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* FanMyopia: Rainbow Dash provides an InUniverse example when Shane asks who the Wonderbolts are -- despite the fact that she knows ''full well'' he's from another universe, she flips out in sheer disbelief that he doesn't know who the Wonderbolts are anyway.

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i'm rereading the fic but i don't think this one falls under Artistic License


* ArtisticLicenseGunSafety: Shane, a handgun is not a headscratcher. Especially not when it's loaded. Both Shane and Muppetz are Marines and therefore drilled in gun safety, but [[NotAfraidToDie Shane's lost most of his sense of self-preservation come this point]].


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* JugglingLoadedGuns: While Shane is a Marine ([[WriteWhatYouKnow as is the author]]) and therefore drilled in gun safety, he's also [[NotAfraidToDie lost most of his sense of self-preservation at this point]], leading to such absurdly reckless actions as scratching his head with the barrel of a loaded pistol.
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* TitleByNumber: Article '''2'''.

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* TitleByNumber: Article '''2'''. What, exactly, Article 2 ''is'' has yet to come up.



* VitriolicBestBuds: Shane and Luna quickly get this relationship, mutually engaging in SnarkToSnarkCombat but have some of the most heatwarming scenes in the story when they do get along. Shane even states he would go to war for her.

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* VitriolicBestBuds: Shane and Luna quickly get this relationship, mutually engaging in SnarkToSnarkCombat but have some of the most heatwarming heartwarming scenes in the story when they do get along. Shane even states he would go to war for her.
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* AliensAreBastards: Discussed but ultimately subverted. This trope is a phobia for the inhabitants of Equus, but the alien in question, [[HumansThroughAlienEyes Shane]], while a {{Jerkass}}, is unambiguously a good guy.

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* SitcomArchNemesis: Shane and Shining Armor. It probably didn't help that Shane held a gun to Shining Armor to stop him "attacking" (i.e tickling) Twilight.

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* SitcomArchNemesis: Shane and Shining Armor.Armor or [[VitriolicBestBuds Luna]]. It probably didn't help that Shane held a gun to Shining Armor to stop him "attacking" (i.e tickling) Twilight.


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* VitriolicBestBuds: Shane and Luna quickly get this relationship, mutually engaging in SnarkToSnarkCombat but have some of the most heatwarming scenes in the story when they do get along. Shane even states he would go to war for her.
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That's what it means.


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* TitleByNumberTitleByNumber: Article '''2'''.
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* SitcomArchNemesis: Shane and Shining Armor.

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* SitcomArchNemesis: Shane and Shining Armor. It probably didn't help that Shane held a gun to Shining Armor to stop him "attacking" (i.e tickling) Twilight.



* WhiteAndGreyMorality: Humanity's ubiquitous distrust in others and aggressive manners are appalling to the more amiable ponies.

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* WhiteAndGreyMorality: Humanity's Shane's revelation of humanity's ubiquitous distrust in others and aggressive manners are appalling to the more amiable ponies.
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%% BetterToDieThanBeKilled: Attempted by Shane in the first chapter. Luna manages to stop him.

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%% * BetterToDieThanBeKilled: Attempted by Shane in the first chapter. Luna manages to stop him.



%% BlackComedy: Shane's sense of humor, [[HairTriggerTemper when it shows]], is grim even by human standards.

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%% * BlackComedy: Shane's sense of humor, [[HairTriggerTemper when it shows]], is grim even by human standards.



%% DeadpanSnarker: Rarity shows shades of this, and both the princesses are openly so, especially Luna. None of them trumps Major Doran, though, who snarks ''all the time'', and very frequently in a hostile manner.

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%% * DeadpanSnarker: Rarity shows shades of this, and both the princesses are openly so, especially Luna. None of them trumps Major Doran, though, who snarks ''all the time'', and very frequently in a hostile manner.



%% SemperFi: Shane is a Marine.

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%% * SemperFi: Shane is a Marine.Marine, as is the author.



%% SitcomArchNemesis: Shane and Shining Armor.
%% SnarkToSnarkCombat: Shane and Luna anytime they talk to each other.

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%% * SitcomArchNemesis: Shane and Shining Armor.
%% * SnarkToSnarkCombat: Shane and Luna anytime they talk to each other.



%% WhiteAndGreyMorality: Humanity's ubiquitous distrust in others and aggressive manners are appalling to the more amiable ponies.

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%% * WhiteAndGreyMorality: Humanity's ubiquitous distrust in others and aggressive manners are appalling to the more amiable ponies.

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%% GreyAndWhiteMorality: Humanity's ubiquitous distrust in others and aggressive manners are appalling to the more amiable ponies.


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* SemiDivine: After the above happens Shane eventually asks Luna if she and her sister are goddesses. This trope is essentially her response.

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* SemiDivine: After witnessing Celestia literally raising the above happens sun, Shane eventually asks Luna if she and her sister are goddesses. This trope Her answer is essentially her response.that, while they're not ''the'' Gods, the ones who created the world, they're still lesser gods of a sort.



%% SitcomArchNemesis: Shane and Shining Armor.



%% SitcomArchNemesis: Shane and Shining Armor.



* SurvivorGuilt: Shane feels strongly that he shouldn't have been saved, and makes it quite obvious to everyone within earshot, multiple times.



* SurvivorGuilt: Shane feels strongly that he shouldn't have been saved, and makes it quite obvious to everyone within earshot, multiple times.
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* ShoutOut: When Shane asks Luna if she and Celestia are gods, her answer starts "[[WesternAnimation/TheSimpsons Short answer; 'Yes' with an "If". Long answer; 'No' with a 'but'.]]"

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* EveryScarHasAStory: Subverted. Major Doran is indeed the bearer of a number of these, but most of them have rather mundane explanations. See NoodleIncident below.

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* EveryScarHasAStory: Subverted. Major Doran is indeed the bearer of a number of these, scars, but most of them have rather mundane explanations. See NoodleIncident below.


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* LoopholeAbuse:
** Shane is obligated to confiscate the autopsy data taken of his deceased crewmates, as they constitute research performed on humans without permission of the US Government. After he does this, he immediately turns around and says he can't provide proper care for the confiscated documents and will be relegating them to the care of the very same pony he just confiscated them from.
** Shane is ''very'' insistent on destroying all of the weapons and ammunition left over from his crashed ship, much to the dismay of Bolt, who was researching it. Protocol requires him to do so, after all. But protocol doesn't specify ''how'' it is to be destroyed -- Shane cheers Bolt up by suggesting "one bullet at a time".

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* BetterToDieThanBeKilled: Attempted by Shane in the first chapter. Luna manages to stop him.

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* %% BetterToDieThanBeKilled: Attempted by Shane in the first chapter. Luna manages to stop him.



* BlackComedy: Shane's sense of humor, [[HairTriggerTemper when it shows]], is grim even by human standards.

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* %% BlackComedy: Shane's sense of humor, [[HairTriggerTemper when it shows]], is grim even by human standards.



* DeadpanSnarker: Rarity shows shades of this, and both the princesses are openly so, especially Luna. None of them trumps Major Doran, though, who snarks ''all the time'', and very frequently in a hostile manner.

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* %% DeadpanSnarker: Rarity shows shades of this, and both the princesses are openly so, especially Luna. None of them trumps Major Doran, though, who snarks ''all the time'', and very frequently in a hostile manner.



* GreyAndWhiteMorality: Humanity's ubiquitous distrust in others and aggressive manners are appalling to the more amiable ponies.

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* %% GreyAndWhiteMorality: Humanity's ubiquitous distrust in others and aggressive manners are appalling to the more amiable ponies.



* HeKnowsTooMuch: Invoked. Major Doran says that his own government would not hesitate to take his death into account (going as far as "kindly suggesting" suicide) if it ever got word that he's being held captive by another sovereign country, due to the amount of classified information he has.

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* HeKnowsTooMuch: Invoked. Major Doran says that his own government would not hesitate to take his death into account (going as far as "kindly suggesting" suicide) if it ever got word that he's being held captive by another sovereign country, due to the amount of classified information he has.



* HiddenDepths: Shane manages to surprise Celestia by not only recognizing that she has experienced a great deal of loss, but also expressing his heartfelt sympathies. She returns the favor later on.
** This also extends to the real reason why he listens to Twilight: [[spoiler: She sounds like his sister]].

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* HiddenDepths: Shane manages to surprise Celestia by not only recognizing that she has experienced a great deal of loss, but also expressing his heartfelt sympathies. She returns the favor later on. \n** This also extends to the real reason why he listens to Twilight: [[spoiler: She sounds like his sister]].



* HumansAreTheRealMonsters: {{Averted}} and {{Defied}} by the author. While Shane ''is'' a jerk at times, it's also made clear that he's just one person who is in a very stressful situation, so it's really not fair or right to use him as an example of all of humanity being evil. He also proves that for all of his bluster, he has some goodness deep inside him.

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* HumansAreTheRealMonsters: {{Averted}} and {{Defied}} by the author. {{Averted}}: While Shane ''is'' a jerk at times, it's also made clear that he's just one person who is in a very stressful situation, so it's really not fair or right to use him as an example of all of humanity being evil. He also proves that for all of his bluster, he has some goodness deep inside him.



* InhumanableAlienRights: Inverted: Equestrian law was not written with humans in mind, and therefore it does not apply to them. Luna makes a joke that, legally, Shane would be considered more of a pet than a prisoner. [[DudeNotFunny He doesn't like it one bit]].

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* InhumanableAlienRights: Inverted: Equestrian law was not written with humans in mind, and therefore it does not apply to them. Luna makes a joke that, legally, Shane would be considered more of a pet than a prisoner. [[DudeNotFunny He doesn't like it one bit]].



* {{Jerkass}}: Shane comes off as this to the ponies. In fact, the only person he goes beyond simply tolerating is Twilight, as Luna notices.
** JerkWithAHeartOfGold: He wouldn't be one if he hadn't [[spoiler:[[LoopholeAbuse abused so many loopholes]] to let the scientist in charge of studying the bodies of his crew keep her research]].
* JerkassHasAPoint: Shane is completely right to chew out Luna after her playing with a machine gun nearly kills him and the Mane Six.
** Likewise, he calls out Celestia's hypocrisy of preaching that he has to trust her when she doesn't trust him enough to have a fork during dinner.



* NightmareFuelStationAttendant: [[invoked]]Fluttershy to Shane, ever since she Stared him down[[note]]see MindControl above[[/note]]. It manifests as an intense dislike of her - the first time she visited his cell, at first he wanted her out of there, but relented to her staying in the corner, facing the wall and without speaking. Later, at dinner, he walked off and would have returned to his cell had Twilight not convinced him to stay. Her trying to convince him to give Fluttershy a chance didn't work very well: he refuses to look her in the eye, and stays as far away from her as he can[[note]]her approaching him, especially without warning, is enough to freak him out ''badly''[[/note]]. To say the least, the bearer of the Element of Kindness [[TearsOfRemorse doesn't take it well]].
** FridgeBrilliance: Highly trained individuals are all about being Determinators, being this the main reason they manage to get the skills that make them so capable, resist torture/interrogation or survive against the odds. Imagine being exposed to something that instantly overpowers your biggest asset.

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* NightmareFuelStationAttendant: [[invoked]]Fluttershy Fluttershy to Shane, ever since she Stared him down[[note]]see MindControl above[[/note]].down. It manifests as an intense dislike of her - the first time she visited his cell, at first he wanted her out of there, but relented to her staying in the corner, facing the wall and without speaking. Later, at dinner, he walked off and would have returned to his cell had Twilight not convinced him to stay. Her trying to convince him to give Fluttershy a chance didn't work very well: he refuses to look her in the eye, eye and stays as far away from her as he can[[note]]her can, and her approaching him, especially without warning, is enough to freak him out ''badly''[[/note]]. ''badly''. To say the least, the bearer of the Element of Kindness [[TearsOfRemorse doesn't take it well]].
** FridgeBrilliance: Highly trained individuals are all about being Determinators, being this the main reason they manage to get the skills that make them so capable, resist torture/interrogation or survive against the odds. Imagine being exposed to something that instantly overpowers your biggest asset.
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* ScarsAreForever: Shane holds a surprising amount of those. Not all of them are related to his time in the military, though - see NoodleIncident above.

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* ScarsAreForever: Shane holds a surprising amount of those. Not all of them are related to his time in the military, though - see NoodleIncident above.-- [[NoodleIncident he doesn't go into much detail]], but two of them are attributed to "steak knife" and "fistfight with a dumpster".



* SemperFi: Shane is a Marine.
* ShellShockedVeteran: Shane turns out to be one after he finds out that he's the SoleSurvivor of the crash landing. Even captain Aegis, a character that doesn't have personal interactions with him, recognize it.

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* %% SemperFi: Shane is a Marine.
* ShellShockedVeteran: Shane turns out to be one after he finds out that he's the SoleSurvivor of the crash landing. Even captain Aegis, a character that doesn't have personal interactions with him, recognize recognizes it.



* SherlockScan: Shane manages to figure out quite a bit about Equestria just from looking around. That his cell door is steel means they know metallurgy. The rivets being identical indicates they have factories capable of producing standardized equipment. Leaving his sidearm in the room with him shows they're either insanely trusting or unfamiliar with firearms. This is also how Shane is able to figure out that [[spoiler:Cadance is pregnant]].
** Likewise the ponies pick up a lot about humans from casual remarks or simple explanations, such as him explaining the relative price of fake sugar versus real sugar.
* SitcomArchNemesis: Shane and Shining Armor.

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* SherlockScan: SherlockScan:
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Shane manages to figure out quite a bit about Equestria just from looking around. That his cell door is steel means they know metallurgy. The rivets being identical indicates they have factories capable of producing standardized equipment. Leaving his sidearm in the room with him shows they're either insanely trusting or unfamiliar with firearms. This is also how Shane is able to figure out that [[spoiler:Cadance is pregnant]].
** Likewise the The ponies pick up a lot about humans from casual remarks or simple explanations, such as him explaining the relative price of fake sugar versus real sugar.
* %% SitcomArchNemesis: Shane and Shining Armor.



* SnarkToSnarkCombat: Shane and Luna anytime they talk to each other.

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* %% SnarkToSnarkCombat: Shane and Luna anytime they talk to each other.



* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: Celestia's response to the fact that Luna's attempt to get Shane to allow treatment of his injuries via dangling a bottle of wine [[spoiler:worked]].

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* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: Celestia's response to the fact that Luna's attempt to get Shane to allow treatment of his injuries via dangling a bottle of wine [[spoiler:worked]].
wine. [[spoiler:In particular, the fact that it ''worked''.]]
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* CavemenVersusAstronautsDebate: Shane and Pinkie spend a ''lot'' of time arguing over whether peppermints are a type of candy or not, and even manage to drag the other Mane Six into it. Conclusion: [[spoiler:Peppermint is a plant, courtesy Twilight's memorization of its encyclopedia article.]]

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* CavemenVersusAstronautsDebate: Shane and Pinkie spend a ''lot'' of time arguing over whether peppermints are a type of candy or not, and even manage to drag the other Mane Six into it. Conclusion: [[spoiler:Peppermint is a plant, courtesy Twilight's memorization of its encyclopedia article.]]article]].
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* CavemenVersusAstronautsDebate: Shane and Pinkie spend a ''lot'' of time arguing over whether peppermints are a type of candy or not.

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* CavemenVersusAstronautsDebate: Shane and Pinkie spend a ''lot'' of time arguing over whether peppermints are a type of candy or not.not, and even manage to drag the other Mane Six into it. Conclusion: [[spoiler:Peppermint is a plant, courtesy Twilight's memorization of its encyclopedia article.]]
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* CavemenVersusAstronautsDebate: Shane and Pinkie spend a ''lot'' of time arguing over whether peppermints are a type of candy or not.
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* HairTriggerTemper: It's almost impossible not to rile Shane up. Personal questions and attempts at coercion are definite detonators of his bad mood, and sometimes even innocuous comments are enough to set him off, as Twilight notes.

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* HairTriggerTemper: It's almost impossible not to rile Shane up. Personal questions and attempts at coercion are definite detonators of his bad mood, and sometimes even innocuous comments are enough to set him off, as Twilight notes. He mellows out considerably in later chapters, but still has his moments.



* SherlockScan: Shane manages to figure out quite a bit about Equestria just from looking around. That his cell door is steel means they know metallurgy. The rivets being identical indicates they have factories capable of producing standardized equipment. Leaving his sidearm in the room with him shows they're either insanely trusting or unfamiliar with firearms.

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* SherlockScan: Shane manages to figure out quite a bit about Equestria just from looking around. That his cell door is steel means they know metallurgy. The rivets being identical indicates they have factories capable of producing standardized equipment. Leaving his sidearm in the room with him shows they're either insanely trusting or unfamiliar with firearms. This is also how Shane is able to figure out that [[spoiler:Cadance is pregnant]].
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* CutenessProximity: Even a relative {{Jerkass}} like Shane absolutely melts when he encounters a tiny foal out in Canterlot.


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* DefrostingIceQueen: The standoffish Shane slowly warms up to all of the little ponies throughout the story. The only ponies he continues to dislike in later chapters are Fluttershy and Shining Armor.

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