' names all have something to do with the PokémonMystery Dungeon equivelant of a school shooting. UsefulNotes/{{Columbine}} is even listed among many school shootings at the start of the story.
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*KillTheCutie: NamedByTheAdaptation: Several cute Pokémon Guild workers from the original game are killed during the shooting.
* TheresNoKillLikeOverkill: After Lucy kills [[spoiler: Myst the Male Meowstic]], she decidesonly referred to [[spoiler: drag the body into an empty tent, and set it ablaze]].by their species name, while this story gives them names.
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* ShoutOut: The final victim is [[spoiler: a Shinx named Cubbie Voltage]], which sounds like a reference to [[spoiler: Music/FosterThePeople band member Cubbie Fink, who just so happens to have a cousin who survivied UsefulNotes/{{Columbine}}]].
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* ShoutOut: The final victim is [[spoiler: a Shinx named Cubbie Voltage]], which sounds like a reference to [[spoiler: Music/FosterThePeople band member Cubbie Fink, who just so happens to have a cousin who survivied UsefulNotes/{{Columbine}}]].UsefulNotes/{{Columbine}}]].
** Additionally, the shooter is named Lucy Mathers, which might be a reference to Music/{{Eminem}}, real name Marshal Mathers III, who is known for making somewhat dark rap songs giving off similar vibes as this story. Eminem even mentioned UsefulNotes/Columbine in a few of his songs.
* TheresNoKillLikeOverkill: After Lucy kills [[spoiler: Myst the Male Meowstic]], she decides to [[spoiler: drag the body into an empty tent, and set it ablaze]].
** Additionally, the shooter is named Lucy Mathers, which might be a reference to Music/{{Eminem}}, real name Marshal Mathers III, who is known for making somewhat dark rap songs giving off similar vibes as this story. Eminem even mentioned UsefulNotes/Columbine in a few of his songs.
* TheresNoKillLikeOverkill: After Lucy kills [[spoiler: Myst the Male Meowstic]], she decides to [[spoiler: drag the body into an empty tent, and set it ablaze]].
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''Blaster: The Wigglytuff Guild Massacre'' (also known as simply ''Blaster'') is a ''VideoGame/PokemonMysteryDungeon'' fanfic created by Tropers/UPMan. It is one of his DarkerAndEdgier fanfics, and is partially inspired by the tragic tale of UsefulNotes/{{Columbine}}
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''Blaster: The Wigglytuff Guild Massacre'' (also known as simply ''Blaster'') is a ''VideoGame/PokemonMysteryDungeon'' fanfic created by Tropers/UPMan.{{Tropers/UPMan}}. It is one of his DarkerAndEdgier fanfics, and is partially inspired by the tragic tale of UsefulNotes/{{Columbine}}
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* AbusiveParents: Lucy's parents were not the best people to be raised by; her mother was incredibly religious and lived in fear of her daughter being possessed by evil, and her father quote "liked her a little ''too much'' for her own good.
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* KarmaHoudini: Downplayed. [[spoiler: Lucy is arrested for the shooting she committed, but since the public somehow doesn't know that she came from the human world, they never learn about the five murders she committed there, and therefore, she doesn't get punished for them, just the 20 murders she committed during the shooting.]]
* KnightTemplarBigBrother: Lucy is tackled to the ground by a male Meowstic named Myst Felicity, the older brother of Kit Felicity the Skitty, [[spoiler: one of Lucy's victims]], and tires to kill her and avenge his sister's death. [[spoiler: He fails, and is killed]].
* KnightTemplarBigBrother: Lucy is tackled to the ground by a male Meowstic named Myst Felicity, the older brother of Kit Felicity the Skitty, [[spoiler: one of Lucy's victims]], and tires to kill her and avenge his sister's death. [[spoiler: He fails, and is killed]].
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* KillTheCutie: Several cute Pokémon are killed during the shooting.
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* KillTheCutie: Several cute Pokémon are killed during the shooting.shooting.
* TheresNoKillLikeOverkill: After Lucy kills [[spoiler: Myst the Male Meowstic]], she decides to [[spoiler: drag the body into an empty tent, and set it ablaze]].
* SerialKiller: She killed her parents, and her three ex-boyfriends before the events of the story. She goes on to kill [[spoiler: 20]] more during the Wigglytuff Guild Massacre.
* ShoutOut: The final victim is [[spoiler: a Shinx named Cubbie Voltage]], which sounds like a reference to [[spoiler: Music/FosterThePeople band member Cubbie Fink, who just so happens to have a cousin who survivied UsefulNotes/{{Columbine}}]].
* TheresNoKillLikeOverkill: After Lucy kills [[spoiler: Myst the Male Meowstic]], she decides to [[spoiler: drag the body into an empty tent, and set it ablaze]].
* SerialKiller: She killed her parents, and her three ex-boyfriends before the events of the story. She goes on to kill [[spoiler: 20]] more during the Wigglytuff Guild Massacre.
* ShoutOut: The final victim is [[spoiler: a Shinx named Cubbie Voltage]], which sounds like a reference to [[spoiler: Music/FosterThePeople band member Cubbie Fink, who just so happens to have a cousin who survivied UsefulNotes/{{Columbine}}]].
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''Blaster: The Wigglytuff Guild Massacre'' (also known as simply ''Blaster'') is a ''VideoGame/PokemonMysteryDungeon'' fanfic created by Tropers/UPMan. It is one of his DarkerAndEdgier fanfics, and is partially inspired by the tragic tale of UsefulNotes/{{Columbine}}
The story details a mass shooting that occurs in the Wigglytuff Guild from one of the games, perpetrated by a female killer named Lucy Mathers, who finds herself in the ''PMD'' world as a female Meowstic, with her AK-47 being brought with her.
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* AxCrazy: Lucy is clearly deranged, and is enjoying every second of her mass attack on the guild.
* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: The story details a mass shooting at the Wigglytuff Guild, which is very clearly the Pokémon Mystery Dungeon equivelant of a school shooting. UsefulNotes/{{Columbine}} is even listed among many school shootings at the start of the story.
* KillTheCutie: Several cute Pokémon are killed during the shooting.
The story details a mass shooting that occurs in the Wigglytuff Guild from one of the games, perpetrated by a female killer named Lucy Mathers, who finds herself in the ''PMD'' world as a female Meowstic, with her AK-47 being brought with her.
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!! Here is a list of all the tropes
* AxCrazy: Lucy is clearly deranged, and is enjoying every second of her mass attack on the guild.
* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: The story details a mass shooting at the Wigglytuff Guild, which is very clearly the Pokémon Mystery Dungeon equivelant of a school shooting. UsefulNotes/{{Columbine}} is even listed among many school shootings at the start of the story.
* KillTheCutie: Several cute Pokémon are killed during the shooting.
