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* AcceptableTargets: Discussed InUniverse, when Taylor asks whether the people Danny has killed had done bad things. He tells her that that's not his reason for doing it, otherwise the city would be full of bodies, but it's almost always true that by the time someone like him gets hired, the target has done pretty awful stuff, like the man who murdered Fleur of New Wave in order to join the Empire 88.
--> '''Danny:''' Lingering regrets?\\
'''Taylor:''' No, actually. None whatsoever.
--> '''Danny:''' Lingering regrets?\\
'''Taylor:''' No, actually. None whatsoever.
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In the 90s and early 2000s, Brockton Bay was stalked by two unpowered assassins, [[AdaptationalBadass Danny & Anne-Rose]], [[AdaptationalVillainy Killers for hire]], [[FunWithAcronyms or 'D.A.R.K.' for short]]. Anyone who the Marquis wanted dead, they would kill. Anyone who went after them would die. And they took the credit for [[DeathByAdaptation Jack Slash being sent to the Birdcage]] [[DisabledInTheAdaptation in a wheelchair]]. And then, a few years ago, they disappeared.
In January 2011, with his daughter in the hospital, Danny Hebert buys a puppy. Then some Empire thugs [[MuggingTheMonster who pick]] [[SchmuckBait a seemingly unassuming target]] hear a catchphrase that wasn't heard in years- "[[OhCrap Are you]] [[NothingIsScarier afraid of]] [[TheDreaded the Dark]]?".
In January 2011, with his daughter in the hospital, Danny Hebert buys a puppy. Then some Empire thugs [[MuggingTheMonster who pick]] [[SchmuckBait a seemingly unassuming target]] hear a catchphrase that wasn't heard in years- "[[OhCrap Are you]] [[NothingIsScarier afraid of]] [[TheDreaded the Dark]]?".
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In the 90s and early 2000s, Brockton Bay was stalked by two unpowered assassins, [[AdaptationalBadass Danny & Anne-Rose]], [[AdaptationalVillainy Killers for hire]], [[FunWithAcronyms or 'D."D.A.R.K.' " for short]]. Anyone who the Marquis wanted dead, they would kill. Anyone who went after them would die. And they took the credit for [[DeathByAdaptation Jack Slash being sent to the Birdcage]] [[DisabledInTheAdaptation in a wheelchair]]. And then, a few years ago, they disappeared.
In January 2011, with his daughter in the hospital, Danny Hebert buys a puppy. Then some Empire thugs [[MuggingTheMonster who pick]] [[SchmuckBait a seemingly unassuming target]] hear a catchphrase that wasn't heard inyears- years -- "[[OhCrap Are you]] [[NothingIsScarier afraid of]] [[TheDreaded the Dark]]?".
Dark?]]".
In January 2011, with his daughter in the hospital, Danny Hebert buys a puppy. Then some Empire thugs [[MuggingTheMonster who pick]] [[SchmuckBait a seemingly unassuming target]] hear a catchphrase that wasn't heard in
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''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/are-you-afraid-of-the-dark-worm-au-fanfic.378946/#post-21068056 Are You Afraid Of The Dark?]]'' is a ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' fanfic by Tropers/{{ack1308}}, who is also author of ''Fanfic/AnotherWay'', ''Fanfic/{{Recoil}}'', ''Fanfic/ImHalping'', ''Fanfic/HopeComesToBrocktonBay'', ''Fanfic/SecurityWorm'', and ''Fanfic/{{Wyvern}}''.
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''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/are-you-afraid-of-the-dark-worm-au-fanfic.378946/#post-21068056 Are You Afraid Of The of the Dark?]]'' is a ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' fanfic by Tropers/{{ack1308}}, who is also author of ''Fanfic/AnotherWay'', ''Fanfic/{{Recoil}}'', ''Fanfic/ImHalping'', ''Fanfic/HopeComesToBrocktonBay'', ''Fanfic/SecurityWorm'', and ''Fanfic/{{Wyvern}}''.
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''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/are-you-afraid-of-the-dark-worm-au-fanfic.378946/#post-21068056 Are You Afraid Of The Dark?]]'' is a ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' fanfic by Tropers/{{ack1308}}, who is also author of ''Fanfic/AnotherWay'', ''Fanfic/{{Recoil}}'', ''Fanfic/ImHalping'', ''Fanfic/HopeComesToBrocktonBay'' and ''Fanfic/SecurityWorm''.
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''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/are-you-afraid-of-the-dark-worm-au-fanfic.378946/#post-21068056 Are You Afraid Of The Dark?]]'' is a ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' fanfic by Tropers/{{ack1308}}, who is also author of ''Fanfic/AnotherWay'', ''Fanfic/{{Recoil}}'', ''Fanfic/ImHalping'', ''Fanfic/HopeComesToBrocktonBay'' ''Fanfic/HopeComesToBrocktonBay'', ''Fanfic/SecurityWorm'', and ''Fanfic/SecurityWorm''.
''Fanfic/{{Wyvern}}''.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Enforced on [[spoiler: Emma]], sent to a boarding school in Europe to keep her safe.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: ScrewThisImOuttaHere:
** Enforced on [[spoiler: Emma]], sent to a boarding school in Europe to keep her safe.
** Enforced on [[spoiler: Emma]], sent to a boarding school in Europe to keep her safe.
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** When Danny spares [[spoiler:the guard outside the second bar]], he decides to [[spoiler:go home and not come back]].
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'''The Dark:''' Doesn't have to be. How many years has it been? [He means, how many men are inside.]\\
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'''The Dark:''' Doesn't have to be. [[SpySpeak How many years has it been? [He means, how been?]][[note]]How many men are inside.]\\inside?[[/note]]\\
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'''Frankie:''' Thanks, I will. About time I got shut of these assholes, anyway.
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'''Frankie:''' Thanks, I will. [[TakeThisJobAndShoveIt About time I got shut of these assholes, anyway.anyway]].
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** Defied: The dog in [[Film/JohnWick]] is killed by the bad guys. Chewie lives.
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** Defied: The Daisy the dog in [[Film/JohnWick]] [[Film/JohnWick John Wick]] is killed by the bad guys. Chewie lives.
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** Defied: The dog in [[Film/JohnWick]] is killed by the bad guys. Chewie lives.
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** Hookwolf was crushed under an electromagnet.
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** Hookwolf was crushed under by an electromagnet.
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* DidWeJustHaveTeaWithCthulhu: When Danny and Taylor visit the Undersiders, he literally drinks tea with them while explaining how things will go. Lisa is terrified, Brian is grumpy, Alec is respectful (though snarky) and Rachel is ''extremely'' respectful.
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--> I want you to look him in the eye as he dies, and tell him [[spoiler:New Wave sends their regards]].
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* EntertaininglyWrong: After Tattletale sets up Coil to impersonate the Dark (in hopes that the Dark will kill him in retaliation), Danny and Taylor show up on the Undersiders' doorstep -- and Tattletale quite naturally assumes that he's found out what she did and taken offence, leaving her terrified into near-speechlessness. Alec has never before seen her so scared, and is impressed. Taylor is a little confused by her reaction; they actually have no idea what Tattletale did, they were just sent to her as a possible source of information about Coil.
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** Cricket has [[SuperSenses highly sensitive ears]], so when Danny's fighting her, he makes sure to fire his pistol right next to them, where it would be painful even to someone with normal hearing.
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** Cricket has [[SuperSenses [[SuperHearing highly sensitive ears]], so when Danny's fighting her, he makes sure to fire his pistol right next to them, where it would be painful even to someone with normal hearing.
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* AdultsAreUseless: Defied.
** Once Danny decides to get his act together, he becomes a much more effective father.
** When Danny takes Taylor (and Chewie) to Arcadia, the vice principal turns out to be both sympathetic and understanding of her issues, and offers several options for her to start fresh with a better chance of finishing the year on a high note.
** Once Danny decides to get his act together, he becomes a much more effective father.
** When Danny takes Taylor (and Chewie) to Arcadia, the vice principal turns out to be both sympathetic and understanding of her issues, and offers several options for her to start fresh with a better chance of finishing the year on a high note.
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* LogicalWeakness: Hookwolf has a metal body. The Dark crushes him with an industrial electromagnet.
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* LogicalWeakness: LogicalWeakness:
** Hookwolf has a metal body. The Dark crushes him with an industrialelectromagnet.electromagnet.
** Cricket has [[SuperSenses highly sensitive ears]], so when Danny's fighting her, he makes sure to fire his pistol right next to them, where it would be painful even to someone with normal hearing.
** Hookwolf has a metal body. The Dark crushes him with an industrial
** Cricket has [[SuperSenses highly sensitive ears]], so when Danny's fighting her, he makes sure to fire his pistol right next to them, where it would be painful even to someone with normal hearing.
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* CasualDangerDialog: Danny muses aloud about whether Taylor might like a puppy or a kitten to help her feel better, while twisting a mugger's wrist. Sadly, he isn't able to get any advice from the guy except screamed profanity. Then he takes a look inside the mugger's gun and gently chides him for not taking better care of it.
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* CasualDangerDialog: Danny muses aloud about whether Taylor might like a puppy or a kitten to help her feel better, while twisting a mugger's wrist. Sadly, he isn't able to get any advice from the guy except screamed profanity. Then he takes a look inside the mugger's gun (which he keeps) and gently chides him for not taking better care of it.
* {{Catchphrase}}: Whenever the Dark announced himself, he would always say, "Are you afraid of the Dark?" While most new capes don't recognize the meaning, those like Kaiser and Assault know of it.
* CavalryBetrayal: [[spoiler:Sophia believes Alan came to save her from Danny and is all but frothing at the mouth, shouting at him to kill the hitman. Unfortunately for her, Alan is ''not'' there to save her and kills her himself.]]
* CavalryBetrayal: [[spoiler:Sophia believes Alan came to save her from Danny and is all but frothing at the mouth, shouting at him to kill the hitman. Unfortunately for her, Alan is ''not'' there to save her and kills her himself.]]
* CurbStompBattle: Anything the Dark inserts himself into is bound to end up this way, which is impressive since Danny isn't a parahuman. He assaults an Empire gathering and kills around thirty people including two parahumans, rescues his target, and walks away with just a scratch on his arm.
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* {{Catchphrase}}: Whenever the Dark announced himself, he would always say, "Are you afraid of the Dark?" While most new capes don't recognize the meaning, those like Kaiser and Assault know of it.
* CavalryBetrayal: [[spoiler:Sophia believes Alan came to save her from Danny and is all but frothing at the mouth, shouting at him to kill the hitman. Unfortunately for her, Alan is ''not'' there to save her and kills her himself.]]
* CurbStompBattle: Anything the Dark inserts himself into is bound to end up this way, which is impressive since Danny isn't a parahuman. He assaults an Empire gathering and kills around thirty people including two parahumans, rescues his target, and walks away with just a scratch on his arm.
* CavalryBetrayal: [[spoiler:Sophia believes Alan came to save her from Danny and is all but frothing at the mouth, shouting at him to kill the hitman. Unfortunately for her, Alan is ''not'' there to save her and kills her himself.]]
* CurbStompBattle: Anything the Dark inserts himself into is bound to end up this way, which is impressive since Danny isn't a parahuman. He assaults an Empire gathering and kills around thirty people including two parahumans, rescues his target, and walks away with just a scratch on his arm.
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* CurbStompBattle: Anything the Dark inserts himself into is bound to end up this way, which is impressive since Danny isn't a parahuman.
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* CurbStompBattle: Anything the Dark inserts himself into is bound to end up this way, which is impressive since Danny isn't a parahuman. He assaults an Empire gathering and kills around thirty people including two parahumans, rescues his target, and walks away with just a scratch on his arm.
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* CutLexLuthorACheck: Both Kaiser and Assault are familiar enough with the Dark to understand how he operates. When Kaiser is trying to get Kreig to understand that the Dark wasn't behind the recent armored truck robbery, he points out that if the Dark wanted money he could just collect any of half a dozen unclaimed bounties for some of his past kills.
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* CutLexLuthorACheck: Both Kaiser and Assault are familiar enough with the Dark to understand how he operates. When Kaiser is trying to get Kreig Krieg to understand that the Dark wasn't behind the recent armored truck robbery, he points out that if the Dark wanted money he could just collect any of half a dozen unclaimed bounties for some of his past kills.
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* BadassNormal: Danny, otherwise known to the cape scene as Dark, is not a parahuman. He has no superpowers, no special abilities, nothing. Despite this, he can kill capes like Cricket and Jack Slash. This is what sets up his status as TheDreaded.
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* BadassNormal: Danny, otherwise known to the cape scene as Dark, is not a parahuman. He has no superpowers, no special abilities, nothing. nothing except experience and training in gun handling and stealth and general assassination skills. Despite this, lacking superpowers, he can kill capes like Cricket and Jack Slash. This is what sets up his status as TheDreaded.
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* NotMeThisTime: Empire 88 was ''not'' responsible for [[spoiler:killing Shadow Stalker. The Dark was]]. Kaiser's attempt at de-escalation is to find whoever did it and hand them over to the PRT.
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* NotMeThisTime: NotMeThisTime:
** Empire 88 was ''not'' responsible for [[spoiler:killing Shadow Stalker. The Dark was]]. Kaiser's attempt at de-escalation is to find whoever did it and hand them over to thePRT.PRT.
** The Dark wasn't responsible for an armoured car robbery attributed to him. Assault/Madcap knows him well enough to know that that isn't at all his style and he doesn't need to make money that way.
** Empire 88 was ''not'' responsible for [[spoiler:killing Shadow Stalker. The Dark was]]. Kaiser's attempt at de-escalation is to find whoever did it and hand them over to the
** The Dark wasn't responsible for an armoured car robbery attributed to him. Assault/Madcap knows him well enough to know that that isn't at all his style and he doesn't need to make money that way.
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** The Dark accidentally sets one up by killing [[spoiler:Sophia. Black Ward known for patrolling in Empire territory turns up tortured and dead, so the PRT blames the white supremacists]].
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** The Dark accidentally sets one up by killing [[spoiler:Sophia. Black Ward known for patrolling in Empire territory turns up tortured and dead, so the PRT blames the white supremacists]].supremacists. Plus, the gun was one of the ones Danny had recently taken from an Empire member, so forensics pointed to them]].
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* DisposingOfABody: Similarly to John Wick canon, after killing five men, Danny calls a specialised service to place an order, and pays them with a gold ingot left in his mailbox.
--> '''Danny:''' Pizza for five, extra topping. Going to need some garlic bread, too.
--> '''Danny:''' Pizza for five, extra topping. Going to need some garlic bread, too.
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* DisposingOfABody: DisposingOfABody:
** Similarly to John Wick canon, after killing five men, Danny calls a specialised service to place an order, and pays them with a gold ingot left in his mailbox.
--> ---> '''Danny:''' Pizza for five, extra topping. Going to need some garlic bread, too.too.
** He later discusses options with Taylor, who comes up with staples like burying in the woods or under fresh concrete.
---> "All good ideas," he said approvingly. "I've used them all in the past. But there's one you missed."\\
She frowned. "What's that?"\\
He indicated to take the next left, heading north. "Let them find it. But you muddy the waters at the same time."
** Similarly to John Wick canon, after killing five men, Danny calls a specialised service to place an order, and pays them with a gold ingot left in his mailbox.
** He later discusses options with Taylor, who comes up with staples like burying in the woods or under fresh concrete.
---> "All good ideas," he said approvingly. "I've used them all in the past. But there's one you missed."\\
She frowned. "What's that?"\\
He indicated to take the next left, heading north. "Let them find it. But you muddy the waters at the same time."
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* MuggingTheMonster: Two Empire thugs decide to rob what turns out to be a retired professional assassin. It doesn't end well for them, their buddies, Hookwolf's dogfighting ring, Cricket, or Hookwolf himself.
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* MuggingTheMonster: MuggingTheMonster:
** Two Empire thugs decide to rob what turns out to be a retired professional assassin. It doesn't end well for them, their buddies, Hookwolf's dogfighting ring, Cricket, or Hookwolfhimself.himself.
** Danny deliberately goes out looking to attract muggers, and leaves a trail of injured and unconscious bodies behind him. [[spoiler:All to attract Shadow Stalker's attention so he can take her down.]]
** Two Empire thugs decide to rob what turns out to be a retired professional assassin. It doesn't end well for them, their buddies, Hookwolf's dogfighting ring, Cricket, or Hookwolf
** Danny deliberately goes out looking to attract muggers, and leaves a trail of injured and unconscious bodies behind him. [[spoiler:All to attract Shadow Stalker's attention so he can take her down.]]
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* YouOweMe: To get information about Shadow Stalker, Danny calls in a marker from Assault, whom he saved from being EatenAlive by Carnifex in the past.
--> '''Ethan:''' Okay, yeah. That's some marker.
--> '''Ethan:''' Okay, yeah. That's some marker.
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* {{Understatement}}: When Taylor asks Danny about his day, he doesn't actually lie to her, but he also doesn't tell her about killing dozens of E88 members including both Cricket and Hookwolf, all to retrieve Taylor's puppy.
--> '''Danny:''' Oh, we had a little bit of excitement. Chewie got himself lost, but I found him again pretty quickly. That was about it, though. After that, we had a quiet night in.
--> '''Danny:''' Oh, we had a little bit of excitement. Chewie got himself lost, but I found him again pretty quickly. That was about it, though. After that, we had a quiet night in.
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* DoubleTap: When a pile of bodies twitches, Danny instinctively shoots ''three'' times, and it stops moving.
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** When a pile of bodies twitches, Danny instinctively shoots ''three'' times, and it stopsmoving.moving.
** He then waits for Hookwolf's body to stop twitching before shooting him in the back of the neck, just to be sure.
** When a pile of bodies twitches, Danny instinctively shoots ''three'' times, and it stops
** He then waits for Hookwolf's body to stop twitching before shooting him in the back of the neck, just to be sure.
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* FaceDeathWithDignity: Once it's clear that he can't win or escape, Hookwolf looks Danny in the eye and yells at him to "Just do it!"
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* DeadlyDodging: When fleeing on a motorbike from Hookwolf, Danny makes a sharp turn, which Hookwolf doesn't quite manage to follow, hitting a vehicle.
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--> There was a 'dog chasing parked car' joke somewhere in there, but he decided to let it be.
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: When reinforcements arrive after Cricket's death, Danny's reaction invokes this almost verbatim.
--> '''Danny:''' Why did it have to be Hookwolf?
--> '''Danny:''' Why did it have to be Hookwolf?
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* SensoryOverload: While fighting Cricket, Danny repeatedly fires his pistol in her general direction even when he can't quite aim closely enough to hit her. Her SuperHearing means she's very strongly affected by the firing noise, wincing and recoiling as if she's been punched. (In the end, he actually kills her with a knife, not the gun.)
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* SensoryOverload: While fighting Cricket, Danny repeatedly fires his pistol in her general direction even when he can't quite aim closely enough to hit her. Her SuperHearing means she's very strongly affected by the firing noise, wincing and recoiling as if she's been punched. (In the end, he actually kills mortally wounds her with a knife, not and only uses the gun.gun to finish her off.)
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* SensoryOverload: While fighting Cricket, Danny repeatedly fires his pistol in her general direction even when he can't quite aim closely enough to hit her. Her SuperHearing means she's very strongly affected by the firing noise, wincing and recoiling as if she's been punched. (In the end, he actually kills her with a knife, not the gun.)