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* AdaptationExplanationExtrication: Yumil thinks Tuoni is just a sweet-talking minion of Kullervo trying to kill him through a facade of sympathy, even dangling the mystery of his missing parents over him to lower his guard. In the game, this guess can be confirmed by rematching him after retrieving the Book of Prophecy so you can scan him, but in this rewrite, he's left as AmbiguouslyEvil.

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* AdaptationExplanationExtrication: Yumil thinks Tuoni is just a sweet-talking minion of Kullervo trying to kill him through a facade of sympathy, even dangling the mystery of his missing parents over him to lower his guard. In the game, game this guess can be confirmed by rematching him after retrieving the Book of Prophecy so you can scan him, but in this rewrite, rewrite he's left as AmbiguouslyEvil.



* AmbiguouslyEvil: Tuoni claims to be the Chimera that Yumil killed, while Yumil posits that he's just a sweet-talking minion of Kullervo. Since he doesn't have the Book of Prophecy at this point and can't scan him, it's never confirmed what his deal really is.

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* AmbiguouslyEvil: Tuoni claims to be the Chimera that Yumil killed, while Yumil posits that he's just a sweet-talking minion of Kullervo. Since he Yumil doesn't have the Book of Prophecy at this point and can't scan him, it's never confirmed what his deal really is.



* WanderingTheEarth: After defeating Kullervo and saying his farewells to the people of Rhoan (promising Kamui that he'll show him new flowers should he ever return), Yumil travels the world with Lauca. He initially tried to give Lauca his house in Rhoan since he'll be traveling the world, but she points out there's no reason she ''can't'' join him. He agrees to meet up with her after he has one last nap on Sunny Hill.

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* WanderingTheEarth: After defeating Kullervo and saying his farewells to the people of Rhoan (promising Kamui that he'll show him Kamui new flowers should he ever return), Yumil travels the world with Lauca. He initially tried to give Lauca his house in Rhoan since he'll be traveling the world, but she points out there's no reason she ''can't'' join him.can't ''join him''. He agrees to meet up with her after he has one last nap on Sunny Hill.
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* ShadowArchetype: [[spoiler:Kullervo turns out to be a dark mirror of Yumil: a child who became a target of humanity's irrationality despite saving them from certain destruction. Unlike Yumil having Lauca ([[MyFriendsAndZoidberg and Heath]]), Kullervo had ''no one'' on his side, which led to his desire to erase humanity by sparking the apocalypse himself to summon the Book and ''not'' write humanity into it this time around. Yumil regretfully has to kill him because he brought the end too close.]]

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* ShadowArchetype: [[spoiler:Kullervo turns out to be a dark mirror of Yumil: a child who became a target of humanity's irrationality despite saving them from certain destruction. Unlike Yumil having Lauca ([[MyFriendsAndZoidberg and Heath]]), Kullervo had ''no one'' on his side, which led to his desire to erase humanity by sparking the apocalypse himself to summon the Book and ''not'' write writing humanity into it this time around. Yumil regretfully has to kill him because he brought the end too close.]]
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* ShadowArchetype: [[spoiler:Kullervo turns out to be a dark mirror of Yumil: a child who became a target of humanity's irrationality despite saving them from certain destruction. Unlike Yumil having Lauca ([[MyFriendsAndZoidberg and Heath]]), Kullervo had ''no one'' on his side, which led to his desire to erase humanity by sparking the apocalypse himself. Yumil regretfully has to kill him because he brought the end too close.]]

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* ShadowArchetype: [[spoiler:Kullervo turns out to be a dark mirror of Yumil: a child who became a target of humanity's irrationality despite saving them from certain destruction. Unlike Yumil having Lauca ([[MyFriendsAndZoidberg and Heath]]), Kullervo had ''no one'' on his side, which led to his desire to erase humanity by sparking the apocalypse himself.himself to summon the Book and ''not'' write humanity into it this time around. Yumil regretfully has to kill him because he brought the end too close.]]
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* SecondLove: [[spoiler:Lauca becomes this for Yumil, especially since he symbolically cuts himself out of Fana's life by gifting her the Stone-cutter when he dreams of her (implied to be him visiting her in the preview of his new world).]]

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* DarkestHour: Yumil is near-catatonic after escaping Rhoan the second time, considering everything he just went through in ''one night'': [[spoiler:Rex stole the Book from him and gave it to Kullervo, Rhoan got destroyed, Kullervo sealed the Spirits away, Fana was sucked into the Book, Heath knocked the wind out of him, most of the townsfolk blamed him for the devastation, Xenonbart branded him a criminal (again), and he just broke out with Heath]]. Lauca's persistence slowly gives him the motivation to pull himself up.

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* DarkestHour: Yumil is near-catatonic after escaping Rhoan the second time, considering everything he just went through in ''one night'': [[spoiler:Rex stole the Book from him and gave it to Kullervo, Rhoan got destroyed, Heath knocked the wind out of him, Kullervo sealed the Spirits away, Fana was sucked into the Book, Heath knocked the wind out of him, most Rhoan got destroyed, Xenonbart branded him a criminal (again) because ''most of the townsfolk blamed him for the devastation, Xenonbart branded him a criminal (again), devastation'', and he just broke out with Heath]]. Lauca's persistence slowly gives him the motivation to pull himself up.



* DysfunctionalFamily: Yumil would consider Gustav and Duran's father-son relationship strained ''if it actually existed''. As in canon, [[spoiler:Duran has the false belief that Gustav ran away after murdering Rex's family, but Gustav was looking for the actual culprits and never told Duran about it]]; the difference is that [[spoiler:even after the truth comes out, it's implied that even that didn't make them family again (if ever)]].

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* DysfunctionalFamily: Yumil would consider Gustav and Duran's father-son relationship strained ''if it actually existed''. As in canon, [[spoiler:Duran has the false belief that Gustav ran away after murdering Rex's family, but Gustav was looking for the actual culprits and never told Duran about it]]; the difference is that [[spoiler:even after the truth comes out, it's [[spoiler:it's implied that even that the truth didn't make them family again (if ever)]].



* OnceDoneNeverForgotten: [[spoiler:Yumil will never let Heath forget that unprovoked literal gut punch in their first meeting, even during his HoldTheLine in the climax.]]

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* OnceDoneNeverForgotten: [[spoiler:Yumil will never let lets Heath forget that unprovoked literal gut punch in their first meeting, even during meeting. He only agrees to drop it when Heath is about to lose his HoldTheLine in the climax.life.]]



* RelationshipUpgrade: [[spoiler:Yumil and Lauca become an item after he decides to tell her about the Book and everything related to it.]]



* ShadowArchetype: [[spoiler:Kullervo turns out to be a dark mirror of Yumil: a child who became a target of humanity's irrationality. Unlike Yumil having Lauca ([[MyFriendsAndZoidberg and Heath]]), Kullervo had ''no one'' on his side, which led to his desire to erase humanity by sparking the apocalypse himself. Yumil regretfully has to kill him because he brought the end too close.]]

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* ShadowArchetype: [[spoiler:Kullervo turns out to be a dark mirror of Yumil: a child who became a target of humanity's irrationality.irrationality despite saving them from certain destruction. Unlike Yumil having Lauca ([[MyFriendsAndZoidberg and Heath]]), Kullervo had ''no one'' on his side, which led to his desire to erase humanity by sparking the apocalypse himself. Yumil regretfully has to kill him because he brought the end too close.]]



* WanderingTheEarth: After defeating Kullervo and saying his farewells to the people of Rhoan (promising Kamui that he'll show him new flowers should he ever return), Yumil travels the world with Lauca. He tries to give Lauca his house in Rhoan since he'll be traveling the world, but she thinks joining him would be more fun. Realizing that there's no reason she ''can't'' join him, he agrees to meet up with her after he has one last nap on Sunny Hill.

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* WanderingTheEarth: After defeating Kullervo and saying his farewells to the people of Rhoan (promising Kamui that he'll show him new flowers should he ever return), Yumil travels the world with Lauca. He tries initially tried to give Lauca his house in Rhoan since he'll be traveling the world, but she thinks joining him would be more fun. Realizing that points out there's no reason she ''can't'' join him, he him. He agrees to meet up with her after he has one last nap on Sunny Hill.
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* DysfunctionalFamily: Yumil would consider Gustav and Duran's father-son relationship strained ''if it actually existed''. As in canon, [[spoiler:Duran has the false belief that Gustav ran away after murdering Rex's family, but Gustav was looking for the actual culprits and never told Duran about it]]; the difference is that [[spoiler:even after the truth comes out, it's implied that even that didn't make them family again (if ever)]].
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* ShadowArchetype: [[spoiler:Kullervo turns out to be a dark mirror of Yumil: a child who became a target of humanity's irrationality. Unlike Yumil having Lauca ([[MyFriendsAndZoidberg and Heath]]), Kullervo had ''no one'' on his side, which led to his plan to hasten the apocalypse. Yumil regretfully has to kill him because he brought the end too close.]]

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* ShadowArchetype: [[spoiler:Kullervo turns out to be a dark mirror of Yumil: a child who became a target of humanity's irrationality. Unlike Yumil having Lauca ([[MyFriendsAndZoidberg and Heath]]), Kullervo had ''no one'' on his side, which led to his plan desire to hasten erase humanity by sparking the apocalypse.apocalypse himself. Yumil regretfully has to kill him because he brought the end too close.]]
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* DarkestHour: Yumil is near-catatonic after escaping Rhoan the second time, considering everything he just went through in ''one night'': [[spoiler:Rex stole the Book from him and gave it to Kullervo, Rhoan got destroyed, Kullervo sealed the Spirits away, Fana was sucked into the Book, Heath knocked the wind out of him, most of the townsfolk blamed him for the devastation, Xenonbart brands him a criminal (again), and he just broke out with Heath]]. Lauca's persistence slowly gives him the motivation to pull himself up.

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* DarkestHour: Yumil is near-catatonic after escaping Rhoan the second time, considering everything he just went through in ''one night'': [[spoiler:Rex stole the Book from him and gave it to Kullervo, Rhoan got destroyed, Kullervo sealed the Spirits away, Fana was sucked into the Book, Heath knocked the wind out of him, most of the townsfolk blamed him for the devastation, Xenonbart brands branded him a criminal (again), and he just broke out with Heath]]. Lauca's persistence slowly gives him the motivation to pull himself up.



* ShadowArchetype: [[spoiler:Kullervo turns out to be a dark mirror of Yumil: a child who had no one on his side against humanity's irrationality. Yumil regretfully has to kill him because he brought the end too close.]]

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* ShadowArchetype: [[spoiler:Kullervo turns out to be a dark mirror of Yumil: a child who had no one on his side against became a target of humanity's irrationality.irrationality. Unlike Yumil having Lauca ([[MyFriendsAndZoidberg and Heath]]), Kullervo had ''no one'' on his side, which led to his plan to hasten the apocalypse. Yumil regretfully has to kill him because he brought the end too close.]]

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* DarkestHour: Yumil is near-catatonic after escaping Rhoan the second time, considering everything he just went through in ''one night'': [[spoiler:Rex stole the Book from him and gave it to Kullervo, Rhoan got destroyed, Kullervo sealed the Spirits away, Fana was sucked into the Book, Heath knocked the wind out of him, most of the townsfolk blamed him for the devastation, Xenonbart brands him a criminal (again), and he just broke out with Heath]]. Laura's persistence slowly gives him the motivation to pull himself up.

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* DarkestHour: Yumil is near-catatonic after escaping Rhoan the second time, considering everything he just went through in ''one night'': [[spoiler:Rex stole the Book from him and gave it to Kullervo, Rhoan got destroyed, Kullervo sealed the Spirits away, Fana was sucked into the Book, Heath knocked the wind out of him, most of the townsfolk blamed him for the devastation, Xenonbart brands him a criminal (again), and he just broke out with Heath]]. Laura's Lauca's persistence slowly gives him the motivation to pull himself up.


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* RescueRomance: [[spoiler:Yumil gradually finds himself falling for Lauca after she saves him from his DarkestHour.]]
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--> '''Rempo''': [[AWizardDidIt It's magic. The book is magic and it gives you magic swords that make you the bVillainsDyingGrace

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--> '''Rempo''': [[AWizardDidIt It's magic. The book is magic and it gives you magic swords that make you the bVillainsDyingGrace best at swording.]]
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* OnceDoneNeverForgotten: [[Spoiler:Yumil will never let Heath forget that unprovoked literal gut punch, even during his HoldTheLine in the climax.]]

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* OnceDoneNeverForgotten: [[Spoiler:Yumil [[spoiler:Yumil will never let Heath forget that unprovoked literal gut punch, punch in their first meeting, even during his HoldTheLine in the climax.]]

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