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* RunningGag: In the various fics, whenever the transformed wake up after talking with whom they transformed into in their dreams, they always wake up with a pillow in their mouths. Goes up to eleven when Rainbow Dash's counterpart wakes up with a pillow in her(his) mouth while sleeping on a cloud.
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* RunningGag: In the various fics, whenever the transformed wake up after talking with whom they transformed into in their dreams, they always wake up with a pillow in their mouths. Goes up to eleven when Rainbow Dash's counterpart wakes up with a pillow in her(his) their mouth while sleeping on a cloud.
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Uncanny Valley is IUEO now and the subjective version has been split; cleaning up misuse and ZCE in the process
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* UncannyValley: InUniverse: Apparently, horses for ponies. [[FriendToAllLivingThings Except Fluttershy.]]
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Up To Eleven is being dewicked.
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* RunningGag: In the various fics, whenever the transformed wake up after talking with whom they transformed into in their dreams, they always wake up with a pillow in their mouths. Goes UptoEleven when Rainbow Dash's counterpart wakes up with a pillow in her(his) mouth while sleeping on a cloud.
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* RunningGag: In the various fics, whenever the transformed wake up after talking with whom they transformed into in their dreams, they always wake up with a pillow in their mouths. Goes UptoEleven up to eleven when Rainbow Dash's counterpart wakes up with a pillow in her(his) mouth while sleeping on a cloud.
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* NoodleIncident: A few, but Pinkie's IHop incident leads the charge.
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* NoodleIncident: A few, but Pinkie's IHop [=IHop=] incident leads the charge.
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* FlatWhat: Given by Linda [[spoiler: near the end of her encounter with [[PhineasAndFerb Doofenshmirtz]]]]
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* FlatWhat: Given by Linda [[spoiler: near the end of her encounter with [[PhineasAndFerb [[WesternAnimation/PhineasAndFerb Doofenshmirtz]]]]
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* Shoutout: With a lot of the ponies sharing headspace with geeks and pop culture savvy characters, this is inevitable.
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* Shoutout: ShoutOut: With a lot of the ponies sharing headspace with geeks and pop culture savvy characters, this is inevitable.
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* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: Applejack's chapters are all Johnny Cash song titles.
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* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: Applejack's chapters in [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/109443/when-the-mare-comes-around When the Mare Comes Around]] are all Johnny Cash song titles.titles.
** [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/193256/newborn-mare Newborn Mare]] is all John Wayne films.
** [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/193256/newborn-mare Newborn Mare]] is all John Wayne films.
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* Shoutout: With a lot of the ponies sharing headspace with geeks and pop culture savvy characters, this is inevitable.
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* UncannyValley: Apparently, [[InUniverse horses for ponies]]. [[FriendToAllLivingThings Except Fluttershy.]]
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* UncannyValley: InUniverse: Apparently, [[InUniverse horses for ponies]].ponies. [[FriendToAllLivingThings Except Fluttershy.]]
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* UncannyValley: Apparently, horses for ponies. [[FriendToAllLivingThings Except Fluttershy.]]
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* UncannyValley: Apparently, [[InUniverse horses for ponies.ponies]]. [[FriendToAllLivingThings Except Fluttershy.]]
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* GenderBender: With the exceptions of Fluttershy and Applejack, most of the Mane Cast was originally male. Also applies to the Trixie, Octavia, and Lyra characters.
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* GenderBender: With the exceptions of Fluttershy and Applejack, most So many of the Mane Cast was ponies's counterparts were originally male. Also applies male that it's almost easier to name the Trixie, Octavia, and Lyra characters.ponies who weren't gender swapped by the transformation.
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* IgnoredVitalNewsReports: It is absolutely astounding how many characters wake up without knowing about Faust's press conference. With the exclusion of Rainbow Dash (who woke up on the same day it was held) absolutely none of the Mane Cast's counterparts had any excuse not to know.
** Averted with Applejack's story. Her best friend showed her the video.
** Averted with Applejack's story. Her best friend showed her the video.
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* IgnoredVitalNewsReports: It is absolutely astounding how many characters wake up without knowing about Faust's Lauren Faust had a press conference. With the exclusion of Rainbow Dash (who woke up on the same day it was held) absolutely none conference calling for ponies to come to New York. Most of the Mane Cast's counterparts had any excuse ponies find out about this not to know.
** Averted with Applejack's story. Her best friend showed herfrom the video.actual conference or viewing it online, but by word-of-mouth.
** Averted with Applejack's story. Her best friend showed her
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* NoodleIncident: A few with Pinkie's IHop incident leading the charge.
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* NoodleIncident: A few with few, but Pinkie's IHop incident leading leads the charge.
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* [[spoiler:SharingABody: Initially it appears that the counterparts only gain the forms of their ponies, but soon it becomes clear that's not the case...]]
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* [[spoiler:SharingABody: Initially SharingABody: Played with. Initially, it appears that the counterparts only gain the forms of their ponies, but soon ponies with the original personalities sharing mental space. As time passes, it becomes clear that's not the case...]]minds are merging or the counterparts are being overwritten by the original pony.
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* GenderBender: With the exceptions of Fluttershy and Applejack, most of the Mane Cast was originally male. Also applies to the Trixie and Octavia characters.
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* GenderBender: With the exceptions of Fluttershy and Applejack, most of the Mane Cast was originally male. Also applies to the Trixie Trixie, Octavia, and Octavia Lyra characters.
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* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: Lyra insists to her counterpart, upon being prompted about her human obsession, that she doesn't have an obsession "with humans."
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** Likewise with Lyra's counterpart, although he's far more blatant about putting it off.
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It all started when Creator/LaurenFaust became [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Princess Celestia.]] Discord appeared before her and explained his master plan: To take over the world by randomly transforming ordinary people into ponies! In order to keep the world safe, Lauren Faust called a public announcement and requested that anybody who found themselves in the body of an Element Bearer to head for UsefulNotes/NewYorkCity.
There are a few snags, though. Not only are the transformed individuals scattered across the globe, but they're each slowly succumbing to their counterparts' mental processes. Combine that with widespread fandom reacting to suddenly real cartoon characters, the issues ponies have in a hand-based world, and Discord pitching roadblocks in the way of the heroes, and you have a melting pot of crazy shenanigans and obstacles just getting everypony to New York. So, the pony population doubles every day, and Rainbow Dash has been selected by Discord to be the chronicler of his rise to power...
This is the shared setting of Becoming Ponies, an intriguing spin on the Ponies on Earth genre with multiple authors trying to tie it all together. Thus far, it seems to be a decent Alternate Reality experiment; [[http://www.facebook.com/erica.fluttershy Fluttershy's character has a fictional facebook page]], which influences the story itself, and events in any one story can reference and influence each other. Best of all, it's still brand new; while the princesses and the Mane Cast are all claimed, one merely has to apply with an unclaimed pony to join in.
There are a few snags, though. Not only are the transformed individuals scattered across the globe, but they're each slowly succumbing to their counterparts' mental processes. Combine that with widespread fandom reacting to suddenly real cartoon characters, the issues ponies have in a hand-based world, and Discord pitching roadblocks in the way of the heroes, and you have a melting pot of crazy shenanigans and obstacles just getting everypony to New York. So, the pony population doubles every day, and Rainbow Dash has been selected by Discord to be the chronicler of his rise to power...
This is the shared setting of Becoming Ponies, an intriguing spin on the Ponies on Earth genre with multiple authors trying to tie it all together. Thus far, it seems to be a decent Alternate Reality experiment; [[http://www.facebook.com/erica.fluttershy Fluttershy's character has a fictional facebook page]], which influences the story itself, and events in any one story can reference and influence each other. Best of all, it's still brand new; while the princesses and the Mane Cast are all claimed, one merely has to apply with an unclaimed pony to join in.
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It all started when Creator/LaurenFaust became [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Princess Celestia.]] Discord appeared before her and explained his master plan: To take over the world by randomly transforming ordinary people into ponies! In order to keep the world safe, Lauren Faust called a press conference and made a public announcement and requested that requesting anybody who found themselves woke in the body of an Element Bearer to head for UsefulNotes/NewYorkCity.
There are a few snags, though. Not only are the transformed individuals scattered across the globe, but they're each slowly succumbing This seems straightforward until people start actually waking up as ponies. From working in an entirely new body, to having a roommate in their counterparts' mental processes. Combine that with widespread fandom reacting brain, to suddenly real cartoon characters, determining whether they even can afford to get to New York, the issues counterparts to the ponies have in quite a hand-based world, and lot of work ahead of them. Of course, Discord pitching roadblocks in believes the way of best reward for all that work are a few... surprises along the heroes, and you have a melting pot of crazy shenanigans and obstacles just getting everypony to New York. So, the pony population doubles every day, and Rainbow Dash has been selected by Discord to be the chronicler of his rise to power...
way.
This is the shared setting of Becoming Ponies, an intriguing spin on the Ponies on Earth genre with multiple authors trying to tie it alltogether.together in one big story. Thus far, it seems to be a decent Alternate Reality experiment; [[http://www.facebook.com/erica.fluttershy Fluttershy's character has a fictional facebook page]], which influences the story itself, and events in any one story can reference and influence each other. Best of all, it's still brand new; while the princesses and the Mane Cast are all claimed, one merely has to apply with an unclaimed pony to join in.other.
This is the shared setting of Becoming Ponies, an intriguing spin on the Ponies on Earth genre with multiple authors trying to tie it all
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* NoodleIncident: A few.
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* NoodleIncident: A few.few with Pinkie's IHop incident leading the charge.
* RedemptionEqualsDeath: [[spoiler: Private Investigator Jim Matthews.]]
* RedemptionEqualsDeath: [[spoiler: Private Investigator Jim Matthews.]]
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* EmbarrassingNickname: Max's high school nickname: Maxipad. AJ's counterpart uses it to cool him off when she's feeling crowded by his fanboy appreciation.
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Adding clarity to the introduction.
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It all started when Creator/LaurenFaust became [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Princess Celestia.]] Discord appeared before her and explained his master plan: To take over the world by randomly transforming ordinary people into ponies! In order to keep the world safe, Lauren Faust called a public announcement and requested that anybody who found themselves in the body of an Element bearer head for UsefulNotes/NewYorkCity.
There are a few snags, though. Not only are the transformed individuals scattered across the globe, but they're each slowly succumbing to their counterparts' mental processes. Combine that with the widespread fandom, the issues ponies have in a hand-based world, their own disparate personalities, and Discord's background actions, and you have a melting pot of crazy shenanigans and problems in the way of the meet-up. The pony population doubles with every day, and Rainbow Dash has been selected to be the chronicler of Discord's rise to power...
This is the shared setting of Becoming Ponies, an intriguing spin on the Ponies on Earth genre with multiple authors trying to tie it all together. Thus far, it seems to be a decent Alternate Reality experiment; [[http://www.facebook.com/erica.fluttershy Fluttershy's character has a fictional facebook page]], which influences the story itself, and events in any one story can reference and influence each other. Best of all, it's still brand new; while the princesses and the Mane Cast is all claimed, one merely has to apply with an unclaimed pony to join in.
There are a few snags, though. Not only are the transformed individuals scattered across the globe, but they're each slowly succumbing to their counterparts' mental processes. Combine that with the widespread fandom, the issues ponies have in a hand-based world, their own disparate personalities, and Discord's background actions, and you have a melting pot of crazy shenanigans and problems in the way of the meet-up. The pony population doubles with every day, and Rainbow Dash has been selected to be the chronicler of Discord's rise to power...
This is the shared setting of Becoming Ponies, an intriguing spin on the Ponies on Earth genre with multiple authors trying to tie it all together. Thus far, it seems to be a decent Alternate Reality experiment; [[http://www.facebook.com/erica.fluttershy Fluttershy's character has a fictional facebook page]], which influences the story itself, and events in any one story can reference and influence each other. Best of all, it's still brand new; while the princesses and the Mane Cast is all claimed, one merely has to apply with an unclaimed pony to join in.
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It all started when Creator/LaurenFaust became [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Princess Celestia.]] Discord appeared before her and explained his master plan: To take over the world by randomly transforming ordinary people into ponies! In order to keep the world safe, Lauren Faust called a public announcement and requested that anybody who found themselves in the body of an Element bearer Bearer to head for UsefulNotes/NewYorkCity.
There are a few snags, though. Not only are the transformed individuals scattered across the globe, but they're each slowly succumbing to their counterparts' mental processes. Combine that withthe widespread fandom, fandom reacting to suddenly real cartoon characters, the issues ponies have in a hand-based world, their own disparate personalities, and Discord's background actions, Discord pitching roadblocks in the way of the heroes, and you have a melting pot of crazy shenanigans and problems in obstacles just getting everypony to New York. So, the way of the meet-up. The pony population doubles with every day, and Rainbow Dash has been selected by Discord to be the chronicler of Discord's his rise to power...
This is the shared setting of Becoming Ponies, an intriguing spin on the Ponies on Earth genre with multiple authors trying to tie it all together. Thus far, it seems to be a decent Alternate Reality experiment; [[http://www.facebook.com/erica.fluttershy Fluttershy's character has a fictional facebook page]], which influences the story itself, and events in any one story can reference and influence each other. Best of all, it's still brand new; while the princesses and the Mane Castis are all claimed, one merely has to apply with an unclaimed pony to join in.
There are a few snags, though. Not only are the transformed individuals scattered across the globe, but they're each slowly succumbing to their counterparts' mental processes. Combine that with
This is the shared setting of Becoming Ponies, an intriguing spin on the Ponies on Earth genre with multiple authors trying to tie it all together. Thus far, it seems to be a decent Alternate Reality experiment; [[http://www.facebook.com/erica.fluttershy Fluttershy's character has a fictional facebook page]], which influences the story itself, and events in any one story can reference and influence each other. Best of all, it's still brand new; while the princesses and the Mane Cast
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* GenderBender: With the sole exceptions of Fluttershy and Applejack, most of the Mane Cast was originally male. Also applies to the Trixie and Octavia characters.
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* GenderBender: With the sole exceptions of Fluttershy and Applejack, most of the Mane Cast was originally male. Also applies to the Trixie and Octavia characters.
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* [[spoiler:SharingABody: Initially it appears that the counterparts only gain the forms of their ponies, but soon it becomes clear that's not the case...]]
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* SirSwearsalot: Sweetie Belle's counterpart.
* SirSwearsalot: Sweetie Belle's counterpart.
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* GenderBender: With the sole exception of Fluttershy, every member of the Mane Cast was originally male. Also applies to the Trixie and Octavia characters.
** Averted with the addition of Applejack's story. Still, at this point, most of the Mane 6 are the Male 6.
** Averted with the addition of Applejack's story. Still, at this point, most of the Mane 6 are the Male 6.
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* GenderBender: With the sole exception exceptions of Fluttershy, every member Fluttershy and Applejack, most of the Mane Cast was originally male. Also applies to the Trixie and Octavia characters.
** Averted with the addition of Applejack's story. Still, at this point, most of the Mane 6 are the Male 6.characters.
** Averted with the addition of Applejack's story. Still, at this point, most of the Mane 6 are the Male 6.
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* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: Applejack's chapters are all Johnny Cash song titles.
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**Averted with Applejack's story. Her best friend showed her the video.
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/group/1670/PonyEarthverse Also known as Pony Earth.]]
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/group/1670/PonyEarthverse net/group/199509/ponyearthverse Also known as Pony Earth.]]
* CallToAdventure: Most of the stories treat the people waking up as ponies as this with the Mane 6 and others heading to New York.
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** This is happening in other stories too, with the implication being Discod is pulling random villians to attack the mane cast.
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** This is happening in other stories too, with the implication being Discod Discord is pulling random villians villains to attack the mane cast.
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* BuriedAlive: Applejack's story STARTS with this.
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* RefusalOfTheCall: Applejack's counterpart drags her hooves. A lot. Applejack calls her on it, so it may be becoming a case of TheCallKnowsWhereYouLive.
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**Averted with the addition of Applejack's story. Still, at this point, most of the Mane 6 are the Male 6.
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* RunningGag: In the various fics, whenever the transformed wake up after talking with their possessors in their dreams, they always wake up with a pillow in their mouths. Goes UptoEleven when Rainbow Dash's counterpart wakes up with a pillow in her(his) mouth while sleeping on a cloud.
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* RunningGag: In the various fics, whenever the transformed wake up after talking with their possessors whom they transformed into in their dreams, they always wake up with a pillow in their mouths. Goes UptoEleven when Rainbow Dash's counterpart wakes up with a pillow in her(his) mouth while sleeping on a cloud.