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While the grammar needs work, this is a rather interesting story. story, and Ami is an interesting character, and the writer avoids several MarySue traps with her.character. The subtle changes she makes in the timeline are enough to have a big impact later. Again, not a perfect story, but a story worth checking out.
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* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler: Ami does this, but only so she can get away from everything and live a life that's relatively peaceful. Annie briefly persuades her to come back to their side, but it's when the Titan Shifter kill Marco that destroys any hope of them having her on their side.]]
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* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler: Ami does this, but only so she can get away from everything and live a life that's relatively peaceful. Annie briefly persuades her to come back to their side, but it's when the Titan Shifter Shifters kill Marco that destroys any hope of them having her on their side.]]
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* SanitySlippage: If it wasn't for [[spoiler: her medication,]] Ami would've completely lost it a long time okay, and even that's debatable.
* ShoutOut: The moment where [[spoiler: Ami is stabbed by Reiner and starts laughing in response is similar to what happened to Raiden in VideoGame/MetalGearRisingRevengeance.]]
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* SanitySlippage: If it wasn't for [[spoiler: her medication,]] Ami would've completely lost it a long time okay, ago, and even that's debatable.
* ShoutOut: In an effort to get Ami to laugh, Eren does an over-the-top yell of [[SuddenlyShouting "TITANS!!"]] Kind of like a certain [[WebVideo/AbridgedOnTitan version of Eren]] we know of that likes to do that whenever Titans are around.
** The moment where [[spoiler: Ami is stabbed by Reiner and starts laughing in response is similar to what happened to Raiden in VideoGame/MetalGearRisingRevengeance.]]
* ShoutOut: In an effort to get Ami to laugh, Eren does an over-the-top yell of [[SuddenlyShouting "TITANS!!"]] Kind of like a certain [[WebVideo/AbridgedOnTitan version of Eren]] we know of that likes to do that whenever Titans are around.
** The moment where [[spoiler: Ami is stabbed by Reiner and starts laughing in response is similar to what happened to Raiden in VideoGame/MetalGearRisingRevengeance.]]
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* RunningGag: Every chapter is phrased like a question.
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* ShoutOut: The moment where [[spoiler: Ami is stabbed by Reiner and starts laughing in response is similar to what happened to Raiden in VideoGame/MetalGearRisingRevengeance.]]
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* DeathGlare: A staple of the Leonhart siblings.
* EvenEvilHasStandards: When Reiner suggested gathering the trainees into a group so he could transform and kill them all, Annie promptly slapped him for even suggesting that.
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler: Ami does this, but only so she can get away from everything and live a life that's relatively peaceful. Annie briefly persuades her to come back to their side, but it's when the Titan Shifter kill Marco that destroys any hope of them having her on their side.]]
* [[spoiler: ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: Reiner does this to Ami when she tries to kill them for killing Marco. [[OhCrap It doesn't work out!]]]]
* LaughingMad: [[spoiler: When Ami is off her pills, she starts doing that while she's killing Titans.]]
* EvenEvilHasStandards: When Reiner suggested gathering the trainees into a group so he could transform and kill them all, Annie promptly slapped him for even suggesting that.
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler: Ami does this, but only so she can get away from everything and live a life that's relatively peaceful. Annie briefly persuades her to come back to their side, but it's when the Titan Shifter kill Marco that destroys any hope of them having her on their side.]]
* [[spoiler: ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: Reiner does this to Ami when she tries to kill them for killing Marco. [[OhCrap It doesn't work out!]]]]
* LaughingMad: [[spoiler: When Ami is off her pills, she starts doing that while she's killing Titans.]]
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* SanitySlippage: If it wasn't for [[spoiler: her medication,]] Ami would've completely lost it a long time okay, and even that's debatable.
* SlasherSmile: Ami does this from time to time, [[spoiler: even on medication,]] but the most notable moment is when she gives one to [[spoiler: Bertholdt after he makes a hole in Wall Rose. Yeah, his days are numbered.]]
* SlasherSmile: Ami does this from time to time, [[spoiler: even on medication,]] but the most notable moment is when she gives one to [[spoiler: Bertholdt after he makes a hole in Wall Rose. Yeah, his days are numbered.]]
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[[AC:'''Note:''' This trope page is currently under construction. Anyone who has read this fanfic should feel free to add any tropes we seem to have missed.]]
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[[https://www.quotev.com/story/7368988/Are-You-on-Our-Side-or-are-You-a-Traitor/1 Are you on our Side, or are you a Traitor?]] is an Manga/AttackOnTitan {{Fanfic}} written by Hotaru Kurosawa.
Annie Leonhart has a younger sister, Ami, who also infiltrates the human race along with Reiner, Bertholdt, Annie. As she trains along with everyone else, however, she begins to question her mission as her viewpoint on the human race slowly changes. In the end, she must choose a side: the Titans or humanity? Either way, she will face the consequences of her actions. Takes place during the 104th Training Corp Arc and beyond.
While the grammar needs work, this is a rather interesting story. Ami is an interesting character, and the writer avoids several MarySue traps with her. The subtle changes she makes in the timeline are enough to have a big impact later. Again, not a perfect story, but a story worth checking out.
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!!The story contains examples of:
* AxCrazy: Ami, especially when [[spoiler: she's off her meds.]]
* BerserkButton: Don't call Ami a boy. She's a [[UnderStatement little sensitive]] about that.
* BigSisterBully: What Annie is to Ami. In Chapter 3, when Ami interferes with her plan to get Eren sent to the fields, Annie proceeds to viciously attack her sister and threatens to do worse to her if she does it again.
* LoveHateRelationship: Describes the relationship between Ami and Annie perfectly. On the Hate side, Annie doesn't hesitate to show her disdain towards Ami and even physically abuses her several times in the earlier chapters. Ami is jealous of Annie being superior to her and because of all the abuse she's suffered by her, she even fantasizes killing her. On the Love side, in later chapters, it's clear that Annie has become nicer and a little caring towards her sister. It starts out small [[spoiler: (giving Ami 3 months to live after she chooses to abandon the mission), but she begins to defend her more from Reiner, who wants to kill her for betraying them, gives Ami her medication after she loses the pills, and even promises to not force her to kill any more people. Ami shows the love for her sister by returning to their side in response to this unexpected affection and it looks like their relationship is changing for the better. [[GoneHorriblyWrong Shame it couldn't last.]]]]
* ThanksForTheMammary: When Ami attacks Eren after he presses her BerserkButton, he tries pushing her off of him and accidentally grabs her chest in the process. Fortunately for him, she doesn't continue to hurt him.
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[[https://www.quotev.com/story/7368988/Are-You-on-Our-Side-or-are-You-a-Traitor/1 Are you on our Side, or are you a Traitor?]] is an Manga/AttackOnTitan {{Fanfic}} written by Hotaru Kurosawa.
Annie Leonhart has a younger sister, Ami, who also infiltrates the human race along with Reiner, Bertholdt, Annie. As she trains along with everyone else, however, she begins to question her mission as her viewpoint on the human race slowly changes. In the end, she must choose a side: the Titans or humanity? Either way, she will face the consequences of her actions. Takes place during the 104th Training Corp Arc and beyond.
While the grammar needs work, this is a rather interesting story. Ami is an interesting character, and the writer avoids several MarySue traps with her. The subtle changes she makes in the timeline are enough to have a big impact later. Again, not a perfect story, but a story worth checking out.
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!!The story contains examples of:
* AxCrazy: Ami, especially when [[spoiler: she's off her meds.]]
* BerserkButton: Don't call Ami a boy. She's a [[UnderStatement little sensitive]] about that.
* BigSisterBully: What Annie is to Ami. In Chapter 3, when Ami interferes with her plan to get Eren sent to the fields, Annie proceeds to viciously attack her sister and threatens to do worse to her if she does it again.
* LoveHateRelationship: Describes the relationship between Ami and Annie perfectly. On the Hate side, Annie doesn't hesitate to show her disdain towards Ami and even physically abuses her several times in the earlier chapters. Ami is jealous of Annie being superior to her and because of all the abuse she's suffered by her, she even fantasizes killing her. On the Love side, in later chapters, it's clear that Annie has become nicer and a little caring towards her sister. It starts out small [[spoiler: (giving Ami 3 months to live after she chooses to abandon the mission), but she begins to defend her more from Reiner, who wants to kill her for betraying them, gives Ami her medication after she loses the pills, and even promises to not force her to kill any more people. Ami shows the love for her sister by returning to their side in response to this unexpected affection and it looks like their relationship is changing for the better. [[GoneHorriblyWrong Shame it couldn't last.]]]]
* ThanksForTheMammary: When Ami attacks Eren after he presses her BerserkButton, he tries pushing her off of him and accidentally grabs her chest in the process. Fortunately for him, she doesn't continue to hurt him.
