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* ShoutOut: Alice's act as the "Goblin Queen" as well as her costume are meant to be a reference to ''Film/Labyrinth'''s Jareth/Goblin King, specifically cosplayed by JewWario in SuburbanKnights.
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* ShoutOut: Alice's act as the "Goblin Queen" as well as her costume are meant to be a reference to ''Film/Labyrinth'''s ''Labyrinth'''s Jareth/Goblin King, specifically cosplayed by JewWario in SuburbanKnights.
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* ComicallyMissingThePoint: Jared questions Warden's plan to trick Alice and Hunter into getting along while they're in the maze.
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Voltalia is currently working on a sequel called ''All in the Family'', which is on its third chapter.
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Voltalia is currently working on a sequel called ''All ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8987616/1/All-in-the-Family All in the Family'', Family]]'', which is on its third chapter.
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Voltalia is currently working on a sequel called ''All in the Family'', which is on its third chapter.
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* DependsOnTheWriter: The writing style between the two authors is notably different, especially when it comes to the first four chapters that Cooljoe64 wrote. The spelling and grammatical differences are most noticeable, but characterization and the plot direction are also to be noted, especially when it comes to the latter.
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* DependsOnTheWriter: DependingOnTheWriter: The writing style between the two authors is notably different, especially when it comes to the first four chapters that Cooljoe64 wrote. The spelling and grammatical differences are most noticeable, but characterization and the plot direction are also to be noted, especially when it comes to the latter.
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* UnlimitedWardrobe: The Warden and the Mistress start going through several costume changes from Chapter 8 onwards, beginning when the Superjail crew dress up as giant bears.
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* LethalChef: In Chapter 3, Warden demonstrates his cooking abilities, which are so bad that a steak comes to life and attacks Mistress. Oh, and in Chapter 4, Warden cooks a bowl of soup that literally kills an inmate.
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* LethalChef: In Chapter 3, Warden demonstrates his cooking abilities, which are so bad that a steak comes to life and attacks Mistress.
** Oh, and in Chapter 4, Warden cooks a bowl of soup that literally kills an inmate.
** Oh, and in Chapter 4, Warden cooks a bowl of soup that literally kills an inmate.
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-->'''Warden''': I want you to look at this. It's a maze soon to be filled with all kinds of my inventions. I was thinking a hundred inmates, but they may die so how about a thousand?
-->'''Jared''': Sir, I don't think that anyone could survive your maze.
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* GroinAttack: In Chapter 12, while the two transsexuals Alice (the MtF) and Bruce (the FtM) are brawling during a circus act, Alice is given a very hard punch to the dick that impacts her enough to fall back onto a pillar, knocking it down upon some audience members and crushing them to death.
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* GroinAttack: In Chapter 12, while the two transsexuals Alice (the MtF) male-to-female) and Bruce (the FtM) female-to-male) are brawling during a circus act, Alice is given a very hard punch to the dick that impacts her enough to fall back onto a pillar, knocking it down upon some audience members and crushing them to death.
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* LethalChef: In Chapter 3, Warden demonstrates his cooking abilities, which are so bad that a steak came to life and attacked Mistress. Oh, and in Chapter 4, Warden cooks a bowl of soup that literally kills an inmate.
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* LethalChef: In Chapter 3, Warden demonstrates his cooking abilities, which are so bad that a steak came comes to life and attacked attacks Mistress. Oh, and in Chapter 4, Warden cooks a bowl of soup that literally kills an inmate.
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The writing styles between the two authors are notably different. For example, while Cooljoe64's writing style is riddled with spelling and grammatical errors, [[ShamelessSelfPromotion guardianemessiah]] (better known as Voltalia) writes with little to no errors at all and writes with wit and and sophisication.
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The writing styles between the two authors are notably different. For example, while Cooljoe64's writing style is riddled with spelling and grammatical errors, [[ShamelessSelfPromotion guardianemessiah]] (better known as Voltalia) writes with little to no errors at all and writes with wit and and sophisication.
sophisication. It should also be noted that before abandoning the fic, Cooljoe64 wrote the first four chapters (the last one [[ShamelessSelfPromotion Voltalia]] proofread for him). She then accepted to take over the fanfic from that point on.
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* GroinAttack: In Chapter 12, while the two transsexuals Alice (the MtF) and Bruce (the FtM) are brawling during a circus act, Alice is given a very hard punch to the dick that impacts her enough to fall back onto a pillar, knocking it down upon some audience members and crushing them to death.
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* DeadGuyJunior: [[spoiler: After Mistress gives birth to a baby girl born one month early, she decides to name her after both her and Warden's mothers in their memories. The deceased's names are Marguerite and Diane, in that order.]]
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* DeadGuyJunior: [[spoiler: After Mistress gives birth to a baby girl born one a month early, she decides to name her after both her and Warden's mothers in their memories. The deceased's names are Marguerite and Diane, in that order.]]
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The writing style styles between the two authors is are notably different. For example, while Cooljoe64's writing style is riddled with spelling and grammatical errors, [[ShamelessSelfPromotion guardianemessiah]] (better known as Voltalia) writes with little to no errors at all and writes with wit and and sophisication.
* GoodGirlsAvoidAbortion: At the beginning of the fanfic, Mistress initially contemplates abortion but eventually decides to keep the baby.
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* ComicallyMissingThePoint: Jared questions Warden's plan to trick Alice and Hunter into getting along while they're in the maze.
-->'''Jared''': Sir, do you actually believe that ten thousand inmates will make Alice and Hunter get along?
-->'''Warden''': You know you're right. Better make it 50,000 inmates!
-->'''Jared''': Sir, do you actually believe that ten thousand inmates will make Alice and Hunter get along?
-->'''Warden''': You know you're right. Better make it 50,000 inmates!
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The writing style between the two authors is notably different. For example, while Cooljoe64's writing style is riddled with spelling and grammatical errors, [[ShamelessSelfPromotion guardianemessiah]] (better known as Voltalia) writes with little to no errors at all and writes with wit and and sophisication.sophisication.
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''An Unexpected Child'' is a ''Superjail!'' {{For Want of A Nail}} fanfic co-authored by Cooljoe64 and our very own [[ShamelessSelfPromotion guardianemessiah]]. The plot revolves around the Mistress becoming pregnant with the Warden's child after the events of the season 1 episode "Ladies' Night". The fanfic is fifteen chapters long and, considering its wordcount to be over 15,000 words, could qualify as a {{Novelette}}.
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''An Unexpected Child'' is a ''Superjail!'' {{For Want of A Nail}} fanfic {{Fan Fic}} co-authored by Cooljoe64 and our very own [[ShamelessSelfPromotion guardianemessiah]]. The plot revolves around the Mistress becoming pregnant with the Warden's child after the events of the season 1 episode "Ladies' Night". The fanfic is fifteen chapters long and, considering its wordcount to be over 15,000 words, could qualify as a {{Novelette}}.{{Novelette}}.
The writing style between the two authors is notably different. For example, while Cooljoe64's writing style is riddled with spelling and grammatical errors, [[ShamelessSelfPromotion guardianemessiah]] (better known as Voltalia) writes with little to no errors at all and writes with wit and and sophisication.
The writing style between the two authors is notably different. For example, while Cooljoe64's writing style is riddled with spelling and grammatical errors, [[ShamelessSelfPromotion guardianemessiah]] (better known as Voltalia) writes with little to no errors at all and writes with wit and and sophisication.
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''An Unexpected Child'' is a ''Superjail!'' {{ForWantofANail}} fanfic co-authored by Cooljoe64 and our very own [[ShamelessSelfPromotion guardianemessiah]]. The plot revolves around the Mistress becoming pregnant with the Warden's child after the events of the season 1 episode "Ladies' Night". The fanfic is fifteen chapters long and, considering its wordcount to be over 15,000 words, could qualify as a {{Novelette}}.
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''An Unexpected Child'' is a ''Superjail!'' {{ForWantofANail}} {{For Want of A Nail}} fanfic co-authored by Cooljoe64 and our very own [[ShamelessSelfPromotion guardianemessiah]]. The plot revolves around the Mistress becoming pregnant with the Warden's child after the events of the season 1 episode "Ladies' Night". The fanfic is fifteen chapters long and, considering its wordcount to be over 15,000 words, could qualify as a {{Novelette}}.
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''An Unexpected Child'' is a ''Superjail!'' {{ForWantofANail}} fanfic co-authored by Cooljoe64 and our very own [[ShamelessSelfPromotion guardianemessiah]]. The plot revolves around the Mistress becoming pregnant with the Warden's child after the events of the season 1 episode "Ladies' Night". The fanfic is fifteen chapters long and, considering its wordcount to be over 15,000 words, could qualify as a {{Novelette}}.