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* AbortedArc: There was a subplot concerning the inmates trying to survive in the Earth's Core maze early on in the fanfic. In fact, had Cooljoe64 not abandoned the fanfic after only completing the first four chapters, he probably would've expanded upon it and kept it going. Instead, Voltalia had the inmates go through the maze with little transition and exit, only to find there's nothing waiting for them. And then they're never mentioned again.
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{{Creator/Voltalia}} is currently working on a sequel called ''Fanfic/AllInTheFamily'', which is on its sixth chapter. WordOfGod says both of these fanfics are going to be part of a trilogy that centers around [[SecretCharacter the Guardiane]].

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{{Creator/Voltalia}} is currently working on a sequel called ''Fanfic/AllInTheFamily'', which is on its sixth seventh chapter. WordOfGod says both of these fanfics are going to be part of a trilogy that centers around [[SecretCharacter the Guardiane]].

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* NoIndoorVoice: Kayley Chang, one of the college students introduced in Chapter 12, has a tendency of shouting everything she says. However, this is justified since she is said to be partially deaf.



** Kayley Chang, another college student who is introduced in Chapter 12, has a tendency of shouting everything she says. However, this is justified since she is said to be partially-deaf.
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** She even eats a couple of the flesh-eating locusts in Chapter 10.



** She even eats a couple of the flesh-eating locusts in Chapter 10.
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* CharacterizationMarchesOn: The most notable changes can be found in the central parents-to-be Warden and Mistress.
** Warden, for example, is apparently self-centered in the beginning. By the end, he is willing to be there for Mistress and their child.
** Mistress is unsure of what to do with her child at first, but grows to love it and apparently trusts Warden enough to be in the kid's life once he starts growing up.
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{{Creator/Voltalia}} is currently working on a sequel called ''Fanfic/AllInTheFamily'', which is on its fourth chapter. WordOfGod says both of these fanfics are going to be part of a trilogy that centers around [[SecretCharacter the Guardiane]].

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{{Creator/Voltalia}} is currently working on a sequel called ''Fanfic/AllInTheFamily'', which is on its fourth sixth chapter. WordOfGod says both of these fanfics are going to be part of a trilogy that centers around [[SecretCharacter the Guardiane]].
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* FluffyTheTerrible: Warden has "playfully" called the jaguar-headed black bear who is first introduced in Chapter 9 and performs in the circus... Clawface.
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{{Creator/Voltalia}} is currently working on a sequel called ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8987616/1/All-in-the-Family All in the Family]]'', which is on its third chapter. WordOfGod says both of these fanfics are going to be part of a trilogy that centers around [[SecretCharacter the Guardiane]].

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{{Creator/Voltalia}} is currently working on a sequel called ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8987616/1/All-in-the-Family All in the Family]]'', ''Fanfic/AllInTheFamily'', which is on its third fourth chapter. WordOfGod says both of these fanfics are going to be part of a trilogy that centers around [[SecretCharacter the Guardiane]].

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* TheFundamentalist: In Chapter 7, Dudley Jacobson, Anais's father, is a radical Christian who blatantly tells the Mistress over the phone that she will go to Hell for having premarital sex and drives her to the point of '''crying'''.



* StrawCharacter: In Chapter 7, Dudley Jacobson, Anais's father, is a radical Christian who blatantly tells the Mistress over the phone that she will go to Hell for having premarital sex and drives her to the point of '''crying'''.
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{{Creator/Voltalia}} is currently working on a sequel called ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8987616/1/All-in-the-Family All in the Family]]'', which is on its third chapter. WordOfGod says both of these fanfics are going to be part of a trilogy that centers around [[MysteryCharacter the Guardiane]].

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{{Creator/Voltalia}} is currently working on a sequel called ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8987616/1/All-in-the-Family All in the Family]]'', which is on its third chapter. WordOfGod says both of these fanfics are going to be part of a trilogy that centers around [[MysteryCharacter [[SecretCharacter the Guardiane]].
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** And then there's this:

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** And then there's this:this in Chapter 12.
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• ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8987616/1/All-in-the-Family All in the Family]]'']]

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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8987616/1/All-in-the-Family All in the Family]]'']]
''Fanfic/AllInTheFamily'']]
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** And then there's this:
-->'''Anais''': Uh, sir... I think it's time...
-->'''Warden''': Suddenly, I'm not so sure I want to continue the circus today. How could you possibly top a woman knocking over a pillar and killing several members of your audience?
-->'''Mistress''': Not for another circus act, you idiot. She meant time to have the baby.
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** This falls specifically under CostumePorn.

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** This mainly falls specifically under CostumePorn.
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** Do being eaten alive by mutated locusts count?

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** Do Does being eaten alive by mutated locusts count?
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* CruelAndUnusualDeath: There are actually several throughout the fanfic that manage to be as gory as the deaths in the original show. However, the two most notable ones would have to be snakes bursting out of a random inmate named Charles in Chapter 4 and a juvenile Mexican inmate named Django being rammed by a giant boar the size of a lion into electrified barbed wire.

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* CruelAndUnusualDeath: There are actually several throughout the fanfic that manage to be as gory as the deaths in the original show. However, the two most notable ones would have to be snakes bursting out of a random inmate named Charles after eating some soup Warden made in Chapter 4 and a juvenile Mexican inmate named Django being rammed by a giant boar the size of a lion into electrified barbed wire.
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* CruelAndUnusualDeaths: There are actually several throughout the fanfic, but the two most notable ones would have to be snakes bursting out of a random inmate named Charles in Chapter 4 and a juvenile Mexican inmate named Django being rammed by a giant boar the size of a lion into electrified barbed wire.

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* CruelAndUnusualDeaths: CruelAndUnusualDeath: There are actually several throughout the fanfic, but fanfic that manage to be as gory as the deaths in the original show. However, the two most notable ones would have to be snakes bursting out of a random inmate named Charles in Chapter 4 and a juvenile Mexican inmate named Django being rammed by a giant boar the size of a lion into electrified barbed wire.
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* CruelUnusualDeaths: There are actually several throughout the fanfic, but the two most notable ones would have to be snakes bursting out of a random inmate named Charles in Chapter 4 and a juvenile Mexican inmate named Django being rammed by a giant boar the size of a lion into electrified barbed wire.

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* CruelUnusualDeaths: CruelAndUnusualDeaths: There are actually several throughout the fanfic, but the two most notable ones would have to be snakes bursting out of a random inmate named Charles in Chapter 4 and a juvenile Mexican inmate named Django being rammed by a giant boar the size of a lion into electrified barbed wire.
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* CruelUnusualDeaths: There are actually several throughout the fanfic, but the two most notable ones would have to be snakes bursting out of a random inmate named Charles in Chapter 4 and a juvenile Mexican inmate named Django being rammed by a giant boar the size of a lion into electrified barbed wire.
** Do being eaten alive by mutated locusts count?
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* OrphanedSeries: The fanfic became this when Cooljoe64 abandoned it after four chapters. Its proofreader, {{Creator/Voltalia}}, then took over and wrote the other eleven chapters.

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* OrphanedSeries: The fanfic became this when Cooljoe64 abandoned it after the first four chapters. chapters due to lacking interest in the original source material. Its proofreader, proofreader {{Creator/Voltalia}}, who by contrast was a somewhat-dedicated fan of the original source, then took over and wrote the other eleven chapters.
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** This falls specifically under CostumePorn.
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** Mistress's decision to keep the child is also motivated by the fact that she had [[DisappearedDad no present father]] growing up and was raised by only her mother for eight years [[ConvenientlyAnOrphan before she died]].

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** Mistress's decision to keep the child is also motivated by the fact that she had [[DisappearedDad no present father]] growing up and was raised by only her mother for eight years [[ConvenientlyAnOrphan [[DeceasedParentsAreTheBest before she died]].
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* BabiesMakeEverythingBetter: {{Reconstructed}}. Actually, the Mistress's pregnancy does not instantly make everything better with the Warden nor is she even sure she can take on the responsibility at first. Warden actually has to put effort into his relationship with his rival in order for her to be more trusting of him. He also decides, as time goes on, that he needs to [[EarnYourHappyEnding face his consequences head-on and not try to run away from them]]. His crappy childhood with a JerkAss [[EvilMatriarch father]] [[SufferingBuildsCharacter serves as further motivation]].

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* BabiesMakeEverythingBetter: {{Deconstructed}} and then {{Reconstructed}}. Actually, the Mistress's pregnancy does not instantly make everything better with the Warden nor is she even sure she can take on the responsibility at first. Warden actually has to put effort into his relationship with his rival in order for her to be more trusting of him. He also decides, as time goes on, that he needs to [[EarnYourHappyEnding face his consequences head-on and not try to run away from them]]. His crappy childhood with a JerkAss [[EvilMatriarch father]] [[SufferingBuildsCharacter serves as further motivation]].
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** Mistress's decision to keep the child is also motivated by the fact that she had [[DisappearedDad no present father]] growing up and was raised by only her mother for eight years before she was murdered.

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** Mistress's decision to keep the child is also motivated by the fact that she had [[DisappearedDad no present father]] growing up and was raised by only her mother for eight years [[ConvenientlyAnOrphan before she was murdered.died]].

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* BabiesMakeEverythingBetter: Actually, the Mistress's pregnancy does not instantly make everything better with the Warden nor does she even want to take on the responsibility at first. Warden actually has to put effort into his relationship with his rival in order for her to be more trusting of him. He also decides, as time goes on, that he needs to face his consequences head-on and not try to run away from them. His crappy childhood with a JerkAss father serves as further motivation.

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* BabiesMakeEverythingBetter: {{Reconstructed}}. Actually, the Mistress's pregnancy does not instantly make everything better with the Warden nor does is she even want to sure she can take on the responsibility at first. Warden actually has to put effort into his relationship with his rival in order for her to be more trusting of him. He also decides, as time goes on, that he needs to [[EarnYourHappyEnding face his consequences head-on and not try to run away from them. them]]. His crappy childhood with a JerkAss father [[EvilMatriarch father]] [[SufferingBuildsCharacter serves as further motivation.motivation]].
** Mistress's decision to keep the child is also motivated by the fact that she had [[DisappearedDad no present father]] growing up and was raised by only her mother for eight years before she was murdered.
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* MaybeEverAfter: The fanfic ends with this when Mistress hints to Warden that she might go out with him after all just before she and the rest of Ultraprison leave.
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** Oh, and in Chapter 4, Warden cooks a bowl of soup [[EpicFail where snakes burst out of an inmate after it's been consumed]].

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** Oh, and in Chapter 4, Warden cooks a bowl of soup [[EpicFail [[ScrewballSerum where snakes burst out of an inmate after it's been consumed]].consumed]]. And then Mistress makes a joke about the unfortunate inmate not being able to [[IncrediblyLamePun stomach]] the food.
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** She even eats a couple of the flesh-eating locusts in Chapter 10.
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• ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8987616/1/All-in-the-Family All in the Family]]''\\

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• ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8987616/1/All-in-the-Family All in the Family]]''\\
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